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Moved this to the correct forum.

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For Step by Step I hadn’t seriously thought about writing a second chapter, but I guess it’s a possibility. I’ll certainly keep it in mind. Anyway, glad you enjoyed! Well, I don’t think I’ve ever had anyone describe a story I’ve done as ‘masterly’ so this is perhaps my favourite review. lol I was trying hard to make it as believable as possible, because I too have read the type of stories you described, and the lack of realism often tends to take away some of the enjoyment for me. So I’m glad you felt I got it right! Thanks! Thank you for your reply! I do enjoy leaving little twists at the end of my stories if I can manage it, so I’m glad you like that one. ;-) Thank you very much for your review! The fact that this isn’t normally your cup of tea but you not only read it anyway but actually enjoyed it makes me very happy indeed! It’s easy to only stick to the tried and true formula that normally works for you, so to take a gamble and read something different is much appreciated by me! I’m also glad you felt I got the portrayal of mum correct. I’m not a female, and never have been, so it’s difficult for me to truly put myself in their shoes, but I do work hard at trying to get it as accurate as possible. Oh and hey, don’t be ashamed of being a pervert! Pervert and proud, that’s what I say! lol

For Rivalry I’m glad you liked it! And thanks for the typo reports. Damn typos. I corrected those. For Rivalry I’m happy you enjoyed it! It felt good to write it after such a long mental dry spell, even if it was with someone else’s characters (with their permission, of course!). I actually don’t think I’m terribly good at writing sex scenes, but hopefully the rest is better!

I decided to finally create a review replies forum for my original stories. I’d thought about it on and off for ages but now here it is. I don’t have any new stories uploaded, and I’m not going to backdate this to the start of my stories, so I’m just going to include the reviews to my last two stories.

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