Vixie-Chan

Honestly I don't think either of them should die, but hey, not my story. If one of them has to die I think it should be Laim because he could just annoy the brotherhood at 'the beach' William deserves to be loved by the man he's loved for a long time. I don't think he should die for him. "I would rather you lived for me than died for me" that is still one of my favorite quotes from this story. Honestly I don't like either that much. Azrael is still my favorite.

Sometimes I wonder if everyone is turned off by sudden plot changes. Or maybe everyone hates my writing...I try, I really do, but since nobody reviews and tells me how I can improve my writing, I'm having a difficult time. Take my Original Slash fic 'Trouble With A Capital Me' for example, I change the main character into an elf and suddenly everyone stops reviewing/reading. Is it me or my writing?

Silver Haze Author: CursedSasuke Originals > Slash Summary: In the Alternate Universe of the 21st century a group of Gifted Bounty Hunters find money, love, and conspiracy in a post apocalyptic world. The oil wells around the world have dried up and most of the earth’s forests are gone. Warnings: Anal sex, extream Language, Man on Man lovins, Oral sex, sadomasochism, Bloody Violence http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/author...p?no=1296796557 Action/Adventure, Romance, Slash Alexis Taite Age: 20 (when story starts) Gender: Male Hieght: 5' 9" build: muscular/Athletic Eye color: Silver Hair color: ??? (dyed blond) Abilities: Super Speed, Hearing, sight, and healing Easily Irritated but not so easily angered. Wears a dove grey suit and a white button up shirt with black and white chuck taylors. Wears his long blond hair in a loose braid. occasionally wears a cowboy hat and small black goggles (when on the road to protect his eyes from the sun) Does have a sense of humor he just dosn't get to show it often. Macarius Age: 22? Gender: Male Height: 6' 2" Build: Slender/Lithe Eye color: Dark Teal Hair color: black Ability: able to create and control water/ice Has a cool personality and loves to rile Alexis up in battle (makes him more amusing to watch). Wears black silk shirts and black dress pants with dress shoes. He wears his long rave colored hair in a low pony tail. Phelan Mc Duff Age: 21 Gender: Male Height: 6' Build: hard toned muscles (spartin style ) Eye color: Emerald Green hair color: crimson Ability: Half Wolf, enhanced hearing, smell, and strength Cocky and rash, Phelan and Bran Blackwing have been seeing each other for five years. Wears jean cut offs and tank tops. his clawed feet prevent him from wearing shoes comfortable so he goes barefoot. has a long crimson wolf tail that goes from his tail bone to his ankles, crimson wolf ears on his head, and sharp claws and fangs. his shaggy hair style spikes up all around his head. Bran Blackwing Age: 19 Gender: Male Height: 5' 7" Build: slender Eye color: crimson Hair color: black Abilities: 1) Transformation into a hawk partailly (gives him 6 foot black wings) or fully. 2) the ability to manipulate the air around him to make himself lighter. Bran is quite and shy but not afraid to speak his mind. He hardly ever stutters and when he does he's either embarassed more than normal or in the throws of passion. Bran wears all black. Black jeans black t shirts and a black trench coat that goes all the way down to his ankles. Like Alexis, Bran wears black and white Chuck taylors. His long raven colored hair is always down and covering the left side of his face. Bran is subconsious about his strange colored eyes and fears being shuned. Abigail Summers Age: 17 Gender: Female Height: 5' 5" build: slender/athletic Eye color: light blue Hair color: light blond Ability: creating and controling fire Abigail has a nasty tendicy to get bitchy. She loves fighting verbally or physically with anyone but that is just to hide her sweethearted nature. She fears that she would become broken if she gives her heart out. Abigail wears black cargo shorts black or red zip up hoodies and simple white running shoes. her shoulder length blond hair is always wore in a high pony tail. Here is the story link if you are interested. http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600096435

Azrael will always be my favorite! I just love the little smartass killer!

My all time most favorite Stories are most definatly The Lord Emperor Vampire Saga! kiix just rocks like that! Book 1 Cake http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600090900 Book 2 Cinnamon http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600091722 Book 3 Caramel http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600093096 Book 4 Clove http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094235 Book 5 Candy http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095948 My second favorite is In the Company Of Shadows by Sonny And Ais Creations http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600091754 I absolutly love this story to death its just soooo good! All my other favorites are Naruto Fanfiction lol. All of these are Slash so be warned.

Hello all! It's me your favorite quiet (sorry about that) Author kyandi Rin! I just wanted to put this up here to see if any of you were interested in learning more about my story that i havn't put in the story yet. I will not spoil you if I can help it. The World of Silver Haze came to me some years ago and it was not until now that I have had the nerve to write about it. A world without Oil is hard to imagine. There are so many things that are taken for granted these days like good clean air and the beauty of nature. Silver Haze is a story that is dear to my heart. All of the characters are a side of me rofl...don't ask... Alexis Taite...well let's just say he's a spin off of my mainself. It takes alot to get him to the point where he lashes out at everything. (Macarius can do it almost instantly with no problems). There is something hidden deep inside my favorite short (Alexis: hey dont call me short damn it!) blonde. One of those facts is that he's not blond at all. what color is his natural hair? hehe read to find out! Macarius. Macarius is an enigma. There are so many things they dont know about this raven haired hottie. One thing they do know is that his mother was Japanese meaning that Macarius is at least Half Japanese. For what others think is brooding because of the silence is actually Macarius trying to keep his emotions from leaking out all over the place. Bad things happen when he can't control his emotions. *winks* Phelan! God I love this guy, the fact that he's half wolf is just so awsome in my own book. Fay Fay reminds me of a hyperactive mini me. He's rash but he's also not as dumb as everyone thinks he is. He and Bran has been in love with each other for five years before the story starts. They keep their love life a secret because they are afraid that Alexis might get mad at them. What they dont know is that Alexis has known all along. Bran, my friends, is the shy part of me. Yes I can be very shy when It comes to certain things. He's constantly worried that people will shun him because of his abnormally colored eyes. To Fay it just makes him all the more cute and fuckable little Uke. Abigail is the bitch inside of me. Easily angered and quick to kick someone's ass. She uses that to hide the unnaturally sweet side of herself that would be sujectable to heartache otherwise. Well there you have it! please send me any questions you have about the story or characters in a reply! Ja ne!

Well I would have to say that yes, there are more pairings than that is normaly shown, My first fanfiction was a Naru/Gaa. I have also done a Kank/Kiba story which is no longer posted (I will repost in the future *winks*) What I would like to see is more Itachi/Deidara or Sasori/Deidara, Hell, Itachi/Naruto would be hot (with an evil Akatsuki!Naruto hehehe) Some people don't like odd pairings such as Neji/Naruto becuse they say there is no connection. Does there really need to be one for a good story to be written? I think not! Hehe! Anyway, I agree with you fullheartedly my friend. There is just not enough odd pairings in the world. *starts to cry*

Hey kiix!! I would like to say I would also like to see some M&A you would make me one happy Loyal. I think I'm gonna go re read the series now (I'm so bored) Ja ne! Oh! and before I forget *Poke*

Well, I hate Steriotypes. Serously guys, don't jump on the band wagon and be orginal. That's what I try to do when I write a sasu/naru/sasu story. I base emotions on who tops and who don't, I go with the flow of the story. Like with Redemption, Sasuke will most likely Bottom until Naruto trusts him more. but that's not gonna happen to way later in the story. Anyway, I'm a Yaoi Fan Girl but im not Obssessed. I read Het too (if its good). I don't like girly girls so naturally im not gonna like a girly guy. Its just to wierd for my tastes. What writers got to remember is that A) Its a story YOU are writing, be original. B) Don't fall for steriotypes its like a hole, easy to get into but damn hard to climb out of. C) Mix it up a bit. Add your own personality into your writing and try to keep the Characters IN character. Well that's all I gotta say, good luck and have fun!

I also like the long drawn out stories, you just fall in love with the characters and can't help but want to read more. I've been trying to elongate my stories, I have gone from 4 page chapters to 7 page chapters but I don't know if that is going to help. I usually wrap things up around the fifth chapter and I want things to go on further than that. *sighes* I guess I'll keep trying harder...