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  1. I’m so sorry for the late reply! I’ve been kinda crazy busy with home life/work stuff. 2018 was not a good year for my family. I’m glad to be leaving it behind. I’m really determined to get this story finished this year. Thank you so much for all the comments… I actually think I might start posting it all here again. I kinda overreacted to a stupid thing from a friend and also didn’t want to have to deal with multiple sites… I have been updating on wattpad.
  2. Joana’s story will reveal quite a bit about his mindset, so he won’t be as much a mystery with his motives and why he’s the way he is. It will be kinda dark though... I’m going to get around to it since I have it all laid out… I’m just struggling with writer’s block and some other personal stuff in my life right now.
  3. I will be using inkitt too after doing some editing.
  4. HideAndGoSeek: Again.. thank you SO much for reviewing! I love seeing your comments! I’m sorry for my timing lol Bad girl! Not paying attention to the bride. Sounds like you had some fun though :p Sorry for the delay.. lots happened in the past few weeks, but I’m getting better at getting them up quicker! I’ll have a few more chapters hopefully up this month.
  5. Thank you for taking the time to comment! I love comments! And YAY for some Logan love! Lol I was beginning to wonder if I did something horribly wrong in his character development since most people don’t seem to like him o.o I promise I will finish this! It’s just slow going due to a busy life.
  6. Oh believe me I know there are lots of grammar/spelling errors. I would definitely need someone to look through everything and correct where I messed up on my tenses too. Every once in a while, I try to go to earlier chapters and edit/try to smooth things out that was bad writing. And yuuuupppp Cade mentioned it a few chapters ago, she was pregnant during the December one so she was immune to its affect. Story wise.. this chapter would make it around February 25th, the next Blood moon would be in May/June range. This is how crazy I am with my notes… Chapter 1: May 17 Chapter 2: Arrived May 20 Chapter 3: May 21 Chapter 4: May 21 Chapter 5: May 21 - May 22 Chapter 6: May 28 - June 9 | 3 weeks pregnant Chapter 7: June 9 - June 16 | 4 weeks pregnant Chapter 8: June 16 - June 19 | 4.5 weeks pregnant Chapter 9: June 19 | 4.5 weeks pregnant Chapter 10: June 20 - June 23 | 5 weeks pregnant Chapter 11: June 23 - June 26 | 5.5 weeks pregnant Chapter 12: June 29 - July 1 | 6 weeks pregnant Chapter 13: July 1 - July 3 | 6.5 weeks pregnant Chapter 14: July 2 - Aug 16 | 13 weeks pregnant (3 mo) Chapter 15: August 16 | 13 weeks pregnant Chapter 16: August 16, 17 | 13 weeks pregnant Chapter 17: August 17, 18 | 13 weeks pregnant Chapter 18: August 22, 23 | 14 weeks pregnant Chapter 19: August 23 | 14 weeks pregnant Chapter 20: August 23 | 14 weeks pregnant Chapter 21: August 23 | 14 weeks pregnant Chapter 22: August 23 | 14 weeks pregnant Chapter 23: August 23, 24 | 14 weeks pregnant Chapter 24: August 24, 25 | 14 weeks pregnant Chapter 25: August 25 | 14 weeks pregnant Chapter 26: August 27 | 14 weeks pregnant Chapter 27: August 31 –September 2 | 15 weeks pregnant Chapter 28: September 2 | 15 weeks pregnant Chapter 29: September 4 | 15 weeks pregnant (4 months) Chapter 30: September 4 | 15 weeks pregnant Chapter 31: September 4 | 15 weeks pregnant Chapter 32: September 7 | 15 weeks pregnant (111 days) Chapter 33: September 14 | 16 weeks pregnant Chapter 34: December 13 | 30 weeks (7 months pregnant) Chapter 35: December 13 Chapter 36: December 13 - Birth chapter Chapter 37: December 13 - December 19 Chapter 38: December 20 - 22 Chapter 39: December 22 - January 5 Chapter 40: January 5 - January 12 Chapter 41: February 12 – February 14 Chapter 42: February 14 – February 17 Chapter 43: February 21 Chapter 44: February 21 Chapter 45: February 21 – February 24 Chapter 46: February 24 Chapter 47: February 24 Chapter 48: February 24 - February 25 Chapter 49: February 25 Chapter 50: February 25
  7. HideAndGoSeek: THANK YOU so much for your reviews. I love them! Keep them coming I decided I’m just gonna post when I can, I’m not constricting myself to a certain amount of pages just so I can get some updates up faster. More answers to questions now! Charamel: THANK YOU for your review! They mean SO much :) I’m flattered you took the time to make one just to review! Thank you. Aaron seems to get a lot of love, I’m going to try to throw his POV in more! And your English was perfect! Polars: THANK YOU for your review! I’m trying to get them out fast! Random Noob: Thanks for replying! I am definitely going to throw some more Aaron POVs in, you aren’t the only one asking! Hehe.. i also started posting my stories on Wattpad, so I could enter contests, and the viewers/reviewers there have all collected called for more Aaron, so I see it’s a common theme.
  8. Hideandseek: Thank you for reviewing! Your question shall be answered now!
  9. He’s one of my favorites.. but hard to portray how I picture him in my head, as he’s a bit flat-personality wise, more the silent type! But I will try to put some more snippets in his POV. Thanks for your response
  10. I’m sorry I’ve been bad about checking my forum lately. It seems everytime I don’t I get people leaving stuff. I’ve been out of the country. Thank you for your review!! They always make me happy I really wish I could write faster, but I’m very slow.. I will get this story done though dammit! I have everything mapped out.
  11. Caserly: Thank you for your review! And omg I would LOVE to read that fanfiction! I don’t think any writing is bad! Lol we all started somewhere, I’ve been writing stupid little stories since kindergarten. I guess I just always had a crazy imagination. I can’t believe it’s been that long! Jeesh, time just gets away from you. I hate that I couldn’t just crank this story out faster, so thank you so much for sticking with me and my busy life! I can’t seem to just make side characters, I have to have whole stories for them as well! And I have a very detailed notepad with all their info lol I’m glad you like them all! Aaron seems to be getting a lot of love lately, I’m glad since he kinda is hard for me to write, as I imagine him to communicate more non-verbally which can be hard to express in type and sometimes I have to make him speak when I don’t want to. I kinda expected my reviews would taper with my lengthy time between posts, but it’s always disheartening anyways, so thank you so much for giving me some feedback I’m hoping to have the next one out soon
  12. BabyRacoon91: Thank you for your review!! I’m hoping to have more for you by Thursday. HideAndGoSeek: THANK you for both your wonderful reviews! I’m sorry for the cliffhangers, I honestly don’t mean to do them, but I try to keep my chapters similar lengths, and when I get to a stopping point, it ends up there. I don’t do it on purpose, I promise I’m no sadist! I’m reading some ongoing stories of my own that torture me too.. so I’m trying! And don’t worry.. now that she isn’t resisting, you will get some fluff! Thank you for sticking with me over the years… since I started writing this thing I’ve got my BSN in nursing, started working full time as a hospital, got married, and now working on my MSN o.O dear lord I didn’t realize how long this has dragged out. It started as a side hobby to help me relax. Those other two stories I know are pretty rough, they were my first attempts lol When I got stuck in the Wilds is when I came up with Blood Moon, and it was always meant to be a short story.. but things kept changing as I wrote and it became the beast that it is. It’s a ridiculous amount of pages in word. It’s at 645 now.
  13. YAY! Some Logan love for once! Haha. I know not a lot of people love him, I don’t know why >.> he’s my little literary baby Thank you for reviewing! I’m doing my best to get these stories done. I think Blood Moon will have 10-15ish chapters left at tops.. depending on how my brain wants to drag things out.
  14. Alex, No problem! Thanks for still reading! It seems a lot of people are having weird stuff happen with their accounts. But use this whenever! I’m doing my darndest to finish my ongoing stories, as the others I want to work on are bugging me too.
  15. Kylee: Thank you for your review! It really means a lot. I’m flattered by the compliment Shelley: Thank you for all your reviews! And GAH! I wish I could answer all your questions! I know it’s slow going, but they will be answered! I promise. Catz33: Thanks for your review! Hehe a Quinn lover. I like him too Axxm/Your biggest fan: Thank you for your review! I’m sorry its taken so long. Thank you for taking the time to review! Haha.. I like the Emil hate. Charlie-Bear: Thank you for the review! I’m so glad you liked it! NLOVE: Thank you for the review! I loved your comments. 1) Lol I know Logan is an ass, but to me.. he’s a lovable ass! 2) Well, you MIGHT be onto something there, buuuuttttt slightly off at the same time 3) She’ll be making an appearance soon 4) Yup, he’s a non-lovable ass 5) Hopefully you’ll like this little snippet in this chapter, I pretty much did it because of your review! He’s just very hard to portray correctly, because I imagined him as having a rather flat personality. There have been times I put things in his perspective but had to delete it because it just didn’t work the way I wanted it to.
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