as someone who found the story on the old blue and yellow site when it was originally posted,i am the definition of a long time reader, first time poster. i have loved the story from the beginning. some of the biggest clues to future events have been answered, the pipe bomb, car crash and both seem to be behind Jack. the big one that still has not happened is the water torture. i wonder if itis truly water torture, or if it is a metaphor, as in lots of small small punches that eventually add up to something more.
in the end i think they end up together. at the first break in chapter 9 Jack says "....Kayla was the one I would give my heart to for the rest of my life. Come what may, she is the girl I love. I can’t rationally explain it, I can’t give you a list of reasons why…I just know." I cant think of an instance where something like that has. been foreshadowed and not come to happen.
@Jashley13 is there a reason the "reality checks" stopped. i will be honest, as i waited for 154 i read through the entire forum history on the story. it seemed as the new job started up, those kinda died. it also coincides with the forum really slowing down to a crawl. im not saying it's the reason, just an observation
honestly i hope this story continues, it has been an amazing story even without the forum discussing its every chapter. i truly believe it will as Joe has said in the past!
thanks again for a great story!