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Thanks guys for your kind words guys, I really appreciate it. I’d love to hear more thoughts and opinions from any other readers of this thread. Do you like the story line? If so, what is your favorite part? Who is your favorite celeb? I’m really interested to hear from everyone, let me know! As a heads up, I’ve begun writing chapter 16. This chapter will see the departure of Alex, and will feature POVs exclusively from the celebs living in his harem. I plan to explore many of the thoughts, reservations and hopes of several of the ladies as they deal with their individual struggles (as well as some hot girl on girl on girl action ). I’m not sure yet if all of the ladies will get their own POV, or only 2 or 3, mostly this will be determined by length, not writing a 30 page chapter, and a desire for a lack of redundancy, i.e. I’m not going to show the same scene from 2 POVs just to give each lady their own POV. So far, I have a planned POV for at least Emma and Chloe, and hopefully at least one other, probably either Margot or Bella but we’ll just have to see how things turn out. As I mentioned above, I plan to try and release this chapter before the 21st of March, because I’m sure I won’t be getting any work done after ME Andromeda comes out. Well: Thanks again for your ideas, I really appreciate your enthusiasm and willingness to contribute. First, the only level a lady can reach where she would be able to command or order about any of the others is level 5. (No one has yet to reach level 5, so for a while it was the lady with the highest level who was in charge, later Alex designated the job to Emma so that was probably why you were confused). The levels are more about the privileges and benefits she has been given than her relationship to the other ladies. Second, I’m not sure if I’ll ever do any kind of strip games. This story is mostly about two things, first, and foremost, the celebs, and their relationships with each other and Alex, and of course Smut. Personally, I would rather the story or plot drive the sex scenes more than because of some game. I don’t want that to sound derogatory, but I really think plot should be the driving force. Juan: Great question, I really hoped someone would point out or at least see the touch of contradiction in that scene with Emma. I won’t answer your question, in so far as I’m not going to tell you whats up with her, lol. But I will give you these tidbits. First, when we’re in someone’s POV, be it Alex or Emma or whoever, you can believe that what they tell you is the truth. That doesn’t mean that they aren’t conflicted or even delusional about that truth, it simply means they believe it. Next, you have to remember, I’m seeking to portray people. Not the celebs themselves, their real life personalities, but real human emotion, true to the fictionalized version I have created of them. People, their emotions are very complicated, always in flux. People can feel two very different very strong emotions at the same time, and Emma, right now, is a very conflicted person. Lastly, as to the stuff about driving a wedge between Taylor and Margot, that was just Alex’s way of suggesting that Emma was trying to distract or complicate their lives long enough so that she would be able to become the level 5. I wasn’t sure how clearly that came across in the story as I was writing it, so I’m glad you mentioned it and I hope that clears things up. Thanks again you two for the comments and questions, I hope to see more of them from everyone reading this thread in the future. I’m off to do some writing. Hoping to hear from you all soon, Mal

Unfortunately, I think its safe to say there just isn’t enough interest in this story to write it the way I envisioned. So, at least for now I’m putting my ideas for this on the back burner, and will continue to move forward with new chapters of BDH. Thanks to those of you who did respond, I appreciate it. I’m off to misbehave, Mal

Chapter 15 is up! I hope you all enjoy it. Its one of my favorite chapters so far. There are some naughty bits in the beginning, but I think, especially if you’ve been following the story closely, that all the really interesting stuff happens afterwards. Please let me know what you all think, and if you are enjoying the story/plot line as much (or more than) the naughty bits. Personally, at this point I’m finding I’m enjoying writing the story line portions more than the smut (if barely ) so I’m kind of interested to see if you all are enjoying those portions too. My current plan is to move forward very quickly and begin work on chapter 16. This is mostly due to the fact that Mass Effect Andromeda comes out on the 21st, and I know that for at least a couple weeks after its release I won’t be getting any work done. We’ll have to see if I get it completely finished before then, but my plan is to publish chapter 16 on or just before that date. Either way, I expect we’ll see a brief scene with our new celeb either at the very end of this chapter, or quiet possibly the beginning of 17. I have a very interesting intro in mind for her and I’m getting excited to write it. Thanks so much you guys for reading along and continuing to offer me your support. You don’t know how much it means to me. Happy reading, Mal

Hey everyone, chapter 15 is up! I know its been a little while, I got busy with RL, had the flu, you know… life, but its here now. This chapter illustrates the further fall of some of the girls into acceptance, and even enjoyment of their situation. We also see one particular celeb given a big responsibly as well as seeing her struggling through her situation. The naughty bits of this chapter are loaded up front, but I think most of the really interesting stuff happens afterwards . I really hope you all enjoy it, I put quite a lot of work into this installment. So if you have any thoughts or criticisms, please let me know. I have a thread located in the He Male/Female section of the Celebrity subdomain. Thanks so much for your continued support, Mal

Well: Is something like this what you had in mind? Those suspenders are called garters or garter belts by the way. I mainly provided this image for clarification, to make sure that’s what you were talking about? If the image below is similar to what you wanted, I think something like that can be arranged. As to the idea of an inflatable pool with KY Jelly, lets just say I don’t have any plans for anything like that anytime soon.

Hey everyone, back again to check in. First off, writing is progressing. I’m still optimistic that I will be able to release chapter 15 by the end of the month. Juan: Thanks for the comments, I really appreciate hearing from my readers. Glad you decided to add your thoughts. I was originally going to write my story purely from the POV of Alex, but as I went on, it made more and more sense to give the ladies a view point, as it was the only real way to give the readers true insight into what they were thinking, and not just conjecture provided by Alex. Expect a lot more of it in the future. I even have plans for a chapter without an Alex POV at all . But don’t worry, I have no plans to write a boy/girl sex scene from a girl’s POV, I’m anatomically ill equipped to do so . Part of the reason I ended up choosing to add the ladies POV was because I didn’t want the celebs living in Alex’s harem to seem mindless or complacent. I wanted the readers to be drawn in by the struggles they were experiencing, and to question just how fully ‘broken’ they were. I feel like giving the ladies a voice does that in a way that a single POV just can’t do. So thanks so much for the observation. Also, I’ve recorded your votes. Thanks again for that. Well: I can definitely see Alex giving the ladies gifts of lingerie in the future. After all, they are allowed to wear a bra and panties under their uniforms. If you are interested in seeing a particular one of Alex’s girls receiving a particular kind of lingerie, let me know, I might be able to add that to a scene in the future with little trouble. As to the conflict with Bella and Chloe, I have a few things in mind but I’m afraid you might have to wait a chapter or two to see how it pans out. Thanks again for all the comments and ideas. I really do appreciate it. Also, if you’re new to this thread, or have been reading along but haven’t yet voted for which celeb you’d like to see as the fan selected celeb, please do vote. I will add one celeb by more or less popular vote, and right now we have a four way tie. Signing off to go do some naughty writing, Mal

Hey Guest is best, good to hear from you again. I like the idea of an outdoor area for the girls to visit as a special gift, but giving them too much access to the outside invites too many opportunities to be discovered. Such as satellite photos, or one of them spelling out a message for passing planes or satellites. I don’t know how closely you’ve followed this thread, but I have mentioned that I have scenes planned for the mansion above because I definitely think Alex will want to give the ladies the gift of fresh air and sunshine as a reward. Also, the mansion is only accessible by helicopter, which I think I mention in chapter 1, as it is located deep in the Yukon mountains, so Alex would be much more worried about the girls signaling the outside world somehow than their escape. We will eventually get to see the mansion and at least a few of the ladies will get to visit it, but the plot really hasn’t progressed far enough to make that possible yet. I actually have plans for a mansion scene sometime after I bring in Cara which will be in chapter 16 or 17. So maybe we’ll see the mansion in a chapter sometime soon . I’ve noted your votes for the fan selected celeb, thank you for doing so. I’m not quite sure when I’ll announce the winner, as I still haven’t had a ton of people respond. But given that it will be at least chapter 20 or so before I’m ready to bring in more new celebs I guess we have some time. So anyone out there who reads this thread and hasn’t tossed their votes out there, please do so! Thanks again for the comments, hope to hear from more of you guys soon, Mal

Checking in again guys. Guest Guest: I understand your aversions, to me its not so much about the acts, even the really depraved ones, which can take place in some of these stories, to me, its more about believably. For me, a story is at its best when it is just believable enough that it doesn’t come off fake, but not so believable as to question its reality. That is to say I don’t want to be reading a really gritty story and find myself thinking “I wonder if this really happened.” Also, you don’t need to apologize to me. Given the nature of my story, your question was perfectly understandable, and you didn’t know my thoughts on where and why I draw the line. Well: I love your enthusiasm dude, thanks for the questions. No, there isn’t a cat fighting ring, lol. I have some solutions in mind to solve situations where the ladies might fight over time with Alex, but mostly I think it will come down to who he wants to spend time with more on that given day. Trust me when I say, Alex wants to keep all the ladies happy. As to what rooms are in the complex, I won’t divulge all my secrets, I have already stated that there is a swimming and a ‘hot tub’ area. I will also tell you that the biggest amenity in the VIP area is 4 luxury suites for up to 4 level fours, and a master suite for the level 5. These will be much nicer apartments than the single room cells the ladies currently live in. Finally, teams? I’m not so sure about that, I will say that I do see certain alliances forming, especially as the number of ladies increases. Guest is best: Great question lol. I am working hard to try and get the next chapter released by the end of the month (February). If I don’t quite get it done by then I will have it out by early March. Thanks again for the questions. Keep em coming, Mal

Hey, Guest Guest I appreciate your ideas, and comments, thanks for once again chiming in with your opinion. I really do appreciate it. Let me first start out by saying my response to your idea might get a little convoluted, but I think it is necessary to delve into such detail for this particular inquiry. Now before I get into the details, I’d like to preface my response by saying this: Celebrity fanfiction, is often looked upon very negatively by the authors of other genres of fanfiction. Many feel it is wrong or harmful to write about real people, especially given the themes which run through many celebrity stories, themes which permeate my own fiction. The purveyors of this view point often suggest that a given celebrity, or their friends and family might read this material and be harmed by it, or become fearful for their safety, and thus be put in a state of undo stress. I personally don’t think celebrity fanfiction is any different than writing in any genre which focuses on a subject that is represented in someway by a film or a tv show. That however doesn’t mean that I don’t think there are some lines which shouldn’t be crossed. It is in these lines where I will try to address your suggestion. Let’s take Harry Potter as an example, given that Emma Watson is a major character in my story, and I think fits my point precisely. If you are an author writing in the realm of Harry Potter, whether or not your story draws from the books, or the films, anytime you place a character in that story, who had a major role in the film, your readers are almost certainly picturing the actor who played that character in the film. Thus, if a Harry Potter fanfiction features Hermione Granger its readers are picturing Emma Watson. Now, I’m sure there are those who would happily argue about the number of readers for whom this is true, but I feel no one can disagree with that fact that whether they like it or not, there are many readers for whom this is true. It is therefore my opinion that whether you are writing a Harry Potter fanficiton, or Underworld, or Star Wars or what have you, that essentially what you are writing is celebrity fanfiction set in a fictionalized environment. That last bit is very important to my ultimate point so I’d like to make sure it is clear. A Hermione Granger fanfiction is basically just an Emma Watson fanfiction set in the Harry Potter universe. Because 90% or more of the readers of a Hermione Granger fanfiction are just picturing Emma Watson as the brightest witch of her age. I made this long drawn out point is because I feel it is important to understand that all fiction which features a real person, or a character they have portrayed is just that, fiction. It doesn’t depict that real person. It takes that real person and puts them into a fictional situation. The story in question creates a fictionalized version of that person in a fictionalized world. However, just because we, the writers of this kind of fiction, are creating a fabrication of the person in question and thrusting them into a made up world doesn’t mean there are not lines which shouldn’t be crossed. For example, lets again look to my choice of Emma Watson. When I began writing BDH, I wanted to pick celebrities I found interesting, and attractive. I did some research on each celeb I included. I found out that Emma Watson was born in Paris, she attended Brown University, she is an outspoken advocate for women’s rights and gender equality, she has started her own book club and sometimes goes into the London subway to leave books she has read for others to find. To me all these details were things I could draw on for creating my fictionalized version of the sultry brit. Where I personally chose to draw the line is with things of a more personal nature. I for example, know she has siblings and of course parents, but I couldn't tell you anything about them. I don’t know if she has a boyfriend, or who is her best friend. Its not information I needed to create a believable incarnation of her, and frankly I think its taking things just a little to far. Because, I feel like incorporating too much personal information about a person is the beginning of crossing the line from fiction to real. The creation of a believable Emma Watson and her fall into a fictional depravity doesn’t need the inclusion of such personal details. I can put her into all sorts of terrible situations guilt free, because I am not writing about a real person, I am writing about a fictionalized version of that person, describing details of things that will hopefully never happen in the real world. But for me the inclusion of personal details like family and friends begins to dissolve the boundaries between fiction and reality and I am very uncomfortable with that. The situations which happen in BDH kidnap, rape and torture are set in a fictional world. That world is believably fiction in large part because many details are skimmed over. If you were to look back to chapter 1 when the celebs were originally brought to Alex’s compound. I am very purposely vague about how this was all set up and how Alex and his crew managed to pull this off. Its basically no more than Alex arranged for these 5 celebs to be in the greater LA area and in the course of one night drugged and kidnapped them. I fee like if I were to get into vivid detail, such as I might if I weren’t writing about a real person, that this is the beginning of turning a fiction designed to provide pleasure into something that seems like the creepily detailed start to something terrible. I know this was a little convoluted Guest Guest, and I’m sorry if it seems like I am being mean. that wasn’t my intention when I started this. I guess what I am trying to say is thank you for the suggestion, but I won’t be using the real details of a celebrities personal life to blackmail the fictionalized version of that celeb in any of my stories. As to the suggestion of Chrissy Teigen, I will put her on the list as a vote for inclusion. However, in my personal opinion, she isn’t a big enough celeb to have much of a chance of getting in. I do have several thoughts for a bustier, curvier addition. I hope this addresses your suggestion, and please don’t take this long winded explanation of why I won’t use your idea as a reason to stop posting them. Thanks again, Mal

Hello again, Well. Thank you for your sympathies, I am feeling much better now. As to your question, I think Alex would rather the ladies have things like sex toys, makeup and perfume, without having to earn it, simply because he wants them to always look their best, and he actively encourages them to have intimate relations with the other ladies. So having them earn those things by giving them an allowance based on their level would work against his best interest. Aside from that, the girls do earn certain privileges based on their level. Depending on what level they are, they gain TV time, snack foods and drinks, like Chloe’s Mountain Dew and Skittles, they also get an Ipod loaded up with songs of their choice, and at higher levels 4 and above, they also will earn things like Ipads with movies and games (games that don’t rely on a connection to the internet) for further enjoyment. In addition to that, as we will see once someone makes level 4 they will gain access to an additional area of the compound that will have further amenities. Thanks as always for your suggestions, Mal

Hello again everyone. I know its been a while since I’ve popped up. I had a pretty bad case of the flu which kept me in bed and generally feeling miserable for several days, so needless to say I didn’t get any work done for over a week while that was going on. Also, I took some personal time to relax, which is why I haven’t responded to any of the great comments that have been posted over the past few weeks. I have started chapter 15, but its in the very early stages of writing. My hope is to post it on or near the end of February. But, seeing as I”m ready to start working on stuff again, I thought I should start by responding to some of the comments and questions you guys have posted. So, hear goes. Sazbi: Is anyone actually submitting? First off, that would be telling but… I will say this. I have put a great deal of thought in to how / why / when the girls will submit, or to clarify, to fully give themselves to Alex’s every desire, but not necessarily be 100% willing. The reason I put it that way is because I was thinking that I doubt anyone who enjoyed their freedom would ever fully submit unless they came to rely on or became addicted to the situation. Its called Stockholm Syndrome. But even subjects who succumb to this can be rehabilitated after being removed from captivity. So in that way, no one fully ‘submits’ who doesn’t have some sort of proclivity for being dominated. However, as it relates to my story, we could assume that any of the girls who succumbs to Stockholm Syndrome has more or less fully succumb to Alex. Now, having said all that, the process for this doesn’t happen over night, and you must remember, that only 13 days have passed since these ladies were first brought down there. I would also agree with your statement that Margot at this point seems the furthest along, well, her and Taylor, since at the end of chapter 14 we see her saying to Alex that she never wants to leave here. If she is to be believed, she’s pretty far down the rabbit hole too… I like your observation that if there are camera’s then Emma’s movements are sure to be discovered. Believe me when I say I’ve taken that in to account, and I think you’ll like how that plays out in the next chapter. Lastly, your question about where Cara will end up, I can only say that I have that all planned out, but you’ll have to wait to find out. I expect Cara’s arrival near the end of chapter 16 or possibly depending on how things play out sometime in chapter 17. I hope that helps clear things up lol . Alpha: I do think it would be interesting to see the various actresses dressed up as characters from their movies. Margo as Harley, Emma as Hermione, Chloe as Hit Girl, and maybe some of the new-comers when they arrive dressed up as characters they’ve played. Then maybe see some roleplay between them as their characters with each other and Alex...could be a lot of fun. Right now though, I’m working on the plots which will see one of the ladies placed as the level 5, getting the ladies more or less settled in, and on bringing in a few new celebs. Once some of those plots are resolved, I might play around with things like that, especially since by then there will be a few more celebs to play with. Your comment about succumbing to the dark side is interesting, it is something I considered. We will definitely see in future chapters the ladies getting their inner freak on, whether its because they’ve been waiting for ‘permission’ to let loose, or simply because they’ve learned to enjoy things that might have previously been considered taboo will likely be on a case by case basis, but should be fun either way . I doubt there will ever be enough ladies housed in the complex for anyone to have their own harem, but one or two of the celebs might eventually have their own ‘pet’ celeb (from a previously mentioned idea). As to your last comment/question about using seduction/sex as an escape method. All I can say is this: expect escape attempts to be an on going theme, newcomers and original ladies alike will from time to time try to out smart, out play or screw their way out. I can’t wait to bring a few scenes to the mansion above, I have several in mind, once again I am waiting for the plot to progress to the point where they are possible. Well: I’m glad you like Taylor, I originally debated bringing her in over a different singer, but I decided on her because I too loved her long legs and sexy bod. (We may one day see the singer I originally considered ). I also like the Bella / Taylor pairing you suggested. I don’t think it will happen soon, because of the current plot, but perhaps one day when Taylor is a little more open we might just see it. As to your comments about maids and housecleaning, I may have been a little vague about it in the past, but all the ladies have chores they are assigned to do which includes housecleaning. I haven’t really considered having them dress up for that, but maybe one day we’ll see Alex bring a couple of the girls to his quarters to clean it while playing dress up. I do like the idea of having the level 5 dress up in a business suit. I don’t want to give too much away about level 5, but I have decided that the level 5 will have a lot more leeway in how she dresses, so maybe we will see a sexy business suit. Finally, in regards to your questions about different types of rooms, like the game room or the night club / stripper pole. I will only say, there is a whole section of the complex that is reserved for levels 4 and 5 that we have yet to see. The Other Guy: Trust me when I say I feel your concern and I sympathize that the characters who currently live in the harem could use more development and a more in depth exploration of those dynamics. All I can say in response is that I feel like the time is right to begin slowly adding a couple more celebs. I think these new additions will only add to the complexity of those interpersonal relationships, and create more tension in the harem that will hopefully make for some really hot smut, but also some really interesting plots. I can say that it is my plan to bring in any new additions slowly one or two at a time, and I have no plans for the number of ladies to exceed 11. I feel like if there are too many girls living in the compound it will be far to difficult to balance giving them all the attention they deserve. Guest Guest: My first suggestion is to vote for the ladies you’d most like to see. Simply list 5 or 6 celebs you’d like to see. I’m currently keeping tally of whom you all would most like to see. I will bring in one fan selected celeb. This celeb will be chosen mostly by popular vote. Currently I think there is a four way tie. Second, I chose these celebs based mostly on my own ideas of what I find attractive, but I also wanted to pick popular up and coming stars that people would be interested in reading about. I admit there are many similarities in the celebs currently living in the compound especially when it comes to body type, but I don’t agree that they are the same. There are 3 blondes, 1 brunette, and a red head. 3 are in their mid twenties, and the other two are teenagers. Also, the protagonist, Alex is in his early thirties, so its unlikely he would want a woman who is too much older than him. That being said, I am bringing in more celebs, and I have been considering adding at least one bustier celeb. As of right now though, that list is in constant flux. The only new celeb I know for sure I am bringing in, is the one I named in the last chapter. Alrighty, that’s a lot to take in. I hope this clears up and answers some of your questions and concerns. As always I really do appreciate every comment and question. Your support continues to be an inspiration for me to continue writing, and I hope you all continue to be enthusiastic about my story. I hope to put out chapter 15 by the end of the month. I think it will be interesting. I also plan to be a little more active on the forum between now and then, so if anyone has any further questions or comments, I’ll try to address them. Thanks again for all the support, Mal Oh yea, if you click on the portrait of Captn Mal, it will take you to my author profile. There you can follow me, and be alerted whenever I post anything new, which will include the latest chapters of BDH, as I always update it in the promote a story section of this forum. Happy Reading!

I have decided I want to write a fan inspired story staring Kendall and Kylie Jenner. What does fan inspired mean you ask? Good question! I’m going to present two options for story theme. I want you, the readers to select which of the two themes you like more. Then I want you to provide two story codes, the first for the theme you voted for, the second as something you’d like to see if if the theme you vote for isn’t the one selected. I’m only taking one story code per person, so please only provide the two. I will select the theme based on two parameters, first votes, this will be the most heavily weighted category. Most likely whichever theme gets the most votes will be the one I’m going to use. However, I will also be gauging how well the provided story codes work with the themes. If the voting is close, but I think the theme which received less votes has a better continuity of story codes, I might end up selecting that one. The two themes are: Abduction: Kendall and Kylie are kidnapped and forced into doing various ‘things’ Wild Party: Kendall and Kylie are at some crazy party where they engage in various acts of depravity Here is an example of what I’d like your vote to look like: I vote for option number two, and my choice for story codes are: 3Plus DP The one and two refer to the themes, so in the above example, you’d be voting for theme option number 2 and your story code options are: if theme one is selected you’d like to see a 3Plus scene and if your vote for theme 2 is selected you’d like to see a DP. Please remember that I will only choose one story code per person, but pick any codes you like, I want to write a more or less completely fan inspired story. Story codes can be found here: That being said, once I reach ten votes I’ll probably have to stop voting there, any more and the inclusion of all those story codes could become quite troublesome I’ll probably also want to start this story in a month or two so sometime in early March I’ll probably end voting at that point no matter what. If there aren’t enough votes, I’ll have to decide whether or not I want to write the story at all, if there doesn’t seem to be enough interest I might just work on the next chapter of BDH instead . I hope you guys like this idea, and I hope to see a lot of interest in this. If interest is high, I might do a different match up and write another one of these sometime in the future. Thanks again for all your support, and I look forward to hearing from you all, Mal

Chapter 14 is up! I know I said it’d be up by the 16th or 17th, but its quite a bit longer than I expected. Please have a look and find out who the first new celeb will be. Theo: Thank you so much for the kind words. I really appreciate how you noticed the relationships between the captives, and their slow progression of mental state, (and yes the odd number was done on purpose). Well: I might do some stuff with sexy outfits in the future, though I”m not sure if it’ll be with stock outfits like nurses or cheerleaders. More likely it’d be with dressing them up as character’s they’ve played in moves, or putting them in outfits they’ve worn on the red carpet or just sexy clothes. But, the uniforms they wear are there purposefully to remind them of a) their place i.e. rank, and b) that they are in fact property. I like your idea of betting for levels, though I would most likely use an idea like that more in a truth or dare game, and the rewards probably wouldn’t be a full level, but maybe ‘brownie points’ toward advancement. To answer your question about swimming pools/hot tubs… Yes, the complex does in fact have a natural underground ‘pool’ and because it is a hot spring, Alex also crafted a ‘natural’ hot tub. We haven’t seen this area yet in the story mostly because the girls don’t have access to it yet. Expect it to come into play once we have some level 4s and 5s… I’d like to post some question’s I’ve asked before. Now that there are a few more people reading this thread, I’m hoping that some more of you might answer. Also, as I’ve said, I’m going to soon begin a one shot story featuring Kendall and Kylie Jenner. Expect to soon see a new thread in the Het Male/Female the celebrity section where I plan to outline a few of my ideas. But, I’d like anyone reading this tread who’d like to contribute to this story to be ready. I plan to ask for a lot of ideas in writing this story. Basically, I’m hoping that you’ll all give me one scenario or story code that you’d like to see featured in the story. Depending on how many people respond, I can’t guarantee everyone’s suggestions will be used, but I’d essentially like to write something that’s almost entirely reader inspired. (Thread up under the title: Fan Inspired Story. Please look and respond!)

Just posted chapter 14, a little later than promised. I got busy with RL, plus its a lot longer than I originally foresaw, nearly 15 pages in word. In this chapter, you all finally get the answer to whom the first new celeb addition to Alex’s harem will be! This chapter also has a slightly more complex plot, complete with flashbacks and intrigue… Anyway, I really hope you all enjoy it, and if you have any comments or suggestions on anything you’d like to see in the up coming chapters, or maybe you’d just like to vote on whom my reader selected celeb should be, please go the the Billion Dollar Harem thread on this forum, located in the Het Male/Female section of the Celebrity sub domain in the All Other Subdomains section. Thanks again for continuing to read along, and for all your support. Looking forward to hearing from you, Mal

Wow, so four responses since I last posted anything. Thanks everyone for the ideas and input, I really do appreciate it. I guess I’ll start by saying that I agree with both Tom and Rawdog88, Alex most certainly thinks of the girls as his possessions and would not share them with his guards under normal circumstances. Punishment, however, is not a normal circumstance, he sees the involvement of the guards as a punishment, and their use as a determent for misbehaving. The use of the guards would only be to teach the ladies that there are far worse things than not being a part of his harem. Next, Sazbi, I really like the idea of making a new or misbehaving celeb the pet of one of the girls. I may work to incorporated that idea into an upcoming chapter. I’m not sure yet if I’ll go with your idea of breaking them completely so they only speak in third person, but I do like the idea that the pet’s behavior could effect the girl responsible for her. I’m really glad everyone is enjoying the dynamic of how the hierarchy within the harem is creating some drama, and that the race to who will be the level 5 is creating some tension. The next chapter is going to focus heavily on both these themes. Speaking of the next chapter, I am almost done writing it and I feel confident I will be able to release it by the 16 or 17th. I will say it’ll be lighter on the dirty bits and heavier on the plot, it should also be one of the longest chapters yet, but I think it should be quite enjoyable for everyone. This chapter will also name who the first new addition to the harem will be, though I don’t think she’ll actually come to stay till probably chapter 16. I’ve been keeping a tally sheet of the votes for the reader selected celeb, and I’ve been contemplating my decision on whom I’m going to pick. I can’t say with any certainty when I’ll introduce the pick, I’m honestly still hoping to hear from a few more readers before choosing. Either way, once I’m set on the pick, I will announce it here just to let everyone know. I’ve decided that I am going to write a one shot story staring the Jenner sisters. I’d like to introduce the new celeb into the harem before I write this story. So, I’ll probably start writing it sometime after I finish chapter 16 and the first new celeb has a home. I would absolutely love to hear some ideas from you guys on scenarios or situations you’d like to see them subjected to. I can’t promise I’ll use them all, but I love to incorporate at least a few reader inspired ideas. So please, let me know what you’d like to see. Anyway, thanks again for all the feedback, I am absolutely grateful for it. Later, Mal

Hello to you too, RawDog. I’m very glad you are enjoying my work, and I wanted to thank you for taking the time to offer up your comments and ideas. Unfortunately, no, I cannot pump out a new chapter every day . But I can tell you I’m already well into writing chapter 14, and I expect it should be ready for release sometime around mid January. I’m very excited about this chapter, not only will it set up the arrival of our first new celeb, but it will feature a slightly more complicated plot of jealousy mixed with a little intrigue as the race to level 5 heats up. I’ve been looking over everyone’s suggestions for celebs they’d like to see added, and I’ve narrowed down my fan selected choice to three of the requested ladies (I plan to choose at least 1 but maybe 2 from the suggestions offered, this will probably depend on how many people offer suggestions (I’m including in my considerations the fan who left suggestions in the review section (thank you, MAINALPHA)). I’m still hoping to see a few more suggestions before I finally decide, and I’m curious to see if any of the three I’m considering continue to pop up. On a side note, and just to give you all a little teaser as to who the new celeb will be I offer you these two hints. 1) The new celeb is friendly, in the real world, with at least two of the fictional versions Alex’s current guests, and 2) She hasn’t been mentioned by anyone offering up suggestions. (Feel free to guess, but I must ignore them to preserve the surprise.) Finally, I’ve been considering writing a new one shot story, (I’m not sure when I might start this story, maybe in a month or two). I’m considering two ideas. and would be very interested in hearing what you all have to say. Idea 1) Kylie and Kendall Jenner are abducted and ‘convinced’ to perform various lewd acts (please offer suggestions if you like this one). Idea 2) A celeb is cloned (I’d be open to suggestions if you vote for this one). She is cloned once, maybe two or three times, then this clone is forced to interact with the other clones and the scientist who created them. Well, thanks again to everyone reading along and especially to those offering me their personal support and ideas. It is very much appreciated! Later, Mal

Santa came just in time this year! Chapters 12 and 13 are up. They detail the events which had been happening behind the scenes in the punishment room.

First off, thanks again, Oppa for letting me know what you think, your opinion is very much appreciated. I took a look at that story you recommended, and really liked it. Though I know I would hate writing in that format, it was kind of fun to pick and choose where the story took me. Furthermore, I don’t think those stories, at least the choices I made were much more depraved and / or hardcore than anything going on in BDH. As for Ms. Jones, I’m still on the fence and hoping to hear from folks. Therefore, my next chapter will include an author note at the beginning directing people to this thread so maybe I can generate a little more feedback, both on here and on the questions I posed above. As I’m still anxious to hear from more of my readers. Next, I thought I’d give a little update. I’m nearly finished writing what I still think will be a two part chapter detailing Chloe and Bella’s adventures in the punishment room. So far, boy are the girls learning a lesson . If I continue at the pace I’m working, I hope to be able to spread a little holiday cheer just in time for Christmas Day, and give everyone, naughty or nice, the gift of story. I’m crossing my fingers and asking Santa for enough time to finish writing, and editing so I can release it then. If I don’t get it finished for that weekend, I can say with certainty that I’ll be done by the month’s end, so either way I should get those chapters out to everyone soon. Thanks again to everyone reading, Mal

Thanks for replying to my questions Oppa. Hopefully some of my other readers will see this thread and do the same, I’d love to have several opinions to think on while I work on the next few chapters. I like your jealousy idea. I already had some ideas for how jealousy within the harem might influence future chapters, but now I’ll definitely work to build on those idea’s and incorporate them. When you say “get into some kinky stuff,” what exactly do you mean, lol more kinky and depraved than the stuff that’s already going on? I’d love some specifics . In total, I have described the underground complex as being capable of housing up to 10 individuals, not counting Alex. But, if some of the ladies were to end up sharing rooms, as Emma and Margot did for a while, that number could go up some. I have been thinking that I might add a total of five or six ladies, which would bring the total to 10-11. But I probably won’t add them all at once. Maybe 2 or 3 here then 1 or another 2 later… Depending on where and how the story takes me to those additions. On a different note: I wasn’t planning on divulging the identities of any of the ladies I was considering adding because I wanted it to be a surprise. However, after seeing her new movie tonight, I am seriously on the fence about whether or not I should consider adding a celeb I have already featured in my other story on this site. So, I thought I’d ask the opinions of those reading this thread. Felicity Jones? What do you all think? I think she’s one of the sexiest stars out there right now, then again I have a thing for brits with cute little grins… but I digress… I would love to hear from you all. Would you all like to see her as an addition? Or is she just too cute for Alex’s man-handling? Please, if you’re reading this and you read my story, which presumably if your in this thread you do, let me know. I have been going back and forth on this, and just can’t decide. Hope to hear from you all soon, Mal

Hey, Oppa, thanks again for the kind words and the support. You’ll be pleased to know, I’m working on chapter 12, in which we will finally see just what has been going on in the punishment room. As you might expect, this chapter will be chalked full of all the things you hope to see. Right now, I”m about half way through writing it, but I’m considering breaking the chapter into two parts due to the length. If I do break it up, I’ll release both parts at the same time. To answer your silly and off topic question, yes I do occasionally read other authors on this site, though I’ve only read a few celeb stories. There are a few authors, from my limited reading, that I have found quite enjoyable. Look into the writers Deathstalker, and TentacleFan. If you like my styles and themes, you should also enjoy those two. As I’ve mentioned in previous posts, I have the next few chapters already planned, and they should be interesting and exciting. After those chapters, sometime around chapter 13, 14 or maybe 15, I plan to add a few new celebs. I have a couple of the new editions already picked out. But I would be more than interested in the suggestions of my readers. I”m hoping that you, and any of my other readers seeing this might answer me a few questions: Which of the celebs currently living in Alex’s harem is your favorite? Which celeb(s) would you like to see added to the harem when I am ready to do so? Which current chapter is your favorite, and why? Are there any pairings and or scenarios you’d like to see? If so, please describe in as much detail as you’d like. Lastly, I really appreciate you and everyone else reading my story, and I would love any comments or criticisms left either here or as a review. If you’re enjoying my story, please let me know what you think. Thanks again, Mal

WillowDarkling, DemonGoddess, I have created a new thread in the Het-M/F section of the celebrity thread for commentary and review of my story. Thanks for bringing to my attention that such responses didn’t belong in this thread, and please do edit or move whichever posts in need of moving to that new thread. From now on, I will only use this thread to promote new chapters of my story. Thanks, Mal

Hey everyone, I guess I need a home for anyone who might want to comment on, make suggestions for, or offer ideas on my on going story. So here it is. If you’ve been reading along, and wanted to ask me questions, or offer up your own opinions or designs for where the story should go next, or whom I should add to Alex’s underground paradise, look no further, this is the place. I am currently working on chapters 12 and 13. and plan on uploading at least the twelfth installment before the end of the month. Sometime after the thirteen chapter, I plan to add at least a few more celebs. So please, if you’re into the story, leave me a review, ask me a question or make a suggestion. I really do like to hear from anyone and everyone, your comments and ideas inspire me to continue writing and I am willing to entertain pretty much any idea or scenario. Thanks again to everyone reading, Mal

Just a quick update. I just posted chapter 11 in which we see a further ‘developing’ if you will of one of Alex’s guests. I’m also, currently hard at work on chapters 12 and 13. I fervently hope to bring at least 12 to you all before the end of December. In that next chapter, we will finally learn what has been going on with the ladies in the punishment room. I won’t say to much to give anything away, but, there won’t be a lot of dialogue or scene setting in this one. If you’ve been reading along, and enjoying the story up to this point, I would like to again say thank you, and that any reviews, or comments here or in the review section are very much appreciated. Also, if anyone is interested in seeing any certain scenario, or putting in their two cents on just whom I add to Alex’s menagerie, please do write me a review and let me know what you’re interested in seeing or whom you’re interested in seeing. I very much take suggestions into consideration when I’m working. Thanks for reading along, Mal

Thanks so much, Oppa for the support and the question. Its really good, as an artist, to see people supporting your work, I really appreciate it. I guess first, before I get to your question, let me give a small update as to my progress. I’ve been working on chapters 10, 11, and 12. Chapter 10 is more or less done, you may have seen it on another site. But before I post it here, I’d like to give it one more round of editing. Chapter 11 is written, but still needs a few more rounds of editing, and 12 is in the beginning stages. Meaning, that I have begun writing, and I know more or less the direction that chapter will take. I have also begun work conceptualizing events that will occur in chapter 13, and I can tell you it should be one of the more...vivid and interesting chapters yet. Now, as to your question. The short answer is yes, I do eventually plan to add a few more celebrities to Alex’s burgeoning harem. The problem I’m dealing with right now, is how many ladies do I add, and who should they be, and when is the right time to bring them in? There is also the question / problem of attention. With the five ladies currently living in Alex’s dungeon I am already finding it difficult to balance giving them each what I feel is proper time on page. That is to say, giving them enough attention to fully develop their personalities, and their individual falls into depravity / submission / acceptance… or what have you. My current plan is to bring the new celebs in sometime after chapter 13, though right now I couldn’t say just when (probably chapter 15 or 16.) I already have 3 ladies in mind, and I don’t plan to alter that selection. However, I was considering adding a total of 5, which means I am at least open to suggestion as to who those final two might be. If you, or anyone else is interested in leaving me a suggestion, or wants to simply wants to offer other comments or criticisms, please do write a review of my story in the review section and leave your choices for potential recruits there. I am very glad to entertain pretty much any idea. Thanks again, Oppa for your very kind comment and your question, I hope this helps clear up your questions. Later, Mal

First off, thanks so very much for taking the time to not only read my story, but for sharing your thoughts on it as well. I very much appreciate it when someone takes time to write something about one of my stories. Here is a few thoughts of my own in reply. The way I see it, the billion dollars was mostly spent on housing. I’m not sure how far you’ve gotten in the story, or admittedly you could have missed it since its not a subject I touch on too much, but Alex built a mansion above the underground complex. This mansion is a multi-room luxury home that any billionaire would be proud to call home. Plus it is built in a remote location only accessible by helicopter, so the mansion alone is probably a third to half of that billion. The underground complex is also a huge expense, it has top of the line security, multiple rooms, hallways that can pump in a knockout gas and then pump it safely back out, security cameras, and thumb print scanners on every door and compartment in the place. Lastly is Alex’s security force, and the cost of orchestrating and carrying out the abductions themselves and I think a billion dollars is, not terribly unreasonable to suggest. I find the cloning idea fascinating and I think the idea of a story featuring cloned celebrities, or just clones of some super hot chick(s) could be way hot. The problem with clones, if I’m writing a realistic story is the science. Cloning works of course, but there is currently no way to speed up or advance how quickly that clone would grow, meaning it would take at least fifteen to twenty years to have a viable subject, depending on how creepy you’d like to be. That being said, a story featuring someone who is on a longer timeline, or whom has figured out a way to speed up the process could be really interesting. Lastly, for Alex it is just as much about the power of possessing something or in this case several someones that everyone wants, and only he owns. In this regard a clone is not what he would be looking for, only the real thing would do. Anyway, great comment and idea, ChironBliss, I really appreciate it. Thanks for reading, and I hope you will continue to do so as I come out with more chapters in the future. If you, or anyone else has further questions about my story, don’t hesitate to ask, I love having input. Thanks again, Mal