BoredStraight

Hello all!! So like the title says I'm interested in a long term beta, what I really want is just a friend who is willing to read through my stories and fix all the grammer and spelling mistakes (and I'm sure theres prob a lot of them). I'm also looking for someone to give me a really honest opinion about my work, I'm tough I can take it, and I believe the only way to improve is to learn from my mistakes, but how can I learn when I don't know what those are. From reading other's posts about being a beta I gather that their number one complaint is authors who don't listen, or ignore their advice. I am willing to listen to all and any suggestions. Hell I would be willing to do a total rewrite if thats what was needed. Also I have a full time job and go to school on top of that, so I fully understand how real life can get in the way of what we'd rather be doing, so you'll hear no complaints from me about how long its taking to get my story back. On aff.net I have one story which is complete but I haven't uploaded it all yet, and also a one shot, both are in desperate need of another critcal eye. Both are about the TV show Supernatural, but I don't really think I need someone who watches the show as much as I do (if you do thats even better!) because I could just give you some short backround info so you know why certain things are happening. In both stories the pairings are het. In the future I plan to upload more of my original writings, and not so many fan fics. I'm in the process of starting a fantasy book, and I'm currently building the world for that. So anyone whose into worldbuilding would be a major plus. In addition to that I'm writing some original F/F oneshots which I've never done before so I also need advice about that. I hope all this made sense to someone other than me! And thanks for taking the time to read it all. My penname on aff.net is the same BoredStraight, you can see my stories by clicking the link under my name here, and you can contact me by posting here, pm me, or email me at almostboredstraight@yahoo.com. Thanks again!

This list was so helpful I printed it out (14 pages!). I had started my own world some time ago but gave it up after it just seemed like every other cliche fantasy world, but with this list I can pump some real life in it. THANKS!!

I've read about the frenulum, and have tried doing that before, but I don't think I was doing it right (or maybe it was just the guy) because nothing really special happened. I asked if it felt good and he said yea but he wasn't going nuts or anything like I thought he would.

Very valid point, its good to see both sides of the issue, and it's hard for me because I'm obviously on her side. BUT its a little hard for me to believe that he never met with any girls even though he had that profile for a year, maybe if it was only for a few months, but a year???

I think this is what their going to end up doing, I know her daughter plays a big part (as she should) in my friend's debate with herself about what to do about this. But another part I think is denial. She still believes her fiance (boyfriend, whatever) didn't actually meet any of these women from the website, which to me is really ridiculous because why would someone be on a sex website, with a picture of their penis on it, for over a year, and NOT actually have sex with anyone. I think she believe's him when he says he didn't because its less painful and she wants to believe it. But that makes it harder later on when the truth is going to come out, it almost always does, and she won't be able to be in denial anymore. As it is now, she tells me they haven't slept together nearly as much as they used to and he's sleeping on the couch half the time. But punishing someone isn't going to take back what they did, or earn your trust back, which is the major issue in all this. ANYWAY thanks for all your input, you all had some very good insight!

This is the perfect thread for me, because I happen to be the blowjob QUEEN!! Ok.... where to begin.... I guess the number one trick for blowjobs is to use your hand and your mouth at the same time. Make your hand into a circle and put it to your lips like your shouting something to someone far away. Then when you are sucking his cock keep your hand (which is wrapped around his dick) pressed up against your mouth, moving up and down. This takes away the need to deepthroat (I hate that too) because your covering his whole dick with your mouth and hand on every stroke, and to him it feels like your deepthroating. Now, with your free hand you can play with his balls, or asshole, or that little patch of skin under the balls (if you press a knuckle, gently at first, into that area the guy will go nuts). Don't forget the balls, kiss them, pull them (gently), suck them, ect.. But I guess the number one thing guys have told me which makes a good blowjob is if the girl is enjoying herself. So even if you don't love it, pretend you do, moan like its giving you pleasure. Also experiment with different things, like blowing on his dick to dry the spit a little then going at it again, use different speeds, switch it up, don't stick to the same couple tricks or it'll get boring. Also I like to hold the guy off from cumming, at least for a little while, just as he's about to cum I'll stop, and after about ten minutes of that he'll be begging for you to let him cum, hell he'll do or say anything for you to get him off. I'm evil, what can I say? Well that's all I can think of right now, but if you have any specific questions feel free to ask!

I can totally relate! I used to think there was something wrong with me because my sex drive was much higher than any of the guys I've been with, and from popular culture I was led to believe that men were supposed to want sex way more than women, so I was always wondering what the hell was wrong with me. Its good to know I'm not the only one though!

Ok so I was talking to my best friend recently, I've known her since middle school, and she told me how she had just discovered her fiance had a profile up on some trashy sex hook up website. The profile, she said, had apparently been up for almost a year. During that time she had been pregnant and gave birth to their only child. AND the profile had a picture of his dick on it. Now, my friend is not some spineless lump of a woman, she's strong and independant. She always said if any guy cheated on her she would leave them. BUT all she did was give back his ring and say their not engaged anymore, their still a couple and still living together. I understand she loves him and they have a child together, believe me I've taken a lot of shit from guys myself so I can't judge her. I just don't understand why women (myself included until recently) stay in these shitty relationships???? Maybe you guys can help me out here and explain this?

YES!!!! I totally agree the world would be a much better place, with less negativity, if everyone smoked more joints!!! I can't tell you how many times I've wanted to say that when people take things so seriously instead of just saying, hey we all have our different opinions, no ones right no ones wrong. ANYWAY.... I used to read a lot of m/m fics but now I'm more into hetero. So I guess I'm the third woman on here that enjoys m/f relationships. oh btw porkchopexpress86- weed is much better for you than booze.... just sayin

Yep I saw that commerical too and I thought he was a total douche. But I'm still buying the book for my mom for xmas cause she really loves Alex Cross.

I would be, if I ever got any reviews.... But I still write on!

I have to agree with everyone, Daydreams are my number one source of inspiration, but I have to outline the story as soon as I get an idea or I'll forget all the details that take you from the beginning to the end. Also watching movies or TV, listening to music (gotta have music to daydream), reading, and talking with friends.

You got close to my fav Apollo, SugarBuns!!! haha

Well all he accomplished was making me dead set on learning how to shoot!! Now I have to not only learn but be better then him just to make my point

So like the title says how far into writing a fic do you post it? After the first chapter? Five chapters? Or do you wait until it's completed to post?

Fairyslayer : I asked my brother to take me to the gun range and teach me to shoot his shotgun but he declined saying he wouldn't want me to shoot him if I got mad one day, why do men distrust women with guns? He goes with his friends all the time. Does he think I'm going to be on my period and just lose it and start shooting people?? WTF?

I know it sounds crazy, but I like a hardcopy (you know on that stuff that comes from trees) of all my work. I've had too many computer's crap out on me I guess.

Thank you all so much for all the great info! I will call shooting ranges by me to try to see if they'll let me shoot. I'll also check out those websites. Anyway thanks again! I really appreciate it!

This used to happen to me all the time, so now I quit researching before I'm fully satisfied so I still have the drive to actually write about whatever I'm researching. Then you can always go back while your writing, research a little more, and hopefully it'll give you some more inspiration.

So I'm writing a fic where the characters have and use lots of guns but I have never seen or touched a gun in real life. Can anyone help me out? I need info about hand guns and shotguns, like different names and details like if one is heavy, or even what its like to shoot one. Anything would be helpful. Thank you!