First, thanks for the review.
I loved writing the dream, though I did wonder if I had issues It seemed a good way to capture Jarred’s insecurities, because guys typically don’t express them well, if they express them at all. And yes, as I like to show rather than tell, I had to demonstrate his body reacting, that it did rattle him a bit.
Susie/Clara likely did go a bit too fast, but I was focusing more on them teaching Jarred a thing or two. (That, and getting Jarred/Susie into that closet.) And Dale’s accounts are still suspended due to his grounding….
Well, glad you enjoyed it and your reviews help me appreciate the reader’s perspective.
- DP
