SilverMyst

Prologue responses: ravenwinter ~ W00t! And you're my first reviewer in, well, years it looks like Oo; Here's a cookie! *gives you cookie* Looks like we're going to be better friends than Harry and Ron XD lol (Doesn't take much @.@ lol) And yes, there are going to be a LOT of questions… and I'm bad about cliffies XD lol Just sayin… *hugs* Devourer ~ Glad you liked the start, now here is more for you to see and in less than 24 hours! XD lol Don't expect that to happen again, I just happened to have today off XD lol Hope you still find it interesting, as I am being highly entertained by it so far. I love seeing where my muse will take me ~ Wynter Ravenheart ~ I'm so happy you liked it! Finally, someone who understands my humor about the girl. I like Hermione, really I do, but because I relate to her I am able to see her flaws just as clearly as I see my own XD lol And if you can't laugh at yourself, you have no right to laugh at others, right? XD lol alwayslove ~ I'm glad you find it interesting. I hope that it will continue to entertain you and I hope to hear your thoughts on it in the future~ ~*~*~*~ Next Chapter will be ~ Chapter One: Never Normal ~*~*~*~

Due to the restriction on Author's Note (which is in place for good reason) I am going to post all my chapter review responses here instead~! Not only that, but this is more interactive and more to my liking! You can find polls, contests, and interact with me at this thread: http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/24399-review-responsesvotes-for-within-the-lies/ If you want to know the Challenge that inspired the fic, even though it no longer resembles said challenge @.@, you can find it HERE~! And, in a way, the challenge worked. It got my muse going! So I believe it's only fair to thank them, and credit them, for their inspiration! NOTE: If you reviewed the fic, a great thing about this being in the Forum is you don't HAVE to wait until I update the story! I will answer reviews as I am able, not just "as I'm finishing up the next chapter". This is to make it easier for both of us Also, feel free to comment in http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/24399-review-responsesvotes-for-within-the-lies/! This thread is for my responses ONLY. The thread mentioned above is so we can communicate better than just "Reviewer and Author" *^.^* lol Okay, if you would like to respond in kind to my responses, please follow these steps: 1. Hit "Quote" button on the post in which the review you wish to respond to resides 2. Delete any unnecessary text (such as replies to other reviewers). If you single out my response to your review, and that's what you are commenting on, it will make things a whole lot easier on both of us <3 3. Copy it 4. Go to http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/24399-review-responsesvotes-for-within-the-lies/ 5. Paste it and reply <3 Now for the responses ~ <3 ~*~*~*~

I don't mind I'm actually thinking about making a thread strictly for my responses anyway and have this as my interactive/contests/fun thread <3 The more I think about it, the more I like that idea <3

To me "The Grim" is like a Black Dog, which I find rather funny. Why? Because the "Black Dog" can go either way. In some legends they are death bringers, associated with the Devil, and signs of impending doom. In other legends they are guardians, protectors, and a sign of good things. Do you see why I find that so freakin' amusing? XD lol

Awesome, because I really don't like those two. <.<;; They are my favorite expendable characters though <3 lmao (I'm not evil! I'm Chaotic Neutral, thank you lol) I think Centaurs could go either way, honestly. They are protective and Night doesn't necessarily mean "Dark" even though it could lean that way if you want it to. Vicktor or Sirius? ... Deciding between them is not going to happen XD lol I vote for Bill. (Love Charlie as well, don't get me wrong, but Bill needs love too!) I think the curse breaker is brilliant and love him dearly <3 He will be in my story in some way or another because of this fact <3 lol And Human with Werewolf traits? Talk about awesome <3 Oh, and the scar makes him look delightfully dangerous in my mind <3 Mine is too, so I completely understand my friend! And these plot bunnies usually have fangs and like to bite my arse T_T lol

I'll respond to your posts when I have more time. Just wanted to tell you the good news! I'm done with Chapter Six Sadly, I wont be able to post it until about midnight Oo;; Gotta head to work. Talk to you soon~! <3

I have to say that's one of my faves and I lean more towards it as well lol What can I say? I like "dark" creatures!~ lol Lemme think of some more and get back to you... I have a luncheon with a friend of mine I need to get ready for, I'll think on it while I'm out <3

Ah, light creature... lemme think... ... ... Kirin (Chinese) - East Asian chimerical good luck symbol, or Garuda... and now I sleep since I can't keep my eyes open XD lol Like your concept, will talk more when conscious...

I'd have to have a little more detail, but just for the sake of names and whatnot ... what about: DaeKor, or Firurdrenn Dae is Elvin for White and Kor for Black. DaeKor being White Black, or Black White. Fir is for Dark, and -urdrenn is a suffix for "The Light"... The language is rather lenient to those who are not fluent in it, so one can modify the definitions to their liking by changing the order of said definitions or dropping a word. For Firurdrenn, it could be Dark the Light, The Dark Light, Light the Dark, or Dark Light ...from my understanding... This is why I'm not allowed to play with Elvin words and names <.<;; lol I need to work on WTLs... but my head is all fuzzy @.@ And hubby thinks I have a mild fever, yay ;; lol

I know OF Twilight, but I love Vampires and Werewolves regardless of whether or not I have read the series I luffles my Vamps and Weres <3 My opinion? If you are making them creatures I would say... Kingsley - Stymphalian Bird, Talos, Shiva, Sleipnir, Springheeled Jack, Phoenix, or Thunderbird ... I don't know why, but he always makes me think of flashy/showing off... *shrugs* Charlie- Phoenix (my two fave creatures of all time are Phoenixes and Dragons, so if you wont do one I have to suggest the other <3 lol), Veela, Gargoyle, Roc, Kongamato, Harpy, Incubus... what can I say, I have a thing for wings <.<;; lol Dudley- Giant XD lol Abominable Snowman, Yeti, Troll, Bigfoot, Cyclopes, Gargoyle, Orc, Satyr, Ogre, or Talos . What can I say, the dumb orge strikes me as a ...well, dumb Ogre XD lol Or something along those lines XD lol There are just some things I think would be good.

Too late. It has been there for years XD lol

I said their creatures aren't "light" XD lol I'll explain more probably chapter seven... Anyway, there will be muscle guys so smile lol Yeah, that's what I find funny... You give me fics to read, and I start reading them, and then I'm late updating... But you should have known I'd end up being late because you gave me something to read lol So... you have no one to blame for late updates except yourself lmao! And my muse... which is fickle... and maybe RL, but I like RL so can't blame that XD lol

That's what I get for replying while half asleep... like now XD lol Might do something along those lines later... dunno. That's the magic of fanfiction... everyone has their own views and ideas about things XD lol Might read that when I get a chance

The twins aren't light creatures... I ought not have said that Oo; Ah well, everyone will find out the chapter after this one anyway XD lol You're right about the balance thing http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g462/SSOMGShop/c493f9aa.png <~~ Here is a picture of the star and its relations so to speak. Power, Wisdom, and Faith will lean towards to Dark whereas Strength, Compassion, and Grace are the "Light" ones... Change with how I'm feeling, or how my muse is feeling? XD lol Because right now I feel like crap, but my muse is fine ;; lol (At least I found out why I've been so blah lately... stupid sinus infections ;; lol) Syren and her mates will be reincarnated... but they haven't been yet. Don't know if I'll be doing another fic with them in it, I plan to have them reborn in this fic as the children of certain pairings and whatnot, but I get where you're coming from XD lol Sadly they cannot be reborn until Syren is, and Sy needs Harry before she can... But that will be explained later XD lol

And I'm still not done with this thing... I keep wanting to change things up, and the sex scene... I need to work on it ;; And now I have to get ready for work. This is so unfair T.T And I can't work on it when I get home tonight because I have the morning shift tomorrow and need rest XD lol I just need to come to the realization that this chapter wasn't meant to be posted until later this week T.T But it's a monster compared to what I usually write, so hopefully that makes up for it ^^;; *huggles* I'll keep you updated. Maybe I'll get lucky and my muse will be okay with it tomorrow night and let me finish and post it ;; lol

Interesting challenge And how would you know I've chosen all the "light" mates? lol... Because when I look at it, the twins could go either way XD lol I might have another one in there to balance out the odds (thanks to the "chaos element" the twins represent XD lol) Or at least another wild card XD lol *huggles* Godric is awesome, but alas he is taken XD lol Sy would kick Harry's arse from here to another dimension if he tried to take him XD lol

Er... I hope Raven isn't mad at me for my response to her comment on the chapter before last <.<;; I just realized that it might have sounded like I was going to make someone a mate who she absolutely detests when I'm not... I hope she comes back and visits us T.T *huggles pillow*

Harry would have the courage... though if he did ask it, I can see Voldemort tying Harry up and having his wicked way with the boy just to prove dominance and why he is top... then again, knowing Harry's crazy ass, he might ask it in hopes of said response... hmmmm...

I like that idea! I think I will use that for the next mate/contest <3 I could give the next mate clues this chapter and have people guess for that maybe... I dunno... Maybe I should wait until next chapter... I miss Raven!! T.T I hope she's okay, I'm really worried about her.

Cliche, perhaps... but I do have a plan to give more clues and allow Harry to sexually torture said mates even before any of them know it XD lmao Ah... after all the fics I've seen where he has to endure the sexual frustration, it's about time he's served some justice! XD lol Cliche, perhaps... but I do have a plan to give more clues and allow Harry to sexually torture said mates even before any of them know it XD lmao Ah... after all the fics I've seen where he has to endure the sexual frustration, it's about time he's served some justice! XD lol

Harry... Well, he'll be able to keep up quite nicely, actually. But I had planned on there being other pairings among the mates. Though the leaner ones will probably be the twins and that's about it XD lmao Aside from ... Oh, right, haven't revealed him yet so I can't say... Who am I kidding, everyone's already guessed it ;; Tom will be rather lean, but no one is going to try and take the freakin' Dark Lord! XD lol I can see the bigger men going "Hey can I shove my cock..." *wand with green glowing tip pointed at them* "...into Harry for your viewing pleasure?" *bigger male smiles sweetly and Voldemort smirks* ... OMG! I've got to put that in there! XD lmao So has to be a scene, I just know it. It's too hilarious to pass up~!

Whoops... had to change some chapter titles around... Chapter Sex will be Voice Within and Chapter Seven will be Haunting Melody. And yes, I spelled it as such on purpose XD lol

Chapter is already at... 11 pages. And I'm not done Oo;; Ah well, I'm having fun and my muse demanded a sex scene, so pfffttttt. XD lol Still working on it <3

Crossplaying is what they call it when you cosplay a character of the opposite gender. Cosplay comes from combining the words Costume Roleplay, though it is more commonly used among the anime community than it would be for a more... sexual situation. They just call that Roleplaying XD lol