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From RAW19 on June 21, 2023
Surprisingly sweet. Most excellent.
Thanks. I’m glad people are still enjoying these older works of mine and I hope to have more for everyone in the coming months.
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Ah, well that answers that then. Thank you
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I have not been able to get text to embolden in my stories. Is that an issue anyone else has had?
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Son of a bitch! Yeah, they’re gone. That’s a shame because the latest chapters of Smooshed and Depravity were real good. When we can post again, I’ll try to recall all that I said and put them back up.
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AFF is back baby! Go check out the latest chapter of A Charmed Life!
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I have actually finished a new chapter for A Charmed Life. It can be found on AO3 but I, as others have pointed out, thought it would in poor taste to post a link to it from here. I look forward to updating it here once the site finishes emerging from its chrysalis.
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From JaxRhapsody on September 12, 2022 on A Charmed Life
I enjoyed this story, wish this site had bookmarks.
It does have a recommended reading area. Regardless, thanks so much! I promise to get the latest chapter finished eventually.
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Latest chapter of Ears is up! Enjoy!
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So, just curious and not trying to take shots at quality of content, but can a story be considered a troll post? An Owl House piece in Cartoons is barely comprehensible and the author reviewed their own story in the self-wanking-iest way possible that also manages to be barely comprehensible. Posting a link to the story just in case.
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The more the merrier I say, Hiro deserves to get it on with as many as possible for all the work he’s done.
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Review for Ears to You, Luz Noceda
QuoteFrom GeorgeGlass on October 06, 2021
As Fairy Slayer would say, I betaed this chapter, so any typos are my fault.
(SPOILERS below)
Okay, when you said there was going to be some dick in this chapter, I kind of assumed you were talking about Gus. But involving the Blight twins is even better.
Two things about this chapter are particularly striking. The first is the emotional intensity of it. You really sell Ed and Em’s forbidden love effectively, particularly in terms of how it affects and is affected by their other family relationships. The same goes for the twins’ powerful envy of Amity’s status as their mother’s Chosen One.
The second thing -- and this applies to other parts of the story, too -- is that it’s not merely compatible with canon but actually explains things in canon that haven’t really been explained on the show. In this chapter, it’s Ed and Em’s penchant for picking on Amity. It’s great to see that they don’t do this because they’re intrinsically assholes (any more than Amity was during her early bullying of Willow and Luz) but because they have a really solid reason to resent Amity. You also explained very nicely why their mom lets the twins get away with so much while so often coming down hard on Amity.
Looking forward to what's next.
Thanks again for the beta, George. It was nice to have someone else’s perspective.
The fact that Gus is stated to be younger than the others is the reason he hasn’t been included yet. The way I am developing the lore for how ears work means that at this point in his life, he hasn’t reached the stage where he would be susceptible to the effects. Doesn’t mean we won’t see him included somewhere down the line.
I’m glad the intensity of this chapter hit the way I wanted it to. The twins are very interesting characters and it was fun putting a spicy spin on their dynamics.
I love extrapolating ideas and expanding on details that aren’t fully explored in the show. It’s so nice when others appreciate my efforts to “color inside the lines” so to say, when it comes to making porn out of non-porn material. That said, in future chapters I might diverge from the established storyline more than a little because of an idea I have for Lilith.
Looking forward to working with you again.
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http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600096551
Some others are under the AU and Femslash categories of the Miscellaneous section. Should I link them as well?
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Subdomain: Cartoons
Category Name: Owl House, The
Section: +M through R
I have a five chapter piece for this category and I’ve seen others for it as well.
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I can honestly say I did not see the inspiration for Rashomonster being such a piece of high art, then again I’m woefully uneducated about classic cinema. It never really occurs to me to model stories on things like that and if my works happen to share similarities to things like that it is usually pure coincidence. Still it was a fun story and I admire your ability to do concise work. I have a tendency to snowball a story as I go.
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From GeorgeGlass on April 25, 2021
Chapter 4 (SPOILERS):
Interesting that Luz can't bring herself to make Eda her thrall the way she did Amity -- not because Eda isn't willing (unlike Amity), but because Luz thinks of Eda as her mentor. Which makes a lot of sense, really, because whereas Luz and Amity's relationship has evolved substantially over time (from enemies to frenemies to friends and now to lovers), Luz and Eda have had a consistent mentee/mentor relationship from the beginning.
I'll be interested to see whom they draw into the fold next.
Luz couldn’t at first and you’re right as to the reason why, but I think I found a pretty good middle ground by the end of the chapter since she did begin manipulating Eda’s mind. I often find that in these hypnotizing stories, there’s a little in the way of moral dilemma about what they do so I hope I could convey Luz’s struggle at least halfway decently. Now it’s safe to say she’s embraced her desires and won’t be nearly as hesitant anymore. As to who, I mentioned to my readers on AO3 that the next chapter might upset some of them since this story has been fem focused so far. I wouldn’t be doing Luz justice if I ignored her full sexuality.
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Latest chapter for Ears is up here.
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I’m working on it, got about 2,000 words down so far. Hopefully I’ll have it ready in early April.
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From Menydragon5 on March 04, 2021
This is a really good story. It's going in ways I didn't expect. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Thanks, hope I can continue to surprise and please.
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Chapter 3 (SPOILERS):
Not only was this every bit the Luz/Amity chapter I've been hoping for, but you made it extra-awesome by showing us that Amity has a submissive side. Not only does this make sense within the context of the story, but it also could explain why canon-Amity has been so conflicted about whether to show or hide her attraction to Luz. For a girl who feels the need to show strength at all times, the desire to give herself over completely to someone else would be anathema.
The ending is quite a cliffhanger. The situation has really escalated now. Looking forward to more!
George, you hit the nail on the head exactly with where I was going with Amity. There was another piece I’ve read over on AO3 that explores the idea of Amity having a sweat kink so I paid a little tribute to that piece in this chapter while also thinking about the greater implications. With Luz being so aggressive and making the first move Amity was allowed to be vulnerable and she embraced it completely. I’m glad people have enjoyed the steaminess of this chapter, I figured it was time to really get the ball rolling and it’s only going to snowball from here.
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From SailorNemesis on January 30, 2021
chap3 nice ending. Looking forward to what comes next. Hopefully with fisting
Thanks. I hadn’t considered fisting but it certainly isn’t out of the realm of possibilities.
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Latest chapter of Ears to You, Luz Noceda is up!
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From Fairy-Slayer on December 17, 2020
(Chapter 2)
Nice of Willow to reveal the secret, but a bit naughty of Luz to use that power so much so quickly. Thank goodness I really like naughtiness. Great bit of exposition plus some real hands-on fun, even if Luz had just enough self control to stop short – this time! Great little makeout session, and nice hint that there is some lingering emotional effect. I can see so many wicked possibilities, even many that come about completely innocently or just from Luz's anxiety. (Not that I have anything against a dive-right-in earjob. I even wrote one myself a while back.)
My only question is why some demon-descendant hasn't pretty much taken over the Boiling Isle yet. I really like where your story is going. Thanks.
Hey Fairy-Slayer, good to hear from you. I’m glad the exposition doesn’t feel forced and fear not there shall be plenty of naughtiness to come.
As for your question, I like to imagine that’s why there are so many demon blooded witches on the Boiling Isles. They initially interbred to breed out this weakness and over time touching ears became so taboo that the real reason was lost or forgotten by the majority of the population. That and with Belos in charge and walking on the grass is a imprisonable offence I imagine anyone suspected of being an ear rapists would probably get black bagged pretty quickly. Or maybe that’s how Belos rose to power in the first place. *Insert spooky conspiracy sounds* Or maybe not.
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From Bronzehawk86 on December 06, 2020
A good story.
Thanks!
QuoteFrom GeorgeGlass on December 07, 2020
Some comments on chapter 2 (SPOILERS):
--Well, while Eda might not be on my list of Top 5 Boiling-Islanders Luz Should Get It On With, Willow definitely is, so I was gratified to see this chapter about her. And Willow’s reason for wanting Luz to touch her in that way is totally in character for her.
--I know you didn't invent the phrase “going boneless,” but I like your use of it here.
--I love how you fit in all the little background details like the screaming bell and lockers with mouths. It really grounds the story in the world of The Owl House and enriches the scenes at the same time.
--Luz erasing Willow's memories at the end of the chapter seemed a bit over the line, particularly given that Luz has seen the consequences of memory erasure before -- for Willow in particular. It definitely suggests that this new skill of Luz's is ripe for abuse.
Looking forward to more.
Always love hearing from you George. I’m glad Willow has a following, I like her as a character but she doesn’t do much for me otherwise. I’m surprised people haven’t expressed disappointment that I didn’t go further with her in this chapter.
The great thing about The Owl House is all the little details. Aside from watching the show on my Disney+ account I’ve downloaded almost the whole season from Mega so I can rewatch specific scenes to make sure I’m getting things right and it’s gratifying to hear that it pays off.
Luz is definitely going to be grappling with the consequences of her actions from the end of the chapter but I didn’t want to spend too much time there wrestling with it. To be fair though she hadn’t eaten all day and wasn’t in a great state of mind to begin with. Joking aside, I really wanted to establish that though this might have all started as an accident there’s an allure to this situation that Luz can’t resist, no matter how much she might hate herself for it.
Again, I’m glad you and all the other readers are enjoying this story and I look forward to the Star vs story you’ve been talking about.
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From SailorNemesis on December 05, 2020
Oooo getting spicy. I want to see more ear-domination. Time to abuse the power!
Yeah, we’re definitely going in that direction. I’ve been very happy to hear people enjoying the drama aspects.
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Glad you like it. Not sure when me and Swindle will get back to it but we do have several more ideas for it.