crazychickhull

I'm thinking of posting one of my stories. Would you guys promise to be gentle? I.e. Batter the hell out of it point out where I'm going wrong?

Release hell and let slip the dogs of war

Hope everything goes ok keep us updated on your condition magus the story can wait your health can't

I can see this book being a lot darker than the other two. But of course it has to be as we are deeper in the muck as it were. Max is going against the big bosses now so of course people are going to get hurt. Bear in mind we're only on chapter two I can't wait to see what happens. Great two chapters so far. If you have to injure mc please try not to kill them all of in one go. I know you have to 'thin the herd' But two many too soon will lead to a short story and I'm hoping for 63 chapters again.

Or needle! (crawls into corner shaking)

Or a robot with a microscope

Blame my phone not me i don't control it it controls me i think one of Max's nanites escaped and took control

Great news! take care of yourself

Great news! take care of yourself

Great news! take care of yourself

Great news! take care of yourself

Great news! take care of yourself

Great news! take care of yourself

Great news! take care of yourself

Great news! take care of yourself

Great news! take care of yourself

What if the sg found a way to download and kidnap nadis mind and that's where she is in some sort of blank mainframe and that's why everything is black? Since max has now "linked" with her perhaps his mind is trapped there with her as well since nobody can access Max's chip.

With the girls all wearing dresses I doubt they are hiding weapons either which leaves them completely vulnerable.

They say broke because it's the last thing a man wants to hear in a heated situation it "breaks" his nerves. Example: my ex husband actually fainted! And that was before we even got to the hospital. He was so nervous he was shaking. I had to pack my own bags and drive myself!

Hey major don't look a gift miracle in the mouth you survived and you will recover fully in time. Look after yourself don't try rushing things or pushing too hard too fast. CCH

Ok magus I'm giving you two weeks to post the first chapter of sitg or else I'm sending all the characters of gitg and northstar to hunt you down. Another great chapter but damned cliffhangers no wonder I'm crazy! 😫

Are the last two on aff? If so I'll check them out

Check your reviews just posted as requested

I agree and we have evil ideas for vengeance 😈

10am bst still no story. My theory is Magus is scared to post because he's killed off all the main characters in one giant explosion and knows we will rip him to shreds. I have the torture equipment if he has. If you guys kidnap him. We can force him to rewrite it. Mwah ha ha