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Im getting a bad feeling about amy needing help. I think fangface might be starting the mass culling he mentioned a while ago...

Draft 3 was also a bust... Im going to give myself 2 days to think about it before trying again

hopefully Ill have something to read in the morning

Loved this chapter, especially the angst after the torture/mutilation incident. It was nice to have a little present day thrown in the mix too

Honestly as long as your posting something i dont think we care which story it is, now excuse me i have some reading to do

Maybe but i think its mainly because ive started on my novel so I have to be more critical about what i write

So, after 2 drafts of chapter 5 im still not happy with how its turning out. In my head everything seems fine but on paper it just doesnt fit together. Hopefully i'll be happy with the next draft. Why is this the one thing I have to be picky about? :-(

Cant remember, were you planning the crossover for book 3 or 4?

Read both chapters and danm you and your insomnia driven cliff hangars! Now im really looking forward to ankther northstar. Maybe Max needs a battleship...

Great chapter, cant wait to see how Cynthia developes

Im not a morning person

God damnit, i have school now :'(

I think child skydivers (not for the military) would be amazing to watch, you know, AFTER you get them to stop shitting themselves on the way down

I have a nephew due in march, so at least this time round i wont be afraid to hold him. My niece just looked too fragile to lift when she was a newborn, but that was nearly three years ago so shes as resilliant as you are now!

Shes in her terrible twos so, yay, fun

Couldnt get any extra written tonight cuz i was on babysiting duty for my niece, magus knows my struggle but hey, she is funny

he uses twitter instead of a forum

Right so, i have the first scene of chapter 5 written but since im now writting on my phone/tablet i kind of have to wing it length wise as it doesnt tell me, i might just start aiming for a certain number of lines instead of pages. Anyway, shouldnt be more than a week till its done

i think what they mean is he is cynthia's dad, but june was with someone else when max was concieved

Get rid off her in an 'accidental way'

I liked the fight scenes but im slightly biased since ive been reading magusfangs stories for almost a year. You cant go through them without something changing inside of you (i blame ALL the cliffhangers he uses). But yes, the fight scenes were great and since we still have the pipe bomb and the chinese water torture to see, i expect we will be seeing some more Good luck house hunting!

Ok, as of tonight i will begin writing again, my apologies for the break

I think legion would have known instantly if he'd been injected into a mechanical host. Besides I dont think synthetic skin bruises.

You are truly, truly evil

Great chapter and MY GOD you found another way to keep us waiting on the reunion!