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  2. Gravity Falls Adult Version Challenge

    in Cartoons

    Posted · Edited by thebooblover

    Just like my other “adult version” challenges, this challenge is of an smutty retelling of a cartoon, in this case Gravity Falls:

    • Dipper:
    1. Straight Shotacon version: Dipper is the same age he is in the show, but has a 20 inches long dick, which somehow stays hidden in his pants (except when he has an erection). (Text in Italics are ideas related exclusively to this version)
    2. Straight Shotacon Femboy version: Similar to the above, but he has a more effeminate body, with wide hips and a not huge, but still bubbly butt. He also has a slightly more girly voice and wears a short top and hot pants. His body causes him to be flirted by a lot of the men in Gravity Falls (and even some women). Sometimes he will still be flirted even after telling them that he’s a boy. (Text in bold are ideas related exclusively to this version)
    3. Manly version: Dipper is 18 years old. He has a muscular appearance similar to chillguysdraws’ Big Dipper. (Text with underline are ideas related exclusively to this version)
    • Mabel: She’s 18 years old, and is Dipper’s older sister rather than his twin sister (they still share the same birthday). She and Dipper have an incestuous relationship, but she is willing to share him with other women. She sometimes has a ponytail, similar to  chillguydraws ’ “Maboobs”. Breast size reference: Chelsea Charms
    • Wendy: She’s much more muscular than she was in the show (With her looking like this in the shotacon and femboy version). She sometimes likes to dress Dipper in women’s clothing. Breast size reference: Beshine
    • Pacifica: she’s also 18 years old in this AU. She has much  thicker figure  based on chillguydraws’ Thiccifica design. She becomes infatuated with Dipper when she first meets him, and hides it by making fun of him alongside Mabel, making jokes about how he must be “compensating for something” due to his figure. Breast size reference: Kayla Kleevage
    • Candy: she’s also 18 years. She and Grenda are dating, but they have an open relationship, meaning they’re okay with each other sleeping with other people. Breast size reference: Minka
    • Grenda: she’s also 18 years old. She has a muscular figure and a more feminine yet still butch voice. She likes to fuck Dipper in the amazon position, which he doesn’t mind but it’s sometimes embarrassed by it. Breast size reference: Penelope Pumpkins
    • Tambry: She has one of the biggest bubble butts which sometimes pops out of her skirt when she bends down. Breast size reference: Miosotis Claribel
    • Shandra Jimenez: During the Mystery Shack’s reopening; she asks Dipper if they can meet somewhere private so she can interview him. He takes her to his room, where she reveals that it was just an excuse so she and he can have sex. When she has sex with Dipper, she films it and sends it to Toby Determined hoping that it would make him leave her alone. Breast size reference: Cindy Fulsom
    • Pacifica’s friends (here the black one named Jennifer and the white one Tiffany): They like to tease Dipper by rubbing themselves against him and making innuendos about him and his dick. Ironically, despite how slutty they act towards him, they’re actually virgins and become nervous when they’re about to have sex with him, leading to Dipper teasing them in return. Breast size reference: Spantaneeus Xtasty (Jennifer) and Ariane Saint-Amour (Tiffany)
    • Giffany: She becomes a real person whens Soos burns the disc contaning her game. Breast size reference: Amy Anderssen
    • Melody: Breast size reference: Allegra Cole
    • Priscila: She sees her daughter having sex with Dipper and decides to join them. Breast size reference: Deena Duos
    • When Dipper flirts with Emma Sue, the Corn Maze Girl and the Log Land Girl, he not only gets their numbers but also a blowjob from them. When they meet up again at Mystery Mountain the three girls start fighting over Dipper. Dipper then suggests they have a foursome which the girls accept. Breast size references: Letha Weapons (Emma Sue), Summer Cummings (CMG) and Tara Jamson (LLG)
    • Darlene: After her defeat, she follows the gang back home to have her revenge. She sees Dipper having sex with one of the girls and decides to make him her mate. Breast size reference: Maxi Mounds

    Plot ideas/suggestions:

    • The main characters encounter other monsters, some that Dipper will put on his own journal. Some of them have humanoid female bodies, leading into smut scenes between them and Dipper and/or the girls
    • Crossovers with other properties like:
    1. Paranorman
    2. Coraline
    3. Scooby-Doo
    4. Elvira,the Mistress of the Dark
    5. The Incredibles
    6. Ed Edd n Eddy
    7. Invader Zim
    8. The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy
    9. Steven Universe

    These crossovers usually end with Dipper having sex with the women in them:

    1. Paranorman: Courtney Babcock
    2. Coraline: Mel Jones, Other Mother
    3. Scooby-Doo: Velma, Daphne, The Hex Girls
    4. Elvira
    5. The Incredibles: Helen Parr, Violet Parr
    6. Ed Edd n Eddy: Lee, Marie and May Kanker
    7. Invader Zim: Gaz
    8. The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy: Mandy
    9. Steven Universe: Amethyst, Pearl and Garnet

  3. Ben’s Haunted (Sex)Adventure

    in Cartoons

    Posted · Edited by thebooblover

    • Plot:

    Taking place years after the original show, a now grow up Ben is dating Wednesday Addams. Wednesday is part of a group of girls referred to as "The Creepy Girls" by the residents of the town they live in because they find them creepy. The group includes:

    • Kylie Griffin from The Extreme Ghostbusters
    • Lydia Deetz from the Beetjejuice cartoon
    • Mandy from The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy
    • Gaz from Invader Zim
    • A human Raven from Teen Titans
    • They're also accompanied by Wednesday's cousin Marylin Munster, who is the only one from the group that the town doesn't consider creepy.

    Ben's relationship doesn't sit well with his cousin Gwen. Gwen's friends, who are Jade Chan and Penny Gadget, tease her by saying it's because she has a crush on Ben, but she insists that it's because she believes Wednesday might be a bad influence on Ben. 

    Kylie is planning on shooting a movie with her friends. They meet up at Wednesday's house, where she asks Ben to buy for her an amulet at the local pawn shop that's she's thinking of using for the movie. When he leaves, he sees Wednesday's mother Morticia talking with her sisters, who are Lily Munster and Elvira. 

    When he leaves the shop, he's spotted by Gwen and her friends who decide to follow him to know what he's up to.

    While he waits the girls’ finish their discussion, Ben decides to put on the amulet, which he notices has a description that reads "Those with the blood of gods shall receive the heart of kings”. Unknown to him the amulet contains a magic stone that's capable of giving power to anyone that wears it. The amulet also detects any women on the surrounding and also gives them those powers, as well as makes them attracted to the wearer of the amulet.

    Because Ben puts it on, the amulet sends a wave (that nobody can see) that affects him, Wednesday and her friends, as well as Morticia and her sisters. Gwen and her friends are also affected by it. It seems at first that nothing happened, but as everybody goes home and go to sleep, they can't help but feel a tingling sensation on their bodies.

    The next day, Ben is shocked when he sees his body is a bit more muscular than before and that his dick has grown  (can be between 12 and 20 inches), while the girls are shocked when they see their bodies are more buxom and curvaceous than before. This leads Kylie to add fanservice in her movie, before deciding to add full blown graphic sex scenes.

    The girls also find themselves with powers, with them deciding to use to occasionally help Ben (as well as a little bit for their own personal gain).

    The amulet also causes their secret feelings for Ben to become more pronounced. When they confess to Wednesday, she says she always thought about sharing Ben with the girls and that she’s okay if they want to pursue him. Thought she does get a bit weirded out when her own mother and her aunts and especially Gwen also pursue him.

    However, a five-member group composed of females from the following alien races:

    • Vladats
    • Transylians
    • Loboans
    • Thep Khufans
    • Ectonurites

    Seek the amulet, wanting to use its powers to take over planets, starting with Earth. They also think about convincing Ben to become their mate  

    The climax takes place on Halloween, the day Kylie was planning to premiere their movie in the town’s local movie theater (she made an edit with non-graphic sex scenes to show at the theater). The aliens abduct Ben, manage to deactivate his Ominitrix, and send an army of monsters when the girls come for his rescue.

    Meanwhile Ben distracts the aliens by having sex with them. The aliens use their technology/the amulet to give themselves human forms to make them more appealing to Ben:

    • Vladat: Vampira (from Plan 9 From Outer Space)
    • Transylian: Bride of Frankestein
    • Loboan: Werewolf
    • Thep Khufan: Pharaoh
    • Ectonurite: Ghost

    The girls manage to rescue Ben and defeat the aliens and they decide to keep them as their “pets”. 

    To celebrate their victory, Kylie has a private screening at Wednseday’s house, where she shows the unedited version of the movie. This leads to an orgy between Ben and the girls.

    Requirements:

    • Suggestion of artists to use for reference of the women’s thicc bodies:
    1. Shiin
    2. Joelasko
    3. thePIT
    4. CerberusLive/Wilko
    5. O-mac
    6. Victor Rinaldi
    7. Turk128
    8. Sun1sol
    9. Lordstevie
    10. Hecchidechu/Balak
    11. Jaeh
    12. Graphicbrat
    13. DevilHS
    14. Deuce
    15. Shonuff44
    16. Boobdan
    17. Hexamous
    18. Witchking00/Hentaicolors
    19. Bigdad
    20. WinterWarning

    • Morticia and Lily are widows, both Gomez and Herman having died before the story.

    • NO pegging, no watersports, no scat, no heavy bdsm, no rape , no futa, no pregnant sex

    Plot ideas/suggestions:

    • As expected, the townsfolk react with shock and awe to the girl’s new endowed bodies. The men especially start to become attracted to them and show jealousy when they see them hanging out with Ben and showing public affection towards him to show they’re not available. Some of these men however don’t care and still try to steal them from Ben, but always failing because of either Ben or  the girl’s newfound powers/strength. Examples include:
    1. Ben’s childhood bullies Cash and JT. They originally mocked Ben for hanging out with the girls, but start believing that the girls are too good to hang out with him after their change.
    2. One of their teachers. One of his favorite perverted fantasies is the one where he, a fat balding middle aged man, would steal the girlfriend of one of his students. He always wanted to have live out this fantasy and when the girls become well-endowed, he decides to finally put his plan into action by choosing Wednesday. He tells her to stay after class, where he tries to have his way with her. However the plan fails when Wednesday uses her powers to immobilize him. She then calls Ben and, after telling him what the teacher almost did, they proceed to have sex in front of the teacher.

    • Morticia, Elvira and Lily used to have their own band during college that they called “The Haunted Girls”, which had songs that usually had lyrics referencing horror movies. They were thinking of reforming their band just for fun as the Halloween season is coming, and they go through with it after they themselves get enhanced by the amulet, revamping the band by changing the name to “The Hauntingly Hot Girls” and by adding sexually suggestive lyrics to their new songs. They ask Kylie if they can write and sing their songs for her movie and she not only allows it, but she even films a music video for it.

    • As a reference to the famous stripping scene from Return of the Living Dead, one night when the girls are supposed to be filming one of the scenes at the Addams’ cemetery, one of them becomes so horny that she starts stripping and dancing naked on top of one of the tombstones, and instead of telling her to stop the other girls encourage her. Alternatively this could lead into the girls deciding to join as well, which itself could lead into an orgy with all of them.

    • Gaz, being a video game lover, is coming up with her own idea for a game, which involve characters based on her and her friends. After their bodies get enhanced she decides to alter the game to make it more sexualized, this include the characters in it now sporting stripperiffic outfits. She decides to “make” (aka force someone else to make) the outfits so the girls could wear for Halloween. This leads to the girls wearing the outfits when they’re rescuing Ben:

    1. Wednesday and Kylie: link

    2. Gaz: link

    3. Mandy: link (the dominatrix outfit)

    4. Lydia: link

    5. Gwen, Jade and Penny: link

  4. Hiccup the Barbarian/Hiccup: An Avenger’s Tale

    in Cartoons

    Posted · Edited by thebooblover

    (Bold text = Idea by Red_Light_Zone)

    Plot:

    In a  mystical land, Hiccup as a child has witnessed his village being invaded by the army of the tyrannical queen Grimhilde. His father was killed and his mother strangely disappeared, but he managed to get away, helped by a spirit. Desiring revenge, the spirit leads him to someplace where he can be trained in sword and sorcery (his mother was a magic user, and he inherited her ability to use magic) and one day defeat the queen. During his training, he finds a dragon egg, from which inside a night fury is born, from which Hiccup names it Toothless.

    Years later, when a grown up Hiccup finishes his training, he’s visited by the spirit that helped him that reveals itself to be his mother Valka. She explains to him that when Grimhilde’s army invaded their tribe, they were accompanied by Hilde’s personal sorceress Maleficent. Valka and Maleficent had a magic battle, which Maleficent won and placed a spell on Valka, turning her into a spirit. The spell can only be broken if Maleficent can be defeated. Valka used her magic so she still has the ability to have a physical form, but only temporarily.

    She tells him that there still one lesson left for him to learn, saying that she’s gonna teach him about sex, as she is sure that he will meet many women during his journey.

    When Hiccup undo his pants, Valka is pleased that he appears to have a 12 inch cock just like his father, only to be shocked when it grows even bigger/to 24 inches when hard.

    Hiccup starts his journey and, as his mother told him, he meets many voluptuous women that join his quest, as well as become his lovers:

    • Astrid, Ruffnut & Heather, three Viking girls who have been ostracized by their village because of their "un-Viking-like" bodies and want to defeat the queen to prove themselves to their village.
    • His own dragon Toothless, whom, he finds out, is a female dragon when he encounters a stone that gives her the ability to turn into a human.
    • Mulan, another warrior who trained alongside Hiccup and became infatuated with him.
    • Taarna (from Heavy Metal) and Julie (from Heavy Metal 2000), two bounty hunters originally hired to kill Hiccup.
    • Rabies-T-Lagomorph’s Amazon ocs (Violent Mileau, Lady Anarchy, and Malesande)
    • Helen and Violet Parr from The Incredibles. They were fighting a villain who sent them to this dimension. 
    • Merida, the former princess of the DumBroch kingdom that was taken over by Grimhilde. After the kingdom was taken over, she and her mother (her father was killed during the takeover) formed a community of other citizens that have their homes taken over and/or had their loved ones killed by Grimhilde’s army including:
    1. The former Queen and princess of the Arendelle kingdom Elsa & Anna. Anna was married to prince Hans, who was in cahoots with Grimhilde and helped her in taking over the kingdom.
    2. Kida from Atlantis The Lost Empire
    3. Moana who was on her quest to give Te Fiti her heart back., hoping that Te Fiti would help save her island
    4. Mavis and her mother Martha from Hotel Transylvania,
    5. Chel from The Road to El Dorado
    6. Chicha, from The Emperor’s New Groove
    7. Pocahontas
    8. Rapunzel, Arianna and Gothel
    9. The Daughters of Scotsman. Here they’re Merida’s childhood friends who grew up to become her bodyguards as well.

    He will also use his sexual prowess to "defeat" Grimhilde, Maleficent, as well as the female subordinates the queen will send to stop him:

    • Jessica Rabbit and Holli Would, here they are two former humans turned succubus that were summoned by Maleficent
    • Maleficent’s fellow sorceress/witches Madam Mim and Gruntilda
    • The captain of the queen's army Tamora Calhoun.
    • The Daughters of Aku and The High Priestess from Samurai Jack. Here they are referred to as the Daughters of Maleficent. Their back story is that Maleficent once visited a cult that worshiped her. She seduces and beds the High Priestess, using her magic to impregnate her.
    • Queen La from Tarzan the Animated Series.
    • Shego and Kim Possible. One of Drakken’s machine accidentally sent them both to a different dimension and into Grimhilde's personal chambers. From there they were both drafted into her forces as personal agents, Shego willingly while Kim had to be intensely brainwashed.

    Requirements:

    • Suggestion of artists to use for reference of the women’s thicc bodies:
    1. Shiin
    2. Joelasko
    3. thePIT
    4. CerberusLive/Wilko
    5. O-mac
    6. Victor Rinaldi
    7. Turk128
    8. Sun1sol
    9. Lordstevie
    10. Hecchidechu/Balak
    11. Jaeh
    12. Graphicbrat
    13. DevilHS
    14. Deuce
    15. Shonuff44
    16. Boobdan
    17. Hexamous
    18. Witchking00/Hentaicolors
    19. Bigdad
    20. WinterWarning

    • NO pegging, no watersports, no scat, no heavy bdsm, no rape , no futa, no pregnant sex

    Optional/Suggestions:

  7. Matt the Hero (Batman Beyond Challenge)

    in DC 'Verse & other Comics

    Posted · Edited by thebooblover

    (Bold text = Idea by Guest Heilbron)

    • Plot:

    Terry’s younger brother Matt finds out about his secret identity. Matt wants him to train into being a superhero as well, wanting to become his sidekick, but Terry refuses because he doesn't want to put his brother in danger. An upset Matt is having a walk when he sees an old lady getting mugged. After saving her, he finds a strange amulet. When he gets home and puts it on, the amulet shows him a holographic projection of a woman that tells him where it came from, a planet where its people had superpowers.

    Holo (how Matt decides to call the amulet’s hologram) explains that it was made by one the residents of the planet, who was planning to come to Earth and made the amulet to retain his powers since they don’t work on Earth. However, the amulet detected its creator’s evil intentions, and escaped to find someone who could use the powers contained in it for good, and chose Matt because it saw him helping the old lady.

    During this conversation, Matt feels the power of the amulet coursing through him, but also notices a strange feeling in his crotch. He also can’t help but keep noticing the hologram’s very sizeable bust. When Holo finishes the story, it talks about all the powers that Matt will now have.

    She also reveals one more thing about the citizens of the planet:

    They’re a race of visually flawless, well endowed, and physically powerful people that we’ll just call the Adonisins (like Adonis) exist on the outer edge of the galaxy. Due to the strange esoteric energies produced by their planet, the Adonisins learned to harness it for their own, turning them into the beautiful powerhouses known throughout the universes. However, this was their kryptonite because while they were able to go to other galaxies with their powers, they couldn’t get far as they relied too heavily on their planet’s unique energy. If they remained out of planet for too long, their bodies would grow shriveled, weak, and impotent. But not many bothered to leave as the planet’s energies made them biologically immortal and took their need for food and sleep. So they mostly stayed on their world and fucked each other senseless, but there would come a day when one Adonisin would grow greedy enough to figure out a way around this weakness.

    This greedy Adonisin created the amulet to not only make his powers work on Earth, but keep his endowments intact, but the amulet become sentient and detected its creators evil intentions of taking over worlds and makes harems of their women, and decided to escape and find someone that would not only use it’s powers for good, but also treat any women that will join a harem with respect. Matt then undoes his pants and finds that indeed his dick is now much bigger than before (can be from 12 inches to 20).

    With the help of the amulet, not only will Matt fight crime alongside his brother, but he will also seduce the following women:

    • Max Gibson
    • Dana Tan
    • Melanie Walker
    • Bobbi “Blade” Sommer
    • Chelsea Cunningham
    • Mary McGinnis
    • Aquagirl
    • Big Barda
    • Amy (from the “Return of the Joker” movie)
    • Jackie Wallace (from the episode "Earth Mover")
    • Karen Foley (from the episode "Armory")
    • Trina (from the episode “Payback”)

    He will also seduce some of the villainesses that him will face with his brother, including:

    • Queen
    • Inque
    • Curare
    • The Dee-Dees
    • Dottie
    • Tayko
    • Deanna Clay
    • April Corso (from the episode "April Moon") 
    • Freon (from the episode "Heroes") 
    • Sable Thorpe (from the episode "King's Ransom") 
    • Cynthia (from the episode "Terry's Friend Dates a Robot")
    • Tigress (from the episode "Splicers")
    • Miss Winston/Vendetta

    Meanwhile, the creator of the amulet, using a prototype of the amulet that only allows his powers to work, arrives on Earth, and seeks for it.

    The basic premise is that during a fight between Batman and a giant robot, Matt gets in stuck in the crossfire. He hides in an abandoned cave trying to be safe, but he finds himself somehow in the rock of eternity with Zatanna waiting for him. She explains that something unfathomably powerful is coming Earth’s way and that the lack of capable heroes will lead to the planet’s down fall, so she concocted a spell that would take someone pure of heart, like Matt, and make them a superhero that could fight off virtually any villain. To do this, she took the powers of some of the most dangerous villains in the universe and magically instilled them into one person, Matt. All he has to do is say the name “Shazam” and the powers are his. Finally, she says that the door to the rock of eternity is always open to him, and that she’ll be there if he needs her. 

    When he first trans forms, Matt destroys the robot Batman was having trouble with in a matter of seconds. He then speaks to Batman and uses his X-Ray vision to see under the cowl. Shocked to find out that that it’s his brother of all people, the new Shazam makes a hasty retreat to his house to comprehend today. But when he tries to turn back, he’s shocked to find that his cock is still the thick, massive monster that it was when he transformed. He goes back to Zatanna with this and she explains that while she may be powerful, this was all new to her and she made this spell hastily with little foresight on the effects. She then explains that it could be worse and that he has a cock any woman would want, so he shouldn’t worry. When he asks why women would want this, she gives him a lengthy demonstration.

    Requirements:

    • The amulet  makes the women buxom and curvaceous.
    • Breast size references:
    1. Max Gibson: Jeannetta Joy
    2. Dana Tan: Casey James
    3. Ten∕Melanie Walker: Maxi Mounds
    4. Mary McGinnis: Brooke Blue
    5. Chelsea Cunningham: Beshine
    6. Bobbi Sommer: Tiffany Towers
    7. Aquagirl: Kristi Lovett
    8. Big Barda: Vicky Little
    9. Amy: Lolo Ferrari
    10. Jackie Wallace: Ariane Saint-Amour
    11. Karen Foley: Spantaneeus Xtasty
    12. Trina: Lisa Lipps
    13. Queen: Deena Duos
    14. Inque: Penelope Black Diamond
    15. Curaré: Mistress Rhiannon
    16. The Dee-Dees: Teddi Barrett
    17. Dottie: Minka
    18. Tayko: Kayla Kleevage
    19. Sable Thorpe: BB Gunns
    20. April Corso: Sarenna Lee
    21. Freon: Chelsea Charms
    22. Deanna Clay: Amy Anderssen
    23. Cynthia: Bianca Beauchamp
    24. Tigress: Miosotis Claribel
    25. Miss Winston: Melonie Tipps
    • NO pegging, no watersports, no scat, no heavy bdsm, no rape , no futa, no pregnant sex.

    Optional/Suggestions:

    • Matt can either be the same age he was in the show, or he can be older.
    • The supersuit that Matt gains has a special fabric that can hide any bulges caused by its user’s proportions, which hides the bulge caused by his grown cock. The amulet can transform any fabric of clothes into that same fabric (Matt uses it on his clothes to hide the bulge caused by his grown cock, as well as on the clothes of any women in his harem to hide their new bodies)
    • Or if the women in his harem want to flaunt their new proportions, the amulet has memory alteration powers that Matt can use so that people won’t question their new proportions too much
    • Some of the smut scenes can also be between solely the women.
    • Possible super powers for Matt:
    1.  Super strength,
    2. flying,
    3. resiliency,
    4. super speed,
    5. x-ray vision,
    6. super hearing
    7. generation of energy and making of energy constructs
    • In Red_Light_Zone’s idea, his powers consists of:
    1. The powers of Zod
    2. The knowledge of Brainiac
    3. The courage of Mongol
    4. The strength and endurance of Doomsday
    5. The speed of Savitar
    6. And the magic of the person who bestowed him said powers, Zatanna Zatara
    • He also uses it to gives powers to the women in his harem that don’t have powers.
    • The order of the women he seduce is up to you

     

  10. Hiccup the Overlord discussion thread

    in General

    Posted

    3 minutes ago, Jwsponky said:

    Um... The inclusion of orcs, queen La of Tarzan draining Mirage of Aladdin of a significant portion of her powers, and Hiccup conquering the Hercules version of Greece, with several girls from that series getting demigoddess powers. And possibly some more that slipped my mind...

    Okay then, these are some interestings ideas, but have you started writing the story?

  15. Total Drama High School (A Cody Harem Challenge)

    in Cartoons

    Posted

    10 minutes ago, Red_Light_Zone said:

    Oh... well I thought 18 was a big enough number. I was going off of Garabatoz's comic featuring Cody and 4 other girls.

    While we'er on the subject, I have to say that I've read your challenges and an very impressed. I'd like to go over some ideas with you.

    Really? Which ones?

  18. Praetor's Discussion Thread

    in General

    Posted

    1 hour ago, Guest Guest, maybe writer said:

    Oh.

    Well in that case, I have some minor suggestions for the big hero 6 thing.

    If you like my 'counter team' idea, heres some directions you could go

    Hiro should be awkward and offput by e everytging. Confidence is nice but a2kwardness is funny and more relatable.

    High voltage is already adored by the public and even wins the heroes over for a while with her dancing. If she gets 'enhanced' she'd have no trouble winning anyone over or hypnotising them. Thats kinda boring for her though, It eould be great for high voltage to be trying to set up a 'catwoman' relation with hiro, dismissing anyone else who tries to bring her in and flirting heavily, tryibg to seduce her way to another 'plea bargin' and maybe being publicly known as their 'renegade' member to the teams confusion and frustration. Not sure what to do with her mother, but she seems like she'd support her daughter and cheer her on..... in villainy. Not sure if thats good or bad parenting

    Karmi should be a massive fangirl (you'll see it in the episode). She could have a superhero identity, but it might be more fun to have her be a 'secret hero doctor' due to her IQ and experiences. Shed provably agree to the project just to get close to hiro. It be funny for thibgs to grind to a halt just because she got his mask on, and she has to take time to come to terms, then set up a seductive apology. She should never clue in that he didn't (doesn't?) Have a crush on her, and just treat the idea as a fact when considering things. It'd make some sense for the 'substance' to be something she was developing as a side project to impress hiro, and she's furiois hiro accidentally used it before she could give it to hiro. But shes also worried about her classmate and sorry it was sorta her fault. Her realising ehat happened would be an interesting mix of emotionals, and another reason to play 'doctor'. Plus, it be a good way for honey and go-go to find out: they go to hiro's biggest fan for ideas to keep him (confident she won't recognise them) and she mentions this project she was working on that a classmate got exposed too.... honey offers to help refine it.

    Abigail could also massive fan of the hero who saved her (its more compressed than karmi, she can compose herself until it comes up and even be proactive about it but shes a blushing, chronically shy mess once it does or she meets him, he did save her life and rescue her after several years) and has veen trying to surruptiously visit him for a while now, making trips to the university as a guest speaker, etc. She comedically also belives hiro has a crush on karmi and is jeasous but accepting, despite him having missed the whole thing. Alternatively, she too has no idea of his secret identity and bonds with karmi over admiration for hiro.... in front of hiro. Which gives karmi the idea to bring her in as a test volunteer for the serum. Shes not as much a behind-the scenes scientist as the ithers but has more life and practical expeince to share.

     She's also looking to try out for big hiro 6. She's been 'tracer' ing since the portal accident and can even do it to other thibgs and people (tracer mixed with maya from borderlands 2) or make mini-portals and thinks that could give her an in.... though she cant quite contr*she disappears for an hour*ol it yet, espevially when nervous so she needs their help with that. If she succeeds she'd probqbly be team driver/pilot, test subject (voluntarily). She has experience with all three.

    Gogo would be VERY disadvantaged by losing her aerodynamic figure, so she could probably build some kind of figure minimiser armour, possibly with abigails help, which the girls could use to boost their civilian disguise by hiding their increased figures.

    Hiro's body language in the film suggests a crush on honey lemon, that could be usefull. Maybe she's flatrered but doesn't give it too much thought yet or doesn't know, thinking its another rumor like hiro and karmi

    Enhancement would result in increased body mass, which could render bunkbeds unusable, or break a bed by accident before the rei force the remainig one. It could be used to force honey and gogo to share a bed

    The enhancement could also act as a super-soldier serum, or be inspired by the rumors of it and reverse engineered from obsvering its test subject (turns out ironically her bust is not from that, she's naturally like that), and helps make them better heros as a result.

    I have no idea what to do with wasabi and fred.... but if they got 'headhunted' by hero teams or universities it could be used to put them aside, give them another reason to be desperate to keep hiro and the need to build a new 'team'. You could have them make video chats to stay in touch (or set up big hero six international) and imply their going through something similar by having them introduce female co-workers. I have this mental image of a female samurai dojo approaching wasabi for laser swords. They do act as excellent support and advice though and can add to the story, so maybe not. Though they could be involved with such groups in the immediate area as a compromise, which would let them get enhanced like hiro to the joy of their groups.

    No idea who fred could meet. Maybe a girl at a comic book store, or from a rival rich family

    I've nothing for the assasin, i haven't seen her episode.

    What about aunt Cass?

  19. Praetor's Discussion Thread

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    11 hours ago, Guest Guest, maybe writer said:

    okay. Can’t always come up with a winner. thanks for liking most of my ideas. I may come back with more later if that’s okay. not right away. I’ve had a good run and don’t want to be a bother.

     

    Can;t wait to see how things go

    Hey no worries, you weren’t being a bother.

    And just because I’m neutral on the idea doesn’t mean I don’t want Praetor to use it.

  20. Praetor's Discussion Thread

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    On 5/17/2018 at 7:28 PM, Guest Guest, maybe writer said:

    It’s okay if it’s not your thing. This is largely your and praetor's story. If you’d prefer not to go there you can say, i don;t mind  the criticism

    If yourre neutral about it that’s fine too.

    I’m neutral.

  21. Hiccup the Overlord (HTTYD/Disney/Overlord crossover fanfic challenge)

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    10 minutes ago, Guest A prospective author said:

    Thank you, though I do admit I'm unsure what to title the tale. My original idea was 'How to Train your Overlord' only to realise that noble Praetor had used that for his story... might just go with 'Hiccup the Overlord'.

    Yeah, kinda my fault. The original title for his story was “Mounting the World” (or something similar), but he told me he was looking for another title, so I suggested “How to Train your Overlord” to him

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