Diizoid

I’m fairly certain that it is this series, thank you both so much! It was the Jordan Grant versions that I was thinking of apparently. I would have never found it again on my own.

When I say old, I mean close to or over a decade old. I remember a new prophecy was made, that required Harry and Snape to fuck or marry in order to stop Voldemort from attaining true immortality and bringing a thousand years of suffering to the world. Harry had to take some kind of potion to enact a ritual, in which illusions of his parents and friends begged him not to proceed. I remember that Harry moved in with Snape. At one point after the ritual, Snape used the safe word “cook” to try and stop Harry from finishing a blowjob. The title was something to do with “potent” I think. Any help finding this story again would be welcome.

Thank you both for the response. I'd rather have AFF up and running than not regardless of appearance, and all of the staff's work is much appreciated on that front, I apologize for coming off rude before. What I meant about logging in was how the site would change from this to the current appearance whenever I'd access my author control panel.The former was always preferable. Now that the latter is the standard site-wide(aside from review pages) it'll just bug me for a while until I get used to it.

Not to be a pain in the ass, but are you serious about this design? I never liked it when I had to login to update my stories and it's bothered me since it started turning up when I opened a story, but to have it on the front page as well... is it at all possible to enable a site preference for signed-in users to toggle this version on/off over the previous? Or at least give us something that isn't one giant backdrop around story info/words, please? Like this forum page is a pretty good example of what looks right. I'm also not exactly crazy about ratings being reset but I'm not going to fight it, it just sucks to lose the ratings I've amassed over the years. I don't think I'll be able to get most of them back without deleting and reposting my work and I'm not likely to take that route.

Author: Ulforce Diizoid Title: Pokémon eXtasY, the Sins of Kalos Summary: Calem begins his conquest of the Kalos region. Just how many women can he tame before his dream of becoming Champion is fulfilled? All of them, if the situation is right. Feedback: Greatly appreciated! Fandom: Pokemon. Pairing: Calem/(every female I can find). Warnings: 3Plus, BDSM, Beast, Bi, Bond, D/s, Exhib, HJ, Inc, M/F, Minor2, Oral, Solo, Spank, Toys, Violence, Voy, WIP Solo story or chaptered story: Multiple chapters planned. URL: http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600089781.

Thank you for the server upgrades. The site is now loading like greased lightning! Having said that it is currently impossible to add, edit, delete, or otherwise access the story modification panel for games.adult-fanfiction.org. When I click the aforementioned links the new tab loads and the area where the Title etc is supposed to be is blank. I checked hp.adult-fanfiction.org and anime.adult-fanfiction.org and both are loading these areas correctly. And we are now golden. Great job folks.

Well, as the guy who killed the last thread, I'd like to try and resurrect the RET if at all possible given the time dilation. A lot of forum goers have stories they want reviews for and sometimes you've got a story that just stagnates - hits are coming in, but no reviews or ratings are going out. It's frustrating, right? So here we are. Take II. Rule 1: Pick one story from your posted stories that you want reviewed and leave your link, fandom, summary, and warnings. Story URL: Fandom: Summary: Warnings: Rule 2: After a story is posted, the next poster reviews it and then posts their own story. If you don't see something you like, let the author know! They may be willing to compromise and put a different story up, and failing that, I will review it so that this thread does not die. But you must at least make an effort to try, and no one may add their own story without the previous author's story being reviewed first, no matter what. Check the SAR(stories awaiting review) below. Rule 3: Make your review matter. Don't give a one-liner, or just say "hey nice work looking forward to next update" or something of that degree. Let the author know what you liked, why you liked it, what you didn't. Give them something to work with, please and thank you. That's it! TL;DR -- Put your story up, next poster gives a good review and posts their own! A simple cycle of feedback. I'll let someone else start us off as I honestly don't know that any of my stories would not kill this again. Stories awaiting review: Danse Macabre 2: Dark Awakenings http://original.adul...hp?no=600107715 by ChrissyQuinn. PS. I hope the moderators don't mind? I feel a little guilty for putting the axe in Haywire's thread years ago and thought it might be best to get a fresh start.

Author: Ulforce Diizoid Title: Objection! a series of Ace Attorney one-shots. Summary: In which our characters approach their situations from a smuttier setting. Today's appetizer? Apollo/Junie. Not all warnings apply to all chapters. Feedback: Yes please and thank you very much! Fandom: Phoenix Wright, Ace Attorney, Duel Destinies. Pairing: Apollo Justice/Juniper Woods Warnings: BDSM, D/s, Fingering, HJ, M/F, Oral, Solo Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered. URL: http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600089569. Hi. This is my first foray into Phoenix Wright territory and I hope to keep adding to it down the road with other pairings that occurred to me throughout the course of playing Dual Destinies this past week. In time I'll cover the other games and I'll take into consideration any pairings suggested to me provided they are M/F in nature. I believe the PW;AA area has more than enough Yaoi so far to sate those needs

Hello again! I'd totally forgotten I could post an update here, so http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600089266&chapter=2 here we are! Chapter 2 features a little Impa/Zelda. Warnings have been adjusted to Fingering, HJ, F/F, M/F, M/s, Oral, Solo, Voy. Thank you for reading! I'm frankly stunned the story has reached 4 reviews and 15 ratings already.

Author: Ulforce Diizoid Title: Expressions of Lust. Summary: Mid-way through the search for Zelda in Skyward Sword, Link takes some alone time in Skyloft. Fi interrupts. Feedback: Yes please and thank you very much! Fandom: Legend of Zelda. Pairing: Link/Fi, minor Link/Zelda. Warnings: AFFO, COMPLETE, Fingering, HJ, M/F, M/s, Oneshot, Oral, PWP, Solo, Voy Solo story or chaptered story: Solo. URL: http://games.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600089266

Wow, that's pretty generous of you to offer. Like JayDee said, good luck with hitting your goal! Story: Avenging a Wand's Loss. http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094375 Do you want me to say what I like about it? yes. Do you want me to say what I don't like about it? yes. Do you want me to "be nice"? no. Do you want me to be brutally honest? yes. Do you want constructive criticism? yes. Any special instructions? Anything you particularly want in a review? Not that I can think of, I believe you've covered it all rather nicely above Edit: Thank you kindly, Gertrude Flint. I meant to get back to you sooner, but I seem to have a bad habit of getting delayed-responses to my reviewers when I'm not actively writing. I appreciate the honest critique. And I have indeed noted the errors. If I ever get that second chapter out I'll go back through and fix them up as well.

Nominally, anything that actually says what the reader/reviewer thought, enjoyed, connected with, etc etc. If they liked it, telling me what they liked is better than "Hey this was great, update with more soon!" or some such, as I've received a few times. A review is a review, but some really are better than others in that respect. Something like what I received from Aya/GossamerSilverglow a few days back really demonstrates the better review type - detailed, constructive, asking questions about things and posing suggestions for errors.

I read and reviewed all of gossamersilverglow's Macabre: The Gothic Boutique. Review: Chapter one - You had my interest hooked at the summary. Thereafter I kept reading for the good build up, introduction of Annabelle's 'voice', opinions, and slight flaws. Her reservations about spending such a large sum of cash in one fell swoop is quite understandable. She feels *real* in a way that I haven't read from a character in far too long. Maggie is equally well played so far. Chapter two - More good stuff. The description of Macabre is thorough enough without going overboard to get a clear picture. Their reactions to James continue to play out rather well - he *has* to be a vampire given the setting. Only errors I spotted were when Annabelle says she noticed the man behind the counter. You're missing an "on" in the description just beforehand. Another error seems to be the usage of world instead of word from Maggie a few paragraphs later, and a missing usage of "you" when Maggie asks about the shop taking Mastercard. Chapter three - The word "either" is used a bit too quickly near the start - first in describing Dr. Sutter's eyes, and then almost immediately afterward in the next paragraph when mentioning Annabelle's. Just something that jarred me out of the narrative for a few moments. Also, Annabelle mentions James' eyes turning from blue to black twice within several paragraphs. This chapter was a bit less of an impact, I suppose. Not sure why, but my interest dipped a bit and didn't return quite to where it had been throughout all of the first two chapters. Having Annabelle actually take note that something is wrong is good for her character, but it just didn't connect as well. Not quite sure why. Still! Bring on chapter four! I want to see where this goes. ------ I've got a couple of stories in particular that I'd appreciate some reviews for; Title: Lessons in seduction Genre/Group: Books > A through F > Eragon Summary: While training with Oromis, the old elf realizes a critical flaw in Eragon's lessons. Thereafter he sets about rectifying the younger Rider's ignorance. Warnings for future chapters! Warnings: D/s, HJ, MC, M/F, Oral, WIP Link: http://books.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095328 Currently just build-up, but still. Title: Dresden Files: Collapse to your Needs. Genre/Group: Books > A through F > Dresden Files, The > Summary: Harry Dresden hasn't been with a woman in three years. Fallen Angel Lasciel offers herself to him, but Dresden is determined to resist. How far must she go to succeed? Warnings: COMPLETE, HJ, Language, M/F, Oneshot, UST, WD Link: http://books.adultfa...hp?no=600094334 Mostly build-up, teasing, and a far shorter climax than I would have preferred, but I wrote this one a while back and I think that inexperience probably shows.

Author: Ulforce Diizoid Title: Lessons in seduction Summary: While training with Oromis, the old elf realizes a critical flaw in Eragon's lessons. Thereafter he sets about rectifying the younger Rider's ignorance. Feedback: Any feedback and constructive criticism is more than welcome! Just a rating if nothing more would let me know if I'm on the right track or not! Fandom: Inheritance Cycle, more commonly known as Eragon. Pairing: Eragon/Arya, Saphira/Glaedr. Warnings: D/s, HJ, MC, M/F, Oral, WIP Solo story or chaptered story: Chaptered story. URL: http://books.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600095328 I've been reading the Eragon-books again this week and it kicked off a bit of inspiration for an erotic fic, but this time I actually sat down and put it into words rather than leave it to die away in the back of my head as I always have before. Right now the first chapter is just plot and build-up, and I intend the actual delivery of the goods to happen in the second(or more) chapter(s). I hope you guys and gals enjoy.