FairySlayer

Weird. I'm subscribed to this thread so I don't know how or why I missed your reply before. Sorry about that. Anyway, I'd love to do more with Gravity Falls, plus a few other fun series that are begging for some loving attention. But I've been in Creative Death Hell for months now, unable to make any progress. Even the one-line story ideas that used to pop into my head at random rarely come to me anymore. So I just read what and when I can and hope that the spark returns. Oh, and sure: Victory favors the bold but Horrifically Nasty Death finds them quite tasty too.

re: "My Absolute Mostest Horriblest Day EVER!," as told by Pinkie Pie I'm happy and honored that you appreciate the poignant aspect of the ending, despite all that wackiness and horror. It was a tough transition and I've always wondered if the ending is cohesive with the rest of the story because of it. But now I'm glad for that, and because this old tale is still getting attention. Thanks

re: "The Secrets of My Sis" I knew the first transformation would be a risk, especially for those not familiar with the Filmation series this is a homage to (especially the Oh My Queen! bit). Evil Fairy put it as, "Just kind of an 'okay, guess she can do this!' moment!" but that's pretty generous, IMO. Glad you liked the opening though. One site listed the story but basically said, "The first scene is Wendy/Tambry but then stop reading because it's 'cest after that." Oh well. High-five right back at'cha. Thanks.

You're awesome. And I mean that in general, not just for this. Thanks.

Category Name: Golan the Insatiable Section category to be in: Cartoons > +G through L Do you have any stories for it?: Yes. One almost ready to post; a few more planned. Please and thank you.

OUCH! Really sorry to hear that, and I hope it all blows over quickly and has no long-lasting pain.

...and I went back and made those corrections you suggested, GerogeGlass. Thanks for pointing those mistakes out. Plus I was able to tweak a few lines here and there for clarity and readability. Next I'll fix some errors I found while listening to "The Secrets of My Sis" again.

I was happy to review it, and as soon as I finish your last two stories I'll have some say about those as well. Thanks for the plug, too.

It only took me a year and a half, and still I don't think my mother would be very proud... Title: A Broodmare's Day Dalliance Author: Fairy Slayer Rating: Adult Pairings: Rainbow Dash/Pip Squeak, Rainbow Dash/Scootaloo Summary: A naughty follow-up to "Mommy Nearest": When Princess Rainbow Dash is summoned to Canterlot she finds a dream come true: she's charged with babysitting her new cousin, a bouncing baby colt (re "Hijo de la Luna"). Tags: COMPLETE, F/m, F/f, minor1 (underage), OC, AU Feedback: Rip it apart. (My replies will be in The Cartoons > General.) Fandom: My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic URL: http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094718

re: "How to Make OUT WITH Friends and b]INSEMINATE[/b] People" Why thank you very much. I just wanted to keep it (relatively) short and sweet, and I felt that it was better to leave on a high-note and slight gag. Not that I'd mind seeing a great three-way scene with them.

re: "Bell of the Ball" Punctuation? Oops. That's one thing text-to-speech can't help with enough, I guess. Still I'm glad you enjoyed the imagery and the little tale itself. Maybe we'll learn more about the bell as the series progresses (hopefully before season 3, which will be in 2018 I guess.) Maybe there are even more fun things to do with it. Thanks.

These are my replies to reviews for "Bell of the Ball" (story) - (reviews), a flashfic follow-up to the Gravity Falls episode "Northwest Mansion Noir." Thank you. And with a username like yours you should be able to ring her bell much more powerfully. It only makes sense, after all. I'm glad you liked it. I hope to write more too. Let's see what kind of fun the next episodes bring, though there will probably be a few more sexual episodes in my head too. I'm sure both Dipper and Pacifica hope to ring the bell every chance they get. At some though point Mabel is going to get tired of listening to them play with his dingaling all the time.

Author: Fairy Slayer Title: Bell of the Ball Rating: Adult Summary: After breaking the Northwests' curse of the lumberjack in "Northwest Mansion Noir," Pacifica has Dipper help her further break her curse of being a mean, uptight Northwest. Feedback: I'm always happy to see comments and such, but only if you're up for it. Fandom: Gravity Falls Pairings: Pacifica Northwest and Dipper Pines Tags/Warnings: COMPLETE: oneshot, m/f, minor1, oral, straight Solo Story URL: http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094642

Evil Fairy is absolutely a major source of good (yet still evil) writing and editing advice. "Riley's Replacement" is a fantastic story and very intense, yet it also has some good subtleties to it. Okay, now it's my turn to listen to a certain Phineas and Ferb story I just noticed. Maybe it'll help me forget about Ark II.

These are my replies to reviews for the Gravity Falls lemon "The Secrets of My Sis" (reviews). Excellent. Glad to hear it. Thanks for the nice words, and I'm truly glad you enjoyed it. If you're interested, I commissioned some fanart for the story (warning: underage): Pines twins in their Bastet costumes; Dipper watching Tambry and Wendy play; and the twins' consummation. QQQ is supposed to mean kisses with serious tongue. It seemed like a good idea at the time. The "women problems" and "female troubles" have always seemed about the same to me... but now I really do see your point: a man saying "women problems" means there's something happening in the relationship. I'll be more careful next time. Oh! But only seemingly torrid? Admittedly Mabel's teasing of Gideon was perhaps a little easier to come up with than expected... Though dangling it in front of Gideon's face at the end was even more fun for all kinds of reasons. Good to know that you like the colorful terms for body parts, as I know some people prefer keeping the terms straightforward. (It's fair enough.) Wendy's "wash the pig" line almost got pulled but Evil Fairy thought it was worth keeping. As for the premise of an ancient and incestuous family, it does seem a little too perfect, doesn't it? Anyway, now that I've made fun of The Secrets of Isis it's time to move onto something a bit more recent... like maybe Ark II (danged hippies!).

Author: Fairy Slayer Title: The Secrets of My Sis Rating: Adult Summary: Mabel is keeping something special from Dipper, but after Gideon Gleeful seeks to claim her as his Dipper will need it and all the help he can get. However it seems Mabel wasn't the only one keeping an ancient secret to herself. Feedback: Comments and CC are always welcome, but no pressure. Fandom: Gravity Falls Pairings: Wendy & Tambry; Mabel & Dipper Tags/Warnings: COMPLETE: oneshot, incest, f/f, f/m, oral, fingering; minor1, minor2 Solo Story URL: http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094429

Author: Fairy Slayer Title: Like, Meow and Stuff Rating: Adult Summary: After the Biskit twins have a rough and tiring day one of the kitties is still desperate to play: first she grants her sister's long-standing wish, then she checks in on her best-enemy to enjoy a little fun of her own. Feedback: I'm always happy to see comments and CC, but don't feel like you must. Fandom: Littlest Pet Shop Pairings: Whittany and Brittany Biskit; Brittany Biskit & Blythe Baxter solos Tags/Warnings: COMPLETE: oneshot, incest, f/f, oral, fingering, rimming; minor2, solo, voyeurism Solo Story URL: http://cartoon.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600094423

Thank you.

May I please request the following category (assuming the five-story limit is no longer necessary): Category name: Littlest Pet Shop Section category to be in: Cartoons: G through L Stories for it?: Yes (1)

re: "How to Make OUT WITH Friends and INSEMINATE People" It's been a very long time, but someday the Atomic Betty spark may hit me again. Betty definitely deserves some relief too, and maybe I shouldn't have left her hanging. Thanks for commenting.

Mostly at deviantART, but after my writing inspiration fizzled then my commenting went next. There had been a few fits and starts, but things may be picking up again. Let's see what happens next: that part of my life hasn't been written yet. right back at'cha! The worst part is that I'm so pedantic, mainly from years of tech writing and proofreading. I've seen all of the common mistakes so often over the years. However, now that I'm much older my brain jumps a little at even the possibility, usually throwing in one of the wrong words for a split second or two and interrupting the flow. That's another reason for moving to text-to-speech since I can just take in the story without any of that. Rumor has it that in the Marvel episode Phineas and Ferb build a special pair of water skis to help them jump up into the battle, which (for extra drama) takes place above a sharknado. Okay, I made that up just now, but these kinds of crossovers are even more contrived than some of the ones I've written. (Fortunately even the Internet forgot them because they were just that bad.) What's odd is that Power Pack has been teamed up with so many other Marvel superheroes, which works of course, but wouldn't they also be the absolute mostest bestest superheroes EVER to team up with the kids from Danville? At least the upcoming Star Wars "crossover" is really just another one of their re-imagining things, like the Middle Ages or other fantasy setting episodes. (I'm not going to link the article about its announcement at Comic-Con because, bleh, it's loaded with spoilers. Pass me that brain bleach when you're done with it.)

re: "Candy, Little Girl" I'm 100% with you on your first and second points, but I won't say anything that may spoil the rest. It's been way too long that I've been stuck, especially since one of the two "unsolvable" problems was actually solved in December. Writing new stuff has been difficult for a few years, but I'm making a push to get over that. No promises, but I'm being proactive as I can.

re: "The Dark Side of the Bright Side" Thank you. I hope that you find the rest of it (at least) as good as you've read so far.

Well, that makes me feel a lot better then. Thanks. Besides, since Lena is such a horndog er, -bear that she'll practically force him to get it on with them again so she can join the fun too.

Okay, I thought I already had a reply thread for "Payback's a Pussy" which is odd since this is one my own favorite stories. Though it's been a few years for some of these the least I can do is acknowledge the thanks. You're very welcome. This was probably my most fun writing experience ever. Everything snapped into place so perfectly at the time that I was concerned that I was lost in some kind of head canon at the time, but fortunately not. No need to be with a show that funny. Facepalmed lightly or painfully? Hopefully with a bit of a laugh to in either case. Not sure that a sequel was ever on my mind, but I did have other YYY! story ideas. Nothing nearly as good though, so better to let this be my tribute to the show. Great to hear, er, read. Again, for sheer joy of writing the story it's my favorite too. Like in my (way long overdue) comment to SWk, it was almost weird, and maybe even euphoric in a way, to simply musing how I'd like to see the Chung Pow Kitties "showing off their rock-star sides more" by having a wild party with Yang. I haven't watched the show or read the fanfic in a while, but he's about the only male whom I'd want to see with the girls and who wouldn't be destroyed by them. Dave would be a scratching post; Coop would be dinner Odd, I could have sworn someone else mentioned the Ferengi reference too, but now I can't find it in my records. Still, I'll accept that it probably could be better and in-world. At the time (and even after racking my brains today) it seemed the clearest way to explain the extremity of the situation. Oddly enough, I paused writing this to watch "Slumber Party of Doom" (to get Paige and Katie's names) and they had a meta-reference to Scooby Doo though the Shaggy and Scooby substitutes were watching YYY! and not the other way around. My concern, still, is that I wrote it past the end, at least with Lena's sex scene, so I'm not sure if the story ended properly, (...). An implied beating, made worse by Yin's antics, could have left even me wanting more so then I'd have to write it. Still, glad you're as happy with it as I am. Thanks.