lantern1984

note: now that I figured out how to sign into the new system, I can say that I started this thread. if anyone finds the story, please let me know.

I'm new to alot of things. The fan fic I posted a few days ago was my very first. I had no beta and no spell check. Could some one please read "One Bad Day" at http://books.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094541 and tell me what you think? I could also use someone to show me the ropes around here. Like: why does it say virgin under my avatar? How do they know that? I don't remeber checking a box that says "are you a vigin?" when I signed up.

It started out well. More please.

Title:One Bad Day Author: lantern1984 Rating:Adult Summary:Accidents happen and you can't always blame yourself. Feedback:Desired greatly. URL: http://books.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094541 Please review. This is my first story ever. Please tell me how I did. Thank you. lantern1984