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  5. problems logging in

    in Archive Tech Support

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    So I noticed that I was logged out. I tried to enter my login information and when I hit the button, it just simply didn't log me in. Didn't specify any reasons why it didn't. So I thought that I might've forgotten my password. When I tried to click on the link sent to my email to reset my password, the page opens up and says password reset is no longer valid.

    Can someone please help?

  9. The Use of Profanity in Writing Sex Scenes

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    1 hour ago, Desiderius Price said:

    Counted… four orgasms in the last chapter I wrote.  Pretty rare to actually get curse words, or even anything sharply worded, in them.  Profanity’s kinda like a spice or flavoring, like garlic, cinnamon, or vanilla; a little bit goes a long ways.  (Though I do tend to overdo garlic, tend to switch “clove” => “bulb” when I add it in.)

    This is off topic, but you should check out an anime called “Food Wars”. There's 36 volumes in the manga, and the manga actually has practical recipes for the food that they're cooking in the show!

    But getting back on topic, it is definitely true that profanity in the correct spots can actually enhance the effectiveness of an attempt at communication, but too much shows not only articulation inadequacies but literacy inadequacies as well.

  10. The Use of Profanity in Writing Sex Scenes

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    On 9/10/2023 at 4:20 PM, WillowDarkling said:

     

     

    1 hour ago, Desiderius Price said:

    If a writer needs to advertise it’s a sex scene in order to be a “sex scene”, then I’d think something is lacking in the writing.  Now, in certain contexts, a “fuck me” or “bang me” might be indicative of a character’s personality, or maybe there’s a scenario the two (or more) are roleplaying.  (Though, I suppose you could have it be solo, somebody watching a B/C grade porn film.) 

    Agreed. This is basically what I’m saying, summed up nicely.

    A good exercise people suffering from this problem can do to correct it is to pull a scenario out of the air (completely random), and write the sex scene without using any profanity whatsoever. After a while, it’ll become habit.

    Although I could probably supliment my own exercises with some basic forum posting study so that I’m not quoting posts from other threads when I’m trying to quote someone here (LOL!).

  11. The Use of Profanity in Writing Sex Scenes

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    There is a tendency among a lot of writers to rely on profanity when they're writing a sex scene. To the writer who does this, all sex scenes have to have profanity. Someone has to be screaming “fuck me” or something for the sex scene to be readable (according to the people who rely on it).

    Before you start writing your scene, here are some questions you should ask yourself:

    1.) Who are the characters in your scene? Is it in their personality or their diction to use that type of profanity, even in extreme situations? If not, then your characters won't actually be in the scene you write. Instead, it’ll be charicatures of your characters.

    2.) What was the build up to the scene you are writing? Was it two characters confessing their feelings in an intimate fashion, or was it just animal lust? The former sets into the story better with as little profanity as possible (preferably none). If it, for example, was an encounter in the backroom of a sex club, then feel free to go as heavy with profanity as you’d like because it sets into your story.

    These are just my opinions. Take them for whatever little they're worth.

     

  14. Rising Darkness

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    This is a story set in Yu-Gi-Oh. A new enemy is threatening Domino City, and Yugi and his friends will have to work together to save themselves and Domino City.

     

    Author: None
    Title: Rising Darkness
    Summary: Yugi and his friends must confront the most sadistic psychopath they’ve ever encountered to save themselves and Domino City. Various relationships blossom along the way.
    Feedback: Much appreciated.
    Fandom: Yu-gi-oh
    Pairing: Yami/Kaiba, Malik/Marik, Ryou/Bakura, Joey/Tristian, might be more as the story goes.
    Warnings: Will contain rape, torture, gore, and a lot of angst and sadomasochism. Also contains a OC.
    Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered
    URL: https://ygo.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600102748

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