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Are you referring to your story "Rites & Ceremonies"? If so then I can see a few problems. Firstly, the "Star Trek: Classic" category simply doesn't have so much passing traffic, and one reason is that only 4 stories in total have been updated there so far during 2009, and only 4 in all of 2008. That means much less people will be browsing that category. Another problem is that, right at the very start of your story, you talk about it being repetitive and a mish-mash of ideas. That alone isn't very tempting for people to make them want to read it, but that wouldn't be such a problem if it was short. The real problem is that there's a great deal of 'repetitive mish-mash' for people get through. I'm a fan of Star Trek - including the original series - but the idea of reading through all that, based on your description, frankly sounds like torture. It might not be anywhere near as bad as you make it sound, but maybe it is; that's how most people are likely to think. There are maybe a couple of things you could do. Firstly, cut the other 4 chapters and only leave the first one for now. Secondly, leave the 'repetitive mish-mash' stuff for the end of the chapter if you like - you want to try and sell your story a little better than you currently are. But the problem remains that the category it's in simply isn't as popular as others. But if you sell it a little better then you never know.

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That's a bit tricky then. The best thing I can think of is to contact the agent and ask him/her what they prefer regarding the length of the synopsis. Ask nicely, pointing out that different people seem to want different lengths, so you thought you'd ask him/her what their preference is. If it was me, I'd appreciate the person asking me what I want.

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That's because the URL is slightly wrong. There should be an = sign between "no" and the number, for example: http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600092000

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A big hello and welcome to all the new people that have decided to join us! I hope you enjoy your stay.

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lol I agree with almost everything you said! Except for tentacles. It doesn't bother me, it just doesn't do anything for me. And I TOTALLY agree with you regarding Mpreg. Oh and scat. But everything is just fine and dandy with me. I'm quite happy with being a pervert, because I'm a harmless pervert, like yourself. I thoroughly enjoy exploring perversions in my mind, and sometimes in story format, and am only too happy for them to stay there. For me, the more taboo something it is, the more it appeals to me, probably because it IS taboo, and it's something I'd never want to do in real life.

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Also, a quick check of that email address showed profiles elsewhere which listed the person's age as 17, so firstly, they wouldn't be allowed to join officially anyway; and secondly, any sex advice from a 17 year old is likely to be of limited value!

You wouldn't be sticking one in my computer! lol Those things are a terrific way of spreading viruses from one computer to another, since they enjoy hitching a ride on them.

Or better yet, ban her from laying her hands on the tiller at all in the future. She obviously doesn't think before she acts.

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