Desiderius Price

Since I try to evaluate plausibility when I write, to me, a sudden event, like assault, rape, murder, etc, that it produces a change fast is plausible. To have a character, instead, read a self-help book, that would call for a more gradual shift, IMO. Of course, a character can have different reactions as they absorb/process it, so some changes rapid, others taking time to evolve.

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Chapter 24, “Run, II” is up.

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I’ve got an idea, but I’m holding onto it for my Halloween story!

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Well, I’ve already suggested she read my story and review

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My posting finger itched, so I went ahead. Chapter 23, “Run” is up.

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For some reason, I read that in the same tone as Mrs. Weasley yelling at Fred and George at rescuing Harry in Chamber of Secrets (in the movie). “Beds Empty, No Note, you could’ve died….”