NecroNOMNOMicon

Here is my entry (belated as it is...) Pen Name: NecroNOMNOMicon Story Link: http://comics.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600061364 Story Type: Drabble Rating: SFW Fandom: Little Orphan Annie Pairing: N/A Warnings: None, it's quite tame

Correct. So, to follow the rules... Category name: Little Orphan Annie Section category to be in: Comic Strips Do you have any stories for it?: Yes thanks!

I'm going for broke here! Not a mere category request, but rather a Section request... I think AFF would benefit from having a totally new section: Comic Strips. This would be for newspaper comic strips, which are very different from comic books and cartoons. We’re talking “Little Orphan Annie,” “Dick Tracy,” “Prince Valiant,” "Boondocks," "Bloom County"... the list goes on and on... I currently have one story written – it’s a drabble about Little Orphan Annie, which I penned before I realized that no section for comic strips exists. I understand that the threshold for category creation is the existence of five stories, but perhaps if this new section were created first, it would encourage the writing of more stories suitable for it? In the event that this request is turned down, where would you suggest a comic strip story be placed? Thank you for at least considering it.

Hello and welcome to the review (and comments) reply thread for my new original fiction, "Waterlogged: Making Waves." This will be the evolving story of my new OCs, Piper and her Uncle Jim, as they explore the intriguing world of water sports! First, read the story here: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108043 Now go crazy with reviews, comments, potshots, brickbats, complaints or words of praise in this thread! Thanks for reading!

It's a new year (2016) and I'm trying to make a new me! To that end, I have written a new original erotic story, called "Waterlogged: Making Waves," which I hope to keep adding to as the year goes on. This story is all-new, and has no bestiality elements at all... instead, the focus will be on water sports. And the main character will be 15-year-old Piper -- hence the Minor2 warning (there is a brief reference to her at a younger age, so I included Minor1 out of an abundance of caution). This story is obviously not for everyone, but hope those who are interested will enjoy it. Here are the deets: Author: NecroNOMNOMicon Title: Waterlogged: Making Waves Summary: Jim discovers his niece Piper has an insatiable thirst for water sport! Feedback: I would love any and all reviews and/or comments Fandom: Original Pairing: N/A Warnings: Fet, Inc, M/f, Minor1, Minor2, WIP, WS Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered URL: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600108043 Review Replies: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/61804-waterlogged-making-waves-review-replies/ I hope people will take a look at it, since it's a new genre for me. As always, It would be extra-special amazing to get some reviews, comment or feedback of any kind. Whether you comment or not, I thank you for taking the time to read, and I hope you enjoy the story!!!!

Another review for my little drabble... BronxWench 2015-07-07 id # 3000043588 Lovely, bloodthirsty as ever, and very deftly done! The prompts blended in so well, and this was a perfect little continuation of the Match Girl's trials. ::applauds:: Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I was trying to think of something off-the-wall for the latest prompts when it suddenly occurred to me that there are harpies in hell, and when I double-checked that they are in the Wood of Suicides, it all fell together. (Shame on Hans Christian Andersen for white-washing the story!) -Necro

Another chapter is up (Chapter 9) and I am lucky enough to get another review! JayDee 2015-07-07 id # 3000227996 Using the Ankh symbol in that way is a pretty cool idea, figured it was a flash forward until the puppies, then I wasn't sure... I know an American Bulldog and it is very strong, made me wince a little to think about one of those going for it - think you're probably involving her trauma over it all in a more realistic way than most. I guess there'll be a knotting at some point? I am not ashamed to say that I blatantly st-- er, borrowed the Ankh symbolism for death from the brilliant Neil Gaiman, whose wonderful personification of Death in the "Sandman" series wears one all the time. It's an homage, Neil, really! (pleasedon'tsuepleasedon'tsue) Yeah, the American bulldog can be scary strong. And you know another strong breed -- the mastiff. Holy smokes, those things can pull a fully grown man on the other end of a leash! I wonder what Quinn thinks of that fact? I also wonder how she's going to get through this latestest flashback-induced trauma. Well, at least we can count on Remy and Amaury to be sensitive to her needs, right? Right? Uh, guys...? -NecroNOMNOMicon

Thanks. Good to know.

JayDee is first in line... JayDee 2015-07-05 id # 3000043586 "The Wood of Suicides has changed since my last visit to hell. I remember it as a tiny grove. Now it resembles a forest." ~The Sandman.This drabble's about as dark and bleak as it gets. Can there be no redemption for the girl? No hope at all? Well, not everybody gets a happy ending. Certainly not when I'm writing. Perhaps the prompts will show mercy... You've really got the horror vibe nailed though, it's a really spooky 100 words. Sadly, there really is no redemption for her. In fact, things actually get worse, if Dante is to be believed! On Judgment Day, when all dead souls are reunited with their bodies, the Suicides don't get to reinhabit them. Instead, their bodies are hung on the trees and tangled in the branches -- so close and yet so far... The reason: "You didn't want your body in life, so you can't have it now!" I'm really glad you got a sense of horror, since that fate seems so terrible to me. Happy I was able to impart that vibe! -NecroNOMNOMicon

Well, for one thing, getting lobotomized was part of her "sacrifice," which led to the great victory of helping Sweet Pea escape, as prophesized by the Wise Man. In the second place, the High Roller (the alter ego of the Doctor) promised her escape from her (real world) life of torment by surrendering and honestly giving herself to him. Babydoll wanted nothing to do with the real world, in which her mother and sister were dead, her stepfather wanted to bang her and she was being sexually molested by Blue and the Lennox House staff, There was no incentive for her to resist lobotomization. However, escaping into her fantasy world, where she was the badest of the badasses, was her form of victory. She's happy now. Her real-world body is "asleep" (not dead) and her mind is happy. Babydoll being actually insane is another valid interpretation of the movie, because [spoiler WARNING] Dr. Gorski (in the real world) points out that Babydoll really did set a fire in the janitor's closet, help another inmate escape and stab an orderly, Love that movie... I have another "Sucker Punch" story (a proper, long one) gestating...

This is the thread in which I will discuss my story "Hung Out to Cry" -- the final fate of the Little Match Girl. Read the story here: http://books.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095507

Pen Name: NecroNOMNOMicon Story link: http://books.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095507 Review Reply Thread: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/60207-hung-out-to-cry-review-replies-by-necronomnomicon/#entry376754 Type of fic: Drabble Rating: SFW Fandom: Hans Christian Andersen Warnings: ChallengeFic, COMPLETE, MCD, NoSex, Oneshot, Violence

I'm the first to admit that my HTML skills have a layer of rust on them, but I have been trying for a couple of hours now to create HTML links in a post here in the forum (and at A-FF.org), but I cannot get any of it to work. (Basically, all the HTML coding is visible in the post and the link doesn't work, instead of the coding being hidden and the link working.) Which leads me to the obvious question: Does HTML coding actually work here?

Hooray to JayDee for following through and watching the movie! Now, some thoughts: JayDee 2015-07-04 id # 3000045121 Finally saw the film. Fantasy or not, those ladies were frankly under dressed for trench warfare. The Drabble! I see which scene it's based on now, I see how you're capturing them ending up so close so quickly, it's a good extension on the feelings in the film. Good in 100 words! This review makes me so happy I can't even!!!! For one thing, I'm glad you watched the (underrated IMHO) movie. And then you came back and looked at the drabble! I'm so happy you realized what I was going for with this tiny scene. Thank you! -NecroNOMNOMicon

Finally! Chapter 9 has been posted and is now ready for your perusal here: http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107728&chapter=9 This was a tough chapter to get down on paper (so to speak) because I was halfway through writing it when the characters convinced me to trash it and start over!!!! (That's sorta why it took so long...)

Readers of Andersen's day didn't agree with him either. From what I understand, the story was not greeted with holiday good cheer and he was confused and non-plussed by the cold reception. He didn't understand why no one else saw it as a happy ending. For what it's worth, I don't see it as a happy ending, either. (My version is just more obvious and less elegant.)

Look, another review! Writers rock! JayDee 2015-06-27 id # 3000043573 The Little Match Girl story always kind've pissed me off. I think Terry Pratchett's go at it in the book Hogfather was pretty much on the money. She basically dies so everyone else can feel good about their Christmas, instead of "Shit! We oughta do something 'bout helping the orphans!". Taking this route on it she's at least choosing her own destiny. S'like a buddhist monk protest, with pretty much the same reaction from the passersby. The story is an uncomfortable one, calling to mind thoughts of the "inconvenience" of the homeless. The crowds feel sorry for her after she's dead, but nobody thought to help her while she was still alive. As Andersen writes: "Nobody had bought anything of her the whole livelong day; no one had given her a single farthing." However, Andersen himself thought the story had a happy ending because the little girl went to heaven: "No one had the slightest suspicion of what beautiful things she had seen; no one even dreamed of the splendor in which, with her grandmother she had entered on the joys of a new year." -NecroNOMNOMicon

Loyal reader JayDee is back with more thoughts... JayDee 2015-06-27 id # 3000227853 "It’s only inhumane when a dog has to fuck an ugly chick,” - Oh come on! Dog's have way different standards of beauty! A dog's standard is "Is she in heat?" "If not, can I somehow stick it in anyway?" Dogs are the frat boys of the animal world. Oh, wow, I made that note then kept reading and saw you covered standards in the very next bit of dialogue. I hadn't scrolled to it. That's a little scary! Thought it was funny how Claire was trying to comfort her over the previous gang rape and Remy's just missing the point completely. Ahh, the dog paw tattoo. I've seen that in a few things. I still like the idea of calling it the " Bark Mark" for Harry Potter stuff. Hot orgasm with the dog, then funny again when he joins the kiss! Still enjoying the heck out of it. I suppose this means great minds think alike -- but then, what's our excuse? Seriously, though, it's a case of a reader asking a logical question raised by dialogue; and that same question occurred to me as I wrote the line. Why would a dog share human standards of beauty? It's just logical. Remy... he's kind of a lunkahead. Not mean-spirited, he just doesn't think things through, like that line that offended Fleur. Gotta go with the paw tattoo, because I've se-- I mean, I've heard about it being in actual doggie videos. I'm not familiar with a whole lot of Potter fanfic, so I'm guessing they use a similar tattoo for werewolf lovers? "Bark mark" is a great name for it! And there was a commenter a while back who was interested in body modification. I hope tattooing qualifies... Akira is a friendly pup! I couldn't be more pleased that you are still enjoying this story!! -NecroNOMNOMicon

As long as I get the selfie first, the murder won't seem so horrible...

Sorry, no lunches high up in the air. Unless you fancy seeing my lunch twice... As for St. Paul's Cathedral... um, NO. Because Cybermen! -NecroNOMNOMicon

The truth is, my head spins and my knees get weak if I stand on a chair, so once I'm up that high a few storeys isn't going to make much difference to my fevered brain and pounding heart. It's all bad...

For some reason, "jealous husband with a gun" keeps running through my mind... However, it's far more likely that I will be done in by a panic-induced heart attack after being bitten by a huge-but-harmless spider while standing atop a ladder on the observation deck of the Empire State Building -- thus succumbing to my two worst fears, spiders and heights!