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Dungeon candle/torch sleep trap
Desiderius Price replied to SirGeneralSir's topic in Writers' Corner
Alright, too much youtube, it was mentioning poisonous gas. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LnkwxKHVLeU Phosphine can be had by heating white phosphorus in aqueous solution of potash (potassium carbonate). While the pure is odorless, the technical grate can have a highly unpleasant order like rotting fish. Arsine can give off a slight garlic scent when it’s presence is above 0.5 ppm … it’ll destroy the kidneys (according to this video). -
Why Do We Hate Mary Sue?
Desiderius Price replied to Harley Quinn hyenaholic's topic in Original Character Development
By lucky coincidence, a genetic mutation makes them impervious to garlic-infused holy water, it’s now a health tonic. They also use silver bolts for toothpicks, after all, dental hygiene is important for those perfect pearly whites! Anyways, make sure to get *ALL* their hearts to thwart the regeneration process. Yeah, mostly harmless, like the earth. -
Why Do We Hate Mary Sue?
Desiderius Price replied to Harley Quinn hyenaholic's topic in Original Character Development
Aw, so it was the mirror that possessed her! Well, you remembered enough so we can have fun with it, as easily forgetting things isn’t a great thing either. Now, if only I could eradicate this plot bunny of having Mary Sue dating Gary Stu, I’m sure their children would be mostly harmless. -
Dungeon candle/torch sleep trap
Desiderius Price replied to SirGeneralSir's topic in Writers' Corner
The trouble with killing off the characters is you’ll need some more to replace the first party, do it too often and you’ll have red-shirt syndrome. -
Why Do We Hate Mary Sue?
Desiderius Price replied to Harley Quinn hyenaholic's topic in Original Character Development
Rainbow eyes? TBH, that’s not a super terrible idea, however, some description/justification would be needed. Suppose one could color the eyelashes, or eyebrows, or even the iris itself with concentrically colored rings. Iris/Whites could be done with a contact lens or a potion … in my potter fanfic, I’d simply chalk it up as a party gimmick from Fred & George. But yeah, the weapon thing would be understandable *IF* they’re military with years of special forces training, and is now a grandpa in a motorized wheelchair. Otherwise, less...credible. Guess that’s the crux of the Mary Sue/Gary Stu thing, it produces a character which is less realistic, less relatable. -
Dungeon candle/torch sleep trap
Desiderius Price replied to SirGeneralSir's topic in Writers' Corner
“Twist the tropes” can be quite fun to do at times. Of course, @SirGeneralSir will need to decide if the adventurers live or die, and work from there. -
Why Do We Hate Mary Sue?
Desiderius Price replied to Harley Quinn hyenaholic's topic in Original Character Development
Inexperienced, pressured, and the occasional “oops” are likely reasons too. An overpowered narcissist protected by plot armor (good stuff, highly recommend it, better than bullet-proof vests) isn’t terribly interesting to read TBH. However, Mary Sue and Gary Stu are not forces to be taken lightly, got one trying to weasel his way into my potter fanfic – started as a foil to Harry helping out Oliver Wood to teaching first years their intro flying lesson, I’ve had to keep tempering his character down to avoid plot inconsistencies. Classically, the mary/gary character will take training to become more proficient—don’t let them! Above all else, cancel their scholarship! Oh, keep them out of the beauty isle too. -
Why Do We Hate Mary Sue?
Desiderius Price replied to Harley Quinn hyenaholic's topic in Original Character Development
RPGs as a whole, have the issue where the player is, effectively, a mary sue/gary stu in the storyline. Nobody can resolve anything, find anything, without you getting involved. And as you level up, your character gains strength/ability to the point you’re a tank, or master sniper, and can take on any opponent. Spoiler for Fallout-4 Automatron DLC… the mechanist had the best line when they’re telling the player, “I’m trying to stop the worst threat to the commonwealth, and that threat is YOU.” I had to admit when I first heard that, how true it was… the player character is, ultimately so overpowered, especially having the power of quick saves & loads to overcome any obstacle. -
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Isn’t Glorfindel using the force to serve himself up a pan-dimensional gargle blaster at Quark’s bar, in orbit of Rylos?
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Dungeon candle/torch sleep trap
Desiderius Price replied to SirGeneralSir's topic in Writers' Corner
How about the reverse? You’ve got candles… but they go out because the oxygen’s being stripped from the room’s air. How? The old halon gas fire suppression, one of the most effective fire suppression agents available. So, rig it up, one of your adventurers trips the fire alarm -
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