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Chapter 7 is live and waiting for you! FINALLY! At long last, that cliff-hanger is resolved! :dance: Sorry for the long delay, but real life has been kicking my ass... I hope someone remembers this story... And my discussion thread is here: http://www2.adult-fa...review-replies/

Answers for your questions... No, that was not the purpose of using [Discontinuity], which also shows up in Chapter 3. The word itself means a break in time or sequence of events. I use it to mean that an unknown amount of time has taken place. For instance, when the van crashed, Quinn had no idea how long she'd been unconscious, so I decided that readers should not know either. (Was it couple of hours or 24 hours?) And brace yourself: Alan isn't quite out of the story yet. He's still got another chapter in him -- but all in service of Quinn's tale. Again, in the latest chapter, who knows how long Quinn was unconscious? I think it helps add a little suspense if the readers don't know that only two hours passed -- or was it two days? How long has she been missing? The longer somebody is missing, the less likely it is that she will be found -- and she is way past the 24-36 hour window during which most missing-person cases are solved. And, think about it: Is she still at Amaury's home or somewhere else now? Has she been fired from "Bikini Spring" for disappearing? As for the peanut butter line, I think she kinda mumbled it quietly to herself, but it's fine if you interpreted it as something she was thinking to herself. Maybe I should change the styl and make her thoughts in italics so there is less confusion. Chapter 7 is in the works, but it is coming along slowly. I have been very busy with real-life crap that is sucking up my time and will power. What did you think of ending Chapter 6 on a cliff-hanger? -NecroNOMNOMicon

Oh, another VIP review... two in a row! pittwitch 2015-05-29 id # 3000045100 Mwahahaha! She definitely cracked! Well played. Well played indeed. Well, Kate was rather tightly wound, so her head was bound to explode on its own at some point! That's my story, and I'm sticking to it! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you! -NecroNOMNOMicon

This next reader is on to me! Uh-oh... BronxWench 2015-05-29 id # 3000045099 Ah, there is a trend to your drabbles! Bloodthirsty author... Neat and efficient, both the action and the use of the prompts. Bravo! Bloodthirsty? Me? No idea what you're talking about. *turns away* "Bartender? Another pint of A-negative, please... *turns back* You were saying...? Seriously, though, thank you! Glad you like it! -NecroNOMNOMicon

Awesome!

Chapter 6 brought these thoughts from thoughtful reader Katniss Everdeen (there's that name again...) Katniss Everdeen 2015-05-29 id # 3000227353 Wow, I didn't see that coming! I wish I could jump into story and rescue Alice from their clutches. As for Quinn, I have nagging feeling she's going to be introduced to something she's never experienced before and that Claire & Fleur will be willing participants. As I stated before, I usually don't go for these types of stories and believe me I read & review tons of other stories here but this genre is a first time for me. I still can't believe I am reading a story like this and liking it so does that mean I am going to Hell when I die? I guess I should be going to confession and repent, LOL. I'll bet Alice wishes you could help her, too. Maybe you'll see her again someplace. (Do they have Hunger Games in Florida?) Quinn is in for an education, that's for sure! And someone has to show her the ropes (pun intended)... I can't tell you how happy I am that you are sticking around!! For my own edification, when you say that this a first for you in "this genre," do you mean bestiality? If you think you're going to Hell for reading this story, where am I going for writing it? As I tell so many of my real-life friends, I'll save a chair for you in Hell, right next to the fireplace! -NecroNOMNOMicon

The honor of the first review goes to a familiar face... JayDee! JayDee 2015-05-29 id # 3000045098 Not sure if it is just my browser (firefox) but there appears to be an issue with the format in the subject when going though your author profile - a question mark in a diamond? It's not on the movies page though. I like the punny title! I never saw the film, so I don't know how the characters are but this took a sudden and unexpected turn. My fault for not checking the codes I guess Certainly fits the evil part of the prompt and I can picture the mess on the ice pretty clearly. Good try at the prompt! Thanks for the formatting heads-up! I also use Firefox but didn't follow my own link, so that's how the formatting gremlin sneaked in there. The browser evidently disliked the dash and substituted its own glyph. I removed the dash and voila, it works now. I hate to break it to you, but Doug actually behaves very out-of-character here! By this point in the movie he is totally in love with Kate (and so am I) so he would never bash her brains out, for any amount of money. I wrote him that way just to be... *pinkie to mouth* Eeeeeeevil! Finally, have my stories taught you nothing? ALWAYS CHECK THE CODES when you see my pen name! My nickname should be "the Traumatizer"! -NecroNOMNOMicon

Here is my latest story, based upon the 1992 movie "The Cutting Edge." It's called "The Ice Queen Cracks," and it's just a drabble, which means it's only 100 words. C'mon, you have time to read a little 100-word story! Pen name: NecroNOMNOMicon Story Link: http://movies.adult-...hp?no=600095039 Review Replies: http://www2.adult-fa...e-cutting-edge/ Type of fic: Drabble, 100 words exactly! Rating: Adult+ Fandom: The Cutting Edge Pairing: Kate & Doug Warnings: Violence, NoSex After you've read it, we can discuss it! Fun!

This is where we can discuss my Drabble based upon "The Cutting Edge" -- "The Ice Queen Cracks" The story can be found here: http://movies.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095039

Pen name: NecroNOMNOMicon Story Link: http://movies.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095039 Review Replies: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/59935-necronomnomicons-review-replies-for-the-ice-queen-cracks-the-cutting-edge/ Type of fic: Drabble, 100 words exactly! Rating: Adult+ Fandom: The Cutting Edge Pairing: Kate & Doug Warnings: Violence, NoSex

I have a request for a new category... Category name: Cutting Edge, The Section category to be in: Movies Subcategory: 1 through F Do you have a story for it?: Yes Please and thank you! -NecroNOMNOMicon

Next up, frequent correspondent SlapNuts! SlapNuts 2015-05-28 id # 3000227344 I think we are getting back to some of the good stuff! Yup, Quinn is going to be stuffed just like she was destined to be. Oh, oh, oh, Claire knows who Quinn Kane is!!!!!!!! Well, Quinn wanted to be a movie star and I think she just got her wish, LOL. Yes, we are definitely getting back to the good stuff, with Quinn back in the spotlight, just where she belongs! Stuffed... and overstuffed, as the case may be... Yes, Claire knows who Quinn is, but just what does that mean for the hapless movie star? Yes, Quinn is about to be introduced to a different segment of filmmaking... where it's possible she may become a big star! Keep reading and reviewing, folks! :Eye: -Necro

Next, let's welcome a new reader! Registered member CL.Mustafic has some thoughtful commentary: CL.Mustafic 2015-05-28 id # 3000227340 Let me preface this by saying that I kind of figured that this story would be a bit outside of my comfort zone when I began reading it. I'm going to try not to let my dislike of some of the subject matter color my review of your actual writing. I think that your style is very good. I'm not one that goes for overly descriptive writing ie some times a chair's just a chair I don't need to know the color and texture of it unless it's some thing crucial to the story. I think you strike a good balance of being descriptive enough so I can picture the scene without going overboard. I also liked that given the subject of the story it didn't just read like porn, there was an actual story behind it. I didn't see too many mistakes either with your grammar or word usage so that was refreshing. All in all if you wrote something that didn't make me squick out I'd probably read it. But to each their own and good on ya for writing what you want and putting it out there for people like me to dislike. LOL I'm kidding really it didn't freak me out too much just a bit. I also know it was my choice to read it and just so you know, I'd do it again. CL Thanks for giving my story a chance and being a big enough person to put aside your personal preferences in order to give the story a fair shake. That's very cool of you! It is tough to balance descriptive writing with overwriting -- and, heck, sometimes I just feel like rambling on and on because I'm into it -- so I'm glad you can appreciate some necessary detail when some folks just want to get to the dirty part. I do really want this to be a story, not PWP porn. There's still plenty of dirty stuff, but I like to there's also something to give fans of the particular fetish more than just porn. I like to do a read on the story that is just for grammar and spelling, and it is frustrating when I go back to check a posted chapter and find a mistake. It really bothers me!! Very pleased that you were willing to fight your squick factor and power through a read. It sounds like you enjoyed it to the degree possible, and that makes me happy. Again, thanks for making the effort! Keep reading and reviewing, folks! :Eye: -Necro

Chapter 6 is live now, and it has started to bring in some comments! First up is Anon: Anon 2015-05-28 id # 3000227338 "Bye, bye, Alice and I hope you get your own story one day!" "Alan, I hope you don't become fodder for the gators." Now, we are back to the action and Quinn is taking dead center stage once again. She was born for this and it's the role of a lifetime for her. Awe, I love Golden's but just can't picture them hurting a fly let alone Quinn but Doggies do love their peanut butter. I love cliffhangers as long as the wait to find out what happens next isn't too long. Yes, Quinn is now back in the spotlight. As for the Golden retriever, I'm sure he means no harm. It's just the wonder peanut butter... The.. the.... peanutbutterpeanutbutterpeanutbutterpeanutbutterpeanutbutterpeanutbutterpeanutbutterpeanutbutterpeanutbutter Keep reading and reviewing, folks! :Eye: -Necro

Yay! Thank you!!

Yay! I hope you like it!

It has finally been published! The long-awaited sixth chapter in the epic "Chronicles of Quinn Kane" series was just published! Featuring -- by popular demand -- the final appearance of Alice, the little girl who divided a fandom. What is Alice's final fate? Does she die an unlikely heroine? Does she go out like a little bitch? Or -- most shocking of all -- does she live?!?!?! Does she exist inside a snowglobe, or is she is bed with Bob Newhart? If you're betting she's at peace in a hippie commune... well, you lose. And what about her father? Does Alan drown in the bathtub or get elected president? Does Quinn kick him off a moving vehicle or hang him on a meat hook? Will he ever learn to play chess? Warning: Any, all or none of the above scenarios may or may not actually happen! You have been warned! Keep reading and reviewing, folks! :Eye: -Necro

It's here! It's here! Chapter 6 is now live!!!! This chapter features the eagerly awaited departure of controversial character Alice. It also features a new story-telling device for the very first time: an actual cliff-hanger ending!!!! Go read it and let me know what you think (for good or ill...) My discussion thread is here: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/59823-chronicles-of-quinn-kane-review-replies/

Awesome, Guest, I'm glad you're psyched about the next chapter. So am I!

Here's a timely chime-in... Your friend and mine, the prolific Anonymous, asks: Anon 2015-05-27 id # 3000227318 How is chapter 6 coming along? Will it be posted soon? Are you still going to continue this story or were you too upset with what you thought were negative reviews and have decided to put it on hold for now? I wasn't complaining just didn't like the addition of Alice and her father, and wanted the story to focus on the perils of Quinn, and only Quinn, which is what attracted me in the first place. I guess when a child enters the picture it makes the story seem to real and it's not as fun to read. Funny you should ask, Anon, as I just finished writing Chapter 6 not an hour ago. It's currently marinating in its own juices while I take a break to clear out the old grey matter and give my eyes a break. I'll go back to it in a little and do all the editing. With luck, it will be posted tomorrow. The story is definitely still on track; still going where it was always headed -- but with an alteration of cast. Alice makes her final appearance in Chapter 6, so get ready to pop the champagne, all you Alice haters! The focus will remain on Quinn and only Quinn -- but I am adamant that she has a supporting cast to play off and to keep things interesting. Trust me, readers. I will be checking ID's at the door, and no one under 18 gets into the story. You do raise an interesting point, Anon, to wit: adding a child making the story seem more real and not as much of a lark. I hadn't considered that. Perhaps a child makes some people instinctively more protective of a character than they would be about an adult. Indeed, someone in this thread suggested that Quinn brought all these unfortunate events on herself! Surely they'd never say that about a kid! I wouldn't mind hearing from others their reasons for not liking the introduction of Alice. Too real? Too over-the-top in the opposite direction? Not a good idea to mix fetishes/taboos? Don't worry, she's gone for good; I'm just interested in where I went wrong. Alons-y, Quinn! Keep reading and reviewing, folks! :Eye: -Necro

I think I would call it, "The Package Deal," which references the agreement he was forced into as well as calling the male bits "a package," and... and... no? Oh, well... what about... This one only works if your son character is named Max: "Mad Max: Fury Choad" Or, how about: "Not Mother of the Year" "What I Did on My Summer Vacation" "How to Succeed in Gay Porn Without Really Trying" "Rimming for No Fun or Profit" "I Suck at This" "The Obligation" I'll be here all week, folks! Tip your waitress! Note for concerned observers: I'm not ridiculing people; just trying to come up with a clever line. No offense intended!!

Hope everyone in the USA had an enjoyable Memorial Day today. My story got a review that really made my holiday... One Katniss Everdeen (Where have I heard that name before?) had this confession to share... Katniss Everdeen 2015-05-25 id # 3000227274 Hello and Happy Memorial Day! I don't usually read stories featuring a female protagonist in these types of situations which is usually taboo with me but told myself to be brave and to just go ahead and click the story to find out what it was all about. I can now proudly admit that I did and thanks to you I have discovered a new fandom that I had thought I would never actually enjoy reading. I look forward to seeing how this progresses. It's my new secret addiction thanks to you. Aw, Katniss, I am so glad that you decided to be brave, and that you chose my story on which to take a chance!! It's terrific that you've discovered something new that you can enjoy. (And don't worry, your secret is safe with me...) I will do my best to keep the story entertaining. I don't want to let down any of my readers. Thanks again... Keep reading and reviewing, folks! :Eye: -Necro

I find haiku extremely difficult, and I'm never happy with my results. I like doing drabbles, and I'm usually happy with the results (even if no one else is),