Would you beta my story, checking for grammar mistakes, typos, plot problems, and so on? It's an original m/m fiction and I've thought out the characters, but the entire plot of the story is vague to me. More violence is a must though, but so far it's become satire due to my ridiculously thought out characters and society. I have an excel file describing the characters, with a bit of brainstorming thrown in. I need a highly involved plotline. I may also need help with cliffhangers. My chapters never seem to end.
I'm a lot of reading and editing, and completely undependable as far as time is concerned. I have six chapters so far I think, approximately 38 pages in MSWord that I would like for you to scan quickly for spelling and grammar mistakes so that I can re-upload them. I would appreciate your input on how to make the story more actiony in a way that's completely un-related to the slow-moving love story that's already planned out.
There will be het, some of it even kinky het, but it won't be described. It's a high school story, so a boy and a girl will have to make out, and there will be fangirls. I'm assuming when you said "no het" you didn't mean, and there should be no women who have sex with men. I don't want to constrain my creativity, so I can only promise that the serious pairings will be mostly yaoi. There's also an ample bit of gender confusion, but the confusing isn't the confused since there isn't any cross-dressing in this story, except for the skinny jeans that will be added after the "transformation". It's hard to explain, but you'll understand after a minute into reading the story. Just your typical nerd meets perfect guy story, only the guy is ultra perfect, and the nerd is ultra nerdy. The story is unique in it's own way, but maybe it's just a regular idea that's been expanded on. The nerd's a real nerd down to his cold bronze heart, so he's not going to be very sappy.
By the way, you misspelled perfectionist (you spelled it profectionist). Not to be mean, I just thought it was funny and ironic considering the sentence you used it in. I'm just tired of editing the typos in my story, you'll most likely get the ones I miss after the first run or two. The story is past tense, and your ability to spot inconsistencies is absolutely perfect. The excel file is the law, and all must follow it. Also, the main character is much more of a realist than I am so that could be a problem when I'm making up his thoughts and actions. He's an ISTP using the meyers-briggs evaluation thing.
So, would you mind being my beta?