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6teen to Batman:

When the ActionMan

wordord: oceanGuadGuadeloupe = ocean of Guadeloupe (the author can't spell, I'm not fixing that)

snearnear = seat near

Mozenrath\'s Turn Chapter 5 is orphan

Self Esteem review board stretchy - ID 2035422387 may be the culprit.

Hot and Heavy Mink

wordord: SoonSoon = Soon

thosetiesties = those panties

eqy hoy horny = equally horny

waitior Mor Minerva = waiting for Minerva

as wella pia piece = as well as a piece

The Unevitable Fate

wordord: Hunger F. Ma. Matt = Hunger Force. Matt

newps fps for = new pecks for

A Fry to Remember review board wordord:

id 243815: eye *at *attempts = eye ... *attempts

id 3000012294: phallyally = physically (this person hasn't read enough fics to recog wordord, apparently)

story: "other fry.< <" -glitch

phallyally. = physically.

Leverage - Squishy

As Told by Ginger: Wet Seduction wordord: asuabluable = as valuable

Balto - Going Home

wordord: gr a r a walk = go for a walk

h...h.....oohhh = "Oohhh...oohhh

mor Bal Balto = more?" Balto

Balto & Aleu

wordord: voics cos = voice was

nparaparallel = nose parallel

fr war was = father was

g thg = thing

rt, bt, but = retort, but

bodyn onn on = body down on

ir mor = in her

Don'rry rry = Don't worry

baositosition = back's position

o paw paw = other paw

area undeod. (line break)od. = area uncovered.

Song lyrics not cited

Balto & Jenna

wordord: feas tas = felt was

occupantt sht she = occupant, but she

de.(line break). = desire.

herd led legs = her fore legs

aga him him = against him

this?lto lto = this?" Balto

In the summary: the cas wis will = the ??? will (I'd think cats, but it's about dogs, but then, wolves is enough letters, but Jenna's not a wolf...)

Harley's Bday - squishy (all 6 chapters)

Kid Gloves - disclaimer insufficient (says DC Comics, not Batman)

The Land of Make Believe - squishy.

The Discovery ch 2 is orphan.

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Batman Beyond to Biker Mice from Mars:

To Beej or not to Beej - song lyrics not disclaimed

Betty and Che - disclaimer issue - using real person XO w/ cartoon character (where to put? and needs to say do not know for Che Guevara)

Child of the Dark Knite wordord:

"LadiLadies" - "Ladies

"anstensten" - and fasten

"d't y't" - didn't

"tr brr" - to her

"foemoremories" - forbidden memories

"man man" - The man

"haveken ken" - have broken

"hbeenbeen" - have been

"betacceaccess" - better access

"coldaskeasked" - cold?" asked

"mono coo cover" - money to cover

"olhe mhe met" - old, she met

"t wot woman" - smart woman

"shouly ily in" - should fly in

"medicastorstory" - medical history

"man Ter Terry" - man gave Terry

"ry ery effort" - Every effort

"bconnconnected" - been connected

"Someblemblem" - Some problem

"bere ere" - be there

"goticatication" - got medication

"Jac Jack" - No, Jack

"nd mod" - needed

"int introductions" - for introductions

"nexte ite" - next time

"ade one" - advance

"car care" - Take care

"thekesmkesman" - the spokesman

Passion - chapter 11 has a ton of blank space at the bottom - glitch?

Batman Before ch 11 - visible HTML: <I>ounce</I>

Garage Wars wordord:

&nbs"I'm"I'm = "I'm

&n'> "You = "You

&nbsreadread = Bread

pi "Mo "Modo, = pizza. "Modo,

an> - ?

realluld uld = really could

&nbnbspnbsp; - delete

I was.o:p> - missing data, please fix.

bhellhell = be a hell

o end end = other end

andn fan fall = and then fall

sty style='border:none;mso-border-alt:solid gray .75pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid gray .25pt; padding:0in;mso-padding-alt:0in 0in 0in 0in'> - missing data?

p;&np; - delete

thatnie nie = that Vinnie

&n&nbs -delete

Vinnie'ad sad = Vinnie's head

Grey Mouse 1 wordord:

&nbnbspnbsp; - delete

me.n stn style='font-family:"Arial Unicode MS";mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman";color:black'> - missing data?

Marc saispanspan> = Marc said.

&;&nb; - delete

&;&nb; - delete

fon.&nn. - foreign.

sp;&sp; -delete

&n&nbs -delete

&;&nb; -delete

&nbsbsp;bsp; -delete

my downdown = my way down

"Okay"aid aid = Okay," I said

.an> -delete

"Who's ?" I?" = "Who's this?"

"Just ask" I said quietly. "I'll take him out for you. Then you could come

back to Mars with me." - squished line, and then the formatting went all to hell.

dwhenwhen = door when

&nbsbsp;bsp; -delete

&nb> -delete

keep wa warm = keep her warm

to k thk = to drink

p> - delete

&nbsbsp;bsp; -delete

"Family feud." > - delete '>'

It wase.&ne. = It was insane.

arounhrothrottle = around," Throttle

time."> - delete '>'

almos gos good = almost as good

Where are you?!"o:p> - appears there is missing data here. (or the author just jumped track, never can be sure)

minufor for = minutes for

sp;&sp; -delete

tcorecoreboard = the scoreboard

an> - delete

Grey Mouse 2 wordord:

p;&np; -delete

baccouccount = bank account

aurneurned = and turned

sp;&sp; -delete

touchnto nto = touches into

p;&np; -delete

p;&np; -delete

ley ley said. "des,des, we haven't evenn hin him = Charley said. "Besides, we haven't even seen him

p stp style='border:none;mso-border-alt:solid gray .75pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid gray .25pt; padding:0in;mso-padding-alt:0in 0in 0in 0in'> (ugh!) -delete

&;&nb; -delete

n'> -delete

>-delete

leo:p>o:p> = legs.

"Yeahsp; sp; = "Yeah.

dingding = standing

p; Sp; Stoker = Stoker

ohe whe = off the

Prkiarkians = Plutarkians

o:p> -delete

tyletyle='border:none;mso-border-alt:solid gray .75pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid gray .25pt; padding:0in;mso-padding-alt:0in 0in 0in 0in'> -delete (sigh)

"Stt!" t!" = "Stop it!"

n'> -delete

taistaist = the waist

stoostood = I stood

andes.&es. = and knees.

bottip wip = bottom lip

I a d a deep = I took a deep

&;&nb; -delete

&; ";-delete

Shock Treatment wordord:

t int in = night in

kno wer = know, we

tan wan = the one

.&n I n -delete

apartmenhichhich = apartment which

cheespanspan> = cheek.

.&nbs wo wonder = I wonder

&nbnbspnbsp; -delete

&nbnbspnbsp; -delete

Id.&nd. = I said.

ted oed = to need

drinkbsp;bsp; = drinks.

He looklooking = He was looking

it tit = get it

he che = of the

I kd thd = I kicked

< sty style='color:black'> -delete

&;&nb; -delete

doknowknow = don't know

gaspgasped. = I gasped.

sta Thr Throttle = stairs, Throttle

&nbs"Is -delete

sp;&sp; -delete

p>-delete

rea out out = reached out

het iet = him get

&nb/spa/span>-delete

she t mit = she isn't

sp;&sp; -delete

&nbsbsp;bsp; -delete

p;&np; -delete

whotorytory. = whole story.

fire I s I said = fire me," I said

mtay tay = me stay

sh/spa/span> = shop.

&n&nbs -delete

don'te abe = don't know

&;&nb; -delete

a le nle nervous. = a little nervous.

pan> - missing data? asking because the next sentence makes no sense.

Innocence Lost - huge section of blank space bottom ch 2

Decisions and Sarcifice - bottom chapter 3: "geovisit();" - ??? lifted from another site and copy-pasted here?

This whole story has lots of blank space drawn in - triple-spacing between sentences, large gaps at top and bottom of chapter, that sort of thing.

It's WAR! - are there sections of this story not appearing in the archive? Otherwise, author jumps around a lot without telling readers what's going on. I'm not seeing any weird things - no half tags or draw issues that I can tell from looking at it, but there's got to be something.

....Okay, starting in chapter 9 it's doing the blank space thing (like Decisions & Sacrifice above)

Aftermath -space draw issues

Tension - massive space draw at top and bottom of fic (top is after AN and after internal title)

Movie Night Crack - disclaimer not specific on no profit clause

Tear Us Apart - space draw issues - glitch?

Shattered Freedom, ch 3 is squishy. ch 6 has lots of space at the bottom. ch 7 has triple-spacing between paragraphs. ch 8 has sporadic triple-spacing and a huge chunk of blank space at the bottom. ch 13, ch 14, ch 15, ch 16, ch 17, ch 18, ch 19, ch 20, ch 21, ch 22: triple-spacing, huge blank spot at bottom. Ch 19 also has a big spot at the top between AN (internal title/author) and beginning of story.

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Blues Clues - Class of the Titans

Crashman Christmas - insufficient disclaimer (no "no profit" clause)

Calcite Copulation - insufficient disclaimer

Virgin Planet wordord:

clot tot too = club not too

togetas has he = together as he

tsy. sy. = too easy.

htowatowards = face towards

thndernderness = the tenderness

wshe = when

One evening wordord:

Linkhe ihe = Linka (she

sshirshirt = sweatshirt

surprisingly, that's all there was - maybe because the author had no spaces between sentences...?

Loyal-Heart Babysits

comment"I d"I = commented, "I

childrenps ops = ?

Bounty Hunters - triple-spaced paragraphs ch 1

fight over the hot spring AN Ch 1 & 2 top is squishy (but the story isn't) - and is the warning that the story contains sex really necessary?

Of Showers and Dolls -squishy!

Camp "Mating" Lazlo 2 - disclaimer insufficient - doesn't disclaim anything!

Unknown, Unknowns - review id 3000028420: seriously uncertain if this is wordord or bad typist:

tgough abaout Bodndocks = thought about Boondocks

wbbnt = ???

The Boondocks: Eleven Years Down the Road squished line:

bullets left Niko

s gun. (may be author error-he wasn't kidding with that AN at the top- badly in need of a beta)

Thug Luvin' ch 2 has a song at the bottom that isn't cited. It's not in typical lyric format is probably why it wasn't caught before. If you're just scanning you might think it was conversation snippets...but it's a song - "Back That Ass Up" by Juvenile

Thug Luvin' ch 3 - song lyrics not cited - "A Woman's Worth" by Alicia Keys

The following stories are all part of the same fiction and should be a chaptered story:

Cats Don't Dance: New Dance, After Work Hours, Day at the Office, Wild, Wet and Worked Up, Morning Rain

Class of the Titans: Hands, Lips, Heat

Bucky O'Hare and the Toad Wars: Captive, Captive (deleted scene)

Bucky O'Hare and the Toad Wars: Sex and Waffles, Playing Dress-Up

The Boondocks: Something Wicked, Owned

The Boondocks: Quiet Like Thunder, Dim as Lightning

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Code Lyoko - Courage the Cowardly Dog

Doggie Love - disclaimer inusfficient (full title is on the sheet)

Percussions review id 158677 wordord: ie use user Kakate = I'm the user Kakate

ch 1 starts out squished :

"pointed his finger

directly at" then goes to normal type.

wordord:

the restrest at = the tip rest at

tigss. [line break] ss. = tightness.

and squished line: "but smirked

"Don't worry"

Deadly Essence wordord:

happenedse ose = happened. Those (bold belongs to author)

doof tof the = door to the

par for for = partner for

Turnr Bar Back = Turn your back

hands of f...[line break]... = hands of fate... (?)

ish wordord:

t het here = this here

momentglarglare = moment to glare

entpapepaper = entire paper

unreunreasonable = how unreasonable

peopleFourFour's = people in Four's

was g deg dealt with = was generally dealt with

igd Ond One = ignored One

ch 2:

i [line break] op [line break] operation a.n.g.s.t = ish [line break] operation a.n.g.s.t

liker cur cute = like your cute

(je ne se quoise - it's not wordord but that made me cringe - je ne sais quoi)

was wasn't = he wasn't

younk tnk = you think

scioucious = suspicious

d awa away = drift away

ch 3:

don't ion ion it in = don't mention it in

"W [line break][line break] = "What-"

he phe part = on the part

ored.red. = occurred.

thive ive = that Five

ch 4:

irritat"I d"I don't = irritated. "I don't

" "That's right - the first " needs to be deleted and there should be a line break

nocontcontinuous = noticed continuous

ch 5:

wereallyally = were really

develotorstorso = developed torso

Dit! it! = Drop it! (?)

blanketund und = blanket around

woefullonelone. = woefully alone.

ch 6:

hov abo above hwn awn = hovered above his own

wronwrong = was wrong

this se, es, = this serious,

confuOne.One. = confused One.

inupteupted = interrupted

old ioneioned seersucker = old-fashioned seersucker

they adu adults = they are adults

acceptablet hit his = acceptable that his

octopthe the = octopus, the

soed. ed. = softened.

ch 7:

f" Be" Bemused, = fez!" Bemused,

ch 8:

glance ove One One, = glance over at One,

blinka bia bit = blinked, a bit

ch 9: (triple-spaced paragraphs)

matls. ls. = materials.

ch 10: (triple-spaced paragraphs)

coulke. [line break] ke. = could take.

Operation L.O.L.I.C.O.N.S. wordord:

bladed en sen sword = bladed shinken sword (best match I could find; bokken would be silly since that's wood, and not blade....but since the author thinks 'did noticed' is correct grammatical construction, they probably had bokken...)

theoks oks = then looks

and was confused. he thought = ???? missing text? (bad author?)

"I think soy?" y?" = "I think so, yeah?"

He opened and and showed - probably author error, can you delete second 'and'?

penetrait her slowly making making them - delete second 'making' please (cringe - even wordord didn't really want to touch this fic...)

Broken - third paragraph from the end - just one sentence, but there appears to be text missing because it doesn't flow from the paragraph above it (rest of the text seems to flow pretty well, so thinking maybe a glitch?)

A Heart's Promise - song lyrics not cited in ch 21 (they're part of the text recited by the characters) - song is "Count on Me" by Billy Gilman

Jerimies Birthday Present - review id 265482 wordord: show'ss sos so = show stories so

Last Chance: review id 2035463221 tipped me off (was the only thing the review said) - ch 8 is now orphan due to whatever issued happened (but doesn't matter b/c AN anyway)

jeremie loses his head - squishy! (I would think it was poorly written poetry but for the one sentence that manages to stretch the length of the table)

The Series of Love wordord:

him oh his bed. = her on his bed.

(ase ase you've = (In case you've

each r lir like = each other like

you, whi whispered = you," whispered

schooe bee began = school,' he began

shcidecided = she decided

hid "id "Uhhh," - he said "Uhhh,"

Yumiled led = Yumi pulled

Jerem ere erect = Jeremie's erect

firsfirst = the first

hir her = hit her

roomroom = her room

takAeliAelita = taking Aelita

to cto curious = but so curious

oppe fre from = opposite from

mie mie = Jeremie

hhesthest = his chest

waimi mi = wait until Yumi

NOTot; = NOT!" [line break]---

s?&qs? = it is?

aligalign="left"> -delete

There's missing text at the bottom of ch 1 - open '<' and the story abruptly stops (not that I'm complaining), and the that's missing should probably be checked for wordord.

ch 3:

Mrs. Hertumi umi = Mrs. Hertz, Yumi

Aeli[line break]" = Aelita.

Jerimie's Birthday Present wordord:

Jerisittsitting = Jerimie sitting

ch 3: (there's paragraphs in this one!)

Ahis his = AN This ---and this is admission of posting someone else's work!

/>-delete

log asg as = as long as

Code Lyoko - disclaimer insufficient (XO and doesn't mention second fandom)

Code Lyoko: Count Down ch 5: triple-spacing just before paragraph starting with "Sissi sat on her bed in". This paragraph is broken up in strange places in the sentences - user error? weird draw? Because the author includes more than one character's speech in the same paragraph, I assume that those four sentences before the next triple-spacing are part of the same paragraph.

Aelita\'s Wish - squishy lines:

"It starts off with Yumi, Ulrich, Odd, and Jeremy outside talking about the [line break]most recent XANA attacks. Ulrich starts it off...."

"want it so bad. So it [line break]can be like the old days back on Lyoko. Oh well I guess Jeremy can't be that bad.""

"knew what was going on [line break]but she did not know what to do. At first she thought she should go get the others but then another thought crossed her mind. Let her fuck me. After a few minutes she decided that she was going for it and called in. [line break]"Sissi are you all right?" "

"With that said Sissi ran to the door with the strap-on on and completely naked. She pulled open the door that Aelita had been laying on and Aelita fell in. She was then distracted by Sissi's beauty. Her perky and erect [line break]tits and her smooth and round ass. Sissi used this to her advantage and pulled Aelita's skirt up over her head stopping her from seeing and escaping. Then she could see the wetness between Aelita's legs. "Your very [line break]wet already," She said. "The fun has only begun!" "

"shirt and started to lick [line break]Aelita's nipples."

"then realized that he could [line break]not control her when she reached it but he kept on pushing."

"And he stood up and [line break]removed the strap-on so that would never happen again."

**ch 2:

"While Aelita and Sissi were having sex the others where wondering where she was. And while they were wondering Jeremy found out that a tower was activated. So he sent everyone out to look for Aelita while he [line break]headed for the factory. Yumi was sent out to look for Aelita in the girls dorm and boy was she in for a surprise. At first she only heard the moans and the bed moving around, but as she moved closer she could [line break]here the voices. And she heard Aelita's..."

"over her. [line break]Yumi did not know what to make of this."

"sex some time after. [line break]But that is another story. Aelita would always wonder if maybe she could have had something with Sissi. But that story is better left untold."

Always there - odd line break: Yumi snapped...Positive.

"I'll always..." ... and love

lots of space at the bottom of the chapter.

ch 14: ""Scanner Yumi." ... one" (three lines squished)

ch 16: ""Wwwooooaaaaahhhhhh!" ... over them." odd line break

ch 27: paragraph: ""Sorry." ... asleep also." has some really weird spacing issues.

Shadow's End squished lines:

"'Nice going Yumi, the look on Mrs Hertz' face was pricessless.' Aelita complimented. [line break]A loud beep went off and Jeremy growned. Opening his lap top he set it on the ground."

"though something was about to happen. [line break]She stepped into the scanner and watched it close firmly in front of her."

"Just hang in there Yumi. Ulrich is just in the elevator now.' [line break]Yumi could see Aelita crouched behind a rock wall. Making a quick right, Yumi leapt down to join her. Two megatanks and another crab guarded the activated tower."

"'I'll see you guys tomorrow. I just have to pick up my books from my locker first.' [line break]Odd made a face."

ch 2:

"...sector five, Aelita lost some of her value. [line break]But still…"

"air but at the first attempt of getting past them, they backed up and blocked her path. [line break]Landing heavily she withdrew her fans. Yumi cast them with as much force as she could gather."

"The tower came into view; a ghostly white smoke surrounded its mossy walls. [line break]Yumi passed through the seemingly solid tower."

"William swept out his arm and caught her easily around the waist, forcing her back to the ice face. [line break]Looking down Yumi couldn't suppress a small cry of horror that escaped as she watched two Kongers leep from the digial sea..."

ch 3:

"eccentric mix of both. [line break]'You're not trying to kill us.'"

Sissy;s revenge - don't think it was intentional, but the double negative makes the disclaimer invalid - "I don;t not own"

Also, the AN at the bottom just stops - is there more data that got cut off? (Not that I really want you to find it; this made me gag all the way through - the least they could do is spell the characters' names consistently within their own fic, even if it's not correct.)

Vrai Coloeurs ch 3 squished line: "The girl named Jackie grinned when the bottle stopped spinning, pointing to another girl. [line break]"Truth or Dare?" she asked customarily." - and I would like to note that the author has either never seen the "American" peace sign or has never seen the British "victory" - the hand faces a different way for each of those gestures.

Revenge of Eclipse - disclaimer: "Eclipse Publishing Fanfiction" - what? (I hate AI.)

Code:Naruto ch 3 squishy, ch 5 squishy, ch 6 squishy

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Danny Phantom

Secret Secrets review board - id 256144 wordord: strockrocked! = story rocked!

id 257273 wordord: goget get = gonna get

Vlad master ch 2: bad tag - no data after "wrong>" - which means no stroy data for me to check; ch 3: wordord: drink ink = drink

Width of a Thread - squished line: I [line break]I'll explain later, I promise."

One and One - disclaimer insufficient (it's in the body but not the disclaimer field)

Secret Secrets - wordord:

sm ove over = smooth over

it saf safe = it was safe

fA waA wave = fly. A wave

rzed zed = realized

hyes yes = his eyes

has has = She has

about. ". "No? = about him. "No?

ever had had = ever. He had

could The The = could do. The

andbbedbbed = and grabbed

huHe dHe didn't = hurt. He didn't

meanttingting = meant sitting

breebreeze. = the breeze.

Tr war wasn't = Tucker wasn't

sig signal = bat signal

ch 4 - orphan

dn'tdn't get = couldn't get

school I doI don't = school, but I don't

uncomfbly bly = uncomfortably

addition far far as = addition. As far as

parentsyouryour = parents or your

nervousn Dan Danny = nervous and Danny

td bod both = they'd both

slightHe wHe = slightly. He

he ed ted to = he wanted to

to elf elf = to himself

teahan han = teams than

re imp important = really important

somethinTuckTucker = something off," Tucker

replieden hen he = replied. Then he

readino mao many = reading too many

tay aay around = to play around

oft ext = of that

"She sla the the = "She slammed the

notput put = not to put

suddenly lipslips, = suddenly dry lips,

Woul reg = Would he

er'ser's weight = Tucker's weight

thoth oth = the other

low Dan Danny's = lowered Danny's

contr. "r. "For = container. "For

archarched = and arched

ch 6 just stops at the bottom - appears to be missing text

Infernal Flames and Sorrowful Ashes - triple-spacing between paragraphs

Wars of the Dead - triple-spaced paragraphs

A new lease on life ch 18: squished line: "Not only had he [line break]wooed Maddie successfully,"

Ember's Conquering - for some reason, the final line of the story comes below several lines of spacing and after the author's note... ?

Fast Times in Amity Park - please check into author's claim to have rights to story - original author not credited, but mentioned that the story was forcibly removed....

Welcome to My Phantasy ch 4: odd line break:

""Do you know why you're separated? [line break]Do you know how to fix it?""

Hex and Ember - The 'motto' is incorrectly cited. The quote is actually verse from G.K. Chesterton, 1906 English Hymnal. The Iron Maiden song that 'steals' it (I suppose a hymnal is considered public domain?) is "Piece of Mind".

Rock my world, baby - ch 3, song not cited. (only one stanza and I don't know the song)

CONTROL + ALT + DELETE - ’ appears when there is supposed to be an apostrophe. ch 3 has †where there should be right-side double quotes and “ for left-side double quotes, as well as the ’ for apostrophes. It stops at "I wake to quiet male..."

ch 5 and ch 6 have ‬ (needs to be replaced with a space) and †(needs to be deleted) appearing. Chapter 6 also needs song citations: "Krwlng" by Linkin Park and "You Oughta Know" by Alanis Morrissette

Correction Fluid ch 8 is a disclaimer - it's already covered in the top bar. You can delete this.

Eternal Love, Jazz's Story *New* - duplicate text in chapter 1: "Eternal Love [line break]Part 1 [line break]This is my attempt to continue a love story."

Also, author quotes another story and credits original author (Phantom180) but doesn's cite the story quoted... I assume it's this one.

Say My Name ch 1 and ch 2 are encompassed as chapters 5 & 6 of The Ghost-Boy Chronicles. They don't fit with the "main" story, so I can only assume something happened and somehow these got merged in here?

Eternal Love - bad HTML tags at top of chapter one.

Beast ch 2, ch 3 have a huge section of blank space at the bottom. (check age, AN bottom ch 3)

Danny Phantom and the Phantom Clan has characters based on the RPG "Rym World" - not disclaimed.

An Unexpected Double Date - Kim Possible not disclaimed

A New Beginning -Transformers (1980s) not disclaimed

Vanishing Act - Invader Zim not disclaimed (and if it weren't for the actual use of Danny's name at one point, I would count this as misplaced).

Time\'s End - squished lines:

ch 1: Danny changed back into his human form causing Erin's eyes to widen. [line break] "How the hell did you do that?"

ch 2: The evil future self of Danny Phantom was loose, and there was no way to stop it. [line break] Danny, Sam, and Tucker all sat down and listened to Erin's story.

ch 3: "So, you're from the 70's huh? That's cool," Tucker said smiling. Erin smiled back even though her heart wasn't in it. [line break] "Did you do the disco and all that stuff?"

ch 5: The body belonging to the voice crept out from the shadows causing Erin to shake in fury. [line break] "What do you think you are doing Jarrett?"

ch 7: She opened her mouth to scream, but a large hand covered her mouth muffling her voice. [line break] Erin's mind was racing. "Why didn't I sense him?"

Specter Hunters - steals the surnames of the Ghostbusters. It's not disclaimed, noted as an homage, or cited. If it were one name, it wouldn't have caught my attention, but it's Stantz and Venkman that are both stolen (and appear in the same sentence). That was ch 1. ch 5 steals Melnitz (Janine, the receptionist).

Master PC: Phantom Edition - idea based on another author's fic "Master PC" - author JR Parz - I googled it only because I thought this was some obscure XO....I was sort of right ... Point is, the Master PC fics are not cited or noted in any way, and AN: "I claim the story as my" (bad syntax is author's)--but it's not theirs when the idea was originally someone else's....sort of plagiarism? (Because the original Master PC fics didn't have anything to do with Danny Phantom.) - Original author specifically requested that television characters not be used in conjunction with his universe and that he "WILL NOT appreciate anyone writing a story where the sex involves preteen"-he defines this as under 16. Danny is fourteen. Creator's email.

***glitch: ch 9 is squished.

With regards to real companies mentioned in fics, please look at Gencom Danny Phantom. The company in question. Should this not somehow be disclaimed?

Wanting You - large blank space at the bottom of ch 1, ch 2 squished line: "plate of food before [line break]him."

[RogueMudblood]

Daria - Dexter

A Matter of Responsibilities

glitch? ""

"" should be -

"˜ should be '

"¦ should be ...

Sôma = Souma

entrée = entrance

½, ????

These appear to be issues with Japanese->English keyboard

Choices review id 191826 wordord: I'me ite = I'm sure

story wordord:

lightred red = light flickered

doo the the = door to the

Vis now now = Visible now

metitteittered = metal littered

apit pit in = and spit in

Kiy kiy kiss = ???

Experimental - squishy

Dexter's Hands-on Experience - double text:

"...that's what...that's what"

wordord: lifted right right = lifted his right

Good Things Come To Those Who Wait wordord:

CanOR DOR = Canard OR

attenda As As = attendance. As

few nds nds = few seconds

saunteoverover = sauntered over

ohhh this s sos so good = ohhh this is so so good

rea rear = her rear

we'een een = we've been

firime ime = first time

waive ive = wait five

nightft oft = nights left

Play Time wordord:

lemonraigraight = lemon - straight

hwn iwn = his own

upon on son softness = upon ??? softness

loud'd b'd = loud - he'd

The e she shadowed = The ??? shadowed

> A tilt -bad tag...missing text?

drewser ser to = drew closer to

totontrontrol. = total control.

atlaatlas energy = Alas, his energy

down n. Tn. This = down again. This

yeardeard = you heard

hands hed hed out = hands reached out

and a h of of = and a huff of

T wou would = There would

" Owww.. Fucking.. GO - missing text

irap rap = in - wrap

Yw." w." = Yeow."

earsssedssed = ears pressed

> God. - bad tag...missing text?

Thin for writhed - ???

Just Those Words wordord:

tDuckDuck. = that Duck.

thatthat = Not that

Darkwing... Possible? - Kim Possible not discliamed.

The Brain & The Beauty - review ID 214489 squished

The part NYDTQT is never going to write (or admit - review ID 2035215333 squished

Brittany Goes To Jail - squishy (all 6 chapters); wordord:

menchinching = me punching

ji all all = jiggly all

en den doorways that to to room = even doorways that led to rooms

tuou iou into = turn you into

breasnd nnd = breasts and

tastinge mye my = tasting even my

Tiy any and = Tiffany and

breas" sa" said = breasts?" said

thesionsionary = the missionary

writbehibehind = with rope behind

dildickiicking = dildo sticking

foure sre said = four more said

ou"LEM"LEMME = out, "GOD LEMME

pla placing = and placing

sed med my = spanked my

freiapeiaper = fresh diaper

ru and and = rubbed and

The Memories Saga - squishy; wordord:

shrug "Y "You're = shrugged. "You're

warmlantlanted = warm lips planted

Da Jan Jane = Daria, Jane

Dar Dariaverse = the Dariaverse

pats ass as = pathways as (okay, that was the funniest wordord I've seen to date. )

fil filled = been filled

is is on = she is on

pre previous = its previous

lly lly things = finally things

fou fought on = she fought on

"W [line break]"N = "What?"

Getting It On - wordord:

e goe got = I've got

bandre. re. = band there.

standtands = she stands

turnm onm = turns him

''I…" = I..."

surprithatthat = surprised that

paer her = past her

Thisbefobefore = This was before

brmomemoments = barely moments

mng ang = moaning

althe the = around the

his . [line break]. = his cock.

almostdy tdy = almost ready

satisfac on = satisfaction

k Dar Daria = kiss, Daria

ch 2 is orphan (author)

The Brain & The Beauty - squishy! (all 5 chapters) You can find a non-glitched edited version of this story here. wordord:

I Ki A G A Girl = I Kissed A Girl

)[line break]N) = (ASCAP)

Pollardandoandon = Pollard, Brandon

eenieenie Hut Jr.=--Weenie Hut Jr.

jus just = with just

fellfellow = her fellow

a of of hammers = a box of hammers

'm 'm = "I'm

gous ous = gorgeous

here[line break]"B[line break]"But = here."[line break]"But

staed ted = stammered

instancn qun = instance, in

rlearleader = cheerleader

"i!! i!! = "Sandi!!

've 've = I've

thockock's = the clock's

lastlast = the last

was when [line break]daw [line break]dawned = was when it dawned

shi goo good = ship of good

erheerhead = overhead

torme by by = tormented by

fashiova sva = fashion diva

chickeelivelivers = chicken, delivers

befshe = before

Morgendorffeuinnuinn = Morgendorffer. Quinn

nipplill[line break]ill[line break]the = nipples. The

eachs los = each kiss

wriwithwith = writhe with

thar lor love = that our love

momenut wut = moment, but

sing ing = sitting

wout? ut? = work out?

" gue guess = "So I guess

Tif, Sa, = Tiffany,

ci, ea, = circle,

ony guy = anyone

sa?" ?" = saying?"

olutolutely." = "Absolutely."

Batta,tta, = Barchetta,

(I left all the bad spelling and author bad spacing - just got the wordord)

Queen of the machines - CSI Las Vegas disclaimed in body but not disclaimer bar - is this sufficient? (see misplaced cartoons post)

This needs a celebrity disclaimer. Includes Saddam and Uday Hussein and Osama Bin Laden, as well as President Bush. (How was the author able to upload all of these chapters like this? They're frickin' enormous!) wordord:

Morgendror, … = Morgendoffer,

anny, ny = and many,

entehen hen = enter and then

assassinn"[line break]n" = assassination."

fou, ou, = for you,

ia: ia: = Daria:

fd ard are = friends are

shootiby oby = shootings by

movon, on, = moving on,

follfollow = followed by

dto tto = due to

ccidccident = an accident

kindergarteeatieating = kindergarten treating

interrogationm agm = interrogation room

thter ter = the water

excee cri critical = exceeds the critical

nuarauaranteed = not guaranteed

cle clear = two(?) clear

allowine fie = allowing the

JaneJane = and Jane

youre pre = you've been

ch 2:

youetereternal = you to eternal

aconsconsiderable = at a considerable

e tue turned = She turned

pang hng = placing

thdiumdium = the ???

tody.ody = the body.

birdke tke = bird take

er cer car, = to her car,

befshe she = before she

objeape ape = ??? escape

hiuse,use, = his house,

wwoulwould = with would

precautione toe = precautions she

statioer ter = station out

fit fired = get fired

tir air = the air

sus suspicious = suspicious

wher her = with her

tgh, gh, = through,

trisorisoners = the prisoners

al, … (delete)

thecrafcraft, = the aircraft,

thlevalevant = the relevant

indispensablr Tir = indispensible to

Daroingoing = Daria going

attd tod to = attached to

somethinhen hen = something when

seeme ome = seen some

Cnualnual = ???

untandtand = understand

therokinoking = there, looking

interro Tif = interrogate

f usf use, = ???

che.[linebreak]. = cheap.

w tak = will

thonthon = Jonathon

t's t's = "It's

knoere ere = know where

knoythiything = know anything

ykay kay = you okay,

Sands sts = Sandi was

oon oon = as soon

RADweepweep = RADAR sweep

prograhe nhe = program she

Tif[line break]Tiffany = Tiffany

a "wh "where = asked, "where

turoff off = turned off

fore anar sar = fore and rear

gthe the = gave the

commen"Gre"Great = commented, "Great

locf yof = lock. "If

otheothers. = the others

bableable = been able

thre ere = the rear

poc pocket = pocket

thbulabulance, = the ambulance,

tehe ohe = tell the

jacslugslugs, = jacket slugs,

stowstowed = she stowed

thof hof = the roof

afthe mhe = after the

aind ind = any kind

cou could = she could

ch 3:

stgicagically = strategically

motor tor = motivator

hernny nny = her horny

stuill ill = stuff fill

alle hae = all they

morticiane ree = 'mortician'. She

wthisthis = with this

ash.ash = of hash.

respble ble = responsible

datem whm = date from (you could delete this 'from' and help the author's still atrocious grammar...)

trykeepkeep = try to keep

lookedred = looked as

restraito ato = restraint to

Tiffretureturned = Tiffany returned

wher her = with her

rollut = rolled

ped ped = wrapped

shiveviolviolently = shivered violently

couldit, it = could do it,

unbearablightight = unbearably bright

Irarisorison = Iranian prison

a cou could = as he could

alivou nou = alive, you

fracturer per = fractured her

thiscipscipline, = this discipline,

soht" ht" - so what?"

approachhe dhe = approached the

elborikerike = elbow strike

slo slowly = face slowly

hinteinterrogated = have interrogated

ceiliherehere = ceiling were

ind fnd finished = it and finished

ch 4:

sotherther finr = to some finer

for, hr, = for her,

happensetimetimes = happens sometimes

sid side = up side,

w hav have = would have

affece dee = affect the

atanctance, = assistance,

suisorisor = supervisor

acted ted = activated

alreadtabltablished = already established

passagehindhind = passage behind

MSaheSaheeb = Maha Saheeb

rapeen sen = rape, then

awareware = are aware

wasing ing = was seeing

filesludiluding = files including

tndernder = to tender

sy thy = swiftly

pulle (sh = pulled it

volunteerir cir = volunteer their

thek, ak, = the lock,

thoom oom = the room

buannianning = but also knowing

whJediJedi = where Jedi

thesestsest = the closest

threthreats = two(?) threats

(If I missed any, I'm sorry, but that was the most boring story...I enjoyed Moby Dick more...)

Dreams...I wish they were true wordord:

to to go = her to go

stuffd und = stuuf, and

e the the = to be the

'd b'd be = "You'd be

baWe'dWe'd = baby. We'd

The part NYDTQT... wordord:

for ?[line break]? = for him?

tok hik him = to kick him

grd grabbed = and grabbed

r har hand = right hand

YASTAASTARD!" = YOU BASTARD!"

s and and = shirt and

paeveneven = pain; even

souldould = she could

Daria: Sappho and Galadriel of Lawndale - squishy; plagiarism - not theirs - AN ch 8.

Soul Mates...Forever squishy

CAUGHT!!!! - wordord

ch 3: was t Dar = was that

ch 4: t div = to be

ch 5: kingking = thinking

ch 7: shittme!"me!" = shitting me!"

ch 8: teolleolled = tear rolled

ch 9: mwhy why = me?" Why

lookinr. Or. = looking for.

ch 11: sca nak = scared,

ch 13: whatr bor body = what your body

ch 15: toucur bur = touch your

no don't in = no doubt in (I think they tried to fix the wordord themselves and messed up in places)

The DT Files - citation needed - marked - need to change refernce for "1-2" to "Spaceballs"

Edited February 15, 2011 by RogueMudblood
add info

[RogueMudblood]

Disney Misc

Mira Goes into Heat - as this is old I'm going to venture that the Disclaimer was auto-added when moved to this cat (it probably didn't exist at the time of upload). Question is this: This is a Disney/Pixar film. The disclaimer doesn't mention Pixar. Does this need to be corrected? They were a separated studio at the time of this film.

wordord: one one day= her one day

ven ven die = or even die

appepcte = accept ??? (her? it?)

fo unt until = forgot until

oosteoster = on Booster

in cin = was in

rep. As. = replied.

pedededed = proceeded

lond hnd = long and

Foxglove's Fur Coat - squishy

Redemption - starred out cuss words? In the forum, yes I will, in a story??? (Have you seen "The Rock" with Nick Cage? The line where he calls Sean Connery an "ahole" -that's actually what he says - is what I think of every time I see one of these ** words in this fic. Can you check this one for minor?)

wordord:

brest, st, = breakfast,

e pla = empty

ale:ale: = [line break]Dale:

you you = give you

codo wdo = could do

ande bee been = and I've been

ove,ove, = to move,

Monty,se ase = Monty, whose

101 Dalmatians Not Shown wordord:

ig sig = Cadpig

arogonist = ??? (not sure if it's wordord, but it's not a word)

andusteusted = and thrusted (it pained me to type that, but that's the way the text should be from the author...)

Experimentation - song not cited

Beauty on the Beast - see plagiarism forum

She Will Burn - song lyrics from the movie's song "Hellfire" not cited.

Disney Bonanza 2003 - disclaimer (internal) not specific enough - Land Before Time is from Amblin Entertainment, which has been known to work with the Disney subsidiary Universal Studios, but is not owned by Disney (from what I gathered.) Transformers (the orginal animated series the author is using) was produced by 20th Century Fox (Marvel Productions) and Sony (Sunbow Productions). Neither is owned by (or from what I can find an affilate of) Disney.

Hanna-Barbera characters: Huckleberry Hound, Scrappy Doo, Wally Gator, The Fintstones, Quickdraw McGraw, Penelope Pitstop, Jabberjaw, Beetlejuice, Dudley Do-Right, Grape Ape, Great Gazoo

And for extra credit: from Final Fantasy we have "the Tonberry"

George W. (Dubya) Bush makes an appearance. Rip Van Winkle makes an appearance. Odysseus makes an appearance.

ch 2 AN: "I do however own a glass of Napoleon Bonaparte's pre-cum." Might be funny and cute, but could actually get the author sued by an estate if the claim isn't true (or by the French people, take your pick).

ch 3 AN: "Dedicated to the memory of Tony Danza" ... his estate may take exception to that.

REV 22:20 - possible glitch - text stops mid-sentence: "He had been taken from Hell long ago, and had been living under God so"

The chapter continues, but that paragraph seems cut off.

Donald & Daisy - squished line: "peddling down the [line break]street at full blast."

ch 3 is squished (see dup forum)

recess- sex education- practical aplication squishy! and wordord

contestst yst you = contest-just you

belibelieve = "I believe

asks tos to = asked us to

Scamp & Angel wordord:

eyed lad laid = eyes and laid

p thp then = Scamp then

aficuficult = a difficult

bro brought = brought

Angel'sf, sf, = Angel's muff,

Foxglove's First Time squishy! (emailed poss plagiarism on acct)

RRC++R?P++TH(A++;I;Dr+;Hu++;In;My++;R++;P+;Su+ME+>++IxCR+>++ [line break] Cc+d++m+z+t+f++Ed++g++f++D*M-Zm18GH++L++GePc+!++

What is that?

wordord: whoes oes = what does

back'm g'm = back. "I'm

strengthenduriduring = strengthened during

han min = have in

b One = back.

ballsacshivshiver = balls and a shiver

and and = in and

s bac = slide

straigh Gad = straight as

panalanal = ??? anal

Ds hos = Dale's

s the = slid

A Tale of the Woman ch 4 ends abruptly - middle of a word. Missing text but no open tags...

Pixie Hollow Firsts - check the disclaimer: "or settings that re" ????

ch 2 is not Pixie Hollow; it is based on a book series Fairy Haven which is not Disney. The chapters have nothing to do with one another, so it's not an XO. Author needs to post the second one in books as a separate fiction. This fandom is not disclaimed either.

Evil, Be Thou My Good - only Tarzan is disclaimed. The fic belongs in Tarzan (movies) and not misc, but the other fandoms that the author has villains appear from do need to be disclaimed.

Reach for the sky - squishy!

[SlntCobra1]

Having just glanced over this, I'm guessing people aren't taking the time to PROOFREAD and thus the typos are getting fixed by you?! That seems extremely unfair.

[RogueMudblood]

No, honey, these are the glitches from old, old, old stories. DG fixes. Not me. I find. Others find. We tell DG here. DG fixes. DG=DemonGoddess061. Admin. This is a massive project DG has undertaken to cleanup the archive. More info here.

Unfair? To DG, yes. Extremely. But also remember, some of the users aren't active here anymore. The glitches won't ever get fixed if DG doesn't do it. (Unfortunately.)

Discuss? Please PM. Need to keep thread as clean as possible for DG.

[RogueMudblood]

Dragon Tales - El Tigre

Swallow the Moon

review ID 195317 - wordord: lastlast = the last; threntrents = the parents; Eddw itw = Eddy saw

review ID 205054 - wordord: Nekon¢¨ n = Neko-Chan

review ID 212377 - wordord: doin?knowknow = doin?" I know; reminisciand = reminiscing

review ID 248916 - wordord: iwordwords = into words

The Aftermath

review ID 190235 - wordord: he'd wan be be = he'd want to be

Inevitable

review ID 190236 - wordord: to I neI = to me. I; cancapicapitalize = can't capitalize

The Other Side Of The Moon - song "Jupiter" by Jewel not cited

review ID 300972 - orphan

review ID 305376 - wordord: n.n = now.

And a Milkshake to Go

review ID 265922 - wordord: aaintainty = 'dainty

*story wordord:

thrk'srk's = the dork's

as ty Nay = as to why

siffecffect. = side effect.

's p's = ??? (as far as I can tell, you can just delete this and the sentence will still make sense)

essiossion = ???

lengt his his = length in his

iousious, = Curious,

Ed Edd n Eddy: A reunion

review ID 269348 - wordord: whod , d , = whole Ed,

review ID 278741 - wordord: watc Edd = watching Eddy

*story wordord:

seethe = seemed

os cas = of his

sm laz = smiled

shr thr = shorter

beok",ok", = bed-look", (painful bad punctuation...but it was the author's...)

grinnef Edf = grinned. If

threetreet. = the street.

flamiolesoles = ???

rema cal = remained

EddyEddy. = did Eddy.

remember Hi His = remember. His

expect fro from = expect ??? from

realizeis his = realize this

Satisfaction

review ID 253146 - wordord: vin vin = & Kevin

*story - upset> > - bad tag?

k and = knees

tightight = the tight

leevinevin's = left Kevin's

A Shard Of Memory

review ID 190238 - wordord: shocking pe? Ke? = shocking people?

*story wordord:

/spa/span> - delete

werth mth = were

ch 2: Id ead = I said

Too Far

review ID 190237 - wordord: quitee ove overe.ere. = quite ????

*story wordord: way way = The way

Until our next battle wordord:

He not not = He did not

Benedi82178217;s = Benedict's

there th; the = there - the

satisfiyriayrian = satisfied, Tyrian

ch 2:

Tyrian&7;s 7;s = Tyrian's

wi pas passion = with a passion

Dragon Wash - squishy! one para fic.

Racial Relations - disclaimer issues: Totally Spies! (mentioned, should it be disclaimed?) and is "We Shall Overcome" considered public domain?

Shooting Hearts wordord:

thly gly = the only

hestiostioned. = he questioned.

nrustrusting = not trusting

afteds!"ds!" = after ???

'Return to Fayza's fanfic page.' -delete and massive space draw at bottom of fic

Daughters AN top says repost due to site crash - is there any chance that it might still be in the database somewhere else and just not showing in the archive?

"Hey Mister" (song) isn't actually cited. Just "I don't own or profit from". (The song is by Custom)

Inner-Ed wordord:

ch 1:

fonderDoubDouble-D = fonder of Double-D

shivers.< - open HTML tag - missing text? (and this is where italics begin - unnecessarily. Can you fix?)

dire tow = directed

quarrelh Edh = quarrel with

So" Do" = So..."

l to = lever

(large space draw at bottom of chapter)

ch 2:

(large space draw after AN top)

beng dng = be lying

m him = from

thess fss = the glass

hs tas = he was

head> > - bad tag

shak Is = shaking?

elabo on = elaborate

somng…"ng…" = something..."

(large space draw at bottom of chapter)

ch 3:

deed abd = deep and

shedshed = finished

oa cua = out of

seeme be be = seemed to be

eat eat = of heat

feltfelt = and felt

hre cre = he was

wou would = you would

w rub rub = would rub

Eaid:aid: = Edd said:

delicatdowndown = delicately down

sidesidering = Considering

wohavehave = would have

Need, Want, Love, Take wordord:

"> - bad tag? before internal disclaimer

knowp> = know. (bad tag)

Ed\'s Chicken Adventure wordord: hiin. in. = his skin.

Mine - internal disclaimer needs to be deleted or corrected.

wordord: hooksooks = he looks

lipspullpull = lips and pull

is cis = his

hr anr = harder

hng ing = hitting

thrustdeepdeep = thrust as deep

Edd's Graduation Gift - squishy!

Perfect Distraction

"())>-%---" delete - Japanese to English keyboard error?

Phantasmagori-Ed -disclaimer insufficient: no non-profit clause

Should be a chaptered fic: How I Love EDD, Eddy's Gotta EDDfriend

[RogueMudblood]

Fairly Odd Parents - Futurama

Wish review board wordord: 210142: differeneah.eah.= different. yeah.

story wordord: ade ade = I made

With Me review board wordord: 145835: fanfThatThat= fanfiction! That

story wordord:

Cou hav = Could I

hiiry iry = his fairy

lacis wis = laced his

gentlrokeroked = gently stroked

y a y a little = Only a little

Wounded wordord:

strongern usn = stronger than

al one one = almost one

Hide and Seek wordord: Jorgenoccaoccasion, = Jorgen on one occasion,

Heat and Steam wordord: WhenWhen = [line break] When

Fire and Ice wordord: timedisadisappointment. = time in disappointment.

Storms and Memories wordord:

le bac back = leaned back

bowemy emy = bows. Remy

Neon Lights and Darkened Streets wordord:

inte kie = into the

brs = his

Madness wordord:

JorgJorgan = and Jorgan

An uy cay = ???

ynow now = you know

Fairly Odd Sex-Ed review board p2 - stertchy (and once you delete the offending review it should be fixed - since it's not a review)

The Fairly Odd Parents review board wordord: 98258: Cnue nue = Continue

Father of the Pride- spacedraw & squishy!

Dragonphetamine - the disclaimer needs to be specific - it doesn't even mention Kingdom Hearts.

They\'re baacckk... - Ch 3 is glitched - text disappeared.

It Takes Two To Relax - question tense of 'no-profit' clause in disclaimer

Thrown out for the night. (internal author doesn't match name on author account) wordord: instwho = instead

Flintstones Part 1 - squishy!

Fred's Story Flintstones Part 2 - squishy!

Finally the Fuck - squishy!; Fran‡oise = Françoise

Girlfriends - squishy!; Fran‡oise = Françoise

When Good Housewives Go Bad, When Good Housewives Go Bad Again - real people make an appearance - disclaimers need to be modified.

Job Searchin\' Blues - the following need to be added to the disclaimer: Ranma 1/2, Cowboy Bebop, Trigun, Gundam Wing, Inyuyasha, Sailor Moon, Hellsing, Dragon Ball, Oh! (Ah!) My Goddess (not sure if Manga or Anime-it's not specific enough), Fullmetal Alchemist, Tenchi Muyo!

Brian\'s batter is the same story as Give a ltitle, get a little. only with a character name changed to make the story Het instead of slash.

Untitledness wordord:

neas Cas = news was

thole ole = the whole

Denzel'se. He. = Denzel's ??? (cock? ass? thighs?)

tow imw = to grow

blameirl irl = blame a girl

A \'Classic\' Fairly Oddparents Story stretchy!

wordord: gibberish before "A 'Classic'" in the body - please delete

gibberish after " "It's going to be one fun weekend." Timmy said to himself, smiling." - please delete

daynglinglish. = day - English.

doctoroffioffice = doctor's office

The Fairly OddParents wordord:

Worldle Tle = World while

darlinnda,nda, = darling Wanda,

""No, you don't usually dress in clothes that are torn and your hair is a mess Cosmo, don't lie to me, you know what happened last time I was lied to," Timmy said (movie reference)." - If it's a direct quote, doesn't it need to be cited?

Timmy\'s Phantom - "his mouth full of cum a." - no visible broken tags, but is there missing text showing in database? (May just be a bad author...) & disclaimer needs to be modified to include Danny Phantom.

Roots to Life - question verbiage in the non-profit portion of the disclaimer.

Didn\'t See That coming - down to earth./i> - obviously, open end italics tag. Can you fix? And just below this there is a 'bold' section that shouldn't be.

Funeral for a Chin - Marvel and DC characters mentioned not disclaimed.

The following stories are all part of the same fiction and should be a chaptered story:

Flintstones: Flintstones Part 1, Fred's Story Flintstones Part 2

Fantomette: Finally the Fuck, Girlfriends, The Horniest Trio

Family Guy: Brian's Change, Assume More, Suspect Less

Family Guy: When Good Housewives Go Bad, When Good Housewives Go Bad Again

Family Guy: Desperate times, desperate measures, A Messy Friendship, Give a ltitle, get a little., Brian\'s batter

[RogueMudblood]

GI Joe - Gargoyles

Synthetic - disclaimer needs to be modified. Right now, it says "I don't own Sigma 6". Yes, that's one of the many deviations of GI Joe; however, should it not say "I don't own GI Joe" ?

Threesome wordord:

hovedoved, = had moved,

secondser, er, = seconds later,

who of of a = who was of a

somesomeone = not someone

sexy s.[linebreak]s. = sexy ass.

you sti still = you are still

ar asr as = as far as

blund. Pd. = blunt end

wThe = way.

Inot not = I'm not

I 911 911." = I dial 911."

hawaysways = had always

looke her her = looked at her

on Gar = on the

frois eis = from this

sho shot = head shot

clawng ing = claws ???

lng fng furious = landing furious

veisseissed = very pissed

bve hve = believe

exhaus "S = exhausted.

Somedy bdy bar = Some bloody bar

instinctabbeabbed = instinct grabbed

deive.ive. = detective.

"Don'tk wik = "Don't fuck

Th[line break]The = The

shining pee peered = shining eye peered

believe.t? Ot? Oh, = believe it. What? Oh,

expret opt = express it

e dae days, = these days,

beingart art = being a part

....Is there text missing, or is author just that bad at internal continuity?

Promotion wordord:

seesngs,ngs, = sees things,

hedy ody = her body

hndernder = him under

hert het = her but

qui. He. = quietly.

waddenddenly = was suddenly

tht."t." = thought."

esizesized = emphasized

Foxy Lady wordord:

in summary: castAngeAngela = castle, Angela

review ID 260439: orona ona = or demona

story: tsmatsmattering = thin smattering

asovinoving = ass, moving

cl, th, = climax,

"Gargoylesemonemon. = "Gargoyles" ???

Alternate Lives: Phoenix Guardians - needs a citation for that bit at the beginning in italics - appears to be direct quote from the episode.

wordord: anfectfection = and affection

Lex needed> > - could be end of sentence, or bad tag.

ndifndif]> - bad tag, missing text?

wo/p> /p> = word.

Lextailtail, = Lex's tail,

moann sun = moaned in

behhis = behind

pro protected = him protected

t Lex Lex = that. Lex

"Yeah."[line break] /p> - broken tag, missing text?

200 s. - ??? no open tags near this...is there missing text?

y the the = year the

gargoylith ith = gargoyle. With

emos, fs, = emotions,

and ed = pissed

asy asy = as they

fof tof = full of

in ain = was in

&q...S...So = "...So

if]> - bad tag

unsp mus = ???

"tstotstone = "Nightstone

ass oss = ???

ru tow = running

reang hng = realizing

swi swing, = the (his?) swing,

p clp class=MsoNormal> - bad tag

cla class=MsoNormal> - bad tag

ing ing = heading

be lon = before

p clp class=MsoNormal> - bad tag

yquotquot; = you?"

w wer = whom

hs ths = heroes

witm evm = with him

ndifndif]> - bad tag

clasclass=MsoNormal> - bad tag (sorry if I missed any, that got boring-though not as bad as that Daria story...)

Another Night, Another Kiss review page 4 RID 3000036131 - squishy

A Million Reasons ch 3, ch 6, ch 7, ch 8, ch 9, ch 10, ch 11, ch 12, ch 13, ch 14, ch 16, ch 17, ch 18, ch 19, ch 20, have squished lines throughout, but it's not all squishy. ch 19: ’ = '

To Catch A Killer - also partial squishies ch 1, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7

Never Meant to Be wordord:

ch 1: GrahGraham = Graham

B> Brooklyn = Brooklyn

**starting at ""I don't think that it is wise," " the text is italicized and shouldn't be. Is there missing text or an open tag in the db that I'm not seeing in the archive? There are also some random jumps between segments of the text that make me think there's missing text, and the author references Japanese phrases in AN bottom, but the phrases aren't anywhere else in the chapter.

ch 2 squishy! wordord:

flowe[line break]Bro[line break]Brooklyn = flowers?[line break]Brooklyn

he a, co, = he asked,

asBrooBrooklyn. = asked Brooklyn.

shed hed = splashed

surveillanceaid aid = surveillance," said

jolivial = jovial (not sure if that actually qualifies as wordord or "I'm rewriting English")

ie eye eye = in the eye

theing ing = the racing ? blurring ?

hal bel = had all

fewondsonds = few seconds

Gdid = Gary

fa he he = far as he

Noo seo = Note to

notgroagroan. = not to groan.

nitenitely = definitely

Ahe fhe floor = And the floor

**There appears to be missing text in this chapter also as the author again references foreign words AN bottom that are not in the text.

ch 3 squishy!

"With a burst of adrenaline, and reached his target and tackled him." - missing part of the sentence, or just bad editing?

wouoth oth = would both

adglidgling = a fledgling

don'nd. nd. = don't mind.

sarookrooklyn. = said Brooklyn.

bertberto = Roberto

ertoerto = [line break]Roberto

&nbspnde nde = blonde

onlve ove = only have

ch 4 squishy!

to s to to = too ??? to

Ironly, ly, = Irrationally,

Roberto stared at the ceiling above [line break]He[line break]He hadn't - missing text.

Yo&nbs = York.

ela ela = Angela

chi chin = his chin

courseat aat = course, that

ins dis = instant

oas tas = one was

wai for for = waiting for

anceance = distance

sisedised = ???

it [line break]it something = Was it something

wor words = The words

ch 5 - squishy!

mangun gun = man to gun

thi things = the things

laman man = latin man

ch 6 - squishy!

tRobeRoberto = that Roberto

and uthe the = and ??? the

Acing ing = According

posspossession, = her possession,

ed ied = alive

intensityfemafemales = intensity that females

earor gor = earth for

g tog = going

r som = raise

aulleulled = and pulled

Mrste Mte = Mrs Kate

thronto nto = thrown into

handso hio = hands into

't w't = didn't

n't n't = I can't

lipslips = his lips

ch 7 - squishy!

&nbIt'sIt's = "It's

eyesenedened = eyes widened

introd thd = introduced

istiistina = Christina

discun.[line break]n. = discussion

fa rug = face a

hert fit = her just

pas passenger = the passenger

ch 8 - squishy!

ret gra = return,

inte tte = indicate

blusnbspnbsp;He = blush. He

becaue kne = because he

evid[line break]tha[line break]that = evidence that

goio hao = going to

stuff considering what - the sentence just stops and the next paragraph starts ... missing text?

"Hell&nbs = "Hello."

gale fle = gargoyle

hea head = her head

oud thd = out and

ch 9: wordord:

inforon oon = information

wasnwasn't = he wasn't

distracting Ka - the sentence just stops and the next paragraph starts ... missing text?

pct vct = perfect

unonedoned = unbuttoned

alaralarm = the alarm

K gra = Kane,

otheother = The other

futh hth= fun with

t's t's = "That's

e Mre = where

nuzznuzzle up against hhroahroat = and nuzzle up against his throat

ath ath = around

andnfulnful = and painful

almommedmmediately = almost immediately

&nboberoberto = Robert

buils, ts, = buildings,

Darlene: Mirror Images 2 (PART 27) - space draw issues - triple-spacing between paragraphs

The Out of Towners - squishy! (all 9 chapters) disclaimer in text ok, in bar woefully deficient.

Her Crimson Kiss - squishy! (all 3 chapters) disclaimer in text ok, in bar woefully deficient.

A Life On The Line - disclaimer incomplete - non non-profit clause - please check for minor. (either that or ESL)

Gargoyle Fantasies - disclaimer in text ok, in bar woefully deficient; ch 2 - squishy (disclaim Star Wars needed); ch 5 AN top squishy

Victims - not sure if anything needs to be added as a generality maybe "I am not affiliated with Barnes and Noble" (although author misspelled) - also references Boris Vellejo - though, for once, there referenced celebrity isn't making an appearance.

Mother Daughter Escapades - disclaimer verb tense on profit clause-please check.

Boxing Day - check profit portion of disclaimer. Also, all of author's disclaimers say who does own the Gargoyles, not that author does not own them - is this sufficient? SID 600092495, 600092369, and the "S" series below (chapters posted as separate stories)

The following stories are all part of the same fiction and should be a chaptered story:

GI Joe: Motorpool Lovin\' , Final Step for BeachHead and CoverGirl

Gargoyles: Alternate Lives: Phoenix Guardians , Alternate Lives 3: Past Sins

Gargoyles: Seize the Night , Special Delivery , Stonewall , So... You're Gay...

[SlntCobra1]

Wow, if only I had the attention span you do and the patience to NOT let my inner Grammar Nazi get the better of me, I'd be willing to help as well.

[RogueMudblood]

Wow, if only I had the attention span you do and the patience to NOT let my inner Grammar Nazi get the better of me, I'd be willing to help as well.

Sometimes it is hard about the grammar. I do so want to fix things, but I can't ghost write things already in the archive. Just post the ick for DG to fix. Some of my favorite complaints about grammar, though, are in the reviews that are so messed up you have to wonder if the author isn't flaming themselves to make people look at their story and see if it really is that bad.

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The Goode Family - Homestar Runner

Ubuntu's Football Trip - please check the disclaimer - refers to author in 3rd person...posting someone else's fic?

author's webpage and email - is this the same info you have for andromeda1 ?

Summer Breeze: What Roxanne Didn't Know - check verbiage of non-profit portion of disclaimer please.

I Love Brendon Small (let the wordord begin):

fanfic eso pso = fanfiction, so

e the the = to be the

realouldouldn't = really couldn't

abou. J. Jason = about it. Jason

shed wed = shuddered ?

Mind Games review board: RID 257953 - squishy?

RID 2035317534: reaghten. = ??? Is that how the user intended to spell written, or is that wordord?

ch 2 wordord: o, ho, = No,

Family Affair wordord:

He-man did. pan> - bad tag, missing text?

Castle Greyskull would be ours!"[line break]o:p>[line break]Soon two guards - random story jump - missing text? (open tag)

"I'm[line break]Nyllive, - please get rid of the line break - I think it's caused by the disappearance of the section mentioned above.

Alab.lab. = Arms lab.

Evil- had had = Evil-Lyn had

personremireminded = person he reminded

bee...e... = be mine...

ers,ers, = Masters,

body...< < -open tag, missing text?

withs bos = with this

witntemntempt. = with contempt.

Pineapples - disclaimer says doesn't own homestarrunner.com - is this sufficient, or does it need to disclaim Homestar Runner and not just the website? (Apparently this started out as a book...)

The Dereskian Queen - review board wordord: RID 213818: two wi Gi Given = two witches. Given

ch 1: wordord (oh so tempting to ask you to simply load in the FFNet version...)

Theyed ted = The named

cil oil = council

chigaingain, = child again,

ye Ete = years,

me wme = became

ch 2 - song not cited: I am Going to the West by Connie Dover

squished line: "orods ferk[line break]anonë"

after the above, this is what appears: "kan ris il vanna toïl. Mantë ëars eii toil otë gaers feret llorlïe, ki thæ reüusk iss il falas, tet tirn il unfalas gaer."

the same section on FFNet story: "ki thæ reüusk iss il falas, tet tirn il unfalas gaer."

I don't know the language. The translation (which is at the bottom of the chapter) is the song by artist mentioned above. This excerpt put into google translator tells me it's closest detected match is Albanian - and it can't recreate the English lyric from the FFNet verse. So, I can't recreate what the original AFF text looked like. Sorry.

thpor = thale

shuld uld = she could

t in in = twice in

I-e tre tried = I-" she tried

womith ith = woman with

WestWest, = the West,

ch 3: wordord:

ter ier = tutor

hoey cey = how they

there ere = they were

ch 4: wordord:

insidhe she = inside. The

ch 5: wordord:

Can ann and hesterster = Caerlin and her sister

rof tof the = rock of the

leaning hea of of = leaning heavily of

ofs tos town. = of this town.

ch 6: wordord:

re mre = after

dresslowslowly, = dressed slowly,

Han yan = How can

impotly,tly, = importantly,

Ancientoriaoria = Ancients, Moria

ch 7 wordord:

makr dir = make our

All sll = A small

rea ready," = "I'm ready,"

ch 8: wordord:

dank haThe = dank haze.

was blas mas = was black as

tearcearch = their search

ch 9: wordord:

booksll mll me, = books! Tell me,

hosphospital = the hospital

ever-presenquidquid = ever-present liquid

ch 10: wordord:

wounwound = her wound

wra by by = wrapped by

ng mng = taking

rubber eer = rubbed her

"Mm Cae Caerlin = " Mmmm," Caerlin

woand = wound

also, the other chapters have a different formatting - appears it was lost here through ch 12.

ch 11: wordord:

whereaboutse loe = whereabouts. She

thas uss = that was

drd tod = dropped

hattlattle-ax = his battle-ax

somng. ng. = something.

him,, ju, just = him, and, just

Wthe = When

bkeptkept = been kept

starting at " t'il andúne." the line breaks need to be taken out. The whole section should look like:

Ki hach urë t' il andúne. Lidor li we nesurë derem. Li mae ur kan li anonë. Lidor li we nekhil rem, Ne yuthë gui ki nänd. Ki hauch urë t'il andúne. Ki hauch urë t'il andúne.

ch 12: wordord:

Darkwoman.The The = Darkwoman." The

idioidiots." = the idiots."

move frd.[line break]rd. = move forward.

ght ght = brought

coult fit = could not

woman's hea = woman's head. (space draw issue - no missing text in comparison of FFNet and AFF loads - just extra blank space)

knoy biy = knows my

The Clash of Majicks: wordord:

disced, ed, = discovered

ch 2: Majicker ter than= Majick older than

aan. an. = a woman.

iur sur = in your

herger ger = her finger

ch 3: wordord:

hedy pdy pain recereceding. = her body pain was receding.

shor her = shoulder

s hnishnished = she finished

candleligh bad bad = candlelight is bad

yor wor = young

ch 4: wordord:

(Title needs to be fixed - simply Chapter IV)

difnt?"nt?" = different?"

te ene end = to the end

livingbersbers = living members

ch 5: wordord:

"Oeelieelina. = "Oh, Teelina.

almosductductively. = almost seductively.

beforossiossing = before crossing

sd upd = stared

debe ibe = describe

Sonsionsidered = She considered

coming.The The = coming."[line break]The

anlminlming. = and calming.

"You'ringringing = "You're bringing

ch 6: wordord:

"Nog. Ig. = "Nothing.

inury ury = ???

rel sta = relaxed

br acr = better

uncontroly. ly. = uncontrollably.

woman'es.[line break]es.= woman's eyes

fac"Tsk"Tsk = face. "Tsk

h wih = head

clescles = shackles

meashe she = mean?" she

A Home That Far review board wordord: RID 194492: cnue,nue, = continue,

please check author's age. I was unable to find anything conclusive. However, this being the second of her stories that I've read... she sounds young. I might excuse as ESL if it weren't for the fact she uses British spellings.

Disclaimer will need to be re-worded to include X-Men (comic). (It's in the body, but not the bar, and the non-profit clause is only in the bar.)

ch 1: wordord:

wonighnightmare = worst nightmare

neighbourottwottweiler = neighbour's rottweiler

dthe = done

nigtwo = night,

turnef thf = turned off

wohinghings = work things

ship the the = ship and the

ch 2

ns sis = nights

posis tos = positions

holdingo hio = holding onto

freeir eir = free their

frs, as, = friends,

whardhard = were hard

remaremained = had remained

advd ind = advanced

brouhim = brought

urneurned = He turned

def "E = defeat.

maundered = maneuvered

crtabrtable. = comfortable.

pr enr = proper

ide tre = idea of

thou 'T = thought.

sng hng = showing

stoppand = stopped

ts les = tracks

neverngednged = never changed

oughough = Although

pai att = paid no

ttalltallion = the stallion

Come Pus = Come on.

matheythey = made, they

hise, giviniving it a flip to reveal a longer piece wrapped aroit. it. = his side, giving it a flip to reveal a longer piece wrapped around it.

thr through = ran through

ofame ame = of a name

ch 3

wat sot = wasn't

"Man-ats?"s?" = "Man-at-Arms?"

goget = got to

coe = she

ch 4

ting ing = training

cide ide = can ride

unconditd mod = unconditioned

faead ead = far ahead

finishe."e." = finish line."

pullihe = pulling

ch 5

hiale ale = her. Kale

paddin she she = padding?' she

reaod.od." = real good."

thrn. rn. = the barn.

uncauncan = [line break needed]Duncan

ght ght = thought

Tomanoman = The woman

informatiboutbout = information about

thw prw = the new

attentionke = attention. "I take

duplication of text begins at worord: "If thke" and ends at "in the system." The entire section can be deleted.

leve a = ???

ch 6

findthinthings, = finding things,

ed sed = gasped

s"[line break]" = sir."

Shdn'dn't = She didn't

red. d. = replied.

angeangeling, = a changeling,

froere ere = from where

cheschest, = his chest,

ch 7

inueinued = continued

thofesofessor = the professor

ch 8

a b a = had a

g fro = ground

becomee cye = become more

as rees.ees. = as refugees.

ndernderstand. = "I understand.

fr, pr, = favor,

"C[line break]"Can = "Can

aded aed = adjusted

a!" !" = again!"

therther = thereafter

vegetn, tn, = vegetation,

t my my = to be my

handschedched = hands ???

text stops - missing text?

ch 9

thecherchers = the teachers

e. e. = horse.

dowe wae = down. He

allomselmself = allow himself

houchouched = he crouched

bre breath = her breath

he to hto = he has to

ch 10

td. [line break]d. = to bed.

timetime = Any time

"Ve"Very = [line break needed]"Very

ager ger = a bigger

ch 11

skedsked. = he asked.

reallry mry = really? Try

TheyThey = [line break needed]"They

kly kly = quickly

you thr = you're

punc"Dun"Duncan, = punch. "Duncan,

pl, he, = plants,

med atd = me, and

bao Kao = back to

ch 12

wholrm srm = whole form

keepeye eye = keep an eye

chu. [line break]. = chuckle.

frite ite = frostbite

subordinatooktook = subordinates took

wanr...r..." = want her..."

s, hs, = rocks,

Slowl wen = Slowly, he

dmuchmuch = down much

happeain.ain." = happen again."

cl fee = cloven

nea nearly = fall nearly

clawgmengment = claw fragment

moveoggioggily = move, groggily

soute she = south she

ral ral = ???

beast'sst, st, = beast's throat,

ch 13

theks aks = the tusks

g heg = along

him , bu, but = him up, but

ntednted, = relented,

tng hng = throwing

himing ing = him, hoping

bd bed = beyond

goingoing = was going

ch 14

a tim = awful

ems ems = "Seems

cmarkmarks, = claw marks,

"S"[line break]"[line break]" = ???

coted ted = constructed

Logand hid = Logan held

tigThenThen = tiger? Then

t itt it = [line break needed]But it

farthack.ack. = farther back.

Stpullpulled = Storm pulled

nee get get = need to get

locfor = locker

VeryVery well = [line break needed]"Very well

thr onr = the air

dedingding = descending

selvselves. = themselves.

her , he, he = her down, he

backa hua = back into a

nd, nd, = ground,

lstelstered = holstered

trounround, = the ground,

atton ton = attention

ch 15

ossiossible." = as possible."

Dark Alliance ch 2 has open tag at the bottom: will>/i>

Blue Sugar - please check disclaimer. Has necessary parts, but adds that the story is copyright of Kim McFarland.

Endsville High - disclaimer needs to be modified: Will need to specify cartoons: The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy, Invader Zim, Fairly Odd Parents, Ed Edd n Eddy, Powerpuff Girls, Dexter's Laboratory, Codename: Kids Next Door, Hey Arnold!, Jimmy Neutron (I don't know what cartoon Steve came from - and at this point I'm thinking if it was ever on NickToons or CN it needs to be disclaimed)

Mandy's New Weapon - disclaimer needs to be modified to include Teen Titans ... and does the Necronomicon fall under public domain? And review whoring.

Who am I? wordord:

RID: 8787: wasy moy = was very

ch 1: bittow. ow. = bitter now.

hahanghanged, = have changed,

felxed xed = felt relaxed

aproppropriate = an appropriate

h, Ph, Pheebs, = "Oh, Pheebs,

tossinflowflower = tossing a flower

andfeltfelt = and it felt

sidesides, = her sides,

Anlovelove = And I love

Another World: House of the Holy - disclaimer needs to be modified to include the Wild Thornberrys and Invader Zim

wordord:

Bod lod = Gino had

stupir nor = stupid for

houand = hours,

way?way? = anyway?

A Parent\'s Worst Nightmare: wordord:

s gir girl's = scream a girl's

mention ndsondsome = mention, handsome

Helga and Phoebe\'s Sleepover: wordord:

"Wwho?who?" = "With who?"

Long December: wordord:

letse ase = let these

er aer all = after all

shoulderefulefully. = shoulder balefully.

ch 2: rwherwhere = read where

maybcoupcouple = maybe a couple

sse. se. = guess.

smi smiled. = and smiled.

n't n't = I don't

l hul = feel

I'lkillkill = I'll kill

Surprised Birthday Surprise - question non-profit verbiage in disclaimer - "I do not make any kind of profit off the series."

Not as Planned - question non-profit verbiage in disclaimer

[RogueMudblood]

Invader Zim P13 - 8

No Banana - wordord: roa fre = roaming

Nocturnal Lust - top paragraph squishy

wordord: lng hng = leaving

squished line: "in it's opaque [line break]Protection."

ch 2:

squished line: "newborn dragon,[line break]And yellowed"

wordord: m wam= [line break]Zim

ch 3: squished line: "which causes[line break]Him to"

ch 4: wordord: stonah nah = store- nah

Skin Deep AN squished

Dib and his abuse - wordord:

m...m... = "I'm...

ed hed = closed

forhad had = for he had

uredured = captured

Ieingeing = I'm being

killelf elf = kill myself

patc loc = pathetic

Theeaseease' = The last 'please'

c ans = could

werw anw = were wet

this ais = there is

The Ultimate ZADAGABAGABAMATAZAGAMR novel - wordord: (how old is this person?)

ch 2: return,m gom going = return, I'm going

wronothnother = wrote another

wearig ask asked = wearing?" asked

ch 3: behihis= behind

be dec = before

truntrunts = the grunts

chapter 4 is chapter 3 again...although, that may have been intentional...I still think this is troll fic.

ch 6: presenitseitself= presented itself

ch 7: s the = sucks

ch 8: allcoulcould = all he could

ch 11: right?z saz = right?" Gaz

ie fae = in the

sas, as, = she was,

Ziked.ked. = Zim asked.

ch 12: go beo = ???

Joined at the Dib - wordord: RID 234057 - Pratchet Hit= Pratchet of

RID: 278352 - it it = at it

ch 2 wordord:

sluayedayed = slug prayed

n stn style='mso-tab-count:1'> - bad tag

entaentarily = momentarily

q lo = quite

clasclass=MsoNormal style='mso-pagination:none;mso-layout-grid-align:none; text-autospace:none'> - bad tag

Another Doomed Year - wordord:

wa go. go... = way to go...

cou..".. = could..."

beautiful Irkan Princess, and[line break]Heir - squished line

Leaning on the[line break]door - squished line

Tom[line break]lifts his - squished line

of tof = out of

It's MATING time! - wordord:

evtwentwenty = every twenty

affd byd = afforded

bs fes = by his

wi wav wave = with a wave

turnresuresulted = turning resulted

ot yot = or not

"ogy ogy = "Apology

etiontion = exception

Pain is Love - squishy! wordord:

et. et. = forget.

ted aed = towered

dazsmilsmile = dazzling smile

Black & Blue - wordord:

summary: Startiut iut = Starting out

storout out = stories out

re ire = read

(The AN here is excessive - do you want to email author about this? Or do you leave the older stories before the content guideline change?)

spoke suc = spoken in

Awaom tom = Away from

contempnd knd = contempt and

forthatthat.... = forget that...

findi dar = finding dark

sr inr = suffer

gec flc = genetic

conque spe = conquering

black-purpleid, id, = black-purple ???

ch 2: irkn thn = Irken in

aren'ncinncing. = aren't convincing

waw daw = was

,n, Pn, = ???

Somng, ng, = Something,

inungrungry = in a hungry

QuestioCommComments = Questions, Comments

ch 3: hou*L* *L* = hours *LOL*

fingersoughough = fingers through

unknunknown, = her unknown

He mHe may = He may

sparever ver = ??? , ever

Destroy All You Know - ch 1 AN needs to be edited to remove the "no kiddies under 18.. unless u want..." line. & squishy! (all four chaps)

ch 2 orphan

ch 4: wordord: it eno enough = it was enough

times d tad = times he had

Another Meeting: wordord:

gavnervnervous = gave a nervous

teles les = tallest

gohe whe = gods, he

Shadows Dance - Review board wordord:

RID 101053: forwardthe the = forward to the

RID 101270: wxcepxceptional! = was exceptional!

Ch 1 wordord:

enshro cit = enshrouded

castrostroy = can destroy

real bec because = reality because

ch 2 doesn't belong here - is part of another fic - poster on this is ZeeDrippyVessel - I am guessing it goes here ... this story's ch 27 is a reload of it's ch 7. So RID 76810 can be moved to ZDV's fic.

Soldier of Fortune - ch 9 orphan

Her Eyes - squished line: "Zim glanced[line break]over his"

ch 2, 3, 6, 8, 9, 11, 14 orphan; ch 13 - squishy

Feeling This - squishy!

All I Know - squishy!

Gaz's Best Friend - RID 182413 wordord: WhatDib = What is

RID 250792 wordord: b lik = but I

ch 2: neseenseen = never seen

haokenoken = had broken

waarp,arp, = was sharp,

Ahe hhe = And his

< sty style="mso-spacerun: yes"> - bad tag

ch 3: n1>- bad tag

Bloaty'/p> /p> = Bloaty's."

cla class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:200%'> - bad tag

Soaked To The Bone

Past this skin, I'm soaked to the bone [line break]in this feeling you bring to me. - squished line (reads like a song lyric, but it's the only one and I can't find the song) - appears twice like this in chapter.

The Expression of the Stars - ch 2: squishy and space draw issues (copy-pasted from FFNet probably - AN ch 1 says author moved, same ID)

No Experience Necessary - ch 1, 3, 6, 7 - small-window stretchy; ch 2, 3, 4 have space draw issues - no line spacing between paragraphs - user formatting error?

Cuts and Bruises - ch 2, 3, 4 have space draw issues - triple spacing between paragraphs

The Things Between Us - squishy!- all 4 chapters

Two Of Us - ch 2, 3, 4, 5, 6 space draw issues

Intruder - squished lines:

Dib said quietly.[line break]Zim jumped

his camera.[line break]Dib was

working on his pants.[line break]Zim worked

Dibs prostate.[line break]Dib screamed

Megami Joushou - ch 4 top AN needs to be edited/deleted. Pissy author needs to get over herself and the fact that she was deleted previously - probably was a minor at the time of deletion. But, as it appears to me, her profiles were actually merged. (All the info I've found on her shows she's legal on this account, but I did find where she was part of a group that was posting and included two minors.)

ch 7 - small-window stretchy

Do Irkens love? - There are squished lines throughout - appears to be author formatting error.

The Blood Of the Rose - Is there a reason that authors who've been deleted for being too young feel the need to tell everyone "I decided I'm above the rules" when they're allowed to come back? (AN ch 1)

Irken Courtship - this was edited by a minor...note AN bottom ch 1 by user name.

Vindicated - ch1, 3, 4: small-window stretchy; ch 2 - glitch - entire chapter missing -open 'end' tag

Thank You - small-window stretchy, both chapters (see AN forum)

Tall Order - small-window stretchy, chapters 1-3 (see AN forum)

The Things Between Us - squishy! all 4 chapters

Finale ch 9 - small-window stretchy

[RogueMudblood]

Invader Zim p 7 - 3

Deep Rooted Desire - ch 2, 3, 4: small-window stretchy....ch 4 has no citation for the song Christfuck by Wumpscut

Poison - no citation for song Poison by Alice Cooper

The Control - ch 1: "protest.par[line break]"Sirs do I go in?"[line break]i Let it be Verana. Let them work it out[line break]i0" - ??????? What is that 'junk'? It appears throughout the chapter.

Teenage Tendancies - review whoring bottom AN

The Clock Tower - ch 11 squishy

To be Toyed With, ch 2 AN top - author states needs to add tags and doesn't know how: Voy and Exhib. And stretchy (small-window)

The Sweetest Fruit - small-window stretchy

Piece by Piece - disclaimer doesn't specify which movies. (They don't seem to play an actual part in the story though - bad as it is)

Missing Something Crucial - disclaimer woefully insufficient.

They Shall Rise Again - please check disclaimer

Horseshoes and Handgrenades - please check disclaimer

Paranoia ch 6 - small-window stretchy

Zim, Dib and a Who - Horton Hears a Who not disclaimed

The following stories are all part of the same fiction and should be a chaptered story:

Specimen, Captive

Beginning, Middle, Apex, End, Finale

Handy Distraction, Distraction 2, Deception - these need an additional disclaimer for the inclusion of the creator Jhonen in the fic.

[RogueMudblood]

Invader Zim 2-1

Every Kiss Begins with Kay - should the title be disclaimed for being a trademarked slogan?

Bribary - no wordwrap on smaller windows.

Goddess Risen - check disclaimer

The Irken Anatomy - check disclaimer

Vindication - ch 18, ch 22 - does author in some way need to state that they are not a member of the Associate Press since they have written this to appear as a news article and signed it "The Associated Press" ?

ch 60, ch 61, ch 75 - need disclaimer (in chapter) modified to say author does not know Anubis Five (Anubis5) or Exit Theme (the group) and all the other celeb goodies - and I'd love a birthdate on this guy - spent 10 minutes looking and I've got nil (except that he may or may not be dating Nicky Hilton - I can find that but not how old he is...)

ch 76 - needs celeb disclaim for Metallica

ch 65 - advert for another author in chapter

ch 81 - bottom AN - advert for dA artists

ch 26, ch 31, ch 33, ch 39, ch 40, ch 43, ch 47, ch 48, ch 55, ch 56, ch 60 - orphan

[DemonGoddess]

The first one, I'm not sure. I'll have to look in to that. The second, what are you meaning by no word wrap in smaller windows?

[RogueMudblood]

It's not stretchy if your window is maximized, and it may not even be an issue, but on a few stories I noticed if I didn't have my window max'd - if I only had it on half-screen, then it doesn't wordwrap.

Ex: (pretend you're looking at half screen)

The Tallest came toward Zim with mailicious intent in their e

he would have known. It was not something they had prepa

and their actions had made it clear.

The rest of the words are there - there's a scrollbar at the bottom of the screen. but the document isn't 'wrapping'. It wasn't something I noticed before now because I was always on full-screen windows. I started noticing it when I began using half screen windows to alt-tab b/c ctrl-tab just wasn't cutting it on noting review board issues. I do max the window when it looks funky to make sure it isn't squishy or stretchy.

Does that make sense?

[DemonGoddess]

aha yes. It's a stretchy!

[RogueMudblood]

Even on half screen? because if I max the window it's all there, no scroll bar.

[DemonGoddess]

Even there. It should never do that, regardless of screen size. What that means, is that a separator line of identical characters is too long.

[RogueMudblood]

Jackie Chan - Jonny Quest

The Jetsons - wordord:

read likelike = read him like

sf shf = see if

sas bas = she was

Hothe = How's

ae aue = at the

wae sie = was the

ch 2 : beenbeen = had been

James' reward - wordord:

allows unt until = allows her until

from Jaw[line break]Ja[line break]James = from Jaws."[line break]James

Intrigue at Warfield - RID 103596 wordord: gone.one. = get done.

ch 1: I caI = All I

fingfinger = her finger

ch 3: my fi."[line break]." = my figure."

thek ofk = the look

themwaitwait = them to wait

ch 4: fsomesome = find some

fsomesome = hours to the

ctedcted = expected

tarniarnish = the varnish

y's y's = Tracy's

've 've = they've

daysyou = days, if

won won't = she won't

ch 5: immediatelyn hen = immediately when

unnatuy pay = unnatrually

y spy spy's = young spy's

ugh ugh = through

istingting = is getting

gg thg = giving

ch 6 - squishy!

tndonndon - to London

sa"Onl"Onl= says, "Only

wheregoesgoes = where he goes

ch 7 - squishy!

showem tem = shows them

hhroahroat = her throat

cotelytely = completely

miendiends = my friends

wor"I b"I = words. "I

slimilimited = some limited

infoion ion = information

bas has = bath as

assayssays = as he says

respo she = response:

Althoit oit = Although it

nicenice. = be nice.

ch 8 - squishy!

tbasebasement = the basement

cy scy = Tracy

ce soo = class

G sai said = Gordo said

girlshesshes = girl blushes

he nhe = as she

unbearable.at mat = unbearable. What

foe mae = for the

ch 9 - squishy!

hihroahroat = his throat

thinu cau = think you

bon ion = bourbon

m sta = man's

Goand = Gordo

ks aks = looks

You Did Love Me! wordord: Nmoanmoaned = Nick moaned

Picnic Love - spacedraw issues at the top and triple-spacing between paragraphs

wordord:

flaed aed = flattened

frownokinokingly. = frowned knowingly

and 's l's laughs = and Jade's laughs

rummagedlaw law = rummaged ???

fine ine denims, = fine denims,

thatcsparsparking = thatchhair sparking (yes, I know it's not a word, but I'm certain that's what the author intended)

Rg mag = Raging

poif lif = point of

re wre = ??? -I think the author meant 'resent' (which doesn't make sense, but it doesn't earlier in the story either)

pull , Ja, = pull away,

playplay = foreplay

Wu gWu gripped = Wu gripped

onselfself = on herself

Off The Clock wordord:

studimlyimly = study: dimly

resed ced = responded

ing ing = chasing

sligh Jac Jackie = slightly. Jackie

ki art = kissed

fag ing = falling

nike ike = not like

Ensnared wordord:

inson son = in season

ciatciated = castigated

Valmoad sad = Valmont had

the the = and the

Jac's c's = Jackie's

betwees cas = between his

Childs Play - wordord:

RID 14671: as aas = it was

RID 96324: j cha= jackie

Women's Lib - bad formatting - bad! squishy with line spacing (and this looks awful on half screen!) - It's gonna be a one-para too, I can tell.

In the Heat of Things - review board stretchy - RID 230614 '+' line, and when that one's fixed, 2035156852 may also cause a problem, then 2035281419, and definitely 3000033880

wordord:

regularis, is, = regular basis,

a clo = about

Franci [double line break] = Francisco.

gel shl = general

ded ded = decided

so-fso-far-off = not-so-far-off

anrengrength = and strength

or tor - can delete

absolutellighlightful! = absolutely delightful!

tasShe She = taste. She

. Hi. His = grin. His

felsligslight = felt a slight

thanget get = than to get

magie pue = magic. He

hiroatroat. = his throat.

falhe she = fall," he

skedsked = he asked

stayedone = stayed in

reactfromfrom = reaction from

firscediceding = first receding

fris cos = friends'

gentlked ked = gently flicked

wen asn = went on

wasng tng = was doing

No Remorse - as is dup, this is the later load (no wordord) Disclaimer needs to be modified to include GIJoe and Firefly (XO fandoms)

Devil Inside - the song is cited - wouldn't normally think of it, but since the song is used in the fic and the story is named after the song, does there need to be anything more in regards to the title?

One Night - disclaimer missing no profit clause

Moonlight Shadow - disclaimer missing no profit clause and needs to be modified to include other fandoms: Avatar the Last Airbender, Pirates of the Caribbean, The Mummy (series)

The Unforgiven Series wordord:

summary:

whhe ihe is = where he is

llllllll = all

ch1: continuedh a h = continued with

los Hss - loss is

ng ong = flying

ausanusand = a thousand

reckless headng nng - reckless, headlong

cle tle = ???

ch 2: hod shd she = how old she

somethins wrong ong = something was wrong

bse sse = because

grewghteghter = grew brighter

lettletting = sky letting

eplieplied = he replied

thising ing = this taking

drg usg us = driving us

st~ Fi~ = story ~

ch 3: ththe = threw

extne = extra

headinr her = heading to

witholothlothes = without clothes

screscreamed = she screamed

wipup tup = wiped up

unceunced = announced

thougs shs = thought as

ch 4: ged ged = managed

concer see = concern-it

anyt lik = anything

ch 5 - orphan

ch 7 - orphan

The Misadventures of Jonny Quest

ch 10 and ch 11 are the same

[RogueMudblood]

Josie and the Pussycats - Kappa Mikey

The Uncensored Jungle Book- wordord:

RID 135291: wite bae = with the

RID 161532: tholehole = the whole

Sh sto = Shanti

d 'd = said

rockelloolloons = rocket balloons

g, an, = grass

Sleepless in Tokyo - disclaimer needs to be specific - it's the "cartoons misc" one. Needs to name Kappa Mikey

The Shower (Version 3) wordord:

fullntalntal = full frontal

theriverivering = there shivering

steppndernder = stepped under

trying to trying to---delete duplicated text

thatnd?"[linebreak] = that sound?"

naon ion it. = naked on it.

b to to = began to

Flash Point Decision: Condition Green (m/m)

RID 9392 squishy!

wordord:

do , yo, = do this,

woupen pen = would open

May I Make You... wordord:

ignoignored = She ignored

thbe ibe = the lobe

invoary ary = involuntary

"Tel," ," = "Tell me,"

Makinre tre = Making sure

The Locker Room at Wayne Manor wordord:

ometomething = up something

fallinghis = falling by

alcothrothrough = alcohol through

The Arboretum wordord:

Starcrossec alc = Starcrossed

thesengs?ngs? = these things?

aithaith = of Wraith

use use = my muse

tcoracorate = to decorate

cree coe = creature

themysemysciran = the Themysciran

expecte[line break]D[line break] = expected.[line break]

hiice ice = his voice

star to = startled

essiessional = professional

on you your = one of your

dn'tdn't = I didn't

pu his his = pulled his

engorge its its = engorged on its

drd hid his = guided his

Hereafter wordord:

att tot to = attempt to

bodybody = Her body

quarters,ch wch = quarters, which

"Why is th[line break][line break] = "Why is that?"[line break]

er oer = either

ch 2: fouome ome = found some

e yoe = "Take

eforefore, = As before,

seout out = ??? out (spread?)

"Hun"Hungry?" = "Hungry?"

oe ane = of the

elf elf = herself

Leag. Gi. = Leaguers.

impassiv[line break][line break] = impassively.[line break]

winkat hat = winking at

ch 3: h a n a = hours a

stolstolen = had stolen

s. A. = surface.

andughtught = and brought

restin the the = resting in the

...song disclaimer/citation needed. (Batman credits it, sorta)

png hng = playing

convulsionsen aen = convulsions, then

won "G "Good = wonder. "Good

savorine moe = savoring the

he she signal - of the signal

trk ork = to work

panelruceruce = panels. Bruce

cwas = cave

anng, ng, = anything,

ses nes = species

are are = Why are

Myers ers = My powers

comeoss oss = come across

Drawn & Quartered wordord:

aignsigns = any signs

ignher = ignore

nor war = not our

inumbnumber = in a number

Diana's Diary stretchy!

Batman's Diary wordord:

opponshoushould = opponent should

Diany any = Diana? My

tshe she = that she

she she's = she's

Watchtowence nce = Watchtower once

ce to to = ceases to

s eas = I was

The Compromise wordord:

braibrain = his brain

ta in in = ??? in

Peeping Bats wordord:

a but but = a bit but

oppo dir = opposite

cauf thf = cause of

whippff hff = whipped off

iggedgged = it begged

in own own = in its own

ed hed her = pulled her

kingking = striking

ed, ed, = replied,

Physical Therapy, Themysciran Style wordord:

tto pto perfoonitonitor = time to perform Monitor

Tandrestrestaurant = Tandori restaurant

an re gre gym = an indoor gym

oo exo = own to

she she = sure she

cha wal walls = chasm's walls

coity ity = City

a moa = car a

wouldss tss = would guess

healinghniqhnique = healing technique

whiol lol = whirlpool

ownds.nds. = own hands.

a-dow-down = a rub-down

squaron hon = square on

tuen gen = tub then

weariothiothing = wearing nothing

locata paa pair = located a pair

persperson = the person

he ed oed = he pulled

thrst rst = the first

wtingtingle = wet tingle

lats anaps,aps, = ??? and traps,

Bruce.e whe = Bruce," she

owlitilition. = own volition.

workd spd = work he'd

thele ule under hismachmach = the table under his stomach

insty rey = instantly

be,e ine = be," she

he d sed see = he could see

dingding = ???

Slowllowly = She slowly

hengerngertipsr thr the = her fingertips over the

fitipstips = fingertips

cl[line break]" = clit.

i man many = in many

allthesthese = all of these

Tempest Island wordord:

instin The The = instincts. The

ch 2: y any = ready

painpain = the pain

ed wed = loaded

willt ast = will just

m ope = modus

homeleinceince = homeless since

somes wes = sometimes

oniaonian = Themysciran

held leg legend = held the legend

thunchunch = the launch

hourt lot = hours. It

p The The = ??? The

tes tes = pirates

redd sid = redhead

mnd, nd, = my mind,

likee kne = like I've

plant ser = planted a

Brset = Bruce

heill ill = her still

hand Bru Bruce = handle," Bruce

fd smd = forced

applaurom rom = applause from

**Is there a chapter missing here?

ch 3: tw-boo-book = twelve-book

hserlf = herself

sis = his

ch 4: shouldnry. ry. = shouldn't try.

ch 5: Yo rig right = You're right

whatwhatever = and whatever

wa bef = waist

replaceden ten = replaced, then

warougrough = way through

ttiontional = traditional

glanat tat = glanced at

Dianalizalized = Diana realized

Inal, al, = In total,

read thd = realized

theirs wes = their legs

Middasteastern = Middle Eastern

governms des = government's

Hddeddded = He nodded

teou wou = tell you

we and and = warhead and

Indonesia'vernvernment = Indonesia's government

osiblsible = of visible

nschescheduled = next scheduled

attentio heo = attention to

packpackage = one package

concs ons = consensus

ten ben = the men

vre ore = endeavor

giou 1ou = give you

me."The The = me." The

operatio[line break]He [line break]He = operation.[line break]He

leralerated = accelerated

s of of = sort of

WonWomaWoman = Wonder Woman

wal walked = and walked

bur bursts = the bursts

ch 6: darkenowarowards = darkened towards

trrs srs = trousers

That Temporary Kind - Squishy!

The Revelation -small-window stretchy (all 7 chapters)

Slowing Down - needs D/A tag

Stuffing the Bird - squishy!

It Ain't Just a River in Egypt - OK, the whole story is based on one episode, which is not really odd, but, I'm not entirely certain that this is the story that goes with this entry. The "Ancient Egypt" aspect is consistent with episode 37, but I don't have character names for their Egyptian incarnations, so I'm really not certain exactly who is whom. Can you check to see if there is any missing data on this one? The summary says Green Lantern/Hawkgirl, and the reviews agree with that, but I didn't notice their names anywhere in the fic.

Good boy - squishy and spacing issues. M/F/F tag needs to come off.

Frail - ch 3 is all ital. should stop after “I will kill you if you touch her.” -Is there a missing end tag?

ch 4 also: after "Alerra laughed." it should be normal text.

Warworld Aftermath - RID 94013 - squishy and wordord:

ty cty = pretty

anthother = another

starstarted! = had started!

RID 2035389849 wordord: 'ard ard = ???

I NEEDS SOME SMUT - this one is special. It was a RR. It's not now. But since the first chapter is a request only and is the only thing by the original poster, it needs to be deleted. I don't know what this would do to credit of the fic to the actual author. So.... SyntheticDreams should have the fic listed under their profile - I think "Untitled" would be OK. Summary: "Challenge response. A crater appears near Gotham with no explanation. When Green Lantern and Flash are sent to investigate, will the mission help them recognize their feelings? M/M"

Not Fast Enough - ch 3 & 4 squishy! and both have "É" all the way through every time there should be a "-"

Justice League Drabbles - missing "no profit" disclaimer

The following posts are part of the same story and should be a chaptered fic:

Diana's Diary , Batman's Diary

Physical Therapy, Themysciran Style , The Compromise

Kryptonite Lovin' , Gotham Lovin'

[RogueMudblood]

Kim Possible 15-11

In Darkness We Found otheother... - small-window stretchy

Tags needed: Rapefic, Fingering, AU/AR

wordord: otheother = Each Other (title)

ch 2: bananaets ets = banana. "Let's

of of = full of

the the = saw the

gettiloseloser = getting closer

astrietried = as he tried

"Shit." R." Ron = "Shit," Ron

hisice.ice. = his choice.

e, te, = phone,

plea..~ ..~ = please...~

sin since = "And since

a fea = had a

Ron's . Ro. = Ron's ??? (foot, leg, thigh?)

s nis = Ron's

openurthurther, = opened further,

dvoicvoice. = dark voice. (dark could be dead, dry... any 3-4 letter d-adjective.)

lng ang = looking

n exn = to an

lng bng = looking

Ino ino = I dunno

looklooked = He looked

gwas = girl

botack ack = both black

sittin thn = sitting on

watc.. b.. = watched...

*s* Us* = ??? (It's in the AN, you could probably scrap it)

doesn'unt}unt}) = doesn't count})

The Dark Side of Life wordord:

RID 65183: telentriteriter = talented writer

anotheapteapter = another chapter

RID 89683 first line needs to be deleted - is a dup of the second line

RID 94855 butust ust = but I must

RID 192455 watnna nna = what's gonna

summary: summaux, ux, = summary sux,

Tags needed: Rapefic, Minor1, Minor2, WIP

ch 1: thotheothers = that bothers

om, am, = of him,

encoed hed = encouraged

cacroscross = came across

osedosed = supposed

howld hld = how could

ch 2: tha" R" = that,"

"Ther som some = "There's some

cloto hto = closer to

sincey cey = since they

shoul ont = shoulders

despr to to = desperately to

was goingoing = was going

doer cer = down her

read shd = realized

Foundations Laid

Tags needed: Rapefic, Maledom, Femdom, Minor2, MC, COMPLETE

Need to modify disclaimer to include Marvel Comics - specifically Cable and the original X-Men 'verse. (They don't make an appearance as characters but concepts (and titles) from the comics do.)

wordord:

RID 89247: bullets t. Ca. Can't = bullets that. Can't

RID 98034: andpi lpi = and epilogue

RID 107055 squishy; stiood ood = still good

RID 110486 squishy

ch 1: s wea = still

somrt ort = some sort

chrouhrough = cut through

aps ths = appears

the bef before = the girl before

sensationslingling = sensations tingling

againgain, = and again,

ch 2: hep = her

squeg thg = squeezing

dentdent! = accident!

con.[line break]. = control.

andnd hnd = and round

a p a = give a

ugh ugh = through

r to to a = return o a

Dobe sbe = Don't be

rapinr. r. = raping her.

ch 3: ms eys= mind's

bldevidevice = black device

witcwitch = to twitch

fenefened = stiffened

hif ouf = himself

mof tof = mass of

ch 4: a inc inched = as he inched

that that = that

derailhat hat = derailed that

ch 5: Sto Stoppable = Ron Stoppbale

sin tin = skin in

Well,s lis = Well, this

ch 7: so hso = And so

blushhis = blush on

noThe The = now. The

ch 8: perhthatthat = perhaps that

ignored's p's = ignored Uno's

attentif thf = attention of

wou would = they would

thorldorld. = the world.

Guardia amu = Guardian an

otiootion = in motion

shortlyAlloAllow = shortly. "Allow

ch 9: Everyneedneeds = Everyone needs

ackedgeedge = acknowledge

Un Uno = Uno. Uno

Possiblke Ike = Possible like

h't t't = haven't

qui as as = quietly as

otherms, ms, = others arms.

holdhold = her hold

wod," d," = wounded,"

wou wounded = any wounded

fitriktriking = fire striking

shi shields and strnearnear the = the shields and ??? near

calcuons.ons. = calculations.

Foreraleral = For several

strug to to = struggled to

andlingling = and ???

ch 10: bloodoth oth = bloody cloth

of Shf = out of

skgaingainst = skin against

notng tng = not going

ccurccurately = to accurately

fo lyi = forms

Ink Ink = I think

Underground Heat wordord:

Tags: Yuri needs to come out - this is not anime. Oral, Fingering, COMPLETE should be added.

bth ath = be with

crawcrawled = and crawled

for out = force out

risind fnd = rising and

Sango and = Shego and

Party at Rons wordord:

Alide ide = Alongside

justartyarty = just a party

hep, Kp, = her top,

wyou?you? = with you?

theythey = and they

im: im: = [line break]Kim:

sherts rts = she starts

To Tell The Truth

Tags needed: Minor2, Fingering

saith ith = said with

h."h." = hot."

ber aer = but her

Friends Forever - stretchy

summary: epic.t cot = epic. Hot

Tags needed: AI

ch 1: Theher her = The other

open end tag: "past school year. >" - but there's tons of text after it. Still, missing anything?

ch 2 has open end tag: Shego then blurts out, "What the hell happened ?"We >We ... So there's practically nothing here.

wordord: ten, en, = the den,

ch 3: "missed.o:p>" and "an>" missing text. & stretchy.

wia ta = wiped a

knowknow = you know

hells hes = hell does

sao ho = said to

soo doo = soon, so

about t. It. I = about it. I

ficrimcrime = fight crime

bygo. go. = by Shego.

abull tll = bull all

ch 4: open tag: "pan>pan>" so there's practically no data

ch 5: "pan>" there's data though - stretchy on this one.

thathat = all that

besidu thu = beside you

ch 6: "an>"an>"Ah."; "Thanks Eddie.">"; "Aro>Around"; "Ron." p>" & stretchy

someood ood = someone good

wan mak make = want to make

nitynity = eternity

eneeenee. = at Renee.

ch 7: stretchy

knowknow = you know

Alknowknow = All I know

bad.bad. = and bad.

consuthe = consumed

theny ony = the agony

Un. Li. = ???

Oned thd = One good

E hea hears = Eddro hears

and apparently open at the end because it stops in the middle of a word.

Lenses - need add tags: Minor2

Shegos Trap - ch 2 orphan; need add tags: Fingering, WD

Another Average Day - Tags: remove Yuri; add oral, Minor2

Corrupting Kim - Tags add: Rapefic; Bond; Oral; FemDom

Payback - wordord:

RID 269758: chter ter = character

RID 275171: doesm thm = doesn't seem

Island Hopping - Yuri tag needs to be removed; add Fingering, oral

Happy Birthday Ron Stoppable - RID 2035610669 made review board page 3 stretchy

The Ahproditie Effect - stretchy(all)

Let's Do It Again - space draw at the top of all 11 ch.

Screams in the Dark - wordord:

I'm warning you right now, major squick factor on this one, so if I missed something, that's why. Even my stomach can only handle so much.

ch 1: bru bruises. = the bruises.

c.” H.” = cheat."

wellhersherself, = well as herself,

ch 2: abo fao face = about to face

criese bee = cries were

ouldould = as could

ch 5 orphan

Bonnie ballerina - all of the tags internal need to be moved to summary: FemDom, Oral, Anal, Toys, and Food Fet

The disclaimer needs to be modified to include all of the movies that author says he is borrowing ideas from (like Bring It On)

Beautiful - small-window stretchy

Kim joins the Titans - needs a B-mod tag.

ch 1 AN bottom: whoring

ch 2 orphan

ch 3: small-window stretchy

Kim Possible: Hellraiser - ch 1 has ":" three lines after byline and then "-::Eighteen years and Six months later::-", then ":" four lines ... is there any text in the database that isn't showing?

ch 1, 2, 3, 4 small-window stretchy

Tags: Take the word "None" out - this thing needs some damn tags!

Inc, MC, Death, Minor1 ... is demon sex beast or xeno ? And is there some way to denote "possession" that I overlooked? Or would that fall under MC?

(now I don't blame those reviewers for getting a little pissy-I'd be upset if I hadn't been expecting it myself!)

Shego's Revenge - squishy!

Sweet Captivity - tag needed: Bond, Slave; TransG needs to come off - it should be Herm

Dr. Possible MILF - (see below); again, TransG needs to come out and Herm needs to be on the story

Portrait - again, TransG needs to come out and Herm needs to be on the story

Love is the best medicine - do hymns fall under public domain? "Farther Along" by J.R.Baxter and W.B.Stevens used but not cited.

Going Beyond Bonding - small-window stretchy

Muri Tempe Et Intervalia! - needs MCD tag.

Restitution's A (Green) Bitch - needs a citation in ch 3 for Superman's appearance

Cheerleaders Peak - squished line: "they pressed [line break]against the"

squished paragraph: starts at "Brick began" ends at "in the room."

squished line: "can we try [line break]this in

moving up moving on - needs specific song citations

This is what the author has: "Also if there is any music involved all Music is in fact owned by the respective musicians and or groups"

--Needs "peg" tag

Tokugawa Sunset - needs celebrity disclaimer (Bill and Hillary Clinton)

Mind Rape - needs tags: Rapefic, GB

Mothers knows best! - needs tag: peg

Centurion's Revenge - tag needed: D/s, MC

Just until I wake up... - needs a death tag

Love ... I wasn't prepared for that. Rapefic, Death, Tort needed on this. (I-yi...)

Lord of the Pompons - ch 2 has weirdness with the "" in the text.

The Game - wordord:

RID 95180 - pairlatelater = pairing later

RID 106817 - caps lock typist - can you fix?

RID 115581 - small window stretchy

RID 145462 - rinow.now. = right now

RID 195957 - wto kto = want to

RID 231991 - he ghe = up the

ch 1: t. Dr. = to Dr.

hegohego = as Shego

gaspthe = gasp as

ch 2: askflasflashing = asked, flashing

onlse, se, = only lose,

lng tng = feeling

unbutng hng = unbuttoning

smd, ad, = smirked,

ch bef = chance

Rerkeerked = Ron jerked

lut aut = let out

tht hht = thought

je har = jerked

The following are part of the same story, and should be a chaptered fic:

Sweet Captivity , Dr. Possible MILF

moving up moving on , moving up moving on chapter 18

Mind Rape , Mothers knows best!