jelad
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wow, I am stunned, this is my number 1 favorite chapter yet. you had so much in it that it could of easily been a lot longer. thanks for separating the chapters of the home group and the ones that went to fight, it made it a lot easier to understand. Can't wait to see the fallout of Max finding David and Cynthia.
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if you tell the two battles at the same time please separate the battles somehow, because it does get confusing unless you like messing with our minds. can't wait to see what happens with the battles.
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just read 36 and I loved it. it was nice to see Max and Amy together again and it didn't surprise me that Amy would like it a little rough. I do have a question or it might be a suggestion, I hope I am not insulting you because I love the story. Will Evan's mom end up being involved with the slavers in some way or is she just a ?itch? this was one of my favorite chapters and can't wait to the next on.
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you guys obviously don't live in NC, it seems people around here are more likely to hit something then miss it.
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I respect your right to believe what you want and I am ok with it. what you said I true, to a certain point, humans have a great capacity for violence and cruelty but we are also capable of great kindness toward each other. we have done terrible things and great things and if we don't destroy ourselves I can see great things in our future.
there is a difference between playing and teasing with people and being cruel to each other. trust me I was bullied all threw middle school so bad that I had to be escorted from class to class. My parents considered a law suit against the school for not protecting me, but we eventually just moved away. Life got much better after that. I tell you this so you know that I can tell the difference between playing and being mean to each other.
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you all are forgetting how twisted Magus can be, Mike could have found the phone in some ones stuff that he cares about. Remember how many times Magus's cliffhangers implied one thing and then when the next chapter came out he totally went another direction and really screwed with our minds.
this would be really confusing but you could always change Mia's name to Max. (10 points for anyone who gets that reference).
great chapter, I was in tears when albert and chives (hope I got the names right) where scared and decided to merge. or It could be the blasted cold I got. either I deal with the runny nose and eyes or I take meds I walk around like a zombie for a couple of days.
can't wait for the next one to see what Max's response is.
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not I have to start reading Northstar. I have a problem with names so I was gonna wait till after GITG was finished before I started reading it. I did read the first chapter and that is when I made my decision. you can always just say carrol and stella had gotten chipped sometime in the past and you can do a flashback, just a thought.
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everyone just sit back and thank for a minute, there is gonna be another book.
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ok guys, so sue me. I got the places wrong but you seem to understand what I was trying to say. eventually the government will find out about Max either the alphabet soup boys or some group that nobody knows about. he has been way to active and loud about the battles he has fought. just my opinion.
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how many times has Max blown up stuff and left pits an pieces of tech in those places? remember Alice was watching him on a satalite when he went to the north pole the first time. if she could watch him others could watch him.
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Magus, you said someone is watching, without giving anything away will we find out?
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there is a lot of names to keep track of and Magus is on drugs so don't be to rough on him. it does get confusing but we deal with it. I agree with Bigman, Max's father worked of the DOD an I find it surprising that they didn't know about his home lab and that they don't keep a eye on Max. also he has been making a lot of noise lately and I would guess some government somewhere would notice some of the actionfrom fire fights around the world to a aquatic tank. just my opinion
peace.
PS I got the joke about the button, did anyone else?
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horny, the 2 things, I find, that help me out is : 1. be respectfull and 2. don't take everything so serious. we are here to have some fun an be entertained. we play and discuss stuff and sometimes we may even learn something and that is great but we also tease and some of us are sarcastic ... We are not solving the world's problems here. Magus I said it before enjoy the legal drugs because real life does suck SOMETIMES but if your lucky it is good most of the time.
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wow those meds are really doing a job on you. the next chapter should be really good or at least fun to read. Didn't you write a few chapters of BITG on meds? Some of those were interesting to read.
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that is one of the things family is, the accept the bad part of you and let it pass. remember it just takes one opps to spend all the brownie points you have saved up. LOL. this statement comes from a single person who isn't in a relationship at the moment. and no I am not looking for sympathy or a relationship. my last couple were trouble and I am on a hiatus, looking at myself and what I want in a relationship.
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congrats on surviving, to bad you don't have any nanites so you could be up and going already. but on the good side you can let your family fuss over you and that should make you fill better. LOL
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wow, it's like old times when you would post ever other day or so. I did thank Bigman was a little short with the core group, I would add Becca and her mom. I liked the way you turned the cliff hanger from 29 with the sheriff, but the bad guys do seem to have a lot of info on Max and also be able to do things like he would (the BOLO) and even leave in unsigned. can't wait to the next chapter, get well and you can always jump for the fun of it. remember it's not the fall that gets you, it's the sudden stop at the end. LOL
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enjoy the legal high and get better. but please don't kill any of the group until your off the drugs. also remember what sometimes seems smart while on pain meds is so bright when your clear minded. Peace and good health.
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you are truly a cruel man. you keep hinting that you are gonna kill one, now two, of the group. and that doesn't even touch these insanely frustrating cliffhanger you leave us. but it is one of the things that keep us coming back. apparently Max is getting a reputation. keep them coming.
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one of my favorite quotes and I have said it before. "show me a hero and I will show you a tragedy". A hero is forged by his life experience. if nothing ever bad happens to stir him into action he would never grow into who he needs to be. also, lets face it, if everything goes perfect it would be a really boring story. please don't kill the core, one of the peripherial characters will be bad enough, in my opinion, since Max has worked so hard to keep them out of most of the action. this is just my opinion.
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just read the new chapter and I loved it. I figured that Max had guessed that Hans was a mole and they were still in the sim, but I like your version much better. one small problem was I had trouble when you switched to the flashback or daydreams but once I figured out what you meant it was a little easier. I can't wait to see what happens. a side note I would also like to see Max spent some time with Amy and Alice. the last time he spent time with Alice she ended up screaming when she felt the pain he was living with and I can't remember the last time he spent time with Amy. Just a thought, as long as you keep posting I will keep reading.
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in a perfect world you could just say you want some and they would line up. if it was just that easy LOL.
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please, please don't do the Dallas shower ending where we find out everything is a dream.