I’ve been thinking about this and rereading the story, to see if I’d made mistakes with it. And I didn’t. The story as it is now is exactly the story I intended to write, and to change it would turn it into something I never wanted it to be. I appreciate your comments though, because it helped to confirm something for me. I’ve always written to please myself first, so if I like the story then I’m happy, and if others like it as well then that’s a terrific bonus. So changing the story might make others happy, but it would have the opposite affect for me. While it’s always going to be one of my favourites, I understand that it’s not going to be the same for most others, and I’m okay with that. So in the future, I’ll go back to being happy if a story gets a single review. lol