first several chapters of that story are actually short, not cut off. Just checked the data. Are you logging in here? If you are, and you're getting logged out, clear your cookies. We have an old cookie embedded in the old code, which is part of the storyboard software. It only affects the chapters. Now, since you have to be in a chapter to review, what's likely happening is that the old string corrupted the new one again. While I'd love to see it removed now, it can't be, until the story functions are rewritten.