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  1. Speaking of expressing disappointment, we have these comments from Anonymous :unsure:

    Anon 2015-05-22 id # 3000227205

    Not quite what I was expecting..... slightly disappointed but will wait to see how this plays out in next update.

    Anon 2015-05-22 id # 3000227206 I was talking about about chapter 4 not the story itself!

    :think: Sorry you were disappointed in the latest chapter, Anon. I hope you find the next installment more to your liking. Though, may I ask, what exactly were you disappointed by? Did you not like the new characters? Did you want Quinn to be more front-and-center? Too much travelogue? How do I get back in your good graces? :(

    I knew I was taking a chance with this chapter, but I really wanted it to be different from the previous ones. It was a conscious decision. I wanted to bring in some new characters to help Quinn carry the narrative, but maybe she got pushed too far into the background. I also knew it was taking a risk to indulge in all the world-building, too, but I did a lot of research about the Everglades and felt compelled to use as much as I could.

    Let me know where I went off the rails -- or if you liked the change of pace! (Somebody liked it, right? Right? Anybody?...) :help:

    Keep reading and commenting, folks! :Eye: :Eye:

    -Necro

  2. I just read and digested chapter 4. :fear: I am not into reading stories featuring the rape or molestation of minors. :mellow: Since I don't know the direction you are going with this, I am gong to bypass reading it for now. :unsure: I don't know how long Alice and her daddy will be featured but am skipping reading those particular chapters. :blink: I will return once story gets back to focusing on Quinn's sexual escapades. :thumbsup: Keep up the good work and happy writing. I am not criticizing it's just not something I like to read.

    :think:No problem at all, my friend. Go in peace. That's the reason for the warning tags -- to help folks steer clear material they wouldn't enjoy. I have no quarrel with anyone's personal tastes.

    Alice and Alan will be around for at least two more chapters, but I'll be sure to give you a heads-up whenever the story moves on from them. :wavey:

    Keep reading and commenting folks, even if you just want to express disappointmemt. All feedback helps! :)

    -Necro

  3. I have a fanfic about "Thomas (the Tank Engine) & Friends," a series that uses stop-motion animation, which is, of course, very different from cartoon or digital animation. Should I just post it in the TV section, S thrugh Z?

    Don't know how much of a demand there is for stop-motion animation, but should it maybe be a section or category or subcategory of its own, since it is something distinct?

    I only have the one little story myself, so if it's just me then the TV section would work.

    Thanks

  4. Hey, since you will be splitting chapter 4 into two parts, how soon will the second part (chapter 5) be posted?

    I'm probably going to hold off for a few days to give people time to digest Chapter 4 before adding Chapter 5. As I said, I thought it might be overwhelming as one big chunk, so I don't want to just go ahead and dump two big pieces on the same day. :thumbsup:

  5. Just in case anyone thinks my last reply was a bit of a dodge, I'll let y'all in on a bit of behind-the-scenes info...

    I was working on Chapter 4 this morning and thought I had it all worked out when I suddenly realized that I didn't. The story demanded something more, and by the time I was finished not only was the reworked chapter the longest one yet, it was very, very long!

    Now, I don't think it's fair to expect readers to slog through a 6,000-word chapter this early in the story, so I'm going to split it into two parts, which may not be equal in size. (Just for comparison, the chapters have been running about 4,000 words each.)

    The next installment(s) will be a bit of a change of pace, with more world-building and scene-setting. However, there's still non-consentual sex -- but of a very different (and very taboo) sort.

    Keep reading and commenting, folks! :Eye: :Eye:

    -Necro

  6. Hey, look who's back: It's SlapNuts! ^_^

    SlapNuts 2015-05-21 id # 3000227186 Yo, I was just wondering whether Quinn will be running into Mr. Sunglasses and friends again from the The Purple Dolphin. You don't have to answer because it's probably a spoiler and I will continue reading to find out. I was thinking they might come across her while she was wandering around the glades.......

    :think:Spoilers! :P

    Keep reading and commenting, folks! :Eye: :Eye:

    -Necro

  7. It's been a few days, but my story finally pulled in another review -- from someone with a name, no less! Yay! :dance:

    SlapNuts says:

    SlapNuts 2015-05-21 id # 3000227184 Dude, I would love to read more of Quinn's unfortunate series of events very soon. Will body modification be featured in this story?

    :think: So happy to hear that you want to read more about Quinn! The good news is, the next chapter is almost ready to post. I am just putting on the finishing touches and editing it. (Yes, I do my own beta reading/editing.) It's the longest chapter yet, and should be up in the next day or so!

    I'm afraid I'm not a real big fan of body modification. I like tattoos and some piercings on women (nipples, for example), but a lot of the more extreme stuff doesn't work for me. This is in no way a judgment of or criticism of anyone who is into that; I'm merely saying it's not a good choice for me. So, SlapNuts, you might see some piercing during this story, but nothing hard-core. Sorry. Hope you'll keep reading anyway, though!

    That's all for today!

    Keep reading and commenting, folks! :Eye: :Eye:

    - Necro

  8. Happy Saturday! I'm happy because my story got another review!

    It's from Anonymous -- but I have reason suspect it's a familiar reviewer with no name... ^_^

    Anon 2015-05-16 id # 3000227051 Um, yep, (Kennel Club) is definitely hard-core dog-on-girl material along with plenty of other creatures/species thrown in including Kangaroos, gorillas, snakes, starfish, cats, birds, and many, many, more. Hey, maybe you can devise a way for Quinn's boobs to be used as a milking machine too! Yup, that would be super awesome, lol. I guess I should feel sorry for Quinn (but I don't - she got herself into this mess so she's to blame for what's happening) I was wondering wouldn't it be way too funny for her to get arrested (much, much later - since I hope this is a super long story full of Quinn in lots of various states of unfortunate events) for the deaths of Maggie, Danny and Jeff.... her fingerprints and DNA must be all over the van.... then she could become jail bait for the other inmates and for those prison guard dogs!!!! Whoof, whoof, whoof! lol.

    :think: I haven't had a chance to delve very far into "Kennel Club," but now I really want to check out that exotic animal actions!

    Interesting point you make about Quinn getting herself into this mess in my story. Some may suggest that her only "crime" was walking into a bar; but she was looking for an interesting experience,,, I doubt she'll ever forget this trip. (Assuming she makes it out alive and sane) And she sneaked away, so nobody knows she's missing and nobody is looking for her. But who would think to look deep in the Everglades? Poor Quinn -- or not!

    Yeah, um, about those fingerprints and DNA at a crime scene... You haven't been reading ahead, have you? No, wait, that's not even possible since I haven't finished even writing the next chapter yet. (Get out of my head!) Hopefully what's coming will catch even you by surprise, Anon...

    Keep reading and commenting, folks! :Eye: :Eye:

  9. Thank you for your review on this story! and the other three on other stories!. You must have had an assload of free time :)

    "Assload of free time"? Hell, no! That's my problem... I start by taking a peek and get sucked down the rabbit hole! Before I know it, it's 3 a.m. and I have to be up at 5:30 to go to work, but there I am, reading about necrophiliacs, incestuous farmers in space and automaton rapists.

    Uhhhh... I may have a problem. :unsure:

  10. Leading off with yet another comment from Anonymous (jeez, that guy is prolific!):

    Anon 2015-05-14 id # 3000227005 Oh, in case you haven't read this story yet, I think you will enjoy it! Although, it's still a WIP and hasn't been updated in months but I am sure author will return some day to finish it. At least, I hope they will!

    http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107161

    :drool: You are correct, I am enjoying that story! Great call -- thank you! (In case you're curious, It's hard-core dog-on-girl material -- and plenty of it!) Would like to see more.

    Now a word from Nathan_Reed:

    Nathan_Reed 2015-05-15 id # 3000227032 I like this even though it's some what twisted. I remember reading another story sort of similar to your first chapter but not quite about a young man hitchhiking with a truck driver who dropped him off at an isolated bar somewhere in Mexico where the lad was subject to various forms of rapes/torture including fisting/object insertions while it's all being video taped and being raped by dogs. He was basically made into a cum dumpster whore but story was never finished. I think it was removed for some reason.

    :think: Only "somewhat twisted," Nathan? Guess I need to up my game!!

    Haven't seen that other story, but I'm sorta glad I'm not the only one who thinks of sick shit to write when daydreaming.

    Keep reading and commenting, folks! :Eye: :Eye:

  11. I'm back today with another interesting comment that was also filed yesterday, but came in after I had already posted. It seems the 13th was Quinn's lucky day for reader reactions. :D

    Reader Olaf wrote:

    Olaf 2015-05-13 id # 3000226991 Um, I don't know why but find this story pleasantly entertaining. I hope no one thinks I am a weirdo for liking it.

    :think: I'd like to think it's my amazing writing skill that has you enjoying the story, Olaf, but it's probably more that the events are... well, a little weird. I've tried to go off the beaten path a bit and find, if not an original spin then at least a less-used one, on some standard tropes. Just trying to write a story that I would like to read. And saying you find it "pleasantly entertaining" really brought a smile to my face. Thanks!

    And, while I have not been here a long time, I have no problem saying that this site is very tolerant and welcoming -- almost to a fault. If anybody does think you're weird, I believe they will probably keep it to themselves and just move along. This site seems to me to be very much a "live and let live" place, so I wouldn't worry. In fact, I don't worry -- I just write stories about women molested by animals and that's the way it is. (And it's going to get weirder...) And, for the record Olaf, I certainly don't think you're a weirdo. I think you are a person of refined taste!

    Keep reading and commenting, folks! :Eye: :Eye:

  12. Big day today, as Quinn's tale of woe has attracted not one but two great comments! :dance: :dance:

    The first Anonymous reader says:

    Anon 2015-05-13 id # 3000226975 I've been reading up on animals in the Florida Everglades to imagine what kind of creatures Quinn will come across that might molest her, lol. There are plenty of mammals, reptiles and amphibians plus plenty of other ones for you to choose from. I wonder whether there are any sort of clingy vines she might find herself stuck in. I hope you continue this and update soon.

    :think: Okay, another fan of molestation via animal! A swamp animal this time! I think I may have found my people! And clingy vines? Let's just say great minds tend to think alike...

    Next, another Anonymous reader:

    Anon 2015-05-13 id # 3000226980 Oh, I just saw your post for this story under the Promote a Story section of the forum but it would't let me leave a comment so I am letting you know that I want you to see more of Quinn's misadventures!

    :think: I'm glad you're eager to see more of Quinn. I promise I'm working on the next installment!

    Keep reading (and commenting) folks! :Eye: :Eye:

  13. For some strange reason when I registered I was under the impression that my Forum Username had to be different from my Archive pen name, so I used a shorter version. Now I realize that was not the case, so instead of NecroNOM, I'd like to use my full Archive pen name, NecroNOMNOMicon here. I figure it will be less confusing.

    Can I change it, or must a mod do it?

    Thanks in advance.

  14. The next review comes from a registered user!!

    JayDee 2015-05-11 id # 3000226922 I've read the three chapters up so far! I think Quinn is described very attractively in part 1, and I don't think I've seen one like this before where the story starts with dry humping like that - probably more realistic than the stories that start with full public penetration!

    Then, yeah, bad luck with the dogs and being grabbed by those assholes, but the bit with Maggie licking Quinn was hot. Sort of kharmic for the three assholes I see! I guess the drug actually helped her come through the crash 'cos she would have been a lot limper bodied.

    I will certainly try and check up for further updates.

    "They had not reanimated like zombies in a movie." - you can save that as an AU story for Halloween :P

    Thanks for reading, JayDee!

    I'd love to think I did something a bit original (or at least uncommon) with the opening chapter, but I was just trying to write something interesting that I would enjoy reading. I was thinking it seemed a bit more believeable than actual public penetration. And yes, Quinn is a hottie!!

    Yep, those three assholes definitely reaped what they sowed -- but at least some it was hot while it was happening. And how ironic that drug helped Quinn survive...

    Hope to see you around for further installments. Thanks for your great comments!

    Keep reading, folks! :Eye: :Eye:

  15. Welcome to my first review replies thread! I hope to be very busy here, and I hope everyone has fun.

    "The Chronicles of Quinn Kane" is all about the trials and tribulations of my OC, Quinn Kane, an up-and-coming young actress who has just about the worst luck possible.

    Read the story here: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107728

    My very first review comes from an anonymous reader:

    Anon 2015-05-10 id # 3000226902 Oh boy, this is interesting and I hope you continue it because I want to see what happens to her next.

    Thanks for reading, Anon, and thanks even more sharing your opinion!

    I'm so happy you've enjoyed the craziness that has befallen Quinn so far and are interested in what happens to her next!

    I have a good idea what's in her immediate future and I'm working on the next chapter now, but I will drop this hint: more of the same, but different.

    Keep reading, folks! :Eye: :Eye:

  16. It's alive! Alive!

    I have just published my first Original Fiction here, "The Chonicles of Quinn Kane," which relates the exploits of my OC, Quinn, who is an up-and-coming movie star, and not a stand-in for any well-known Hollywood personality you may think of. Despite her total originality, some readers may imagine they see a similarity to a story previously published hereabouts called "The Misadventures of Vanessa Hudgens." Those people would be wrong, as that story no longer exists in the Celebrity Fiction category, and did not undergo a rewriting and come out the other end as Original Fiction. Oh, no, not at all. Of course.

    Anyway, here are the particulars:

    Author: NecroNOMNOMicon
    Title: The Chronicles of Quinn Kane
    Summary: When rising starlet Quinn Kane entered that bar that night, she only wanted to prepare for a role -- she never intended to be humiliated, abused and sexually violated in the worst ways possible by man and beast!
    Feedback: I would love any and all reviews and/or comments
    Fandom: Original
    Pairing: N/A
    Warnings: Abuse,Anal,Angst,Beast,Bi,DP,Fet,Humil,MiCD,Oral,Rape,SH,Violence,Voy,WIP
    Solo story or chaptered story:
    Chaptered (3 installments so far...)
    URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107728

    I hope as many people as possible can take a look at this story. It would be extra-special amazing to get some reviews, comment or feedback of any kind. Whether you comment or not, I thank you for taking the time to read, and I hope you enjoy the story.

    Let me know if you want to see more of Quinn's misadventures...

  17. I can appreciate the feelings you both have, but I assure you both that I did not feel pressured or censored -- if you actually knew me in real life you'd know that I am a staunch champion of free expression, almost to a fault, and would never even consider bowing to censorship. So you are hereby absolved of guilt in this matter. Only I am to blame for the stuff I do. And I decided the stories aren't worth the potential hurt feelings.

    As I indicated, I am reworking both stories, and they are almost finished. I actually decided to meld them and make the former-Hailee story a future new chapter in the former-Vanessa story, which now has an OC main character. After thinking about it I realized that changing the stories to Original Fiction would allow them to go in some different directions, which is creatively freeing.

    On balance, I think this whole affair is a step forward. Thanks for your input, BronxWench and JayDee!

    PS: In the (highly) unlikely event that I actually do have (heretofor silent) fans, please do not devour JayDee, who only meant well. ;)

  18. Just wanted to give folks a heads-up: "The Misadventures of Vanessa Hudgens" will cease to exist. I have removed it from the archives.

    I may possibly rework it into an original fiction, but it will, of course, no longer star Ms. Hudgens.

    My sincere thanks to all the people who took the time to read it!

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