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  1. JustS' Feedback & Response Thread

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    From ANON - Anonymous user on January 21, 2017
     

    Terrific I would love too see a third beast of a thousand limbs I would give a solid 10/10 and beast within I'd give a good 9/10 :3

    So nice to get a review on two of my older works, thank you. I didn’t really have any more ideas for the concept so I never planned another sequel to the BOATL story.

    Though I am still retired I would really like to finish my Lara Barkhang Bang story and Fire Emblem anthology story at some point. I’m about to move in with my girlfriend though so I can’t forsee that happening for a few weeks at least.

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    From SailorNemesis on September 17, 2016
     

    Fun story, good luck living legit.  Hope you return here some day.

    Thanks man, you’ve been the closest thing to I have to fan on here and I super appreciate it :)

     

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    Is there any chance that we could get more of that? Really enjoyed it :)

    Not from me any more, at least not new stuff. Hope you (and anyone reading) checks out my older stuff on the site though.

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    Hey all, I've got an announcement to make. Starting soon I will probably be giving up my AFF writing. I've met a lady and she's the most wonderful thing ever so I figure I should probably give up this secret smut writing and use that time with her instead.

    I am committed to finishing the chapters I've already made good progress on, so there's still some stuff still to come. But after those, I should be calling it quits. My Tomb Raider fic Barkhang Bang will be completely finished, while more open-ended ones will simply just stop (in a non-jarring manner, hopefully).

    Thanks everyone for the support over the years. I hope you can respect my decision.

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    Whoops, guess I forgot to post here how part 3 (now of 4 parts) in now up: http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600089945&chapter=3

    SailorNemesis 2016-06-11 id # 3000052636 Hot stuff, hope Lara gets pregnant and ends up kept as their submissive love-slave

    Loth-Cat 2016-06-14 id # 3000052646 One of the most dirtiest Lara written out there. And its god damn good.

    Thanks for the positive reviews guys. Though this fic has had a decent number of views (4000+) I'm sad that not more people have fed back. Hope this version of Lara is proving believable.

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    finny94 2016-06-04 id # 3000052626 A terrific story! Very well written with good descriptions and good general flow. Not an unusual setting for a TR story, but very well executed so it's not boring.

    Can't wait for part 3! Thank you and good luck.

    Thanks so much for the kind words! Hopefully part 3 will live up to your expectations!

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    So I've started a Lara human gangbang story, part 2 or 3 is up now: http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600089945&chapter=1

    If you're waiting on my other stuff, don't worry, I'll be getting back to those stories soon.

    Loth-Cat 2016-05-30 id # 3000052606 Great start. Lets see how this all goes for lara and the monks. Maybe she makes friends with those men.

    Thanks! It means a lot when people read/appreciate my lengthy context-building sections. That's not sarcasm, I actually put a lot of thought into all aspects of these stories.

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    Chapter Four is up: http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600089817&chapter=4

    gawic 2016-03-28 id # 3000052410 Fantastic story, please continue.
    And make her always ready to get fucked by her dogs, she should get kennel for it. Report Review snake1980 2016-04-11 id # 3000052457 great job on the new chapter. I cant wait to see what lara does next? maybe u could have her take the dog for a walk and she does it out in public? have to wait and see.

    Thanks for Gawic and Snake for the reviews. There's plenty more varied things to come, so stay tuned.

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    Will Lara be doing butt stuff with henry?

    Maybe.

    Sorry for the delay in this next chapter guys. There's a lot written but I'm not happy with it. As mentioned before this fic was just meant to be a series of one-shots so I'm having trouble amalgamating it within this format. It may just become more of an overview chapter. (Hopefully that can still be hot..?).

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    Little more controlling of Lara this way around. I like the dynamic. if you're looking for ideas for the german shepherd, well, not much of a sex idea, but have you thought of making Lara sleep with him (as in, in the same bed.) Something involving the pool, or different rooms in the house. Also have you considered one chapter being Lara having sex with a female dog?

    Thanks for the feedback. There will definitely be more action in the house in the next chapter. As for the latter suggestion, sorry, that's not really my bag when it comes to smut.

  23. JustS' Feedback & Response Thread

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    Being too ambitious, imagining a gigantic multichapter arc, then finding I don't have the time or energy to deliver.

    Sometimes you just have to rein things in or else you'll exhaust yourself or get bored.

    So I probably won't get the next chapter up today. I need to do the last checks on it another time with fresh eyes. Stay tuned though.

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    Story of my life, lol⤴⤴⤴

    The waiting for me part or being too ambitious for your own good part?

    Either way, I'm really trying to get the next chapter done by the end of today. If not today then very soon, I just need to go over it one more time to see if it lives up to my imagining of it.

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