G3ae
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On 2/8/2025 at 11:18 AM, Deadman said:
This might seem like a somewhat odd question, but for context, I’m writing an FF piece where one of them is more in control than the other. In fact, they had planned to seduce the other woman prior to what I’m writing.
Now I’m writing a part of it where the more dominant one in the relationship removes her clothing as part of a “power move”. However I’m trying to decide if they should have underwear on underneath the clothes. Given that the plan was to seduce them, it feels like it make sense for the dominant one to have no underwear on. At this point in the story, the one being seduced has pretty much gotten naked already.
But part of me thinks that it feels more dominant to continue to have some clothing on for at least a while longer. Kinda also feels like a power move.
What do you think?
Honestly, I think whether it’s dominant or submissive is most of all to do with attitude. There’s arguments to be made for either, but being naked and confident can be infinitely more domineering than someone dressed to the nines. Or wearing lingerie while your sub is naked can be another power play meant to emphasize a subs place. It’s all about presence and point of view.
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26 minutes ago, Deadman said:
Well this is part of what I’m kinda feeling is the issue. In my previous threesome series, the guy was “in charge” of the two women and kinda got what he wanted. Where as in this, the relationship status is somewhat unclear or less defined. The two women can be in charge or the two guys depending on the scenario. But because in the scenario of the two women, they’re just as into each other as the guys? It’s feeling like the women aren’t “teaming up” on the guy so much as including him in their own fun.
I’m not exactly a master author myself, but that said my advice is that to get everything across you need depth. For that, you need more than just 1 chapter. Which, unfortunately for you, means more work.
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I think a lot depends on the relationship status of everyone involved.
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12 minutes ago, Deadman said:
I wasn’t suggesting that polyamory and gangbangs are the same thing. I was more trying to square the inclusion of Archie in the polyamory with a lack of interest in men.
I only have one Riverdale story outside of what’s on AFF and I’m looking at moving it to a new platform at the moment. Technically, the piece I posted here is an AU of the one I posted elsewhere. Also, not sure if I’m allowed to be specific about where it is outside here.Oh. My mistake. Sorry. The appeal of A/B/V is multiple girls and it not being cringy or gross for a change. Plus, the characters are important to my own Beloved.
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10 hours ago, Deadman said:
Okay well, then you’re probably going to like a few of the other stories I have planned. At least 2 of the stories are all women. There are two other chapters in OIR coming up you might enjoy then.
I wouldn’t have guessed that given your interest in the polyamory of the current story. Most of the stuff I’ve written off AFF are femmeslash in nature.Polyamory and Gangbangs are in no way the same thing.
Where else besides AFF do you post? I’d like to read more of your stuff.
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32 minutes ago, Deadman said:
I appreciate that, although I try to be my own thing for obvious reasons.
However, I’d love any feedback you want to give on the stories I have written in the Riverdale fandom. I’m kinda out on a limb with the fandom. It’s probably the first one outside of my original fandom that I’m writing in. Though it won’t be the last.Unless you have stories posted elsewhere, the only ones I know of you've made are on adultfantic. I'm always happy to share my feedback, but with only two Riverdale stories there's not a lot to comment on.
And, in all honesty, I'm not the biggest fan of gangbangs. Or of men for that matter. So, sadly (for me), OIR isn't exactly to my tastes. Except for Cheryl's chapter.
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7 hours ago, Deadman said:
Well I can’t guarantee that. It’s certainly under consideration but like I said, I’m a big Beronica shipper. Still, I liked that they finally tried new dynamics in season 7 like Vughead. Though I’ve been playing with a few different dynamics in some other stories. Including the one that comes up right after this story. Just gotta get two more chapters finished.
You're the author.
If you're ever in the market for a Beta, I happily volunteer.
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10 minutes ago, Deadman said:
I didn’t mind the murder mystery or the fact that Jughead was involved. My big issue was how crazy some people got about the whole Bughead situation. I think it would’ve been more interesting if they had simply played the story differently. They made it so Bughead, Varchie and Choni were the only pairings allowed Like you said, it’s not the writers/author’s job to do everything the fans want. Which is what they did.
For me, the more interesting story is to flip the traditional love triangle dynamic on its head. Instead of it being Archie trying to choose between Betty and Veronica, you make it that Betty has to choose between Archie and Veronica. Or maybe Veronica has to choose between Archie and Betty. Which is sorta what I wanna play with in the story I’m writing. At least on some basic level.I like it. Especially if the final choice is "Both". Either way, it'll be better than the show ever managed.
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On 1/11/2025 at 8:03 AM, Deadman said:
Then I suspect you’ll probably enjoy the complete story when I finally release it. Also, the next chapter of my “Only in Riverdale” story might be something you’d enjoy.
You know, I liked what they did with season 7 and I think they were probably planning to do something like it before the fans got in the way with a lot of their crazy plans. It could’ve been so much more. As a Beronica shipper, I would’ve loved to see that fully explored beyond what we actually ended up getting.Color me Intrigued
Honestly, I’m not such a fan of Jughead’s inclusion in the final Polycule. I was (vainly) for just A/B/V with Jughead being the author who puts their story on paper. I should have given up that hope with the whole murder mystery nonsense the CW cooked up. That said, I’ll take what I can get with quality stories, whether they’re exactly what I want or not. It’s not the authors’ (your) job to make me exactly what I want.
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18 minutes ago, Deadman said:
Well I can’t guarantee a full polyamory story. Partly because I’m not clear on the definition of “full” in this context. I’m not really a Jarchie fan.
Neither am I. In this case I meant "Full" as in "Meant to be polyamorous from the beginning and not some half-assed thing they just slapped onto the end".
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1 hour ago, Deadman said:
Oh it definitely didn’t go into as much detail as my story does. More just implied in retrospect, only barely scratching the surface. There was actually a “quad” relationship though.
Really looking forward to having a full polyamory story for these guys. One that, unlike the show, doesn’t stink.
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Hello again,
It's been a bit of a while. I would have written sooner, but I've been out a while. I just got done reading your drones story and you said to reach you here if we liked what you've done. As you might remember, I've become somewhat of a fan of your stories over the last little while and if you're interested, I think I have something for you. A story that you may not have heard of, but has a plot and pairing in it you might be interested in. If so, message me back saying so, if not give the word and you'll never hear from me again.
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Not bad, not bad at all. Usually, I'm not much of a fan of Steven Universe, but this one is pretty good.
Now, I wonder if I might ask how you liked the story I sent you or if you thought Johnny Test worth a look? Personally, as I said before, I thought you'd like it and possibly find it better material than Milo Murphy.
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Just now, GeorgeGlass said:
Glad you enjoyed “Hot Yoga.”
I’ve never watched Johnny Test. It’s not still on the air, is it?
I don't believe so. It was on air some years ago, but I honestly stopped playing attention until I started reading the story I sent you.
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Another job well done.
Given your taste in reading material, I assume you've read this story http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600093704. Of course, if you haven't, now you can and I think you'll enjoy. Anyway, I wonder if you ever considered writing a story for Johnny Test. It would seem to feature characters you'd like and a premise you could use much like Phineas and Ferb.
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24 minutes ago, GeorgeGlass said:
An addendum to my reply to Nautiscaraider's comments: One of the chief reasons why I haven't taken a crack at writing a Milo Murphy's Law fic is that MML doesn't have a handy plot-driving (or smut-driving, if I'm honest) mechanism like Phineas and Ferb, Miraculous, or The Loud House have. I'm not sure how to make anything sexy come out of Milo's disaster-magnetism. Plus, the kids on MML actually act like kids; they show little of the precocity that characterizes a lot of the young characters on the other shows, which makes it more difficult to believably portray them doing anything sexual. I might have an idea for a short, non-lemony MML story, though.
You could have some accident strip clothes off of characters or there's the "heroic rescue" plot line. I know, not the most original ideas in the world, but still they work.
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5 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said:
Either way, I'm extremely flattered. Thank you!
https://m.youtube.com/#/watch?v=79DijItQXMM
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Well, I did say "most". I didn't exactly count so I'm not 100% on just how much I've read. Then again, I have been at it for quite some time now...
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Well, I guess I'll see how it turns out. I've read practically all of your work and have disliked exactly one. Somehow, I seriously doubt you'll disappoint. It'll be fun watching the Kwami try to explain why they never told Adrien or Marinette the truth.
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You know, that explains a lot, especially in some of the stories I've read. Ah France, we must not forget that you and we are different in our ways. In any case, the idea is solid, I'm just not sure it fits Adrien and Marinette. As head over heels for each other as they are, neither really seems the obsessive sort. I do love the Tikki and Plagg not liking each other idea. Gives reason to most of their reactions, especially why neither ever tells their human who their amatus really is.
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I do not mind in the least. Fair is fair after all. Since we talked about your concept for Miss Matched I must admit I've been getting more into the series and fanfiction. I stand by what I said the first time though. While the story is good the writing is just too childish. That's why I've been sticking to reading for the most part. I particularly like the stories that, like yours, focus on more mature elements befitting highschool students.
What did you have in mind?
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If you don't mind me asking, why only a one shot? I'd definitely this story deserves more or at least a sequel. It's really good.
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27 minutes ago, GeorgeGlass said:
Thank you! I would be happy if Star and Marco got together in the end, but I would also be happy if they ended up best friends for life.
I guess that'd work, provided that they provide a satisfying alternate ending for the two of them. It would make a good point that men and women can be friends without attraction getting in the way.
You know, I never thought to ask you before as it's not exactly your usual fare, but with my complete lack of luck thus far, what the hell. There's a web series called Out With Dad about a lesbian teenager and her father dealing with all of the extreme trouble that's attached to coming out in this day and age. I know, not the greatest summary in the world, but I assure you the show is much better in actuality that I describe it.
Here's the part where you come it. You see, as I see it, the show and it's characters have lots of potential for stories but I've searched high and low and could only find one poorly written story, barely over 1000 words. Now, ordinarily I would correct such a travesty myself, but what little skill I have is no good for writing anything of the sort. I've been reaching out to every author I thought might listen to me for months, trying to get somebody interested. So far no dice, and it's driving me completely nuts. So, if you have the time to actually watch the show and think it might be worth a story or two, give me a shout, I'd love to see what you come up with. You can find it easily on Youtube or on the official show website
Mentioning characters you don't plan to use?
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I don't think so.