TheDogSage

Hmmm, maybe have Sasuke and Boruto decide to truly humiliate Naruto and show him his place beneath them by tying him up so that his shoulders are down and ass is in the air, then having them bring in a dog to mount and fuck him like a bitch in heat, just so he knows that they can do whatever they want to him and his body as it is their’s and not his. Naruto is ashamed, disgusted, and humiliated by this, but he’s also incredibly turned on and loving it. Why? Do you have any ideas? If so, I’d love to hear them and see if I can work with them.

Now, before I really get into the story, I need to know limits of what exactly can be done to Naruto as far as domination/humiliation/etc. I’ve seen that forced crossdressing/nudity, dog collars, tramp stamps, forced to secretly wear sex toys in public (and thus bondage), gangbang, cuckqueaning (or whatever you call it when you fuck someone next to your sleeping other), forced cum consumption, and exhibitionism are all OK, but what don’t you want to see? I really need to know what the things you consider ‘taboo’ and where I shouldn’t tread are. Like Mpreg, Beastiality, and the like.

I have a bunch of half-finished and not even began chapters (including first) for various stories from this forum, and yet this idea interested me so much I’ve finished Chapter 1 and am working on Chapter 2. Though I do have a question: how old do you want Boruto to be for this story? His current canon age or older? And if older, what age would you prefer?

Planning on it, it’s just… sometimes I have trouble getting the story started, like with this one.

Dammit, I kinda want to do this idea (because I seem to be turning into the “Naruto gets cuckolded/feminized/humiliated/etc” guy). Already have plans for Naruto getting tied up and pegged/forced to go around with a vibrator inside him, getting “female sexual lessons” from Ino, have mild genjutsu/mind jutsu used on him to make him more malleable mentally, having jutsu/medicine used on him to make him more feminine in appearance (a bigger, rounder butt, a slimmer waist, a more slender face, and even breasts), and after a time being made to have sex with guys (like Inoichi, Kizashi, Chouji, and others). Have the story end with him being a make-up girly-girl, planning his eventual wedding day and even having a boyfriend (don’t know exactly who yet).

Planning on writing this, just having trouble with the ‘argument/revelation’ that essentially kicks off the plot. Could use a little help with that if anyone’s able.

Seriously considering doing either Blonde and Black or this if it’s still available, just to have something different from the rest of the stories I’m working on so I don’t get burned out with only writing them. I’m just wondering about the “Naruko being taught at a young age to have sex with her ‘daddy’” thing, since I’m not exactly sure how detailed, how ‘explicit’, and exactly how young they want. But other than this, I rather like the idea.

Dammit, I want to do this challenge, but I’m already working on a cuckolded/sissified Naruto story, a futas/females humiliate/abuse Naruto story, and planning for a ‘Naruto is turned into a shemale bride for Toneri’ story. ... I think I may have a thing for having bad things happen to poor Naruto.

Just posted chapter 2,

It does indeed, thanks. Probably going to at least start this story because I have a plot bouncing around in my head of a “post-marriage” scene where Tsunade and Jiraiya, after a couple of years of trying to get a meeting with Toneri (due to not wanting a war with Toneri while the threat of Akatsuki looms) finally succeed. They show up at Toneri’s castle, and while talking with him Jiraiya sees and leers at Naruto who’s dressed in a leather thong and basque (he doesn’t recognize it’s Naruto or even a male due to the modification, use of make-up to hide his even more prominent whisker marks due to his skin becoming milky white, and a special ninshu technique to hide the, though somewhat shrunken, still there bulge that identifies Naruto as being born male pre-transformation). Toneri offers to let them stay the night so they can continue the talks in the morning. During the night, Naruto enters Jiraiya’s room and offers herself to him. Jiraiya, being the lecherous pervert he is, immediately agrees, and even agrees to the conditions of being tied up and blindfolded (basically he does so to humor her, and isn’t worried about being in danger even if she tries something). So Jiraiya’s tied up, they have sex, but just before he climaxes the blindfold comes off and Jiraiya sees the “woman” he’d been leering at and having sex with has three whisker-like birthmarks, short spiky blonde hair (a ninshu illusion, he’s still got the long, straight white hair), shrunken male genitals, and a seal on ‘her’ stomach. He quickly realizes exactly who is on him, and to his horror, is unable to stop himself from climaxing inside of Naruto. Drained from the release and shocked, Jiraiya can only look at his partner in horror as he asks “Na-Naruto?” To which he gets a smile and a response that causes him a massive amount of horror; “Hi ero-sennin.” We soon find out that Toneri had wanted and planned for this to happen for several reasons, including tormenting Jiraiya (and Tsunade when she learns about everything) and to show them how much Naruto belongs to him.

Interesting idea, and I’m certainly intrigued enough to seriously consider taking it up (maybe it’ll help me get out of my funk to work on my other two AFF Naruto stories). But I need a little clarification: what exactly do you mean and are looking for in regards to ‘brutal sexual training’?

I’ve posted the first chapter: Naruto the Kunoichi Toy, and I’ve started the general discussion thread here: Naruto the Kunoichi Toy (General Discussion)

Please discuss the story, leave ideas for how the kunoichi can humiliate Naruto, and anything else revolving the story in this thread.

Yeah, but the way parts of the original post are written makes me believe the challenger wants the ages to be canon-accurate, so if I start where I want they’ll have to be 13, hence my question.

Thanks, but I have a question and I don’t know where else to ask: I want to start the story at the beginning of the manga story (that way I can have Haku survive in it without writing an excuse for him surviving his canon death), but that’ll have Naruto, Sakura, and their ilk 13, and I’m not too sure about the legality of writing the humiliation because much of it will be sexual. What I’m getting at is: can I get arrested for it?

Hey Billie, mind if I take this challenge?

Will do.

I don’t think I’ll do the Sasuke cuckolded story, because despite what people think according to this story, I like Naruto. I just have a very bi-polar way of showing it.

That’ll happen soon. Maybe not next chapter, but soon.

But then there wouldn’t be cuckolding, and the challenge I took made cuckolding a requirement.

Maybe Guests guest guest. Maybe.

Maybe later.

You’ll just have to wait and see.

You, you I like too. You could’ve been my favorite reviewer, but LemonSmut fought Link29’s rambling nonsense on my behalf, so he’s still my favorite. And I’ll shine like the brightest fucking crazy diamond you’ve ever seen! I’ll be the goddamn SUN of crazy diamonds, I’ll be so bright!

Those would have been obvious. I decided to go with the unexpected choices. More unexpected choices to come (with a single expected choice).