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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from swirlingdoubt in AFF Holiday Party!   
    What if that’s the one night a year he allows himself to be happy? I mean being evil incarnate must be hard and hardly anyone ever prays for the poor guy.
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from JayDee in AFF Holiday Party!   
    ooooo. @Jaydee Tentacle Christmas extravaganaza?
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from BronxWench in AFF Holiday Party!   
    What if that’s the one night a year he allows himself to be happy? I mean being evil incarnate must be hard and hardly anyone ever prays for the poor guy.
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from CloverReef in AFF Holiday Party!   
    ooooo. @Jaydee Tentacle Christmas extravaganaza?
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from JayDee in AFF Holiday Party!   
    Ho. Ho. Ho.
    Don’t lie he’s got room for at least two more. One more if you count the misses.
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from JayDee in AFF Holiday Party!   
    What if that’s the one night a year he allows himself to be happy? I mean being evil incarnate must be hard and hardly anyone ever prays for the poor guy.
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from BronxWench in AFF Holiday Party!   
    ooooo. @Jaydee Tentacle Christmas extravaganaza?
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    InvidiaRed reacted to JayDee in AFF Holiday Party!   
    Everyone knows Santa only has eyes for Blitzen.
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    InvidiaRed reacted to CloverReef in AFF Holiday Party!   
    Cthulu/Santa Claus, but like a really mushy romance… Sounds like something we should get @JayDee on.
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from JayDee in AFF Holiday Party!   
    Becareful of a stiff breeze then. Or else the fence will cave in and you do both.
    Aka I saw my tentacles doing things to Santa Clause underneath the mistletoe.
     
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from BronxWench in AFF Holiday Party!   
    Becareful of a stiff breeze then. Or else the fence will cave in and you do both.
    Aka I saw my tentacles doing things to Santa Clause underneath the mistletoe.
     
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from BronxWench in AFF Holiday Party!   
    Gonna try to be fluffy this time round.
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from CloverReef in AFF Holiday Party!   
    Gonna try to be fluffy this time round.
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from swirlingdoubt in How do you go about developing a story idea?   
    Just the setting. Once you build a world and continuity as long as you don't violate the rules of the world and the guidelines everything else is easier to let it happen more organically.
    Only outlined a whole story once. Hated everything about it and deleted it wholesale.  
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from CloverReef in How do you go about developing a story idea?   
    Kinda like when you RPG
    you have to get a feel for the character or characters.
    Keep a general idea. events usually happen that will get you from point a to point b.
    The last time I tried to be meticulous about it I rage quit and deleted the entire thing.  The only notable exception is Oceania in general. Haha.
     
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from BronxWench in How do you go about developing a story idea?   
    Just the setting. Once you build a world and continuity as long as you don't violate the rules of the world and the guidelines everything else is easier to let it happen more organically.
    Only outlined a whole story once. Hated everything about it and deleted it wholesale.  
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from JayDee in How do you go about developing a story idea?   
    Just the setting. Once you build a world and continuity as long as you don't violate the rules of the world and the guidelines everything else is easier to let it happen more organically.
    Only outlined a whole story once. Hated everything about it and deleted it wholesale.  
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from Anesor in How do you go about developing a story idea?   
    Just the setting. Once you build a world and continuity as long as you don't violate the rules of the world and the guidelines everything else is easier to let it happen more organically.
    Only outlined a whole story once. Hated everything about it and deleted it wholesale.  
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from Anesor in How do you go about developing a story idea?   
    Kinda like when you RPG
    you have to get a feel for the character or characters.
    Keep a general idea. events usually happen that will get you from point a to point b.
    The last time I tried to be meticulous about it I rage quit and deleted the entire thing.  The only notable exception is Oceania in general. Haha.
     
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from swirlingdoubt in How do you go about developing a story idea?   
    Kinda like when you RPG
    you have to get a feel for the character or characters.
    Keep a general idea. events usually happen that will get you from point a to point b.
    The last time I tried to be meticulous about it I rage quit and deleted the entire thing.  The only notable exception is Oceania in general. Haha.
     
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from JayDee in How do you go about developing a story idea?   
    Kinda like when you RPG
    you have to get a feel for the character or characters.
    Keep a general idea. events usually happen that will get you from point a to point b.
    The last time I tried to be meticulous about it I rage quit and deleted the entire thing.  The only notable exception is Oceania in general. Haha.
     
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from BronxWench in How do you go about developing a story idea?   
    Kinda like when you RPG
    you have to get a feel for the character or characters.
    Keep a general idea. events usually happen that will get you from point a to point b.
    The last time I tried to be meticulous about it I rage quit and deleted the entire thing.  The only notable exception is Oceania in general. Haha.
     
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from JayDee in Djinny’s Psycho Sex Circus by ScienceofPorn   
    What sorcery did you dredge up?
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from BronxWench in Halloween Party Reviews and Replies   
    Haha. Folders within folders contain it matryoshka doll style. Beastiary, WestMostLine,WailingFog,FoodchainNCooking,Deities,UnderDaC,TechnologyLvl,Timeline,Culture,Civilization,PrimeEvils,Dragons,Interactionsbtwnspecies,Magic,SoulEconomyNafterlife.Blackwater and last but not least ???
     
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    InvidiaRed got a reaction from BronxWench in Halloween Party Reviews and Replies   
    From JayDee on November 01, 2018
    I didn't quite know what to make of this one, but I am not the brightest to be fair. The first bit I followed easily, and then it got quite trippy in places although with careful reading I could see the same things from different points of view in some of them.  The synths are pretty hardcore!
    Some really good turns of phrase and imagery throughout. I especially liked the Dragon and the Interation POVs.  This bit -  “Scales, wings and broken flesh. Her children fell. With every flash, a moment of indescribable fear. As rent bodies. Limbs separating messily. Timeless moments of murder. Several moments of brutal precision.” Really good!
    Thank you
    that bit is actually personally my most hated passage.
    I aimed for a strobe light effect.
    Ur Dragon looking up from the ocean sees with every contact with Synth’s Hypervelocity rod barrage. Her children exploding from the impact. To say she’s traumatized is a bit of an understatement. She’s an apex predator of immense magical and physical might. To see her children each mighty in of themselves. Physically shredded without a chance to counter act. There are things in Oceania that can prey on dragons successfully. Yet, this was not a predator, prey interaction.
    This was an act where dragons weren’t even given the pretense of dignity in self-defense. Falling to a bigger predator she could at least respect. Yet, these fleshy puny things could just delete her children. It's not something she can process.
    Its irrelevant to her that the watchers were barely involved. They enabled this to happen. She won’t challenge the watchers nor synth after this.  Not after, this display.
    She makes it the southern continent on the other side of the world. It doesn’t take her long to piece together enough information to hold the elves culpable. She only understands blood for blood and she fully intends to rectify.
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