haruha_raharu

This is as-of-yet a one-shot between Majiru and Hikikomori-tan that one night in episode 4 where they were alone. I do have ideas about it going on and such, but as of yet, nothing doing. Anyway I had fun writing this, so I hope those who read it will do so as well. Title: Lonely Together Author: Haruha.raharu Rating: Adult++ Summary: Majiru figures out Komori-nee-chan's spinning game and wins. But he's not prepared for his reward. Dom, HJ, M/F, Minor, Oral, PWP, WIP Feedback: I'd love to have any at all, please. Misc->Hetero doesn't get a lot of pageviews. Fandom: Sayonara Zetsubou Sensei URL: http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600044892 Thank you for at the very least reading through my promotion. I hope you enjoy my stories.

It's nice to see Tsukihime and FSN get their own sections, and even nicer to see another Tsukihime fic: Fire and Ice by Sigfried. Does anyone know where this Type-Moon lemon contest was?

A good filtering/organization system can get around the problem. Unfortunately, AFF's organization scheme is... not very well done. Also, the effective and consistent use of tags - I'm also sick of the sea of yaoi in AFF, but it doesn't annoy me so much when the authors actually tag it such so that I can avoid it. The use of tags really needs to be enforced, though, as there are cases when you can run into an unpleasant surprise with no warning from the summary.

I just updated this with a new chapter. The last chapter was overly long and detailed, so one thing I concentrated on was to shorten and tighten up the writing for this chapter. Everything is a lot more concise. I'd like some feedback on how that worked out, what worked, what didn't.

My first two stories, "Interruption to a Bath," and "Snooping Around Pays Off," both had horrible titles. Not just because they're blatant porn titles, but just horrible in general. However, I guess I didn't really care enough about the titles to try to think of better ones. My stories are mainly porn with plot, after all, so the title is not going to add some deep literary meaning to the story. I guess in AFF, I see the title more as a part of the advertisement of the story, instead of an important part of the story itself. I just put up whatever I think adequately describes the story in a few words, and be done with it. I prefer titles that tell me at least partly what to expect in the story, instead of single-word ones that only have a deep meaning if you understand the context. Of course, I'm guilty of the latter myself, with titles like "Wish of a Red Moon" or "Garden of Thanatos," which you wouldn't understand unless you already know the source material quite well.

Kagetsu Tohya is more of a fun disc than a direct sequel. The events of the main story are just fun whatifs that the writer thought would be cool to throw the characters into. If you enjoy adult fiction, though, the Flower of Tganatos sidestory from Kagetsu Tohya and the Ren H-scenes are worth checking out.

If you want even more confirmation, most all hentai games are written in first person present tense. And those are just adult fiction, without the fan part. So it's a method that has been known to work well throughout an entire industry.

Type-Moon, for those who don't know, is a visual novel studio, most famous for its debut amateur work Tsukihime in 2001. It was adapted to a 12 episode anime in 2003. More recently, their second visual novel, Fate/stay night, was also adapted to an anime, a 24 episode one. Both Tsukihime and FSN were text-heavy H-games, with 5 and 3 routes, respectively. Tsukihime is a semi-horror fantasy about vampires in a modern Japanese city. FSN also takes place in a similar setting, but is more action fantasy oriented. It's about a "war" between mages and their "servants," who are familiars, heroic spirits from another era. I only know of two Type-Moon stories on this site. One is a FSN story, while the other is Garden of Thanatos, a Tsukihime story by me. So, any other TM fans out there?

What I find confusing is the seeming lack of any correlation between the number of ratings and number of reviews. One of my stories has exactly 7 of each, while another has 21 ratings with 11 reviews. Then another one has more ratings, 27, but much fewer reviews, 4. Maybe it evens out over a larger sample size, though.

I get a lot of my ideas from H doujin that I read. All my stories are porn first, plot later, so it works out (although not all of them are PWP, the plot act mainly as vectors for the porn in the ones that have plot). I look at what I find particularly hot or arousing, and see if I can merge and incorporate them into the scenes I write.

Title: Garden of Thanatos Author: Me Rating: Adult++ Summary: This is a multi-chapter on-going fanfic that plays on the "Flower of Thanatos" sidestory from Kagetsu Tohya, the sequel to Tsukihime. It uses the setting from that story, although more characters from the Tsukihime universe are introduced. It can be pretty accurately be considered PWP, although I do have an overarching plot that slowly unfolds throughout the chapters. I'm 6 chapters in, and so far, it involves the protagonist and lone male, Tohno Shiki, having sex with Arima Miyako, Kohaku, Hisui, Seo Akira, Misawa Hanei, or some combination thereof. About half the scenes involve 3 or more people. Feedback: Please, anything would be nice. Since there is no Tsukihime or Type-Moon section under anime, I've put this story in the "Misc" section, which gets almost no hits. The story's over half a year old, and just recently broke 1000 hits. Fandom: Tsukihime URL: http://anime.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600041477

So, no posts yet in this subforum. I thought it'd be nice to list some of our favorite stories on this site (specifically, the anime section of course) that involved threesomes or moresomes, just so there's something here. I'll start. Weapon of Mass Destruction (Love Hina, by thebigW) -A long-running Love Hina fanfiction with double digits in chapters. Involves two threesomes, Keitaro/Haruka/Mitsune in chapter 4, and Keitaro/Motoko/Mutsumi in chapter 10. The Trinket (Love Hina, by hawker_748) -A one-shot Love Hina fanfiction with one long threesome between Keitaro, Motoko, and Motoko's older sister Tsuruko. Unfortunately, those are about all I can name, mainly because I'm not familiar with most of the fanbases that are popular on this site, and also because I only read the "good kind" of three/moresomes. In other words, anything with more than one M and it ain't passing through my eyes. So let's see how long it takes before the first reply. I've written a few stories with three/moresomes myself, and if you like them, feel free to mention it.

I only post stories here, but that's only because I know of no other adult fanfiction archives other than this one. Not even an anime-specific one. All these acronyms y'all are throwing around are Greek to me.

I rather enjoy it, but that's likely because I spend almost no time doing deep edits. I just check for spelling, grammar, and the flow of each paragraph as well as the flow between paragraphs. It allows me to reread the whole work and to enjoy the fruits of my labor somewhat. After all, when I'm writing for this site, I'm doing it for fun, not for money, not to win an award, not to get a good grade. I'm just trying to tell a story I have in my head, and if it's too hard to make it a literary masterpiece, why do it? Plus, let's face it: having perfect grammar would already place your story in the 95th percentile of the stories on this site. Having near-perfect grammar would probably put it at least in the 80th.

I watched it, loved it, and yes, the Minami brothers were overall pretty pointless. Disappointing, because the other male characters are what make the show so great: it would be pretty flat without Mako-chan's sexual identity struggles, Fujioka's interactions with Kana, and Hosaka's insanity.