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The moms probably caught them before aswell but thought nothing of it really, I think that she has come to terms with the fact that as long as her children are happy who cares who its with

And I see him getting sucker-punched by her. Great chapter Joe, cant wait to see how this saga progresses (you might have to leave Capslock on for the whole thing)

Yay, hopefully it wont be too long

Id be happy with an update

So exam season is almost done for now so hopefully I will be able to get back to writing soon, I might take a few days down time because my god proper exams are so much more stressful than practice ones!

Now ive re-read the last chapters of GITG and northstar, we await your next chapter or update on how life is screwing you now

Well that escalated quickly

Your speeding through this one Also nivek_88 posted an incest birthday 28, only 8 left until he's finished

I think instead of jack and kayla getting a little house, alan and amanda should

Magusfangs stories (boy in the grass, girls in the grass [the sequel], northstar)

Depends on his work load and if life gets in the way, id say about a couple weeks or so

Probably not much action untill then, maybe a convention for jack to go to

I personally would like to see the rest of the high school year. Admittedly thats because I have an ulterior motive for that, if you include the high school years, the whole story will be longer even if its only by a bit. Dont worry about it being too long, magusfang has written more than 100 chapters about max and the girls and we still follow him through his twists and turns. Sorry for that kind of went ofo on a tangent, high school yes

Oh and a few observations that pooped into my head, I liked the referance to agents of shield by calling the shrink dr.fitzsimmons. So by dragonball logic, jessica=the sayains, brad=freeza, tara=the androids so next is cell, then some peace time and finally the buu's

Great chapter, loving all the angst, wondering what the next saga entails?

I shall read it later, unfortunately life decided im busy for the next 2 hours

Ok, sorry for the delay in updates but for the next few weeks I have to knuckle down because now its proper exam time so there wont be any new chapters up for a couple weeks, sorry to disappoint But on another note me and a friend are going to start writing a novel and since its a non erotic one I can still keep my other writing time free by writing on the school bus or other places. But if any of you would like to review it once its done which probably wont be for a while (at least a few months) then drop me a message in my inbox as I wont be posting it on here. Again sorry for the delay but the next few chapters should see the introduction of some really saucy parts.

Oh im not abandoning it, just wont have the time for the next few weeks but ill get one written after then. I dont plan on ending it anytime soon though. I wont be posting anything from the novel on here but if any of you would like to review it once its done let me know

Im starting another, non erotic story only this one is with a friend and if all goes well we might try and get it published. Cant write any this week or next because it exam season again, these are the proper ones now though so I have to concentrate. Sorry for the wait

I check every time I pick up my phone, which is a lot!

Not a problem, its an easy mistake to make

Its alan and amanda, adam is the guy from being more social

YYYYEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH

I spent the past day and a half reading these and oh my god they are good, I just wish there were more of them. The sex in them is great but in my mind that is dwarfed by the overall plot. Cudos to mister nightshade, id say he's on par with Magus and Jashley. If you havent read these already I recommend that you do! *****

Im gonna start writing on the bus and I dont give a damn what anyone says.