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jelad

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  1. wow, I am not going to say anything about it because I don't want to give anything away but I liked it. one thing you put your name "Magus" in for "Max" about three or four chapters down. I put that to it's late and you wanted to please your readers and posted. Good job.

  2. I got an idea. Alice wakes up and has no memory. When Max finds her and the group she attack Max and ends up joining the bad guys for while until somehow she gets her memory back. that' it. but you do what you want, I like your story and have never been disappointed, sad yes, but not disappointed.

  3. Does anyone know if Mika had a chip? if she did then she just downloaded. Legion is in shock but after that passes I don't think the bad guys will have to think about the future. I am sorta worried for Alice because Legion has never felt grief and lose so I can't wait to see what he does. Max might not have to deal with the SG's at all.

  4. the only thank I would have different is the scene in Max's mind when he was separating from Nada (forgive me if I mixed up the girls). There could have been a whole lot done and in the end could have changed there personality in some way. this is just my opinion and I still can't wait for the next chapter.

    P.S. we are bloodthirsty and crazy.

  5. glade your back, we were getting a little worried. Some were even afraid you had left for another site. the last two chapters were good except that you forgot the purge. those parts always makes me laugh or gag. lol. now if my other favorite authors would post I would be over the moon. again glade you didn't vanish. :smartass::dancegirl2::yahoo:

  6. not any of my fav. authors are posting at the moment. POI, Eric Storm, Tyler Captius or KingCerbrus. non of them has posted in over two weeks. I have even reread John Conroe's Demon Accords three times. I thank I might give a lung if someone would post something LOL. :spank:

  7. Bigman7307 I agree with everthing you said, but you were a little harsh. if you thank about it, that fact that we bug authors for the next chapter is a compliment to their story. Most of us know that Magnus will be back when he can but he did just sort of stopped and dropped of the net without explanation. there is nothing worse then when an author stops a story in the middle.

  8. captius posted like 4 -7 days ago. I thank he is on chapter two or three of his series. also if anyone is interested Kingcerbrus will start posting again on the site that shall not be named. his story The Creators is pretty good but he had to stop writing for a while but he is back and will continue his story soon. I am trying to get him to post on more then one site. that other site his dropped one or two chapters of the story. Magnus please come back and finish we are lost in the woods without you.

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