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  1. Fate: Gamer Night - Shota Edition

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    Apologies. There was a loss in the family, my day job has gone in hyper drive and I also taken commission writing elsewhere, so my hands are a bit tied.

    However I did manage to write a few thousand words, mostly another scene with Saeko and an insight in Taiga’s increasing attraction for Shirou. I hope to have something worth reading soon.

  4. Guyver/Evangelion Crossover (with Harem)

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    I do understand, I just don’t agree with it as it doesn’t tickle my writing taste buds. When I do crossover, I try to remain as faithful to the original material as possible, so butchering Chronos to make the Angels sympathetic doesn’t really suit me.

    Anyway, currently I’m too busy to take on this challenge, but if the plot bunny doesn’t leave me alone I’ll give it a shot. So far, it put me in the mood to read Guyver again, so who knows?

  5. Guyver/Evangelion Crossover (with Harem)

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    Lovely concepts. I’m an old time fan of Guyver and I couldn’t help be interested in the idea. Here a few suggestions of my own if you are interested.

    1. The purpose of Chronos is to find and destroy the Creators who had fled Earth when the 1st Guyver showed that he was freed of their control and more powerful than they thought, at which point they tried to obliterate Earth via meteorite. It wouldn’t make any sense for the Angels to fight against Chronos/Seele if they too are against the creators. It would make more sense if they were the Creators’ 3rd attempt at eradicating humanity (wink wink: 1st impact, 2nd impact etc ect where all attempts at correcting the “human mistake”).
    2. In the manga, Chronos while still a bunch of dickbags, helped humanity to end world hunger, advanced medical technology by leaps and bounds, and while they could have enslaved everyone, they made becoming Zoanoids a voluntary process. So, unless you were a Guyver or one of the hapless dude in the army at the time of the global conquest, they would be very nice guys. It doesn’t make sense for them to be antagonist instead of the Angels.
    3. Gendo could very well be a Zoalord, tasked to keep the Angels at bay while they work on their Ark project to bring the fight back to them on their home planet. Of course, Gendo being Gendo, he has every intention of setting a course for humanity himself, one freed of both the Creators and Chronos. Now, Alkanphel, the leader of Chronos, knows that Gendo isn’t one to be trusted, so he makes a dick move of his own and turns Shinji into a Zoanoid himself, only the project gets screwed up and he turns out as a Lost Number (a Zoanoid that’s immune to the Zoalord’s control). Still, he’s more or less loyal to Chronos and accept the task of infiltrating the Nerv and act as a pilot, just because he kind of hates Gendo. 
    4. Gendo, knowing that he can compete with Alkanphel and all of Chronos, steals the Guyver armor for himself but it’s Shinji who ends up activating it as he tries to retrieve it for Chronos. 
    5. In the meantime, another group comes into play. A terrorist/resistance group, the Zeus Thunderbolts, lead by Agito Makishima, the user of another Guyver unit. He wishes for supreme control and power for himself and leads a ragtag group composed by people that had been screwed over by Chronos. He seeks to derail 3rd impact for himself and become a God.
    6. Lastly, Guyver units are SUPER-DUPER-powerful. There can’t be that many laying around, so you should pick who gets to have one other than Shinji. Asuka? Personally I think her shtick should be being the best EVA pilot in the series. Rei? She’s part Angel so she shouldn’t need the unit to keep up with anyone. Ritsuko? As much as I love the fake blonde, she’s not much of a fighting spirit. She could be some Zoanoid chick like Griselda, loyal to Gendo (or at least she looks like it). Misato? Now, she’s a soldier, totally unaware of Chronos and the Creators. She has a desire for revenge herself and she hates not being able to fight the good fight. Finding one of the Guyver Units could change that, as well as put her into the position where she is coveted by all parties.

    So, we have a four way conflict, with Chronos that seeks to protect and harness humanity against the Creators, Gendo who wishes to set humanity free from all parties, Agito that pretends to have the same goal but he’s actually in it only for himself and lastly the Angels, while Shinji can’t get to decide where his loyalties lay, Asuka doesn’t know what’s what anymore, Rei tries to figure what the hell she is and Misato that must understand what’s best for herself and the people she cares about.

    How’s that for an outline?

  13. Fate: Gamer Night - Shota Edition

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    21 minutes ago, Wandering_Moth said:

    So Saeko will be a recurring character outside of her quest then? I never quite understood how you were going to handle guest characters, whether you’d bother including them in scenes once their quest is finished or not.

    Their Quests may be concluded, but some of them will be supporting character where applicable. For instance, Saeko will play a part in Yourouchi’s and Morrigan’s Quest.

  18. Fate: Gamer Night - Shota Edition

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    5 minutes ago, Wandering_Moth said:

    Hey Ichasennin, I’m just wondering if you decided to use the one of the pictures that was posted a while back for Morgana’s design because I think I found a suitable one myself.

    https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2249640

    https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2310663

    https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2338054

    Her aesthetic appearance would mesh well with the Nasuverse better than the previous examples I think, especially her complicated clothing. Might not suit Morgana herself, but then again Martha doesn’t look like she’s in suitable attire either.

     

    Hm, nice outfits. Although, it’s too early to discuss about that. I still hope that FGO will give us a canon appearance (please don’t be another saberface)

     

    3 hours ago, warellis said:

    What was your commision?

    An original story. Can’t really talk about it

  23. Fate: Gamer Night - Shota Edition

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    5 minutes ago, warellis said:

    Cool.

    Actually in FSN, Shirou had just turned 18 not to long ago, within the year at least, with Rin turning 18 during the events of the game. Second-year in highschool in Japan means you're 17. That's why both are third years in FHA, which takes place half a year after FSN, since they're both 18 by then.

    15-16 years old would mean both were going to be entering high school, or were first-year students in highschool.

    As for Nerve Circuits vs Magic Circuits, I was just figuring Shirou could use his Gamer abilities to figure out his normal Circuits faster and be able to use them more and more efficiently without having to go through the messy dangers of Nerve Circuits.

    I just checked Wikipedia. Have a look here. The second year in highschool is 16-17. Anyway, no one was sure what age Shirou was so I’m making it up. 

    Anyway, even if Shirou figures out how to use his native Circuits, Nerve Circuits are still better. Remember, Shirou cannot cast a spell with an MP requirement higher than his active Circuit count. For instance, unless he deploys UBW, he could not trace more than 27 blades at the same time, because that his natural max output. However, he can artifically increase it with Nerve Circuits, which incidentally (at lv. 100) will grant 1 additional MP in exchange of 1 HP upon creation.

    4 minutes ago, VotedforKodos said:

    I’m pretty sure Shirou and Rin are 17 and Sakura is 16, because the standing joke was that Illya was the only one who was actually 18. Although Shirou’s age is totally vague and up in the air, given the fire.

     

    I just imagine Kirei hurting himself laughing too hard when he finds out about Shirou NTR-ing Kayneth’s wife and Servant, remembering how Diarmuid unintentionally stole Sola-ui in the Fourth War.

     

    And meeting the Demon Hunting Association? So can we look forward to Shirou meeting those families that are involved with it? The Ryougis, Asagamis, and Fujous? And the Tohnos, given they’re hybrids and have the last Nanaya?

    Well, I suppose they could have their own cameo, but those are all side-quests that I’d rather use to focus on the secondary female characters from the crossovers and the monster girls (as opponents and for the bad ends). Most of what Shirou is going to do will happens in the figurative cracks of the Moonlit worlds, all those supernatural events that are too small and quickly solved and thus don’t require the attention of the big shots like the Mage Association and the Church.

    The demon hunter association is a conglomeration of small clans that sometimes will outsource their jobs to freelancers.

  24. Fate: Gamer Night - Shota Edition

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    On 11/9/2016 at 9:36 AM, warellis said:

    Just to tell you, Shirou was 7 at the end of Fate/Zero, not 5. So Rin would be 13 and Sakura 12 at the end of Fate/Zero here.

    Also Nerve Circuits are dangerous. If you fuck up your circuits, you can damage them and that's often permenant damage. Really, with Shirou's Gamer abilities here, I could imagine him figuring out how to open his Circuits correctly here on his own.

    Also I’m really stoked at seeing when Saeko finally just grabs Shirou and fucks his brains out here!

     

    I forget, do you plan on having Kirei replaced by Caren here?

    Hmm. Ten years passed between F/Z and F/SN. Shirou at the time is in his second year of highschool which, if I’m not mistaken, happens around 15-16 years of age.

    You are correct in regards to Nerve Circuits. Making one is sacrificing an actual nerve, so eventually he’d become a cripple if he kept it up. However, with the Gamer Body his health is completely restored once he sleeps. In fact, thanks to [DIE HARD] even with 0 HP, if he makes it to the bed before his stamina runs out he’ll be right as rain.

    I don’t intend to replace Kirei, are you kidding. Shirou is going to NTR a few master and generally fuck with other people’s plans and women. Kirei is in for a party. Plus I still need a few villain. 

    That doesn’t mean I can’t have Caren around as well, isn’t it? B-)

     

    18 hours ago, VotedforKodos said:

    On the note of the story, glad to see Shirou thinking about the consequences of showing off what his improved stats let him do, and actual internal conflict from Saeko, instead of just immediate and unstoppable shota lust. Though the developing Sense the Unnatural makes me curious, will Shirou wind up getting involved with the supernatural before the Grail War starts?

    Yep. SPOILER: Saeko is actually a pseudo demon-hunter. She exorcised the undead spirits that manifests in the forest around her house as a result of the leyline. Being out of Fuyuki proper, the Second Owner (Rin) isn’t aware of it. From there Saeko will introduce him to the Demon hunting association.

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