CrossroadsMk2

Hi Extreme, if I do your suggestion, I'll think I'll need to have a second gangbang. First one is forced in England, and then maybe a second one where Lara does it to herself. Example: she's in Central America searching for an artifact for Reiss and comes across an impoverished village. She knows she should move on, but she can't stop thinking about how incredible the last homeless gangbang felt. So she strips naked, hides her gear in some bushes, injects herself with Bliss and walks down into the settlement.

Hi Extreme, not exactly your idea but very close. Lara will be dressed in her finest cocktail dress and jewellery , thinking that she'll be entertaining Reiss and his rich friends as her punishment. Instead, Reiss injects her in the back of his car and drops her off in the middle of the slums. Affected by Bliss, Lara will be unable to resist her urges and wanders into the shady alleys. Reiss will use his connections to disable the CCTV and redirect police patrols, so that Lara isn't disturbed. He'll also have some heavily armed henchmen on the ground to film proceedings and ensure her safety. Hi LHunt. Lara will eventually require daily doses, which Reiss will deliver to her once or twice a week. Zip and Alistair will also include friends. Lara's reputation in Abingdon will take a hit, as rumours of her group activities spread, and locals notice the constant flow of men coming and going from Croft Manor.

In terms of upping Lara's drug supply, do you think it should be Reiss who does it, as a reward for Lara finding him further artifacts, or Lara demanding it - doing hardball negotiations and withholding artifacts from him until she gets her way?

Hi LHunt, I see Winston as being too honourable to take advantage for himself (at least any more than he has already). I think it'll all be in service of Croft Manor - negotiating substantial discounts for necessary maintenance work. It'll be a new golden age for the Abingdon Estate (or at least that's how Winston will rationalise it). I think Alistair and Zip will also have the opportunity to bring in friends, prepared to do work for free in return for the chance to have sex with Lara.

Hi Extreme, in terms of the homeless gangbang, I still plan on having that as a punishment from Reiss. Lara will try and double-cross him when she learns he's after Pandora's Box. She'll try not to hand it over, holding out for a couple of weeks, before her addiction forces her to come crawling back - especially after Reiss offers to increase her supply. I see Winston becoming almost her pimp, arranging for people to come back. He's savvy enough to even negotiate deals. For example, the Manor normally employs 4 part-time gardeners. They'll already have signed non-disclosure agreements, so they're a logical choice. They'll ask if the other gardeners in the company can also participate. Winston will say yes, as many as they want, if they work on the Manor grounds, but he's still only going to pay for 4. A dozen gardeners turn up the next week (the rest working for free, just for the chance to fuck Lara), and the grounds of Croft Manor have never looked better! Win-win, as far as Winston is concerned!

Hi LHunt, yes over time Lara's cravings will grow, both in terms of her hunger for the drug and her sexual appetites. Her three staff will find it difficult to keep up with her needs, so Winston will need find a way to add more men to Lara's roster, while safeguarding the Croft Family name. Thankfully, I'm sure the Manor's part-time staff of gardeners, cleaners and tradesmen will be happy to help!

Hello everyone, Chapter 2 of Bliss has posted.

Hi Donkingkong, glad you're enjoying the story so far. I'm halfway through proofreading Chapter 2. Hopefully be posting it in the next 24 hours (time permitting).

Hi New Fan, thanks for the kind words and I'm glad you're enjoying my stories. I wasn't planning any fisting for the current story, but there'll be plenty of it (and horse dildos) in the second half of Voluntary Enslavement (Sam will discover she has a fetish for it, and the other female Charity members will want to stretch out and ruin Lara's holes for novelty and out of jealousy for her youth and beauty). There's also plenty of fisting, large insertions and stretching in my last short story, BDSM Raider, so maybe read that in the mean time.

Hi Extreme, it'll probably be 4 chapters in total.

Hi GhostOfCovid, I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Hi Extreme, yes the drug will become addictive, which will be shown in the next chapter, although the homeless gangbang won't happen until the second half of the story, which hasn't been written yet.

Hi ABigFan, thanks for the positive feedback. Glad you enjoyed reading it.

Hi LHunt, glad you like it so far. Jonathan Reiss was a fun villain to write and a really great suggestion - intelligent, charismatic and even principled in his own way. The kind of character who you know is evil, but you can't help secretly liking.

Hi everyone. My goal of finishing the story this week turned out to be overly optimistic - I vastly overestimated the time I'd have free to write. So, rather than keep you guys waiting, I've posted the first chapter of the new story. I'll post the second chapter in the next few days, as soon as I finish proofreading. The second half of the story will get done when I find the time to finish it. Thanks for being patient.

Developing well, I think. There's four major scenes and I'm halfway through the second (obviously with other stuff happening in-between). I've got some time off next week, where I'm going to try and make some time to write more (I haven't had any time the last 2 weeks). 20 pages in so far (about 12,000 words), so I think it'll be a 3 chapter story.

Hi Extreme, busy but doing well.

Hi Donkingkong, sorry - no plans to release anything early. I'm 10,000 words in and writing whenever I can find the time between other things. It'll probably be 3 chapters long when it's done. So probably nothing until October/November - just judging by how much free time I have at the moment.

Hi Extreme, I'll make sure I emphasise how dirty/smelly/ugly the homeless men are for you. That scene is planned for around the middle of the story, but there'll also be a gangbang by criminals towards the end (leaning towards Mexican or South American drug cartels at this stage), so lots more opportunity for ugliness and depravity there as well.

Hi ABigFan, thanks for the vote of confidence. I'll try not to disappoint.

Hi Extreme, yes to lots of filthy sex with hobos but no to craving it once the drug wears off - it won't fit into the story. The way I've written Reiss, he's doing his illegal biological weapons research and getting protection and resources from corrupt politicians, government officials and criminal bosses by being their problem solver. Resorting to extreme measures like kidnapping and murder can bring a lot of unwanted attention. Reiss offers them a discrete alternative - inject the the target with the drug, photograph them in compromising positions and then blackmail. Male politicians, judges and others are not immune, because they have wives and daughters that can be targeted for blackmail. The result: an investigative journalist stops reporting about scandals involving a certain politician; a prosecutor or police chief closes an investigation into a powerful criminal; a politician drops their proposed legislation that would financially harm certain wealthy individuals etc. The logistics of keeping so many people around the world supplied with the drug seemed unrealistic. Plus, it would almost guarantee public exposure if the women were taking the drug in an uncontrolled environment. For example, having a powerful prosecutor randomly masturbating in public after taking Bliss would just get her removed from office and replaced with a new person, making the prior blackmail mute. It doesn't really make sense.

Hi Donkingkong, I've written about 10 pages so far and the story is coming together nicely. I've decided to go with the shame/aphrodisiac drug (so Extreme is going to be happy), but with a blackmail angle rather than addiction being the driving force. I went with the drug being administered by injection, and it didn't seem feasible that Reiss would be supplying dozens of women with the drug every couple of days. It made more sense that the target is injected once, filmed in compromising situations and then blackmailed - although in Lara's case, her defiance will see her get injected on multiple occasions as punishment.

I'm going to just leave Markle out of it. I have no in writing any story with her in it. I've got a plan and I think I'll just follow it from here.

Hi Extreme, that particular scene will be in South America and towards the end of the story anyway - there's going to be some jetting around the place, with only about half of the story taking place in England. As a side note, I did consider Meghan Markle, but I can't stand her so decided to go in a different direction.

Hi Extreme and LHunt, I'll keep it a surprise then. I'm going to go with the addictive aphrodisiac drug, rather than Devil's Breath. The story's planned out. As a first, I'm going to include a real world celebrity for the other woman in the ass-to-ass double ended dildo scene, to demonstrate that Lara isn't the only famous celebrity that's been addicted to the drug. I'm thinking Taylor Swift at this stage. She won't play any other role in the story. It's more to demonstrate Reiss's power and control to Lara, to make her situation feel hopeless.

Hi Extreme and LHunt, would you guys like a brief outline of the story (main dot points of the plot) or would you prefer to find out later, as you read it?