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  1. I just finished my first prompt story. Not so easy with the challenge of the word count. By the time i reached the limit i was getting into it. I managed it though, i think it's okay.

    1. JayDee

      JayDee

      Good to hear! I'll check it out some time this week (I try not to read 'em 'til I've done mine :), mostly because the better quality stories would make me think I can't compete)

  2. I hate my couch, it's my bed right now and it's the most uncomfortable thing in the universe. ::looks over at her bed longingly:: I can't get back on it till monday.

  3. I have a very important announcement. First I am so sorry that it's been this long before you guys have had any news about the story. I swear to you that you'll all be very happy about this news though and it will make up for a lot. It's finished, the muse returned wiht a vengance. I have finished the story and all it needs now is the betaing part. Meaning that very soon yo will all get the whole thing. I am very excited about this, it means that we can soon move on to the next saga. Besides, the companion story will be posted very soon. I hope that this news makes you all happy and i would apreciate some feedback because it is going to take a minute to post everything. There are a few chapters and i don't know whether to post all at once of take it every day one chapter. let me know what you guys think.
  4. I have frozen my ears off, i forgot my hoodie when I took my daughter down the hill and well now my ears are so cold i think they might actually have ice on them. LOL

  5. I am very happy to say that the muse has replanted herself properly, i shot off two chapter in one day. Yay I'm back, I'd be happy to share my muse though even though she's not exactly for the faint of heart. Lol, going to try to write another chapter today and see how it turns out. Unfortunately now my mind has come up with a few other stories i'd like to do but i have to keep remind myself one at a time.

  6. the muse has returned, yay she was gone too long and now i can finish my story. I'm so happy about that.

    1. BoredStraight
    2. kagome26isawsome

      kagome26isawsome

      cool if you have any of that muse left, send some my way! lol

  7. I think everything is catching up with me, so i spent most of the morning sleeping. Had a nice nap until my 'friend' decided to come over. I really wonder why I keep her around cause this is the friend who has my other stories and RPG information, like my character sheets and my demonology that i wrote up from scratch.

    1. BronxWench

      BronxWench

      ::big gentle huggles::

  8. Have managed to have disaster weekend. He came home early Sat after fight with GF and we got stuck with him. If that wasn't bad enough got into massive row with him sun. All is good though, after fighting with him and yelling a good bit feel a hundred times better. especially after calling him a few choice things. On the very plus side my writers block seems to be lifting. YAY

    1. Shadowknight12

      Shadowknight12

      Try the frying pan next time. I assure you it feels even better.

    2. BoredStraight

      BoredStraight

      skillets are the best. Can't beat cast iron!

  9. Yay, it be Saturday and the royal pain in the ass is gone for the wHOLE day. I feel sorry for his girlfriend, hm let me take that back no i don't. Lol, odd yes I know but I would rather he keep the girlfriend and leave me alone. :: shrugs :: it's two days out of the week I dont' have to deal with him and someone else can handle him. All i care about when it comes to that little situation is that she not come here, which she's kept to considering she doens't know I eve...

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    2. Onihime

      Onihime

      ohhh.. SK's got a marvelous idea there Sanura!

    3. BronxWench

      BronxWench

      I've maimed for less. Seriously, start sneaking chaste monk berry into his food. His girlfriend may not be thrilled but limp dicks do no harm...

    4. pittwitch

      pittwitch

      I'm with Oni. At the very least, I'd have his balls in a mason jar on my dresser, just so I'd know where they were and what they were doing.

  10. Okay ladies and gents, it's up and ugh i'm sorry it took so long. Oh my god I am still having trouble with this whole insident in this chapter. lol yeah i know i shouldn't be but as the writer i treat it as real as i can so him keeping THAT sort of info from Natasha is very bad. hmm what will that mean for all of them in the end?
  11. I'm sorry guys, i've been really sick the last couple of days so I have fallen behind in my chapters and that sucks. I have one with my beta but she's not gotten back to me with it yet and the next one is on a stand still right now because of my illness, that and i had to get my laptop back from the SOB that is my husband, long story that i will not get into. I am trying my damndest to hurry up but it's been hard with the meds i'm having to take. On the plus side it's my eldest daughter's birthday today so it will be an easy day today. Anyway, as i said i'm so sorry.
  12. I am miserable, my chest hasn't gotten better. I feel like crap and the meds are making me feel funny. I can barely keep myself upright. My stories are neglected still and I'm sorry.

    1. BronxWench

      BronxWench

      ::passes Sanura hot tea with honey and lemon::

    2. BoredStraight

      BoredStraight

      Awww I'm sorry! I hope you feel better soon!

  13. I hate being sick, I got so sick so fast it's not even funny. One second I was fine and then the next I felt like I was going to die. If that wasn't bad enough because of the snow storm my husband had to stay home from work which meant I got no rest. today I at least resemble a human being again. Uh my poor stories they have been neglected.

    1. BronxWench

      BronxWench

      ::huggles Sanura::

  14. wow, um published? Um hehe 'sheepish look' I mean I've thought about it before a few times but honestly I don't know. I honestly don't think I'm good enough for that yet and to be frank with you guys I'm not sure I'd be very good on the publishing end, i mean yeah i can write but publishing is a different ball game. I know i can get fast with these chapters but I think I enjoy writing because it's freeing. Yeah i have an immense back story for this, over the course of the story i find more doors and more stories come into my head. As of yet those stories are either drafts or in my head and if i had the chance to after this is all said and done I'd like to write them for you guys. In the end I think that's just it, I like writing for you guys. I write for myself, to get a perspective across and I don't remember if I've said this but this story sort of saved me. I stopped writing a few years ago, completely loosing the passion for it thanks to a person who well to be honest broke me. I lost the heart for it, I thought i had no talent for it because I believed their words, they made me believe that i wasn't ever going to be good at it and as an idiot i bought it. I regret that choice, to stop. After that whenever i tried to write something i just couldn't finish it, even stories that had been spoken by word, I was in a rpg for a long time, we had a very elaborate thing going for a while and the stories i came up with during them were amazing, i won't even lie but whenever i sat down to write them down I'd loose them in a pool of thoughts. I just couldn't put them down, not even on paper. This story wouldn't let me be, i was inspired by another story i read on the site, it wasn't finished and something honestly changed in me. I opened my writing program and started to write. The story at that point was simple in my head, i had the characters in my head already, even the new ones which are 99 percent of them. I really didn't expect this to be received as well as it was. I think the further i got and the more you guys seemed to like it i got more risky, things i was scared to write weren't so scary. Even the really bad things that made me want to be sick as i thought them up. So when i say this story saved me, I'm not exaggerating. It did and for that it's always going to have apart of my heart very close to it. As for publishing this, i honestly don't know yet. Maybe I'll try eventually but lets finish this first and see how we go. Anyway, I'm gonna go blow my nose now cause I actually started crying. "Another sheepish look."
  15. Just posted chapter thirty. It's a little different in style, for one i have poetry in it. maybe a little epic but still. I haven't dabbled in that form of writing for a long time and it just felt right to add them in. Yes i wrote them. Sorry if their not that good. Oh i hate kimria right now, she really could have hurt aiden. If he'd been a normal baby that would have been a disaster. Luckily he'd not but oh what now? the dragoness said things are going by her rules now, what does that meanf or Natasha now? Will kayne be able to help or will he be as powerless?
  16. Yay the baby is here. I'm very glad about that, also kind of bummed cause it is a point to which i must say. we're getting closer to the end of our story. It's okay still considering a sequel to it, leave that to you guys. As for now, don't worry we still got a couple more chapters to go before this ends. I'd like to go ahead and say that you guys have been awesome, the feedback i've gotten has been incredible. I hope you enjoy the other story I'll post for you guys and that you've enjoyed this as much as I have writing it. I know it's gotten weird and dark but so far I see that you guys have connected to the characters like I have and that's amazing to me. Anyway, thanks guys and please as always review.
  17. Good morning toeveryone, I posted last night but I'm writing this now. Ugh, it's been a week already. I almost cut my finger off, was cutting onions and my hand slipped. It's okay though, I didn't do any real damage. Well, so everyone knows, i was asleep when I wrote that chapter, actually the next chapter was sort of the same. I woke up a few days ago and was looking through the files and found three chapters writeen, and i was like hu? I read it and realized I wrote it all, when, I dunno. How? I absolutely don't know, after a good re write in a few spots and adding some info, I was pretty happy with it. Should tell you how much I think about this stuff if I'm working in my sleep. sigh it's the problem with having kids and a husband. You find ways to write even if there isn't any time at all. Anyway, my beta's checking over the re write on this next chapter and i should have it up for you all here in the next day or two. I hope you enjoy that one too. Oh and I'm gonna answer a question I got in a review. The little 'talk' farella and Kayne have is not going to be in this story. It's int he companion story. Any scenes where it leads Kayne to do or talk to anyone in his point of view are all in the companion piece that will VERy soon be posted.
  18. I'm going to be totally honest, i'm having a writer's fit. Not writers block, fit, as in I'm having a bit of a tantrum with the chapter I'm working on, why, because as always I am going to be redoing half of it. why you ask? Because if i don't it's gonna suck and i won't post it if i think it sucks. Don't worry, it will only put me behind a few hours. Also, on brighter notes. Yay, the jerk is back, lol. He probably could have been a hell of a lot more suspicous but it's doubtful she was going to lie about who the baby's father was, especially with Aiden's already obvious resemblance to said father. On other news, I am still working on companion piece to this, am running beta to the ground, only kidding but she's awesome for being able to keep up with my typing, I'm not exactly sure how I'm going to post that story, if i should just go all in and post it all at once or post it bit by bit, haven't decided that yet. Anyway, it's past two int he morning and i'm beat. Night everyone. Oh REVIEW.
  19. Well, second chapter is up. I hope you all are glad to have them, I had fun with these two though the last part of chapter twenty five was hard to write, got a little emotional during it and apparently I had my beta crying as well. I sort of left it on a cliff hanger, I know. I'll be working on the next chapter the next few days, but since it's Christmas it's gonna take a little longer than it normally takes me. I was talking about maybe writing the story about Davward and Atheria but what do you guys think?
  20. My beta is back, YAY. I am very happy about this fact. I have a little seasons surprise, two chapters before Xmas. Oh my god, yes, worked hard and had my beta working but yes. there will be two posts today. Am about to go and finish the last touches and will post it too. Merry Christmas.
  21. oh man. editing that last chapter was a bitch, if you read the whole thing then i hope it was okay. I wanted to sort of remind everyone that he still is a dragon. A beast, I hope it didn't turn out too badly if you did read. We're getting deeper into this now. I'm definitely not done with it, there are still a few chapters to go. So don't worry about that. The dynamic is also changing, she's growing up and that's going to effect the way she interacts with character. At the start she was a teenager, now she's nearly in her mid twenties. So we'll see. So as always, please review. PLEASE. Oh and my beta's comp is still out of order so that sucks of course. One last thing, odd as this sounds, if you wanted to. Find the song Aaja Nachle, it's Indian music, it's the music i listened to during this chapter.
  22. I found my kick again, able to dish out chapters a hell of a lot faster, back in my rhythm. Well what you guys think of the chapter? I didn't want to leave the situation hanging per say. Hm, wonder what got under his skin? Kayne really doesn't apologize for anything he's done, ever so what got to him in such a short amount of time to have thought of this? what did he possibly find out while she was away? Oh my god, I'm even geeking over the fact she told him she loved him. I wasn't sure how to have her tell him at first, i thought they'd do it during a fight and sh'ed just let it slip but it didn't sound right. So i chose this course. what you guys think? Anyway, the next one is wrote up, just doing last edits and spell checking, should be up tomorrow at some point so keep eyes open for that. It's definitely an interesting chapter in my opinion but it's long, twenty five pages long I put a warning on the beginning but I'll add a quick note about it now. There may be some who won't read all the pages, there is some 'cough' subject matter that may offend, i put a little * at the beginning and end of the 'subject' so you can completely skip it, it is important to read the actual chapter though, there is plot points and a little lead in to my companion story that is going to be up soon enough. Both stories will be tightly connected once you read further into this one. Anyway, i have to relinquish my laptop for a while and do some cleaning, will post tomorrow, promise but please review the chapter. I want to know how I did for it.
  23. Ha, posted another chapter, yay, I feel quite proud of myself. Two chapters in such a short time. I think that's pretty awesome. Mm, most of the chapter is self explanatory, She didn't die, oh my god. Poor Zack, he's gonna be in for a hard time from the others isn't he? I think for the moment we're out of the dark stuff, for now anyway. I simply don't have it in me right at this moment to be all dark and twisted. I know that her dreams are getting weird again and a little spoiler, it may have something to do with a possible sequel. What do you guys think about that one? Like I've said, it's mapped out in my head. I don't have to write a sequel but i dunno, maybe it would be fun. Anyway, consider that a early X-mas present to all of you, or whichever other festivities of the season you celebrate. If at all possible I'll push some more chapters out soon, no promises. this one just clicked easily last night and today.
  24. Uh, I'm still sick, i caught my daughter's stomach virus that she brought home from school. It's taking a lot of will power to not throw up all over the house. I posted twenty and it's a good attempt at a hospital scene i think, considering it's the future and god knows what advancements they'd have. I don't want to think them up though. LOL. If it's wrong I'm sorry, i did research but I may have missed a good bit of it. I don't know. Anyway, Yay, she's back to Kayne but oh no's, she might die. That sucks doesn't it. Worse poor Zack's been left to Kayne while she's in surgery, will he tell her everything he knows or will Kayne find him untrustworthy? Well i think that's it for this chapter, I don't know. You guys are free to ask me things, I'll answer you. Even if it's just to tell you I can't answer you. Anyway, got to go be sick some more.
  25. Kay, posting this up before I go hit the bed, Just posted the next chapter and I'm happy with it. Considering it was a complete re write again. I had like ten pages written and I was like oh no, this is horrible and I re did it, took the parts I liked and gutted the rest. Okay, first off the care bear comment. We were watching care bearson the TV and my lap top sits in that corner so as I was typing i started typing what was happening on the TV i made a note of this on the shout box and Demongoddess said that actually sounds twisted. I read it through a few times and it did sound pretty cool. Second, Zack. Orinially he was going to die like his brothers but for some god aweful reason he wouldn't go away. the more times I tried to kill him the harder it got. I realized why, all of the dynamics have been with people older than her, other than Stacey who turned out to be a complete disaster. So Zack got to live, I wrote him as an empath because i thought, what would be the hardest power for a demon to have. Feelings. What do you think? You guys like him? I actually let him grow on me,he's actually one of the sweeter characters so far. Well Kayne finally got some sort of clue, I'm sorry to anyone who wanted to see him save her but I wanted some her time. It was time for her to save herself and avenge a little bit of her loss. Katreana and Stacey are still out there, i wonder what she'll do to them if she ever meets them again? The letter, okay my atempts at a non apoology letter with some affection from an evil dragon. I literally did it seventeen times to get it right. Okay, well off to bed now. PLEASE review, and keep reading.
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