Yeah no!You know how we have a different time zone here?You must've uploaded your story late morning or early afternoon,right?Well it was 10 pm something here when I read it and I wanted to review right away so I started but boy I was exhausted!(A whole week of staying up late studying the waking up at bloody 5 in the morning everyday does that to you!Fortunately it's weekend now and I got my much needed sleep!)So I fell sleep halfway through my first review.It didn't help that I was already tucked away in bed!heh.It was a good thing too.I get pretty weird when I try to stay coherent when I can't keep my eyes open.I probably would've gone off trying to explain Fico's dick size in the form of calculus and thermodynamics..Too many nights,man,too many nights...And it's only been like 3 weeks....Plus I wouldn't have remembered writing it so it probably would've gone unnoticed...Hey!I didn't do that,did I?????
Ohohoho you think your story is absurd?Then you probably haven't read 'Chocolate Covered Boxer Briefs'!It's so ridiculous that I couldn't stop laughing while reading it !But then again it is fiction world so you can get away with writing absurd,surreal things!But the emotional stuff?Well that's something that's mostly the same throughout all fiction worlds...I get Fico's whole denial,everything-other-than-everyday-work-is-overwhelming-to-me-so-they-couldn't-have-happened and coping mechanisms but somethings just can't be explained away like that.Like why was he so comfortable and snuggling with Luke after such a groundbreaking confession like they had already been a couple?Why was accepting Luke being bi so natural when Fico was dead certain Luke was as straight as an arrow just before that?And most of all,when did Luke become such a schmoopy incubus?!But of course that's where I have to cut myself off.I really don't know much about the coping mechanism where your mind unconsciously forces itself to forget a truly traumatizing memory,so you could be right about it and I would have to do a thorough research if I want to have some ground to argue on :/
Nope I hadn't forgotten that his friends where upstairs when the whole thing happened but after you said it was 2 pm,I thought they should really know by now!But you're right.I don't know much about high schoolers' partying and drinking habits other than the ones I read in fictions!I mean we don't do it here (well not that I'm aware of...maybe it does happen in some of the more loose public high schools,it wouldn't be impossible,but even then it should be a secret as it's not as common as it's in other countries...It does happen often but certainly not in high school...I for myself have never heard nor been to one...) so yeah I take your word for it!!!
Wow I'm so glad I've been of some help!I mean most of the time my reviews are so pointless it's good to know some of my reviews actually help the writers!
Read that you're reading Loser and Bad reputation?They're good but yeah I get it if Bad Reputation didn't catch your attention if you've only read the first chapter!I had to read every sentence at least thrice to make heads and tails of it and it was full of grammatical errors!But it only stays like that for the first few chapters!And when you get to know the real Charles Killian August Harper and his friends !!!!That story is hilarious and a good read!If you stick around the eye sore parts,it will be worth your while!But that is,of course,if you like silly,pointless stories!I for myself love those kinds of stories and Charlie is like one of my most favorite characters of all time!He and his friends remind me a lot of me and my own gang!
Yeah,well,I get why you prefer the published stories.The polished,mistake less stories that have a sure ending,but you gotta love the sense of modesty that is with most of the online writers!They don't get stuffy because their works were published and they're in touch and in tune with their readers.You don't feel like they're so completely out of reach like most published writers tend to feel and be.You feel like they're human beings like yourself.It's just my opinion anyway!