lantern1984 Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 I'm new to alot of things. The fan fic I posted a few days ago was my very first. I had no beta and no spell check. Could some one please read "One Bad Day" at http://books.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094541 and tell me what you think? I could also use someone to show me the ropes around here. Like: why does it say virgin under my avatar? How do they know that? I don't remeber checking a box that says "are you a vigin?" when I signed up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest MemoriesofMarshall Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 (edited) I'm new to alot of things. The fan fic I posted a few days ago was my very first. I had no beta and no spell check. Could some one please read "One Bad Day" at http://books.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094541 and tell me what you think? I could also use someone to show me the ropes around here. Like: why does it say virgin under my avatar? How do they know that? I don't remeber checking a box that says "are you a vigin?" when I signed up. No, it just means you're new. Me too. Has nothing at all to do with you as a person. And aside from getting a beta, you're not half bad. At least you know to separate the quotes of different people, or you seem to anyway. With your writing style, one wouldn't guess you'd use the word aghast, spell it correctly (you did) or even know in what context to use it. Once you have a beta, you should be able to improve Talk to me if you need help sometime. I'm new too, but we can figure it out as we go. ----Dannforth Edited June 10, 2010 by MemoriesofMarshall Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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