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So post already! Geeze I feel like Sam. Notice I said 'feel like' not felt. Bunch of old preverts.

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It's not Emma it's her evil doppleganger from Hero Saga World or if you insist on your world it's her sndroid body that was taken over by a SG agent or even better Legion. Show me the Story!

I trust alphabet soup, is that allowed? But I don't let the can anywhere near a string. It wasn't until recently that Canucks had aplhabet groups, other than YMCA.

If you're bitter you can't get better. BS usually said by some putz that spent most of their life in school studying psychology or some other thing like it. We need violence of a graphic nature, after all this is Adult fan fiction n'est pas? Feed Me!

Blow the seals? (backs away as he notices that fangface is reaching for wires ripped from a fan ...) So you should be adding the finishing touches noe huh or is that touching the fins? How come fins are on fishes but wings are not on wishes? Blow the seals? (backs away as he notices that fangface is reaching for wires ripped from a fan ...) So you should be adding the finishing touches no? huh or is that touching the fins? How come fins are on fishes but wings are not on wishes?

Does that delete from both sites? This one & archives?

or anything with a probe.

Just don't drag it out too long, please.

So is Nadi in Max's on board system, which you had stated that he had boosted its ability, and that is why he can only contact to her when asleep or did she DL into Thomas' underdeveloped mind? I vote for Max as it would be more difficult if in Thomas and beside she was in physical contact with Max and would sense his system being so close. Please don't drag this out too long as we need to know about The SG and prepare for their assault. When they do I am sure bodies will pile up on both sides. Good chapter if it was still a tied me over with no real answers with regard to the gathering storm.

Remember fangface, as my generation use to say, "The Future is Now!" So it is time for another teaser or is that taser?

Hmmm zombie sex, a whole new meaning to eating your girlfriend. You can always have ALICE decide to become the machine overlord with Albert & Jeeves as her terminators. They must save Cindy or kill her depending on how they switch that day.

It reminds me of an old song, "He ain't heavy, he's my brother.". What no one read my chapter, okay I see where this is going. You can find me in the garden eating dirt spaghetti.

Na, Dallas did that almost 30 years ago.

Happy & Home huh? So take a day then start writing again Sam is ready to do serious damage and Jimmy is threatening to have an aneurysm while a few others keep complaining about weak bladders. Me, I'm just off.

Thigh holsters are easily covered.

Well your wife did say that you look like Chubby Checker. @Guest Guest: that is a good scene but unfortunately most deaths do not end with you closing your eyes, that's a Hollywood effect to signify that a character died. In real life your life force just leaves and you are left staring into space unless you were asleep or in a coma or you were tired and closed your eyes and die. I like it being the Shadow's Group; they look up and there is Margo and they hear his laugh ... oh wait wrong Shadow Group. The Director did call them butchers and Rick stated that they left high body counts behind, but I think that even they would be a bit more cautious at a school dance. Sort of hard to cover that up these days. Okay if that was not the last chapter of gitg make it a battle scene leading into SITG (I think that you should always add an extra one to improve over the last one) You can have us await the outcome for the second stanza of the first chapter.

My nerves broke when my wife's water burst and she decided to take a quick shower before going to the hospital. (Women do not do anything quickly)The idea of nadi recognizing an attacker and either pulled Becca down or was shot. Also what is going on back at the ranch? It wouldn't be the first attack there & Rick, Tat, May or anyone of them could be casualties. Make at least one of the victims a major supporting character. It could be Pet, Tat or Hans and the second could be Kara or Stace. It would have to be a head shot for anyone chipped but you could have Max injured and it's years later that he comes out of his coma to find out that Emma & the babies were killed.

No need to apologise for how you feel just remember to always be thankful for what time you are given. There are enough here that have been in similar situaations that understand and also don't mind the bitching, it's part of the healing. Now as for this chapter; sorry I was disappointed in it. I thought once again too much time was spent on the niceness with no action, just like the past two chapters. We should have heard from the extraction teams by now and that sub should have been picked up by some one if it's within the territorial waters. I think you stated that Jeeves had a mile out electronics scope so where was this sub? I hope that you have some NorthStar tide me overs or should I pick up my keyboard? He fangface get a pad with keyboard for travelling. I got one for $137.22. Lenovo tablet 10.5 inch MT6582 Quad Core Tablet PC 3G Phone Screen 1024*768 5.0MP Camera 2GB/32GB Android 4.4.2 (KitKat) Bluetooth, GPS & allows 32GB TFT card included a keyboard case.

It might be that she forgot his password or 'M' forgot to give it to her. Okay everybody go read and critique some other writer's story. Around here a lot of readers forget to "feed the muses" and that sure frustrates a writer. It is even better to say why you do not like a story than say nothing at all.

It is now Night time: 8:08 pm est & still no story and he has the audasity to lay the blame on his wife. No nookie for him when he gets home. Notice how Sam & Crazy ignored the creepy question?

Nope, not true! A young guy is creepier than an old man because we're not considered dangerous whereas you young uns are. But Samara could set us straight on that. I just want my chapter to read.

or is that uploaded? Samara, let me get this straight; you are a 20 year old young woman and you expect a bunch of old guys not to pull your legs? Did not your momma talk to you about men? Pretty girls remind us of our youth which most of us miss. Now as for fangface and teasing us by saying his wife will post it this afternoon in half-an-hour it will be evening and still no story. I say that we set up a party and go a hunting magusfangs.

Only trouble with internet is even a 12 yr old can track where you are. Had internet on those leaky, fire prone subs the Brits sold us it enabled me to bitch a lot. They didn't require a security detail they needed a bailing pump and fire truck. So while you are laxin & chillin start on NorthStar's wind down/up.

Hey what happened to that young lady or has she gone after telling your roommate to hit the road? Yeah he does this regularly teases us at the end to no end, probably finished it days ago now wants us to beg. He's evil I tell you. Hey Sam get on his case, threaten to tell his ladies that he teases you.