Fire_Demon

Beh...I came here to do something but now look at me... I was reading your replay up there and thought I should butt in!You may wanna check out Bad Reputation by sauropod and Loser by SweetSurrender!They're pretty fantastic high school fics!imo anyway!

Oh c'mon hon'!You know it's never gonna be that bad!And maybe it'd actually help if you wrote a chapter,posted it and heard our reviews!That way,you might actually get some ideas and if you were still not content with your chapter,you can maybe use our ideas and write a new one!How's that? Oh wow...You're lucky you have an ergonomic chair...it might've helped me with my problem now...See,we just got a kinect and we were so exited and we might've over stepped a little...Now my whole body hurts and I can't for the life of me find a comfortable position to read...:-q

Well that's a relief to hear...I don't care (much-as I tend to cry and get emotional over the stupidest things in stories,things that I don't give two f**ks about in real life!) about what happens to characters in the plot process as long as the story has a happy ending! Well...actually,the 10 hours ride was because we took the longer,yet safer,road.We basically went around the mountain that separates our side from that side.This one goes through meadows and stuff while the usual road goes through the mountain and its forests.(It's really amazing how much a mountain can change two near places,right?There're only scattered pine trees this side of the mountain but there's a tunel that once you pass it,you go:"Eldorado...."!There are super green jungles all around you and there's a huge climatic change...)If you take the mountain road and the traffic was light (which is really unlikely...),it'll take about 2-3 hours to get there;after all it's only about 190-200 kms away from where we live.(according to daddy!) Wow I love mysterious,deep lakes!Thou never been to one....They are like undetected jungles.All sorts of mysterious and maybe magical creatures can live there and you'd never know Oh god!yessss!Tomorrow is the last day of exams!For one freaking month I've been doing this!(As I write this I'm slowly dying...)Then I'll be able to send your story to my reader and truly enjoy it to full capacity! The Last Exam is English!So tell me honestly,from a scale of 1 to 10,1 being horrible and 10 being phenomenally awful bordering on unreadable,where my grammar scores?

Bleh-Double post...Can't figure how to delete yet...

WTF??????TRIPLE POST????I think I might need help....

Haha well I think you got off lucky with only an ungrateful teenager and a 3 hour ride !We had a 5 day holiday here,so my aunt thought it'd be a brilliant idea to go up north where the grass is green and the sea is blue etcetera etcetera! I'm not really all that fond of there since it's really humid which makes my hair go all fuzzy and annoying and there's always the chance of seeing dead see creatures scattered about the beach...The only consolation were the hot lifeguards...Anyway,I had to tag along 'cause my dad was on-call and my mom had to drive alone.The roads there,although really beautiful,are dangerous and there's almost always some sorta car crash (because people are idiots who think it's okay if you suddenly stopped in the middle of the highway...).It was an effing 10 hours ride and I was paranoidly checking to make sure everyone were wearing their seatbelts (my mom has a tendency to leave it unbuckled) and all the doors were locked,the whole time!:I Still brewing I see!Wait-did you say betrayal?Sad ending?Wha?????Then no 'and they lived happily ever after's????

Wow!It could be just me but you seem really excited! Haha-I suddenly had this image of a witch dancing around her cauldron and stirring the glowing substance inside,singing about what she's gonna do with the poor children that are gonna pass her land later that day...