pittwitch thank you. and.. yes, my story was written about 10 years ago. I could run it through the spell check, or have a beta smooth it out tremendously, But I guess something about it's rawness still resonates with me, and takes me back to a time in my life and mind where I was not only searching a path to take after I had graduated college, but after I had been through my time with my ex. I'm dyslexic, and was writing also on an old laptop that had a sticky keyboard, before I could afford a new one. It was the first real thing I tried writing, to see if I could, and the challenge set me on my path, which now includes 2 plays, some TV scripts, a pile of stories, and many books, a few going to publication as we speak. I guess, I just like it foor what it is: a true representation of me, and my talent at that time, and the best I could do with what I had to work with... laptop and first attempt put together. lol
but thank you VERY Much.