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Bloodrayne yuri story needs some polish!


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Hello

I have a fully written Bloodrayne 2 story that needs a little assurance. I consider myself a realistic writer, although some of the situations in my story are a little exagerated for the enjoyment of the reader. Unfortunately, I am a bit of a perfectionist and I just can't have my story hitting the racks with just my own shine to it, I need another. I am looking for someone(hopefully a female as they know how a woman's body truely functions) to evaluate the story and make suggestions on changes. I will also use this as a sort of test run to determine what readers really like to read about. I would appreciate any response.

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