RogueMudblood Posted June 29, 2010 Report Posted June 29, 2010 6teen to Batman: When the ActionMan wordord: oceanGuadGuadeloupe = ocean of Guadeloupe (the author can't spell, I'm not fixing that) snearnear = seat near Mozenrath\'s Turn Chapter 5 is orphan Self Esteem review board stretchy - ID 2035422387 may be the culprit. Hot and Heavy Mink wordord: SoonSoon = Soon thosetiesties = those panties eqy hoy horny = equally horny waitior Mor Minerva = waiting for Minerva as wella pia piece = as well as a piece The Unevitable Fate wordord: Hunger F. Ma. Matt = Hunger Force. Matt newps fps for = new pecks for A Fry to Remember review board wordord: id 243815: eye *at *attempts = eye ... *attempts id 3000012294: phallyally = physically (this person hasn't read enough fics to recog wordord, apparently) story: "other fry.< <" -glitch phallyally. = physically. Leverage - Squishy As Told by Ginger: Wet Seduction wordord: asuabluable = as valuable Balto - Going Home wordord: gr a r a walk = go for a walk h...h.....oohhh = "Oohhh...oohhh mor Bal Balto = more?" Balto Balto & Aleu wordord: voics cos = voice was nparaparallel = nose parallel fr war was = father was g thg = thing rt, bt, but = retort, but bodyn onn on = body down on ir mor = in her Don'rry rry = Don't worry baositosition = back's position o paw paw = other paw area undeod. (line break)od. = area uncovered. Song lyrics not cited Balto & Jenna wordord: feas tas = felt was occupantt sht she = occupant, but she de.(line break). = desire. herd led legs = her fore legs aga him him = against him this?lto lto = this?" Balto In the summary: the cas wis will = the ??? will (I'd think cats, but it's about dogs, but then, wolves is enough letters, but Jenna's not a wolf...) Harley's Bday - squishy (all 6 chapters) Kid Gloves - disclaimer insufficient (says DC Comics, not Batman) The Land of Make Believe - squishy. The Discovery ch 2 is orphan. Quote
RogueMudblood Posted July 3, 2010 Author Report Posted July 3, 2010 Batman Beyond to Biker Mice from Mars: To Beej or not to Beej - song lyrics not disclaimed Betty and Che - disclaimer issue - using real person XO w/ cartoon character (where to put? and needs to say do not know for Che Guevara) Child of the Dark Knite wordord: "LadiLadies" - "Ladies "anstensten" - and fasten "d't y't" - didn't "tr brr" - to her "foemoremories" - forbidden memories "man man" - The man "haveken ken" - have broken "hbeenbeen" - have been "betacceaccess" - better access "coldaskeasked" - cold?" asked "mono coo cover" - money to cover "olhe mhe met" - old, she met "t wot woman" - smart woman "shouly ily in" - should fly in "medicastorstory" - medical history "man Ter Terry" - man gave Terry "ry ery effort" - Every effort "bconnconnected" - been connected "Someblemblem" - Some problem "bere ere" - be there "goticatication" - got medication "Jac Jack" - No, Jack "nd mod" - needed "int introductions" - for introductions "nexte ite" - next time "ade one" - advance "car care" - Take care "thekesmkesman" - the spokesman Passion - chapter 11 has a ton of blank space at the bottom - glitch? Batman Before ch 11 - visible HTML: <I>ounce</I> Garage Wars wordord: &nbs"I'm"I'm = "I'm &n'> "You = "You &nbsreadread = Bread pi "Mo "Modo, = pizza. "Modo, an> - ? realluld uld = really could &nbnbspnbsp; - delete I was.o:p> - missing data, please fix. bhellhell = be a hell o end end = other end andn fan fall = and then fall sty style='border:none;mso-border-alt:solid gray .75pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid gray .25pt; padding:0in;mso-padding-alt:0in 0in 0in 0in'> - missing data? p;&np; - delete thatnie nie = that Vinnie &n&nbs -delete Vinnie'ad sad = Vinnie's head Grey Mouse 1 wordord: &nbnbspnbsp; - delete me.n stn style='font-family:"Arial Unicode MS";mso-fareast-font-family: "Times New Roman";mso-bidi-font-family:"Times New Roman";color:black'> - missing data? Marc saispanspan> = Marc said. &;&nb; - delete &;&nb; - delete fon.&nn. - foreign. sp;&sp; -delete &n&nbs -delete &;&nb; -delete &nbsbsp;bsp; -delete my downdown = my way down "Okay"aid aid = Okay," I said .an> -delete "Who's ?" I?" = "Who's this?" "Just ask" I said quietly. "I'll take him out for you. Then you could come back to Mars with me." - squished line, and then the formatting went all to hell. dwhenwhen = door when &nbsbsp;bsp; -delete &nb> -delete keep wa warm = keep her warm to k thk = to drink p> - delete &nbsbsp;bsp; -delete "Family feud." > - delete '>' It wase.&ne. = It was insane. arounhrothrottle = around," Throttle time."> - delete '>' almos gos good = almost as good Where are you?!"o:p> - appears there is missing data here. (or the author just jumped track, never can be sure) minufor for = minutes for sp;&sp; -delete tcorecoreboard = the scoreboard an> - delete Grey Mouse 2 wordord: p;&np; -delete baccouccount = bank account aurneurned = and turned sp;&sp; -delete touchnto nto = touches into p;&np; -delete p;&np; -delete ley ley said. "des,des, we haven't evenn hin him = Charley said. "Besides, we haven't even seen him p stp style='border:none;mso-border-alt:solid gray .75pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid gray .25pt; padding:0in;mso-padding-alt:0in 0in 0in 0in'> (ugh!) -delete &;&nb; -delete n'> -delete >-delete leo:p>o:p> = legs. "Yeahsp; sp; = "Yeah. dingding = standing p; Sp; Stoker = Stoker ohe whe = off the Prkiarkians = Plutarkians o:p> -delete tyletyle='border:none;mso-border-alt:solid gray .75pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid gray .25pt; padding:0in;mso-padding-alt:0in 0in 0in 0in'> -delete (sigh) "Stt!" t!" = "Stop it!" n'> -delete taistaist = the waist stoostood = I stood andes.&es. = and knees. bottip wip = bottom lip I a d a deep = I took a deep &;&nb; -delete &; ";-delete Shock Treatment wordord: t int in = night in kno wer = know, we tan wan = the one .&n I n -delete apartmenhichhich = apartment which cheespanspan> = cheek. .&nbs wo wonder = I wonder &nbnbspnbsp; -delete &nbnbspnbsp; -delete Id.&nd. = I said. ted oed = to need drinkbsp;bsp; = drinks. He looklooking = He was looking it tit = get it he che = of the I kd thd = I kicked < sty style='color:black'> -delete &;&nb; -delete doknowknow = don't know gaspgasped. = I gasped. sta Thr Throttle = stairs, Throttle &nbs"Is -delete sp;&sp; -delete p>-delete rea out out = reached out het iet = him get &nb/spa/span>-delete she t mit = she isn't sp;&sp; -delete &nbsbsp;bsp; -delete p;&np; -delete whotorytory. = whole story. fire I s I said = fire me," I said mtay tay = me stay sh/spa/span> = shop. &n&nbs -delete don'te abe = don't know &;&nb; -delete a le nle nervous. = a little nervous. pan> - missing data? asking because the next sentence makes no sense. Innocence Lost - huge section of blank space bottom ch 2 Decisions and Sarcifice - bottom chapter 3: "geovisit();" - ??? lifted from another site and copy-pasted here? This whole story has lots of blank space drawn in - triple-spacing between sentences, large gaps at top and bottom of chapter, that sort of thing. It's WAR! - are there sections of this story not appearing in the archive? Otherwise, author jumps around a lot without telling readers what's going on. I'm not seeing any weird things - no half tags or draw issues that I can tell from looking at it, but there's got to be something. ....Okay, starting in chapter 9 it's doing the blank space thing (like Decisions & Sacrifice above) Aftermath -space draw issues Tension - massive space draw at top and bottom of fic (top is after AN and after internal title) Movie Night Crack - disclaimer not specific on no profit clause Tear Us Apart - space draw issues - glitch? Shattered Freedom, ch 3 is squishy. ch 6 has lots of space at the bottom. ch 7 has triple-spacing between paragraphs. ch 8 has sporadic triple-spacing and a huge chunk of blank space at the bottom. ch 13, ch 14, ch 15, ch 16, ch 17, ch 18, ch 19, ch 20, ch 21, ch 22: triple-spacing, huge blank spot at bottom. Ch 19 also has a big spot at the top between AN (internal title/author) and beginning of story. Quote
RogueMudblood Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Posted July 9, 2010 Blues Clues - Class of the Titans Crashman Christmas - insufficient disclaimer (no "no profit" clause) Calcite Copulation - insufficient disclaimer Virgin Planet wordord: clot tot too = club not too togetas has he = together as he tsy. sy. = too easy. htowatowards = face towards thndernderness = the tenderness wshe = when One evening wordord: Linkhe ihe = Linka (she sshirshirt = sweatshirt surprisingly, that's all there was - maybe because the author had no spaces between sentences...? Loyal-Heart Babysits comment"I d"I = commented, "I childrenps ops = ? Bounty Hunters - triple-spaced paragraphs ch 1 fight over the hot spring AN Ch 1 & 2 top is squishy (but the story isn't) - and is the warning that the story contains sex really necessary? Of Showers and Dolls -squishy! Camp "Mating" Lazlo 2 - disclaimer insufficient - doesn't disclaim anything! Unknown, Unknowns - review id 3000028420: seriously uncertain if this is wordord or bad typist: tgough abaout Bodndocks = thought about Boondocks wbbnt = ??? The Boondocks: Eleven Years Down the Road squished line: bullets left Niko s gun. (may be author error-he wasn't kidding with that AN at the top- badly in need of a beta) Thug Luvin' ch 2 has a song at the bottom that isn't cited. It's not in typical lyric format is probably why it wasn't caught before. If you're just scanning you might think it was conversation snippets...but it's a song - "Back That Ass Up" by Juvenile Thug Luvin' ch 3 - song lyrics not cited - "A Woman's Worth" by Alicia Keys The following stories are all part of the same fiction and should be a chaptered story: Cats Don't Dance: New Dance, After Work Hours, Day at the Office, Wild, Wet and Worked Up, Morning Rain Class of the Titans: Hands, Lips, Heat Bucky O'Hare and the Toad Wars: Captive, Captive (deleted scene) Bucky O'Hare and the Toad Wars: Sex and Waffles, Playing Dress-Up The Boondocks: Something Wicked, Owned The Boondocks: Quiet Like Thunder, Dim as Lightning Quote
RogueMudblood Posted July 10, 2010 Author Report Posted July 10, 2010 Code Lyoko - Courage the Cowardly Dog Doggie Love - disclaimer inusfficient (full title is on the sheet) Percussions review id 158677 wordord: ie use user Kakate = I'm the user Kakate ch 1 starts out squished : "pointed his finger directly at" then goes to normal type. wordord: the restrest at = the tip rest at tigss. [line break] ss. = tightness. and squished line: "but smirked "Don't worry" Deadly Essence wordord: happenedse ose = happened. Those (bold belongs to author) doof tof the = door to the par for for = partner for Turnr Bar Back = Turn your back hands of f...[line break]... = hands of fate... (?) ish wordord: t het here = this here momentglarglare = moment to glare entpapepaper = entire paper unreunreasonable = how unreasonable peopleFourFour's = people in Four's was g deg dealt with = was generally dealt with igd Ond One = ignored One ch 2: i [line break] op [line break] operation a.n.g.s.t = ish [line break] operation a.n.g.s.t liker cur cute = like your cute (je ne se quoise - it's not wordord but that made me cringe - je ne sais quoi) was wasn't = he wasn't younk tnk = you think scioucious = suspicious d awa away = drift away ch 3: don't ion ion it in = don't mention it in "W [line break][line break] = "What-" he phe part = on the part ored.red. = occurred. thive ive = that Five ch 4: irritat"I d"I don't = irritated. "I don't " "That's right - the first " needs to be deleted and there should be a line break nocontcontinuous = noticed continuous ch 5: wereallyally = were really develotorstorso = developed torso Dit! it! = Drop it! (?) blanketund und = blanket around woefullonelone. = woefully alone. ch 6: hov abo above hwn awn = hovered above his own wronwrong = was wrong this se, es, = this serious, confuOne.One. = confused One. inupteupted = interrupted old ioneioned seersucker = old-fashioned seersucker they adu adults = they are adults acceptablet hit his = acceptable that his octopthe the = octopus, the soed. ed. = softened. ch 7: f" Be" Bemused, = fez!" Bemused, ch 8: glance ove One One, = glance over at One, blinka bia bit = blinked, a bit ch 9: (triple-spaced paragraphs) matls. ls. = materials. ch 10: (triple-spaced paragraphs) coulke. [line break] ke. = could take. Operation L.O.L.I.C.O.N.S. wordord: bladed en sen sword = bladed shinken sword (best match I could find; bokken would be silly since that's wood, and not blade....but since the author thinks 'did noticed' is correct grammatical construction, they probably had bokken...) theoks oks = then looks and was confused. he thought = ???? missing text? (bad author?) "I think soy?" y?" = "I think so, yeah?" He opened and and showed - probably author error, can you delete second 'and'? penetrait her slowly making making them - delete second 'making' please (cringe - even wordord didn't really want to touch this fic...) Broken - third paragraph from the end - just one sentence, but there appears to be text missing because it doesn't flow from the paragraph above it (rest of the text seems to flow pretty well, so thinking maybe a glitch?) A Heart's Promise - song lyrics not cited in ch 21 (they're part of the text recited by the characters) - song is "Count on Me" by Billy Gilman Jerimies Birthday Present - review id 265482 wordord: show'ss sos so = show stories so Last Chance: review id 2035463221 tipped me off (was the only thing the review said) - ch 8 is now orphan due to whatever issued happened (but doesn't matter b/c AN anyway) jeremie loses his head - squishy! (I would think it was poorly written poetry but for the one sentence that manages to stretch the length of the table) The Series of Love wordord: him oh his bed. = her on his bed. (ase ase you've = (In case you've each r lir like = each other like you, whi whispered = you," whispered schooe bee began = school,' he began shcidecided = she decided hid "id "Uhhh," - he said "Uhhh," Yumiled led = Yumi pulled Jerem ere erect = Jeremie's erect firsfirst = the first hir her = hit her roomroom = her room takAeliAelita = taking Aelita to cto curious = but so curious oppe fre from = opposite from mie mie = Jeremie hhesthest = his chest waimi mi = wait until Yumi NOTot; = NOT!" [line break]--- s?&qs? = it is? aligalign="left"> -delete There's missing text at the bottom of ch 1 - open '<' and the story abruptly stops (not that I'm complaining), and the that's missing should probably be checked for wordord. ch 3: Mrs. Hertumi umi = Mrs. Hertz, Yumi Aeli[line break]" = Aelita. Jerimie's Birthday Present wordord: Jerisittsitting = Jerimie sitting ch 3: (there's paragraphs in this one!) Ahis his = AN This ---and this is admission of posting someone else's work! />-delete log asg as = as long as Code Lyoko - disclaimer insufficient (XO and doesn't mention second fandom) Code Lyoko: Count Down ch 5: triple-spacing just before paragraph starting with "Sissi sat on her bed in". This paragraph is broken up in strange places in the sentences - user error? weird draw? Because the author includes more than one character's speech in the same paragraph, I assume that those four sentences before the next triple-spacing are part of the same paragraph. Aelita\'s Wish - squishy lines: "It starts off with Yumi, Ulrich, Odd, and Jeremy outside talking about the [line break]most recent XANA attacks. Ulrich starts it off...." "want it so bad. So it [line break]can be like the old days back on Lyoko. Oh well I guess Jeremy can't be that bad."" "knew what was going on [line break]but she did not know what to do. At first she thought she should go get the others but then another thought crossed her mind. Let her fuck me. After a few minutes she decided that she was going for it and called in. [line break]"Sissi are you all right?" " "With that said Sissi ran to the door with the strap-on on and completely naked. She pulled open the door that Aelita had been laying on and Aelita fell in. She was then distracted by Sissi's beauty. Her perky and erect [line break]tits and her smooth and round ass. Sissi used this to her advantage and pulled Aelita's skirt up over her head stopping her from seeing and escaping. Then she could see the wetness between Aelita's legs. "Your very [line break]wet already," She said. "The fun has only begun!" " "shirt and started to lick [line break]Aelita's nipples." "then realized that he could [line break]not control her when she reached it but he kept on pushing." "And he stood up and [line break]removed the strap-on so that would never happen again." **ch 2: "While Aelita and Sissi were having sex the others where wondering where she was. And while they were wondering Jeremy found out that a tower was activated. So he sent everyone out to look for Aelita while he [line break]headed for the factory. Yumi was sent out to look for Aelita in the girls dorm and boy was she in for a surprise. At first she only heard the moans and the bed moving around, but as she moved closer she could [line break]here the voices. And she heard Aelita's..." "over her. [line break]Yumi did not know what to make of this." "sex some time after. [line break]But that is another story. Aelita would always wonder if maybe she could have had something with Sissi. But that story is better left untold." Always there - odd line break: Yumi snapped...Positive. "I'll always..." ... and love lots of space at the bottom of the chapter. ch 14: ""Scanner Yumi." ... one" (three lines squished) ch 16: ""Wwwooooaaaaahhhhhh!" ... over them." odd line break ch 27: paragraph: ""Sorry." ... asleep also." has some really weird spacing issues. Shadow's End squished lines: "'Nice going Yumi, the look on Mrs Hertz' face was pricessless.' Aelita complimented. [line break]A loud beep went off and Jeremy growned. Opening his lap top he set it on the ground." "though something was about to happen. [line break]She stepped into the scanner and watched it close firmly in front of her." "Just hang in there Yumi. Ulrich is just in the elevator now.' [line break]Yumi could see Aelita crouched behind a rock wall. Making a quick right, Yumi leapt down to join her. Two megatanks and another crab guarded the activated tower." "'I'll see you guys tomorrow. I just have to pick up my books from my locker first.' [line break]Odd made a face." ch 2: "...sector five, Aelita lost some of her value. [line break]But still…" "air but at the first attempt of getting past them, they backed up and blocked her path. [line break]Landing heavily she withdrew her fans. Yumi cast them with as much force as she could gather." "The tower came into view; a ghostly white smoke surrounded its mossy walls. [line break]Yumi passed through the seemingly solid tower." "William swept out his arm and caught her easily around the waist, forcing her back to the ice face. [line break]Looking down Yumi couldn't suppress a small cry of horror that escaped as she watched two Kongers leep from the digial sea..." ch 3: "eccentric mix of both. [line break]'You're not trying to kill us.'" Sissy;s revenge - don't think it was intentional, but the double negative makes the disclaimer invalid - "I don;t not own" Also, the AN at the bottom just stops - is there more data that got cut off? (Not that I really want you to find it; this made me gag all the way through - the least they could do is spell the characters' names consistently within their own fic, even if it's not correct.) Vrai Coloeurs ch 3 squished line: "The girl named Jackie grinned when the bottle stopped spinning, pointing to another girl. [line break]"Truth or Dare?" she asked customarily." - and I would like to note that the author has either never seen the "American" peace sign or has never seen the British "victory" - the hand faces a different way for each of those gestures. Revenge of Eclipse - disclaimer: "Eclipse Publishing Fanfiction" - what? (I hate AI.) Code:Naruto ch 3 squishy, ch 5 squishy, ch 6 squishy Quote
RogueMudblood Posted July 13, 2010 Author Report Posted July 13, 2010 Danny Phantom Secret Secrets review board - id 256144 wordord: strockrocked! = story rocked! id 257273 wordord: goget get = gonna get Vlad master ch 2: bad tag - no data after "wrong>" - which means no stroy data for me to check; ch 3: wordord: drink ink = drink Width of a Thread - squished line: I [line break]I'll explain later, I promise." One and One - disclaimer insufficient (it's in the body but not the disclaimer field) Secret Secrets - wordord: sm ove over = smooth over it saf safe = it was safe fA waA wave = fly. A wave rzed zed = realized hyes yes = his eyes has has = She has about. ". "No? = about him. "No? ever had had = ever. He had could The The = could do. The andbbedbbed = and grabbed huHe dHe didn't = hurt. He didn't meanttingting = meant sitting breebreeze. = the breeze. Tr war wasn't = Tucker wasn't sig signal = bat signal ch 4 - orphan dn'tdn't get = couldn't get school I doI don't = school, but I don't uncomfbly bly = uncomfortably addition far far as = addition. As far as parentsyouryour = parents or your nervousn Dan Danny = nervous and Danny td bod both = they'd both slightHe wHe = slightly. He he ed ted to = he wanted to to elf elf = to himself teahan han = teams than re imp important = really important somethinTuckTucker = something off," Tucker replieden hen he = replied. Then he readino mao many = reading too many tay aay around = to play around oft ext = of that "She sla the the = "She slammed the notput put = not to put suddenly lipslips, = suddenly dry lips, Woul reg = Would he er'ser's weight = Tucker's weight thoth oth = the other low Dan Danny's = lowered Danny's contr. "r. "For = container. "For archarched = and arched ch 6 just stops at the bottom - appears to be missing text Infernal Flames and Sorrowful Ashes - triple-spacing between paragraphs Wars of the Dead - triple-spaced paragraphs A new lease on life ch 18: squished line: "Not only had he [line break]wooed Maddie successfully," Ember's Conquering - for some reason, the final line of the story comes below several lines of spacing and after the author's note... ? Fast Times in Amity Park - please check into author's claim to have rights to story - original author not credited, but mentioned that the story was forcibly removed.... Welcome to My Phantasy ch 4: odd line break: ""Do you know why you're separated? [line break]Do you know how to fix it?"" Hex and Ember - The 'motto' is incorrectly cited. The quote is actually verse from G.K. Chesterton, 1906 English Hymnal. The Iron Maiden song that 'steals' it (I suppose a hymnal is considered public domain?) is "Piece of Mind". Rock my world, baby - ch 3, song not cited. (only one stanza and I don't know the song) CONTROL + ALT + DELETE - ’ appears when there is supposed to be an apostrophe. ch 3 has †where there should be right-side double quotes and “ for left-side double quotes, as well as the ’ for apostrophes. It stops at "I wake to quiet male..." ch 5 and ch 6 have ‬ (needs to be replaced with a space) and †(needs to be deleted) appearing. Chapter 6 also needs song citations: "Krwlng" by Linkin Park and "You Oughta Know" by Alanis Morrissette Correction Fluid ch 8 is a disclaimer - it's already covered in the top bar. You can delete this. Eternal Love, Jazz's Story *New* - duplicate text in chapter 1: "Eternal Love [line break]Part 1 [line break]This is my attempt to continue a love story." Also, author quotes another story and credits original author (Phantom180) but doesn's cite the story quoted... I assume it's this one. Say My Name ch 1 and ch 2 are encompassed as chapters 5 & 6 of The Ghost-Boy Chronicles. They don't fit with the "main" story, so I can only assume something happened and somehow these got merged in here? Eternal Love - bad HTML tags at top of chapter one. Beast ch 2, ch 3 have a huge section of blank space at the bottom. (check age, AN bottom ch 3) Danny Phantom and the Phantom Clan has characters based on the RPG "Rym World" - not disclaimed. An Unexpected Double Date - Kim Possible not disclaimed A New Beginning -Transformers (1980s) not disclaimed Vanishing Act - Invader Zim not disclaimed (and if it weren't for the actual use of Danny's name at one point, I would count this as misplaced). Time\'s End - squished lines: ch 1: Danny changed back into his human form causing Erin's eyes to widen. [line break] "How the hell did you do that?" ch 2: The evil future self of Danny Phantom was loose, and there was no way to stop it. [line break] Danny, Sam, and Tucker all sat down and listened to Erin's story. ch 3: "So, you're from the 70's huh? That's cool," Tucker said smiling. Erin smiled back even though her heart wasn't in it. [line break] "Did you do the disco and all that stuff?" ch 5: The body belonging to the voice crept out from the shadows causing Erin to shake in fury. [line break] "What do you think you are doing Jarrett?" ch 7: She opened her mouth to scream, but a large hand covered her mouth muffling her voice. [line break] Erin's mind was racing. "Why didn't I sense him?" Specter Hunters - steals the surnames of the Ghostbusters. It's not disclaimed, noted as an homage, or cited. If it were one name, it wouldn't have caught my attention, but it's Stantz and Venkman that are both stolen (and appear in the same sentence). That was ch 1. ch 5 steals Melnitz (Janine, the receptionist). Master PC: Phantom Edition - idea based on another author's fic "Master PC" - author JR Parz - I googled it only because I thought this was some obscure XO....I was sort of right ... Point is, the Master PC fics are not cited or noted in any way, and AN: "I claim the story as my" (bad syntax is author's)--but it's not theirs when the idea was originally someone else's....sort of plagiarism? (Because the original Master PC fics didn't have anything to do with Danny Phantom.) - Original author specifically requested that television characters not be used in conjunction with his universe and that he "WILL NOT appreciate anyone writing a story where the sex involves preteen"-he defines this as under 16. Danny is fourteen. Creator's email. ***glitch: ch 9 is squished. With regards to real companies mentioned in fics, please look at Gencom Danny Phantom. The company in question. Should this not somehow be disclaimed? Wanting You - large blank space at the bottom of ch 1, ch 2 squished line: "plate of food before [line break]him." Quote
RogueMudblood Posted July 18, 2010 Author Report Posted July 18, 2010 (edited) Daria - Dexter A Matter of Responsibilities glitch? "" "" should be - "˜ should be ' "¦ should be ... Sôma = Souma entrée = entrance ½, ???? These appear to be issues with Japanese->English keyboard Choices review id 191826 wordord: I'me ite = I'm sure story wordord: lightred red = light flickered doo the the = door to the Vis now now = Visible now metitteittered = metal littered apit pit in = and spit in Kiy kiy kiss = ??? Experimental - squishy Dexter's Hands-on Experience - double text: "...that's what...that's what" wordord: lifted right right = lifted his right Good Things Come To Those Who Wait wordord: CanOR DOR = Canard OR attenda As As = attendance. As few nds nds = few seconds saunteoverover = sauntered over ohhh this s sos so good = ohhh this is so so good rea rear = her rear we'een een = we've been firime ime = first time waive ive = wait five nightft oft = nights left Play Time wordord: lemonraigraight = lemon - straight hwn iwn = his own upon on son softness = upon ??? softness loud'd b'd = loud - he'd The e she shadowed = The ??? shadowed > A tilt -bad tag...missing text? drewser ser to = drew closer to totontrontrol. = total control. atlaatlas energy = Alas, his energy down n. Tn. This = down again. This yeardeard = you heard hands hed hed out = hands reached out and a h of of = and a huff of T wou would = There would " Owww.. Fucking.. GO - missing text irap rap = in - wrap Yw." w." = Yeow." earsssedssed = ears pressed > God. - bad tag...missing text? Thin for writhed - ??? Just Those Words wordord: tDuckDuck. = that Duck. thatthat = Not that Darkwing... Possible? - Kim Possible not discliamed. The Brain & The Beauty - review ID 214489 squished The part NYDTQT is never going to write (or admit - review ID 2035215333 squished Brittany Goes To Jail - squishy (all 6 chapters); wordord: menchinching = me punching ji all all = jiggly all en den doorways that to to room = even doorways that led to rooms tuou iou into = turn you into breasnd nnd = breasts and tastinge mye my = tasting even my Tiy any and = Tiffany and breas" sa" said = breasts?" said thesionsionary = the missionary writbehibehind = with rope behind dildickiicking = dildo sticking foure sre said = four more said ou"LEM"LEMME = out, "GOD LEMME pla placing = and placing sed med my = spanked my freiapeiaper = fresh diaper ru and and = rubbed and The Memories Saga - squishy; wordord: shrug "Y "You're = shrugged. "You're warmlantlanted = warm lips planted Da Jan Jane = Daria, Jane Dar Dariaverse = the Dariaverse pats ass as = pathways as (okay, that was the funniest wordord I've seen to date. ) fil filled = been filled is is on = she is on pre previous = its previous lly lly things = finally things fou fought on = she fought on "W [line break]"N = "What?" Getting It On - wordord: e goe got = I've got bandre. re. = band there. standtands = she stands turnm onm = turns him ''I…" = I..." surprithatthat = surprised that paer her = past her Thisbefobefore = This was before brmomemoments = barely moments mng ang = moaning althe the = around the his . [line break]. = his cock. almostdy tdy = almost ready satisfac on = satisfaction k Dar Daria = kiss, Daria ch 2 is orphan (author) The Brain & The Beauty - squishy! (all 5 chapters) You can find a non-glitched edited version of this story here. wordord: I Ki A G A Girl = I Kissed A Girl )[line break]N) = (ASCAP) Pollardandoandon = Pollard, Brandon eenieenie Hut Jr.=--Weenie Hut Jr. jus just = with just fellfellow = her fellow a of of hammers = a box of hammers 'm 'm = "I'm gous ous = gorgeous here[line break]"B[line break]"But = here."[line break]"But staed ted = stammered instancn qun = instance, in rlearleader = cheerleader "i!! i!! = "Sandi!! 've 've = I've thockock's = the clock's lastlast = the last was when [line break]daw [line break]dawned = was when it dawned shi goo good = ship of good erheerhead = overhead torme by by = tormented by fashiova sva = fashion diva chickeelivelivers = chicken, delivers befshe = before Morgendorffeuinnuinn = Morgendorffer. Quinn nipplill[line break]ill[line break]the = nipples. The eachs los = each kiss wriwithwith = writhe with thar lor love = that our love momenut wut = moment, but sing ing = sitting wout? ut? = work out? " gue guess = "So I guess Tif, Sa, = Tiffany, ci, ea, = circle, ony guy = anyone sa?" ?" = saying?" olutolutely." = "Absolutely." Batta,tta, = Barchetta, (I left all the bad spelling and author bad spacing - just got the wordord) Queen of the machines - CSI Las Vegas disclaimed in body but not disclaimer bar - is this sufficient? (see misplaced cartoons post) This needs a celebrity disclaimer. Includes Saddam and Uday Hussein and Osama Bin Laden, as well as President Bush. (How was the author able to upload all of these chapters like this? They're frickin' enormous!) wordord: Morgendror, … = Morgendoffer, anny, ny = and many, entehen hen = enter and then assassinn"[line break]n" = assassination." fou, ou, = for you, ia: ia: = Daria: fd ard are = friends are shootiby oby = shootings by movon, on, = moving on, follfollow = followed by dto tto = due to ccidccident = an accident kindergarteeatieating = kindergarten treating interrogationm agm = interrogation room thter ter = the water excee cri critical = exceeds the critical nuarauaranteed = not guaranteed cle clear = two(?) clear allowine fie = allowing the JaneJane = and Jane youre pre = you've been ch 2: youetereternal = you to eternal aconsconsiderable = at a considerable e tue turned = She turned pang hng = placing thdiumdium = the ??? tody.ody = the body. birdke tke = bird take er cer car, = to her car, befshe she = before she objeape ape = ??? escape hiuse,use, = his house, wwoulwould = with would precautione toe = precautions she statioer ter = station out fit fired = get fired tir air = the air sus suspicious = suspicious wher her = with her tgh, gh, = through, trisorisoners = the prisoners al, … (delete) thecrafcraft, = the aircraft, thlevalevant = the relevant indispensablr Tir = indispensible to Daroingoing = Daria going attd tod to = attached to somethinhen hen = something when seeme ome = seen some Cnualnual = ??? untandtand = understand therokinoking = there, looking interro Tif = interrogate f usf use, = ??? che.[linebreak]. = cheap. w tak = will thonthon = Jonathon t's t's = "It's knoere ere = know where knoythiything = know anything ykay kay = you okay, Sands sts = Sandi was oon oon = as soon RADweepweep = RADAR sweep prograhe nhe = program she Tif[line break]Tiffany = Tiffany a "wh "where = asked, "where turoff off = turned off fore anar sar = fore and rear gthe the = gave the commen"Gre"Great = commented, "Great locf yof = lock. "If otheothers. = the others bableable = been able thre ere = the rear poc pocket = pocket thbulabulance, = the ambulance, tehe ohe = tell the jacslugslugs, = jacket slugs, stowstowed = she stowed thof hof = the roof afthe mhe = after the aind ind = any kind cou could = she could ch 3: stgicagically = strategically motor tor = motivator hernny nny = her horny stuill ill = stuff fill alle hae = all they morticiane ree = 'mortician'. She wthisthis = with this ash.ash = of hash. respble ble = responsible datem whm = date from (you could delete this 'from' and help the author's still atrocious grammar...) trykeepkeep = try to keep lookedred = looked as restraito ato = restraint to Tiffretureturned = Tiffany returned wher her = with her rollut = rolled ped ped = wrapped shiveviolviolently = shivered violently couldit, it = could do it, unbearablightight = unbearably bright Irarisorison = Iranian prison a cou could = as he could alivou nou = alive, you fracturer per = fractured her thiscipscipline, = this discipline, soht" ht" - so what?" approachhe dhe = approached the elborikerike = elbow strike slo slowly = face slowly hinteinterrogated = have interrogated ceiliherehere = ceiling were ind fnd finished = it and finished ch 4: sotherther finr = to some finer for, hr, = for her, happensetimetimes = happens sometimes sid side = up side, w hav have = would have affece dee = affect the atanctance, = assistance, suisorisor = supervisor acted ted = activated alreadtabltablished = already established passagehindhind = passage behind MSaheSaheeb = Maha Saheeb rapeen sen = rape, then awareware = are aware wasing ing = was seeing filesludiluding = files including tndernder = to tender sy thy = swiftly pulle (sh = pulled it volunteerir cir = volunteer their thek, ak, = the lock, thoom oom = the room buannianning = but also knowing whJediJedi = where Jedi thesestsest = the closest threthreats = two(?) threats (If I missed any, I'm sorry, but that was the most boring story...I enjoyed Moby Dick more...) Dreams...I wish they were true wordord: to to go = her to go stuffd und = stuuf, and e the the = to be the 'd b'd be = "You'd be baWe'dWe'd = baby. We'd The part NYDTQT... wordord: for ?[line break]? = for him? tok hik him = to kick him grd grabbed = and grabbed r har hand = right hand YASTAASTARD!" = YOU BASTARD!" s and and = shirt and paeveneven = pain; even souldould = she could Daria: Sappho and Galadriel of Lawndale - squishy; plagiarism - not theirs - AN ch 8. Soul Mates...Forever squishy CAUGHT!!!! - wordord ch 3: was t Dar = was that ch 4: t div = to be ch 5: kingking = thinking ch 7: shittme!"me!" = shitting me!" ch 8: teolleolled = tear rolled ch 9: mwhy why = me?" Why lookinr. Or. = looking for. ch 11: sca nak = scared, ch 13: whatr bor body = what your body ch 15: toucur bur = touch your no don't in = no doubt in (I think they tried to fix the wordord themselves and messed up in places) The DT Files - citation needed - marked - need to change refernce for "1-2" to "Spaceballs" Edited February 15, 2011 by RogueMudblood add info Quote
RogueMudblood Posted July 25, 2010 Author Report Posted July 25, 2010 Disney Misc Mira Goes into Heat - as this is old I'm going to venture that the Disclaimer was auto-added when moved to this cat (it probably didn't exist at the time of upload). Question is this: This is a Disney/Pixar film. The disclaimer doesn't mention Pixar. Does this need to be corrected? They were a separated studio at the time of this film. wordord: one one day= her one day ven ven die = or even die appepcte = accept ??? (her? it?) fo unt until = forgot until oosteoster = on Booster in cin = was in rep. As. = replied. pedededed = proceeded lond hnd = long and Foxglove's Fur Coat - squishy Redemption - starred out cuss words? In the forum, yes I will, in a story??? (Have you seen "The Rock" with Nick Cage? The line where he calls Sean Connery an "ahole" -that's actually what he says - is what I think of every time I see one of these ** words in this fic. Can you check this one for minor?) wordord: brest, st, = breakfast, e pla = empty ale:ale: = [line break]Dale: you you = give you codo wdo = could do ande bee been = and I've been ove,ove, = to move, Monty,se ase = Monty, whose 101 Dalmatians Not Shown wordord: ig sig = Cadpig arogonist = ??? (not sure if it's wordord, but it's not a word) andusteusted = and thrusted (it pained me to type that, but that's the way the text should be from the author...) Experimentation - song not cited Beauty on the Beast - see plagiarism forum She Will Burn - song lyrics from the movie's song "Hellfire" not cited. Disney Bonanza 2003 - disclaimer (internal) not specific enough - Land Before Time is from Amblin Entertainment, which has been known to work with the Disney subsidiary Universal Studios, but is not owned by Disney (from what I gathered.) Transformers (the orginal animated series the author is using) was produced by 20th Century Fox (Marvel Productions) and Sony (Sunbow Productions). Neither is owned by (or from what I can find an affilate of) Disney. Hanna-Barbera characters: Huckleberry Hound, Scrappy Doo, Wally Gator, The Fintstones, Quickdraw McGraw, Penelope Pitstop, Jabberjaw, Beetlejuice, Dudley Do-Right, Grape Ape, Great Gazoo And for extra credit: from Final Fantasy we have "the Tonberry" George W. (Dubya) Bush makes an appearance. Rip Van Winkle makes an appearance. Odysseus makes an appearance. ch 2 AN: "I do however own a glass of Napoleon Bonaparte's pre-cum." Might be funny and cute, but could actually get the author sued by an estate if the claim isn't true (or by the French people, take your pick). ch 3 AN: "Dedicated to the memory of Tony Danza" ... his estate may take exception to that. REV 22:20 - possible glitch - text stops mid-sentence: "He had been taken from Hell long ago, and had been living under God so" The chapter continues, but that paragraph seems cut off. Donald & Daisy - squished line: "peddling down the [line break]street at full blast." ch 3 is squished (see dup forum) recess- sex education- practical aplication squishy! and wordord contestst yst you = contest-just you belibelieve = "I believe asks tos to = asked us to Scamp & Angel wordord: eyed lad laid = eyes and laid p thp then = Scamp then aficuficult = a difficult bro brought = brought Angel'sf, sf, = Angel's muff, Foxglove's First Time squishy! (emailed poss plagiarism on acct) RRC++R?P++TH(A++;I;Dr+;Hu++;In;My++;R++;P+;Su+ME+>++IxCR+>++ [line break] Cc+d++m+z+t+f++Ed++g++f++D*M-Zm18GH++L++GePc+!++ What is that? wordord: whoes oes = what does back'm g'm = back. "I'm strengthenduriduring = strengthened during han min = have in b One = back. ballsacshivshiver = balls and a shiver and and = in and s bac = slide straigh Gad = straight as panalanal = ??? anal Ds hos = Dale's s the = slid A Tale of the Woman ch 4 ends abruptly - middle of a word. Missing text but no open tags... Pixie Hollow Firsts - check the disclaimer: "or settings that re" ???? ch 2 is not Pixie Hollow; it is based on a book series Fairy Haven which is not Disney. The chapters have nothing to do with one another, so it's not an XO. Author needs to post the second one in books as a separate fiction. This fandom is not disclaimed either. Evil, Be Thou My Good - only Tarzan is disclaimed. The fic belongs in Tarzan (movies) and not misc, but the other fandoms that the author has villains appear from do need to be disclaimed. Reach for the sky - squishy! Quote
SlntCobra1 Posted August 3, 2010 Report Posted August 3, 2010 Having just glanced over this, I'm guessing people aren't taking the time to PROOFREAD and thus the typos are getting fixed by you?! That seems extremely unfair. Quote
RogueMudblood Posted August 3, 2010 Author Report Posted August 3, 2010 No, honey, these are the glitches from old, old, old stories. DG fixes. Not me. I find. Others find. We tell DG here. DG fixes. DG=DemonGoddess061. Admin. This is a massive project DG has undertaken to cleanup the archive. More info here. Unfair? To DG, yes. Extremely. But also remember, some of the users aren't active here anymore. The glitches won't ever get fixed if DG doesn't do it. (Unfortunately.) Discuss? Please PM. Need to keep thread as clean as possible for DG. Quote
RogueMudblood Posted August 3, 2010 Author Report Posted August 3, 2010 Dragon Tales - El Tigre Swallow the Moon review ID 195317 - wordord: lastlast = the last; threntrents = the parents; Eddw itw = Eddy saw review ID 205054 - wordord: Nekon¢¨ n = Neko-Chan review ID 212377 - wordord: doin?knowknow = doin?" I know; reminisciand = reminiscing review ID 248916 - wordord: iwordwords = into words The Aftermath review ID 190235 - wordord: he'd wan be be = he'd want to be Inevitable review ID 190236 - wordord: to I neI = to me. I; cancapicapitalize = can't capitalize The Other Side Of The Moon - song "Jupiter" by Jewel not cited review ID 300972 - orphan review ID 305376 - wordord: n.n = now. And a Milkshake to Go review ID 265922 - wordord: aaintainty = 'dainty *story wordord: thrk'srk's = the dork's as ty Nay = as to why siffecffect. = side effect. 's p's = ??? (as far as I can tell, you can just delete this and the sentence will still make sense) essiossion = ??? lengt his his = length in his iousious, = Curious, Ed Edd n Eddy: A reunion review ID 269348 - wordord: whod , d , = whole Ed, review ID 278741 - wordord: watc Edd = watching Eddy *story wordord: seethe = seemed os cas = of his sm laz = smiled shr thr = shorter beok",ok", = bed-look", (painful bad punctuation...but it was the author's...) grinnef Edf = grinned. If threetreet. = the street. flamiolesoles = ??? rema cal = remained EddyEddy. = did Eddy. remember Hi His = remember. His expect fro from = expect ??? from realizeis his = realize this Satisfaction review ID 253146 - wordord: vin vin = & Kevin *story - upset> > - bad tag? k and = knees tightight = the tight leevinevin's = left Kevin's A Shard Of Memory review ID 190238 - wordord: shocking pe? Ke? = shocking people? *story wordord: /spa/span> - delete werth mth = were ch 2: Id ead = I said Too Far review ID 190237 - wordord: quitee ove overe.ere. = quite ???? *story wordord: way way = The way Until our next battle wordord: He not not = He did not Benedi82178217;s = Benedict's there th; the = there - the satisfiyriayrian = satisfied, Tyrian ch 2: Tyrian&7;s 7;s = Tyrian's wi pas passion = with a passion Dragon Wash - squishy! one para fic. Racial Relations - disclaimer issues: Totally Spies! (mentioned, should it be disclaimed?) and is "We Shall Overcome" considered public domain? Shooting Hearts wordord: thly gly = the only hestiostioned. = he questioned. nrustrusting = not trusting afteds!"ds!" = after ??? 'Return to Fayza's fanfic page.' -delete and massive space draw at bottom of fic Daughters AN top says repost due to site crash - is there any chance that it might still be in the database somewhere else and just not showing in the archive? "Hey Mister" (song) isn't actually cited. Just "I don't own or profit from". (The song is by Custom) Inner-Ed wordord: ch 1: fonderDoubDouble-D = fonder of Double-D shivers.< - open HTML tag - missing text? (and this is where italics begin - unnecessarily. Can you fix?) dire tow = directed quarrelh Edh = quarrel with So" Do" = So..." l to = lever (large space draw at bottom of chapter) ch 2: (large space draw after AN top) beng dng = be lying m him = from thess fss = the glass hs tas = he was head> > - bad tag shak Is = shaking? elabo on = elaborate somng…"ng…" = something..." (large space draw at bottom of chapter) ch 3: deed abd = deep and shedshed = finished oa cua = out of seeme be be = seemed to be eat eat = of heat feltfelt = and felt hre cre = he was wou would = you would w rub rub = would rub Eaid:aid: = Edd said: delicatdowndown = delicately down sidesidering = Considering wohavehave = would have Need, Want, Love, Take wordord: "> - bad tag? before internal disclaimer knowp> = know. (bad tag) Ed\'s Chicken Adventure wordord: hiin. in. = his skin. Mine - internal disclaimer needs to be deleted or corrected. wordord: hooksooks = he looks lipspullpull = lips and pull is cis = his hr anr = harder hng ing = hitting thrustdeepdeep = thrust as deep Edd's Graduation Gift - squishy! Perfect Distraction "())>-%---" delete - Japanese to English keyboard error? Phantasmagori-Ed -disclaimer insufficient: no non-profit clause Should be a chaptered fic: How I Love EDD, Eddy's Gotta EDDfriend Quote
RogueMudblood Posted August 8, 2010 Author Report Posted August 8, 2010 Fairly Odd Parents - Futurama Wish review board wordord: 210142: differeneah.eah.= different. yeah. story wordord: ade ade = I made With Me review board wordord: 145835: fanfThatThat= fanfiction! That story wordord: Cou hav = Could I hiiry iry = his fairy lacis wis = laced his gentlrokeroked = gently stroked y a y a little = Only a little Wounded wordord: strongern usn = stronger than al one one = almost one Hide and Seek wordord: Jorgenoccaoccasion, = Jorgen on one occasion, Heat and Steam wordord: WhenWhen = [line break] When Fire and Ice wordord: timedisadisappointment. = time in disappointment. Storms and Memories wordord: le bac back = leaned back bowemy emy = bows. Remy Neon Lights and Darkened Streets wordord: inte kie = into the brs = his Madness wordord: JorgJorgan = and Jorgan An uy cay = ??? ynow now = you know Fairly Odd Sex-Ed review board p2 - stertchy (and once you delete the offending review it should be fixed - since it's not a review) The Fairly Odd Parents review board wordord: 98258: Cnue nue = Continue Father of the Pride- spacedraw & squishy! Dragonphetamine - the disclaimer needs to be specific - it doesn't even mention Kingdom Hearts. They\'re baacckk... - Ch 3 is glitched - text disappeared. It Takes Two To Relax - question tense of 'no-profit' clause in disclaimer Thrown out for the night. (internal author doesn't match name on author account) wordord: instwho = instead Flintstones Part 1 - squishy! Fred's Story Flintstones Part 2 - squishy! Finally the Fuck - squishy!; Fran‡oise = Françoise Girlfriends - squishy!; Fran‡oise = Françoise When Good Housewives Go Bad, When Good Housewives Go Bad Again - real people make an appearance - disclaimers need to be modified. Job Searchin\' Blues - the following need to be added to the disclaimer: Ranma 1/2, Cowboy Bebop, Trigun, Gundam Wing, Inyuyasha, Sailor Moon, Hellsing, Dragon Ball, Oh! (Ah!) My Goddess (not sure if Manga or Anime-it's not specific enough), Fullmetal Alchemist, Tenchi Muyo! Brian\'s batter is the same story as Give a ltitle, get a little. only with a character name changed to make the story Het instead of slash. Untitledness wordord: neas Cas = news was thole ole = the whole Denzel'se. He. = Denzel's ??? (cock? ass? thighs?) tow imw = to grow blameirl irl = blame a girl A \'Classic\' Fairly Oddparents Story stretchy! wordord: gibberish before "A 'Classic'" in the body - please delete gibberish after " "It's going to be one fun weekend." Timmy said to himself, smiling." - please delete daynglinglish. = day - English. doctoroffioffice = doctor's office The Fairly OddParents wordord: Worldle Tle = World while darlinnda,nda, = darling Wanda, ""No, you don't usually dress in clothes that are torn and your hair is a mess Cosmo, don't lie to me, you know what happened last time I was lied to," Timmy said (movie reference)." - If it's a direct quote, doesn't it need to be cited? Timmy\'s Phantom - "his mouth full of cum a." - no visible broken tags, but is there missing text showing in database? (May just be a bad author...) & disclaimer needs to be modified to include Danny Phantom. Roots to Life - question verbiage in the non-profit portion of the disclaimer. Didn\'t See That coming - down to earth./i> - obviously, open end italics tag. Can you fix? And just below this there is a 'bold' section that shouldn't be. Funeral for a Chin - Marvel and DC characters mentioned not disclaimed. The following stories are all part of the same fiction and should be a chaptered story: Flintstones: Flintstones Part 1, Fred's Story Flintstones Part 2 Fantomette: Finally the Fuck, Girlfriends, The Horniest Trio Family Guy: Brian's Change, Assume More, Suspect Less Family Guy: When Good Housewives Go Bad, When Good Housewives Go Bad Again Family Guy: Desperate times, desperate measures, A Messy Friendship, Give a ltitle, get a little., Brian\'s batter Quote
RogueMudblood Posted August 21, 2010 Author Report Posted August 21, 2010 GI Joe - Gargoyles Synthetic - disclaimer needs to be modified. Right now, it says "I don't own Sigma 6". Yes, that's one of the many deviations of GI Joe; however, should it not say "I don't own GI Joe" ? Threesome wordord: hovedoved, = had moved, secondser, er, = seconds later, who of of a = who was of a somesomeone = not someone sexy s.[linebreak]s. = sexy ass. you sti still = you are still ar asr as = as far as blund. Pd. = blunt end wThe = way. Inot not = I'm not I 911 911." = I dial 911." hawaysways = had always looke her her = looked at her on Gar = on the frois eis = from this sho shot = head shot clawng ing = claws ??? lng fng furious = landing furious veisseissed = very pissed bve hve = believe exhaus "S = exhausted. Somedy bdy bar = Some bloody bar instinctabbeabbed = instinct grabbed deive.ive. = detective. "Don'tk wik = "Don't fuck Th[line break]The = The shining pee peered = shining eye peered believe.t? Ot? Oh, = believe it. What? Oh, expret opt = express it e dae days, = these days, beingart art = being a part ....Is there text missing, or is author just that bad at internal continuity? Promotion wordord: seesngs,ngs, = sees things, hedy ody = her body hndernder = him under hert het = her but qui. He. = quietly. waddenddenly = was suddenly tht."t." = thought." esizesized = emphasized Foxy Lady wordord: in summary: castAngeAngela = castle, Angela review ID 260439: orona ona = or demona story: tsmatsmattering = thin smattering asovinoving = ass, moving cl, th, = climax, "Gargoylesemonemon. = "Gargoyles" ??? Alternate Lives: Phoenix Guardians - needs a citation for that bit at the beginning in italics - appears to be direct quote from the episode. wordord: anfectfection = and affection Lex needed> > - could be end of sentence, or bad tag. ndifndif]> - bad tag, missing text? wo/p> /p> = word. Lextailtail, = Lex's tail, moann sun = moaned in behhis = behind pro protected = him protected t Lex Lex = that. Lex "Yeah."[line break] /p> - broken tag, missing text? 200 s. - ??? no open tags near this...is there missing text? y the the = year the gargoylith ith = gargoyle. With emos, fs, = emotions, and ed = pissed asy asy = as they fof tof = full of in ain = was in &q...S...So = "...So if]> - bad tag unsp mus = ??? "tstotstone = "Nightstone ass oss = ??? ru tow = running reang hng = realizing swi swing, = the (his?) swing, p clp class=MsoNormal> - bad tag cla class=MsoNormal> - bad tag ing ing = heading be lon = before p clp class=MsoNormal> - bad tag yquotquot; = you?" w wer = whom hs ths = heroes witm evm = with him ndifndif]> - bad tag clasclass=MsoNormal> - bad tag (sorry if I missed any, that got boring-though not as bad as that Daria story...) Another Night, Another Kiss review page 4 RID 3000036131 - squishy A Million Reasons ch 3, ch 6, ch 7, ch 8, ch 9, ch 10, ch 11, ch 12, ch 13, ch 14, ch 16, ch 17, ch 18, ch 19, ch 20, have squished lines throughout, but it's not all squishy. ch 19: ’ = ' To Catch A Killer - also partial squishies ch 1, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7 Never Meant to Be wordord: ch 1: GrahGraham = Graham B> Brooklyn = Brooklyn **starting at ""I don't think that it is wise," " the text is italicized and shouldn't be. Is there missing text or an open tag in the db that I'm not seeing in the archive? There are also some random jumps between segments of the text that make me think there's missing text, and the author references Japanese phrases in AN bottom, but the phrases aren't anywhere else in the chapter. ch 2 squishy! wordord: flowe[line break]Bro[line break]Brooklyn = flowers?[line break]Brooklyn he a, co, = he asked, asBrooBrooklyn. = asked Brooklyn. shed hed = splashed surveillanceaid aid = surveillance," said jolivial = jovial (not sure if that actually qualifies as wordord or "I'm rewriting English") ie eye eye = in the eye theing ing = the racing ? blurring ? hal bel = had all fewondsonds = few seconds Gdid = Gary fa he he = far as he Noo seo = Note to notgroagroan. = not to groan. nitenitely = definitely Ahe fhe floor = And the floor **There appears to be missing text in this chapter also as the author again references foreign words AN bottom that are not in the text. ch 3 squishy! "With a burst of adrenaline, and reached his target and tackled him." - missing part of the sentence, or just bad editing? wouoth oth = would both adglidgling = a fledgling don'nd. nd. = don't mind. sarookrooklyn. = said Brooklyn. bertberto = Roberto ertoerto = [line break]Roberto  nde nde = blonde onlve ove = only have ch 4 squishy! to s to to = too ??? to Ironly, ly, = Irrationally, Roberto stared at the ceiling above [line break]He[line break]He hadn't - missing text. Yo&nbs = York. ela ela = Angela chi chin = his chin courseat aat = course, that ins dis = instant oas tas = one was wai for for = waiting for anceance = distance sisedised = ??? it [line break]it something = Was it something wor words = The words ch 5 - squishy! mangun gun = man to gun thi things = the things laman man = latin man ch 6 - squishy! tRobeRoberto = that Roberto and uthe the = and ??? the Acing ing = According posspossession, = her possession, ed ied = alive intensityfemafemales = intensity that females earor gor = earth for g tog = going r som = raise aulleulled = and pulled Mrste Mte = Mrs Kate thronto nto = thrown into handso hio = hands into 't w't = didn't n't n't = I can't lipslips = his lips ch 7 - squishy! &nbIt'sIt's = "It's eyesenedened = eyes widened introd thd = introduced istiistina = Christina discun.[line break]n. = discussion fa rug = face a hert fit = her just pas passenger = the passenger ch 8 - squishy! ret gra = return, inte tte = indicate blusnbspnbsp;He = blush. He becaue kne = because he evid[line break]tha[line break]that = evidence that goio hao = going to stuff considering what - the sentence just stops and the next paragraph starts ... missing text? "Hell&nbs = "Hello." gale fle = gargoyle hea head = her head oud thd = out and ch 9: wordord: inforon oon = information wasnwasn't = he wasn't distracting Ka - the sentence just stops and the next paragraph starts ... missing text? pct vct = perfect unonedoned = unbuttoned alaralarm = the alarm K gra = Kane, otheother = The other futh hth= fun with t's t's = "That's e Mre = where nuzznuzzle up against hhroahroat = and nuzzle up against his throat ath ath = around andnfulnful = and painful almommedmmediately = almost immediately &nboberoberto = Robert buils, ts, = buildings, Darlene: Mirror Images 2 (PART 27) - space draw issues - triple-spacing between paragraphs The Out of Towners - squishy! (all 9 chapters) disclaimer in text ok, in bar woefully deficient. Her Crimson Kiss - squishy! (all 3 chapters) disclaimer in text ok, in bar woefully deficient. A Life On The Line - disclaimer incomplete - non non-profit clause - please check for minor. (either that or ESL) Gargoyle Fantasies - disclaimer in text ok, in bar woefully deficient; ch 2 - squishy (disclaim Star Wars needed); ch 5 AN top squishy Victims - not sure if anything needs to be added as a generality maybe "I am not affiliated with Barnes and Noble" (although author misspelled) - also references Boris Vellejo - though, for once, there referenced celebrity isn't making an appearance. Mother Daughter Escapades - disclaimer verb tense on profit clause-please check. Boxing Day - check profit portion of disclaimer. Also, all of author's disclaimers say who does own the Gargoyles, not that author does not own them - is this sufficient? SID 600092495, 600092369, and the "S" series below (chapters posted as separate stories) The following stories are all part of the same fiction and should be a chaptered story: GI Joe: Motorpool Lovin\' , Final Step for BeachHead and CoverGirl Gargoyles: Alternate Lives: Phoenix Guardians , Alternate Lives 3: Past Sins Gargoyles: Seize the Night , Special Delivery , Stonewall , So... You're Gay... Quote
SlntCobra1 Posted August 21, 2010 Report Posted August 21, 2010 Wow, if only I had the attention span you do and the patience to NOT let my inner Grammar Nazi get the better of me, I'd be willing to help as well. Quote
RogueMudblood Posted August 21, 2010 Author Report Posted August 21, 2010 Wow, if only I had the attention span you do and the patience to NOT let my inner Grammar Nazi get the better of me, I'd be willing to help as well. Sometimes it is hard about the grammar. I do so want to fix things, but I can't ghost write things already in the archive. Just post the ick for DG to fix. Some of my favorite complaints about grammar, though, are in the reviews that are so messed up you have to wonder if the author isn't flaming themselves to make people look at their story and see if it really is that bad. * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * The Goode Family - Homestar Runner Ubuntu's Football Trip - please check the disclaimer - refers to author in 3rd person...posting someone else's fic? author's webpage and email - is this the same info you have for andromeda1 ? Summer Breeze: What Roxanne Didn't Know - check verbiage of non-profit portion of disclaimer please. I Love Brendon Small (let the wordord begin): fanfic eso pso = fanfiction, so e the the = to be the realouldouldn't = really couldn't abou. J. Jason = about it. Jason shed wed = shuddered ? Mind Games review board: RID 257953 - squishy? RID 2035317534: reaghten. = ??? Is that how the user intended to spell written, or is that wordord? ch 2 wordord: o, ho, = No, Family Affair wordord: He-man did. pan> - bad tag, missing text? Castle Greyskull would be ours!"[line break]o:p>[line break]Soon two guards - random story jump - missing text? (open tag) "I'm[line break]Nyllive, - please get rid of the line break - I think it's caused by the disappearance of the section mentioned above. Alab.lab. = Arms lab. Evil- had had = Evil-Lyn had personremireminded = person he reminded bee...e... = be mine... ers,ers, = Masters, body...< < -open tag, missing text? withs bos = with this witntemntempt. = with contempt. Pineapples - disclaimer says doesn't own homestarrunner.com - is this sufficient, or does it need to disclaim Homestar Runner and not just the website? (Apparently this started out as a book...) The Dereskian Queen - review board wordord: RID 213818: two wi Gi Given = two witches. Given ch 1: wordord (oh so tempting to ask you to simply load in the FFNet version...) Theyed ted = The named cil oil = council chigaingain, = child again, ye Ete = years, me wme = became ch 2 - song not cited: I am Going to the West by Connie Dover squished line: "orods ferk[line break]anonë" after the above, this is what appears: "kan ris il vanna toïl. Mantë ëars eii toil otë gaers feret llorlïe, ki thæ reüusk iss il falas, tet tirn il unfalas gaer." the same section on FFNet story: "ki thæ reüusk iss il falas, tet tirn il unfalas gaer." I don't know the language. The translation (which is at the bottom of the chapter) is the song by artist mentioned above. This excerpt put into google translator tells me it's closest detected match is Albanian - and it can't recreate the English lyric from the FFNet verse. So, I can't recreate what the original AFF text looked like. Sorry. thpor = thale shuld uld = she could t in in = twice in I-e tre tried = I-" she tried womith ith = woman with WestWest, = the West, ch 3: wordord: ter ier = tutor hoey cey = how they there ere = they were ch 4: wordord: insidhe she = inside. The ch 5: wordord: Can ann and hesterster = Caerlin and her sister rof tof the = rock of the leaning hea of of = leaning heavily of ofs tos town. = of this town. ch 6: wordord: re mre = after dresslowslowly, = dressed slowly, Han yan = How can impotly,tly, = importantly, Ancientoriaoria = Ancients, Moria ch 7 wordord: makr dir = make our All sll = A small rea ready," = "I'm ready," ch 8: wordord: dank haThe = dank haze. was blas mas = was black as tearcearch = their search ch 9: wordord: booksll mll me, = books! Tell me, hosphospital = the hospital ever-presenquidquid = ever-present liquid ch 10: wordord: wounwound = her wound wra by by = wrapped by ng mng = taking rubber eer = rubbed her "Mm Cae Caerlin = " Mmmm," Caerlin woand = wound also, the other chapters have a different formatting - appears it was lost here through ch 12. ch 11: wordord: whereaboutse loe = whereabouts. She thas uss = that was drd tod = dropped hattlattle-ax = his battle-ax somng. ng. = something. him,, ju, just = him, and, just Wthe = When bkeptkept = been kept starting at " t'il andúne." the line breaks need to be taken out. The whole section should look like: Ki hach urë t' il andúne. Lidor li we nesurë derem. Li mae ur kan li anonë. Lidor li we nekhil rem, Ne yuthë gui ki nänd. Ki hauch urë t'il andúne. Ki hauch urë t'il andúne. ch 12: wordord: Darkwoman.The The = Darkwoman." The idioidiots." = the idiots." move frd.[line break]rd. = move forward. ght ght = brought coult fit = could not woman's hea = woman's head. (space draw issue - no missing text in comparison of FFNet and AFF loads - just extra blank space) knoy biy = knows my The Clash of Majicks: wordord: disced, ed, = discovered ch 2: Majicker ter than= Majick older than aan. an. = a woman. iur sur = in your herger ger = her finger ch 3: wordord: hedy pdy pain recereceding. = her body pain was receding. shor her = shoulder s hnishnished = she finished candleligh bad bad = candlelight is bad yor wor = young ch 4: wordord: (Title needs to be fixed - simply Chapter IV) difnt?"nt?" = different?" te ene end = to the end livingbersbers = living members ch 5: wordord: "Oeelieelina. = "Oh, Teelina. almosductductively. = almost seductively. beforossiossing = before crossing sd upd = stared debe ibe = describe Sonsionsidered = She considered coming.The The = coming."[line break]The anlminlming. = and calming. "You'ringringing = "You're bringing ch 6: wordord: "Nog. Ig. = "Nothing. inury ury = ??? rel sta = relaxed br acr = better uncontroly. ly. = uncontrollably. woman'es.[line break]es.= woman's eyes fac"Tsk"Tsk = face. "Tsk h wih = head clescles = shackles meashe she = mean?" she A Home That Far review board wordord: RID 194492: cnue,nue, = continue, please check author's age. I was unable to find anything conclusive. However, this being the second of her stories that I've read... she sounds young. I might excuse as ESL if it weren't for the fact she uses British spellings. Disclaimer will need to be re-worded to include X-Men (comic). (It's in the body, but not the bar, and the non-profit clause is only in the bar.) ch 1: wordord: wonighnightmare = worst nightmare neighbourottwottweiler = neighbour's rottweiler dthe = done nigtwo = night, turnef thf = turned off wohinghings = work things ship the the = ship and the ch 2 ns sis = nights posis tos = positions holdingo hio = holding onto freeir eir = free their frs, as, = friends, whardhard = were hard remaremained = had remained advd ind = advanced brouhim = brought urneurned = He turned def "E = defeat. maundered = maneuvered crtabrtable. = comfortable. pr enr = proper ide tre = idea of thou 'T = thought. sng hng = showing stoppand = stopped ts les = tracks neverngednged = never changed oughough = Although pai att = paid no ttalltallion = the stallion Come Pus = Come on. matheythey = made, they hise, giviniving it a flip to reveal a longer piece wrapped aroit. it. = his side, giving it a flip to reveal a longer piece wrapped around it. thr through = ran through ofame ame = of a name ch 3 wat sot = wasn't "Man-ats?"s?" = "Man-at-Arms?" goget = got to coe = she ch 4 ting ing = training cide ide = can ride unconditd mod = unconditioned faead ead = far ahead finishe."e." = finish line." pullihe = pulling ch 5 hiale ale = her. Kale paddin she she = padding?' she reaod.od." = real good." thrn. rn. = the barn. uncauncan = [line break needed]Duncan ght ght = thought Tomanoman = The woman informatiboutbout = information about thw prw = the new attentionke = attention. "I take duplication of text begins at worord: "If thke" and ends at "in the system." The entire section can be deleted. leve a = ??? ch 6 findthinthings, = finding things, ed sed = gasped s"[line break]" = sir." Shdn'dn't = She didn't red. d. = replied. angeangeling, = a changeling, froere ere = from where cheschest, = his chest, ch 7 inueinued = continued thofesofessor = the professor ch 8 a b a = had a g fro = ground becomee cye = become more as rees.ees. = as refugees. ndernderstand. = "I understand. fr, pr, = favor, "C[line break]"Can = "Can aded aed = adjusted a!" !" = again!" therther = thereafter vegetn, tn, = vegetation, t my my = to be my handschedched = hands ??? text stops - missing text? ch 9 thecherchers = the teachers e. e. = horse. dowe wae = down. He allomselmself = allow himself houchouched = he crouched bre breath = her breath he to hto = he has to ch 10 td. [line break]d. = to bed. timetime = Any time "Ve"Very = [line break needed]"Very ager ger = a bigger ch 11 skedsked. = he asked. reallry mry = really? Try TheyThey = [line break needed]"They kly kly = quickly you thr = you're punc"Dun"Duncan, = punch. "Duncan, pl, he, = plants, med atd = me, and bao Kao = back to ch 12 wholrm srm = whole form keepeye eye = keep an eye chu. [line break]. = chuckle. frite ite = frostbite subordinatooktook = subordinates took wanr...r..." = want her..." s, hs, = rocks, Slowl wen = Slowly, he dmuchmuch = down much happeain.ain." = happen again." cl fee = cloven nea nearly = fall nearly clawgmengment = claw fragment moveoggioggily = move, groggily soute she = south she ral ral = ??? beast'sst, st, = beast's throat, ch 13 theks aks = the tusks g heg = along him , bu, but = him up, but ntednted, = relented, tng hng = throwing himing ing = him, hoping bd bed = beyond goingoing = was going ch 14 a tim = awful ems ems = "Seems cmarkmarks, = claw marks, "S"[line break]"[line break]" = ??? coted ted = constructed Logand hid = Logan held tigThenThen = tiger? Then t itt it = [line break needed]But it farthack.ack. = farther back. Stpullpulled = Storm pulled nee get get = need to get locfor = locker VeryVery well = [line break needed]"Very well thr onr = the air dedingding = descending selvselves. = themselves. her , he, he = her down, he backa hua = back into a nd, nd, = ground, lstelstered = holstered trounround, = the ground, atton ton = attention ch 15 ossiossible." = as possible." Dark Alliance ch 2 has open tag at the bottom: will>/i> Blue Sugar - please check disclaimer. Has necessary parts, but adds that the story is copyright of Kim McFarland. Endsville High - disclaimer needs to be modified: Will need to specify cartoons: The Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy, Invader Zim, Fairly Odd Parents, Ed Edd n Eddy, Powerpuff Girls, Dexter's Laboratory, Codename: Kids Next Door, Hey Arnold!, Jimmy Neutron (I don't know what cartoon Steve came from - and at this point I'm thinking if it was ever on NickToons or CN it needs to be disclaimed) Mandy's New Weapon - disclaimer needs to be modified to include Teen Titans ... and does the Necronomicon fall under public domain? And review whoring. Who am I? wordord: RID: 8787: wasy moy = was very ch 1: bittow. ow. = bitter now. hahanghanged, = have changed, felxed xed = felt relaxed aproppropriate = an appropriate h, Ph, Pheebs, = "Oh, Pheebs, tossinflowflower = tossing a flower andfeltfelt = and it felt sidesides, = her sides, Anlovelove = And I love Another World: House of the Holy - disclaimer needs to be modified to include the Wild Thornberrys and Invader Zim wordord: Bod lod = Gino had stupir nor = stupid for houand = hours, way?way? = anyway? A Parent\'s Worst Nightmare: wordord: s gir girl's = scream a girl's mention ndsondsome = mention, handsome Helga and Phoebe\'s Sleepover: wordord: "Wwho?who?" = "With who?" Long December: wordord: letse ase = let these er aer all = after all shoulderefulefully. = shoulder balefully. ch 2: rwherwhere = read where maybcoupcouple = maybe a couple sse. se. = guess. smi smiled. = and smiled. n't n't = I don't l hul = feel I'lkillkill = I'll kill Surprised Birthday Surprise - question non-profit verbiage in disclaimer - "I do not make any kind of profit off the series." Not as Planned - question non-profit verbiage in disclaimer Quote
RogueMudblood Posted September 2, 2010 Author Report Posted September 2, 2010 Invader Zim P13 - 8 No Banana - wordord: roa fre = roaming Nocturnal Lust - top paragraph squishy wordord: lng hng = leaving squished line: "in it's opaque [line break]Protection." ch 2: squished line: "newborn dragon,[line break]And yellowed" wordord: m wam= [line break]Zim ch 3: squished line: "which causes[line break]Him to" ch 4: wordord: stonah nah = store- nah Skin Deep AN squished Dib and his abuse - wordord: m...m... = "I'm... ed hed = closed forhad had = for he had uredured = captured Ieingeing = I'm being killelf elf = kill myself patc loc = pathetic Theeaseease' = The last 'please' c ans = could werw anw = were wet this ais = there is The Ultimate ZADAGABAGABAMATAZAGAMR novel - wordord: (how old is this person?) ch 2: return,m gom going = return, I'm going wronothnother = wrote another wearig ask asked = wearing?" asked ch 3: behihis= behind be dec = before truntrunts = the grunts chapter 4 is chapter 3 again...although, that may have been intentional...I still think this is troll fic. ch 6: presenitseitself= presented itself ch 7: s the = sucks ch 8: allcoulcould = all he could ch 11: right?z saz = right?" Gaz ie fae = in the sas, as, = she was, Ziked.ked. = Zim asked. ch 12: go beo = ??? Joined at the Dib - wordord: RID 234057 - Pratchet Hit= Pratchet of RID: 278352 - it it = at it ch 2 wordord: sluayedayed = slug prayed n stn style='mso-tab-count:1'> - bad tag entaentarily = momentarily q lo = quite clasclass=MsoNormal style='mso-pagination:none;mso-layout-grid-align:none; text-autospace:none'> - bad tag Another Doomed Year - wordord: wa go. go... = way to go... cou..".. = could..." beautiful Irkan Princess, and[line break]Heir - squished line Leaning on the[line break]door - squished line Tom[line break]lifts his - squished line of tof = out of It's MATING time! - wordord: evtwentwenty = every twenty affd byd = afforded bs fes = by his wi wav wave = with a wave turnresuresulted = turning resulted ot yot = or not "ogy ogy = "Apology etiontion = exception Pain is Love - squishy! wordord: et. et. = forget. ted aed = towered dazsmilsmile = dazzling smile Black & Blue - wordord: summary: Startiut iut = Starting out storout out = stories out re ire = read (The AN here is excessive - do you want to email author about this? Or do you leave the older stories before the content guideline change?) spoke suc = spoken in Awaom tom = Away from contempnd knd = contempt and forthatthat.... = forget that... findi dar = finding dark sr inr = suffer gec flc = genetic conque spe = conquering black-purpleid, id, = black-purple ??? ch 2: irkn thn = Irken in aren'ncinncing. = aren't convincing waw daw = was ,n, Pn, = ??? Somng, ng, = Something, inungrungry = in a hungry QuestioCommComments = Questions, Comments ch 3: hou*L* *L* = hours *LOL* fingersoughough = fingers through unknunknown, = her unknown He mHe may = He may sparever ver = ??? , ever Destroy All You Know - ch 1 AN needs to be edited to remove the "no kiddies under 18.. unless u want..." line. & squishy! (all four chaps) ch 2 orphan ch 4: wordord: it eno enough = it was enough times d tad = times he had Another Meeting: wordord: gavnervnervous = gave a nervous teles les = tallest gohe whe = gods, he Shadows Dance - Review board wordord: RID 101053: forwardthe the = forward to the RID 101270: wxcepxceptional! = was exceptional! Ch 1 wordord: enshro cit = enshrouded castrostroy = can destroy real bec because = reality because ch 2 doesn't belong here - is part of another fic - poster on this is ZeeDrippyVessel - I am guessing it goes here ... this story's ch 27 is a reload of it's ch 7. So RID 76810 can be moved to ZDV's fic. Soldier of Fortune - ch 9 orphan Her Eyes - squished line: "Zim glanced[line break]over his" ch 2, 3, 6, 8, 9, 11, 14 orphan; ch 13 - squishy Feeling This - squishy! All I Know - squishy! Gaz's Best Friend - RID 182413 wordord: WhatDib = What is RID 250792 wordord: b lik = but I ch 2: neseenseen = never seen haokenoken = had broken waarp,arp, = was sharp, Ahe hhe = And his < sty style="mso-spacerun: yes"> - bad tag ch 3: n1>- bad tag Bloaty'/p> /p> = Bloaty's." cla class=MsoNormal style='text-indent:.5in;line-height:200%'> - bad tag Soaked To The Bone Past this skin, I'm soaked to the bone [line break]in this feeling you bring to me. - squished line (reads like a song lyric, but it's the only one and I can't find the song) - appears twice like this in chapter. The Expression of the Stars - ch 2: squishy and space draw issues (copy-pasted from FFNet probably - AN ch 1 says author moved, same ID) No Experience Necessary - ch 1, 3, 6, 7 - small-window stretchy; ch 2, 3, 4 have space draw issues - no line spacing between paragraphs - user formatting error? Cuts and Bruises - ch 2, 3, 4 have space draw issues - triple spacing between paragraphs The Things Between Us - squishy!- all 4 chapters Two Of Us - ch 2, 3, 4, 5, 6 space draw issues Intruder - squished lines: Dib said quietly.[line break]Zim jumped his camera.[line break]Dib was working on his pants.[line break]Zim worked Dibs prostate.[line break]Dib screamed Megami Joushou - ch 4 top AN needs to be edited/deleted. Pissy author needs to get over herself and the fact that she was deleted previously - probably was a minor at the time of deletion. But, as it appears to me, her profiles were actually merged. (All the info I've found on her shows she's legal on this account, but I did find where she was part of a group that was posting and included two minors.) ch 7 - small-window stretchy Do Irkens love? - There are squished lines throughout - appears to be author formatting error. The Blood Of the Rose - Is there a reason that authors who've been deleted for being too young feel the need to tell everyone "I decided I'm above the rules" when they're allowed to come back? (AN ch 1) Irken Courtship - this was edited by a minor...note AN bottom ch 1 by user name. Vindicated - ch1, 3, 4: small-window stretchy; ch 2 - glitch - entire chapter missing -open 'end' tag Thank You - small-window stretchy, both chapters (see AN forum) Tall Order - small-window stretchy, chapters 1-3 (see AN forum) The Things Between Us - squishy! all 4 chapters Finale ch 9 - small-window stretchy Quote
RogueMudblood Posted September 11, 2010 Author Report Posted September 11, 2010 Invader Zim p 7 - 3 Deep Rooted Desire - ch 2, 3, 4: small-window stretchy....ch 4 has no citation for the song Christfuck by Wumpscut Poison - no citation for song Poison by Alice Cooper The Control - ch 1: "protest.par[line break]"Sirs do I go in?"[line break]i Let it be Verana. Let them work it out[line break]i0" - ??????? What is that 'junk'? It appears throughout the chapter. Teenage Tendancies - review whoring bottom AN The Clock Tower - ch 11 squishy To be Toyed With, ch 2 AN top - author states needs to add tags and doesn't know how: Voy and Exhib. And stretchy (small-window) The Sweetest Fruit - small-window stretchy Piece by Piece - disclaimer doesn't specify which movies. (They don't seem to play an actual part in the story though - bad as it is) Missing Something Crucial - disclaimer woefully insufficient. They Shall Rise Again - please check disclaimer Horseshoes and Handgrenades - please check disclaimer Paranoia ch 6 - small-window stretchy Zim, Dib and a Who - Horton Hears a Who not disclaimed The following stories are all part of the same fiction and should be a chaptered story: Specimen, Captive Beginning, Middle, Apex, End, Finale Handy Distraction, Distraction 2, Deception - these need an additional disclaimer for the inclusion of the creator Jhonen in the fic. Quote
RogueMudblood Posted September 18, 2010 Author Report Posted September 18, 2010 Invader Zim 2-1 Every Kiss Begins with Kay - should the title be disclaimed for being a trademarked slogan? Bribary - no wordwrap on smaller windows. Goddess Risen - check disclaimer The Irken Anatomy - check disclaimer Vindication - ch 18, ch 22 - does author in some way need to state that they are not a member of the Associate Press since they have written this to appear as a news article and signed it "The Associated Press" ? ch 60, ch 61, ch 75 - need disclaimer (in chapter) modified to say author does not know Anubis Five (Anubis5) or Exit Theme (the group) and all the other celeb goodies - and I'd love a birthdate on this guy - spent 10 minutes looking and I've got nil (except that he may or may not be dating Nicky Hilton - I can find that but not how old he is...) ch 76 - needs celeb disclaim for Metallica ch 65 - advert for another author in chapter ch 81 - bottom AN - advert for dA artists ch 26, ch 31, ch 33, ch 39, ch 40, ch 43, ch 47, ch 48, ch 55, ch 56, ch 60 - orphan Quote
DemonGoddess Posted September 18, 2010 Report Posted September 18, 2010 The first one, I'm not sure. I'll have to look in to that. The second, what are you meaning by no word wrap in smaller windows? Quote
RogueMudblood Posted September 18, 2010 Author Report Posted September 18, 2010 It's not stretchy if your window is maximized, and it may not even be an issue, but on a few stories I noticed if I didn't have my window max'd - if I only had it on half-screen, then it doesn't wordwrap. Ex: (pretend you're looking at half screen) The Tallest came toward Zim with mailicious intent in their e he would have known. It was not something they had prepa and their actions had made it clear. The rest of the words are there - there's a scrollbar at the bottom of the screen. but the document isn't 'wrapping'. It wasn't something I noticed before now because I was always on full-screen windows. I started noticing it when I began using half screen windows to alt-tab b/c ctrl-tab just wasn't cutting it on noting review board issues. I do max the window when it looks funky to make sure it isn't squishy or stretchy. Does that make sense? Quote
DemonGoddess Posted September 18, 2010 Report Posted September 18, 2010 aha yes. It's a stretchy! Quote
RogueMudblood Posted September 18, 2010 Author Report Posted September 18, 2010 Even on half screen? because if I max the window it's all there, no scroll bar. Quote
DemonGoddess Posted September 18, 2010 Report Posted September 18, 2010 Even there. It should never do that, regardless of screen size. What that means, is that a separator line of identical characters is too long. Quote
RogueMudblood Posted September 25, 2010 Author Report Posted September 25, 2010 Jackie Chan - Jonny Quest The Jetsons - wordord: read likelike = read him like sf shf = see if sas bas = she was Hothe = How's ae aue = at the wae sie = was the ch 2 : beenbeen = had been James' reward - wordord: allows unt until = allows her until from Jaw[line break]Ja[line break]James = from Jaws."[line break]James Intrigue at Warfield - RID 103596 wordord: gone.one. = get done. ch 1: I caI = All I fingfinger = her finger ch 3: my fi."[line break]." = my figure." thek ofk = the look themwaitwait = them to wait ch 4: fsomesome = find some fsomesome = hours to the ctedcted = expected tarniarnish = the varnish y's y's = Tracy's 've 've = they've daysyou = days, if won won't = she won't ch 5: immediatelyn hen = immediately when unnatuy pay = unnatrually y spy spy's = young spy's ugh ugh = through istingting = is getting gg thg = giving ch 6 - squishy! tndonndon - to London sa"Onl"Onl= says, "Only wheregoesgoes = where he goes ch 7 - squishy! showem tem = shows them hhroahroat = her throat cotelytely = completely miendiends = my friends wor"I b"I = words. "I slimilimited = some limited infoion ion = information bas has = bath as assayssays = as he says respo she = response: Althoit oit = Although it nicenice. = be nice. ch 8 - squishy! tbasebasement = the basement cy scy = Tracy ce soo = class G sai said = Gordo said girlshesshes = girl blushes he nhe = as she unbearable.at mat = unbearable. What foe mae = for the ch 9 - squishy! hihroahroat = his throat thinu cau = think you bon ion = bourbon m sta = man's Goand = Gordo ks aks = looks You Did Love Me! wordord: Nmoanmoaned = Nick moaned Picnic Love - spacedraw issues at the top and triple-spacing between paragraphs wordord: flaed aed = flattened frownokinokingly. = frowned knowingly and 's l's laughs = and Jade's laughs rummagedlaw law = rummaged ??? fine ine denims, = fine denims, thatcsparsparking = thatchhair sparking (yes, I know it's not a word, but I'm certain that's what the author intended) Rg mag = Raging poif lif = point of re wre = ??? -I think the author meant 'resent' (which doesn't make sense, but it doesn't earlier in the story either) pull , Ja, = pull away, playplay = foreplay Wu gWu gripped = Wu gripped onselfself = on herself Off The Clock wordord: studimlyimly = study: dimly resed ced = responded ing ing = chasing sligh Jac Jackie = slightly. Jackie ki art = kissed fag ing = falling nike ike = not like Ensnared wordord: inson son = in season ciatciated = castigated Valmoad sad = Valmont had the the = and the Jac's c's = Jackie's betwees cas = between his Childs Play - wordord: RID 14671: as aas = it was RID 96324: j cha= jackie Women's Lib - bad formatting - bad! squishy with line spacing (and this looks awful on half screen!) - It's gonna be a one-para too, I can tell. In the Heat of Things - review board stretchy - RID 230614 '+' line, and when that one's fixed, 2035156852 may also cause a problem, then 2035281419, and definitely 3000033880 wordord: regularis, is, = regular basis, a clo = about Franci [double line break] = Francisco. gel shl = general ded ded = decided so-fso-far-off = not-so-far-off anrengrength = and strength or tor - can delete absolutellighlightful! = absolutely delightful! tasShe She = taste. She . Hi. His = grin. His felsligslight = felt a slight thanget get = than to get magie pue = magic. He hiroatroat. = his throat. falhe she = fall," he skedsked = he asked stayedone = stayed in reactfromfrom = reaction from firscediceding = first receding fris cos = friends' gentlked ked = gently flicked wen asn = went on wasng tng = was doing No Remorse - as is dup, this is the later load (no wordord) Disclaimer needs to be modified to include GIJoe and Firefly (XO fandoms) Devil Inside - the song is cited - wouldn't normally think of it, but since the song is used in the fic and the story is named after the song, does there need to be anything more in regards to the title? One Night - disclaimer missing no profit clause Moonlight Shadow - disclaimer missing no profit clause and needs to be modified to include other fandoms: Avatar the Last Airbender, Pirates of the Caribbean, The Mummy (series) The Unforgiven Series wordord: summary: whhe ihe is = where he is llllllll = all ch1: continuedh a h = continued with los Hss - loss is ng ong = flying ausanusand = a thousand reckless headng nng - reckless, headlong cle tle = ??? ch 2: hod shd she = how old she somethins wrong ong = something was wrong bse sse = because grewghteghter = grew brighter lettletting = sky letting eplieplied = he replied thising ing = this taking drg usg us = driving us st~ Fi~ = story ~ ch 3: ththe = threw extne = extra headinr her = heading to witholothlothes = without clothes screscreamed = she screamed wipup tup = wiped up unceunced = announced thougs shs = thought as ch 4: ged ged = managed concer see = concern-it anyt lik = anything ch 5 - orphan ch 7 - orphan The Misadventures of Jonny Quest ch 10 and ch 11 are the same Quote
RogueMudblood Posted September 27, 2010 Author Report Posted September 27, 2010 Josie and the Pussycats - Kappa Mikey The Uncensored Jungle Book- wordord: RID 135291: wite bae = with the RID 161532: tholehole = the whole Sh sto = Shanti d 'd = said rockelloolloons = rocket balloons g, an, = grass Sleepless in Tokyo - disclaimer needs to be specific - it's the "cartoons misc" one. Needs to name Kappa Mikey The Shower (Version 3) wordord: fullntalntal = full frontal theriverivering = there shivering steppndernder = stepped under trying to trying to---delete duplicated text thatnd?"[linebreak] = that sound?" naon ion it. = naked on it. b to to = began to Flash Point Decision: Condition Green (m/m) RID 9392 squishy! wordord: do , yo, = do this, woupen pen = would open May I Make You... wordord: ignoignored = She ignored thbe ibe = the lobe invoary ary = involuntary "Tel," ," = "Tell me," Makinre tre = Making sure The Locker Room at Wayne Manor wordord: ometomething = up something fallinghis = falling by alcothrothrough = alcohol through The Arboretum wordord: Starcrossec alc = Starcrossed thesengs?ngs? = these things? aithaith = of Wraith use use = my muse tcoracorate = to decorate cree coe = creature themysemysciran = the Themysciran expecte[line break]D[line break] = expected.[line break] hiice ice = his voice star to = startled essiessional = professional on you your = one of your dn'tdn't = I didn't pu his his = pulled his engorge its its = engorged on its drd hid his = guided his Hereafter wordord: att tot to = attempt to bodybody = Her body quarters,ch wch = quarters, which "Why is th[line break][line break] = "Why is that?"[line break] er oer = either ch 2: fouome ome = found some e yoe = "Take eforefore, = As before, seout out = ??? out (spread?) "Hun"Hungry?" = "Hungry?" oe ane = of the elf elf = herself Leag. Gi. = Leaguers. impassiv[line break][line break] = impassively.[line break] winkat hat = winking at ch 3: h a n a = hours a stolstolen = had stolen s. A. = surface. andughtught = and brought restin the the = resting in the ...song disclaimer/citation needed. (Batman credits it, sorta) png hng = playing convulsionsen aen = convulsions, then won "G "Good = wonder. "Good savorine moe = savoring the he she signal - of the signal trk ork = to work panelruceruce = panels. Bruce cwas = cave anng, ng, = anything, ses nes = species are are = Why are Myers ers = My powers comeoss oss = come across Drawn & Quartered wordord: aignsigns = any signs ignher = ignore nor war = not our inumbnumber = in a number Diana's Diary stretchy! Batman's Diary wordord: opponshoushould = opponent should Diany any = Diana? My tshe she = that she she she's = she's Watchtowence nce = Watchtower once ce to to = ceases to s eas = I was The Compromise wordord: braibrain = his brain ta in in = ??? in Peeping Bats wordord: a but but = a bit but oppo dir = opposite cauf thf = cause of whippff hff = whipped off iggedgged = it begged in own own = in its own ed hed her = pulled her kingking = striking ed, ed, = replied, Physical Therapy, Themysciran Style wordord: tto pto perfoonitonitor = time to perform Monitor Tandrestrestaurant = Tandori restaurant an re gre gym = an indoor gym oo exo = own to she she = sure she cha wal walls = chasm's walls coity ity = City a moa = car a wouldss tss = would guess healinghniqhnique = healing technique whiol lol = whirlpool ownds.nds. = own hands. a-dow-down = a rub-down squaron hon = square on tuen gen = tub then weariothiothing = wearing nothing locata paa pair = located a pair persperson = the person he ed oed = he pulled thrst rst = the first wtingtingle = wet tingle lats anaps,aps, = ??? and traps, Bruce.e whe = Bruce," she owlitilition. = own volition. workd spd = work he'd thele ule under hismachmach = the table under his stomach insty rey = instantly be,e ine = be," she he d sed see = he could see dingding = ??? Slowllowly = She slowly hengerngertipsr thr the = her fingertips over the fitipstips = fingertips cl[line break]" = clit. i man many = in many allthesthese = all of these Tempest Island wordord: instin The The = instincts. The ch 2: y any = ready painpain = the pain ed wed = loaded willt ast = will just m ope = modus homeleinceince = homeless since somes wes = sometimes oniaonian = Themysciran held leg legend = held the legend thunchunch = the launch hourt lot = hours. It p The The = ??? The tes tes = pirates redd sid = redhead mnd, nd, = my mind, likee kne = like I've plant ser = planted a Brset = Bruce heill ill = her still hand Bru Bruce = handle," Bruce fd smd = forced applaurom rom = applause from **Is there a chapter missing here? ch 3: tw-boo-book = twelve-book hserlf = herself sis = his ch 4: shouldnry. ry. = shouldn't try. ch 5: Yo rig right = You're right whatwhatever = and whatever wa bef = waist replaceden ten = replaced, then warougrough = way through ttiontional = traditional glanat tat = glanced at Dianalizalized = Diana realized Inal, al, = In total, read thd = realized theirs wes = their legs Middasteastern = Middle Eastern governms des = government's Hddeddded = He nodded teou wou = tell you we and and = warhead and Indonesia'vernvernment = Indonesia's government osiblsible = of visible nschescheduled = next scheduled attentio heo = attention to packpackage = one package concs ons = consensus ten ben = the men vre ore = endeavor giou 1ou = give you me."The The = me." The operatio[line break]He [line break]He = operation.[line break]He leralerated = accelerated s of of = sort of WonWomaWoman = Wonder Woman wal walked = and walked bur bursts = the bursts ch 6: darkenowarowards = darkened towards trrs srs = trousers That Temporary Kind - Squishy! The Revelation -small-window stretchy (all 7 chapters) Slowing Down - needs D/A tag Stuffing the Bird - squishy! It Ain't Just a River in Egypt - OK, the whole story is based on one episode, which is not really odd, but, I'm not entirely certain that this is the story that goes with this entry. The "Ancient Egypt" aspect is consistent with episode 37, but I don't have character names for their Egyptian incarnations, so I'm really not certain exactly who is whom. Can you check to see if there is any missing data on this one? The summary says Green Lantern/Hawkgirl, and the reviews agree with that, but I didn't notice their names anywhere in the fic. Good boy - squishy and spacing issues. M/F/F tag needs to come off. Frail - ch 3 is all ital. should stop after “I will kill you if you touch her.” -Is there a missing end tag? ch 4 also: after "Alerra laughed." it should be normal text. Warworld Aftermath - RID 94013 - squishy and wordord: ty cty = pretty anthother = another starstarted! = had started! RID 2035389849 wordord: 'ard ard = ??? I NEEDS SOME SMUT - this one is special. It was a RR. It's not now. But since the first chapter is a request only and is the only thing by the original poster, it needs to be deleted. I don't know what this would do to credit of the fic to the actual author. So.... SyntheticDreams should have the fic listed under their profile - I think "Untitled" would be OK. Summary: "Challenge response. A crater appears near Gotham with no explanation. When Green Lantern and Flash are sent to investigate, will the mission help them recognize their feelings? M/M" Not Fast Enough - ch 3 & 4 squishy! and both have "É" all the way through every time there should be a "-" Justice League Drabbles - missing "no profit" disclaimer The following posts are part of the same story and should be a chaptered fic: Diana's Diary , Batman's Diary Physical Therapy, Themysciran Style , The Compromise Kryptonite Lovin' , Gotham Lovin' Quote
RogueMudblood Posted October 3, 2010 Author Report Posted October 3, 2010 Kim Possible 15-11 In Darkness We Found otheother... - small-window stretchy Tags needed: Rapefic, Fingering, AU/AR wordord: otheother = Each Other (title) ch 2: bananaets ets = banana. "Let's of of = full of the the = saw the gettiloseloser = getting closer astrietried = as he tried "Shit." R." Ron = "Shit," Ron hisice.ice. = his choice. e, te, = phone, plea..~ ..~ = please...~ sin since = "And since a fea = had a Ron's . Ro. = Ron's ??? (foot, leg, thigh?) s nis = Ron's openurthurther, = opened further, dvoicvoice. = dark voice. (dark could be dead, dry... any 3-4 letter d-adjective.) lng ang = looking n exn = to an lng bng = looking Ino ino = I dunno looklooked = He looked gwas = girl botack ack = both black sittin thn = sitting on watc.. b.. = watched... *s* Us* = ??? (It's in the AN, you could probably scrap it) doesn'unt}unt}) = doesn't count}) The Dark Side of Life wordord: RID 65183: telentriteriter = talented writer anotheapteapter = another chapter RID 89683 first line needs to be deleted - is a dup of the second line RID 94855 butust ust = but I must RID 192455 watnna nna = what's gonna summary: summaux, ux, = summary sux, Tags needed: Rapefic, Minor1, Minor2, WIP ch 1: thotheothers = that bothers om, am, = of him, encoed hed = encouraged cacroscross = came across osedosed = supposed howld hld = how could ch 2: tha" R" = that," "Ther som some = "There's some cloto hto = closer to sincey cey = since they shoul ont = shoulders despr to to = desperately to was goingoing = was going doer cer = down her read shd = realized Foundations Laid Tags needed: Rapefic, Maledom, Femdom, Minor2, MC, COMPLETE Need to modify disclaimer to include Marvel Comics - specifically Cable and the original X-Men 'verse. (They don't make an appearance as characters but concepts (and titles) from the comics do.) wordord: RID 89247: bullets t. Ca. Can't = bullets that. Can't RID 98034: andpi lpi = and epilogue RID 107055 squishy; stiood ood = still good RID 110486 squishy ch 1: s wea = still somrt ort = some sort chrouhrough = cut through aps ths = appears the bef before = the girl before sensationslingling = sensations tingling againgain, = and again, ch 2: hep = her squeg thg = squeezing dentdent! = accident! con.[line break]. = control. andnd hnd = and round a p a = give a ugh ugh = through r to to a = return o a Dobe sbe = Don't be rapinr. r. = raping her. ch 3: ms eys= mind's bldevidevice = black device witcwitch = to twitch fenefened = stiffened hif ouf = himself mof tof = mass of ch 4: a inc inched = as he inched that that = that derailhat hat = derailed that ch 5: Sto Stoppable = Ron Stoppbale sin tin = skin in Well,s lis = Well, this ch 7: so hso = And so blushhis = blush on noThe The = now. The ch 8: perhthatthat = perhaps that ignored's p's = ignored Uno's attentif thf = attention of wou would = they would thorldorld. = the world. Guardia amu = Guardian an otiootion = in motion shortlyAlloAllow = shortly. "Allow ch 9: Everyneedneeds = Everyone needs ackedgeedge = acknowledge Un Uno = Uno. Uno Possiblke Ike = Possible like h't t't = haven't qui as as = quietly as otherms, ms, = others arms. holdhold = her hold wod," d," = wounded," wou wounded = any wounded fitriktriking = fire striking shi shields and strnearnear the = the shields and ??? near calcuons.ons. = calculations. Foreraleral = For several strug to to = struggled to andlingling = and ??? ch 10: bloodoth oth = bloody cloth of Shf = out of skgaingainst = skin against notng tng = not going ccurccurately = to accurately fo lyi = forms Ink Ink = I think Underground Heat wordord: Tags: Yuri needs to come out - this is not anime. Oral, Fingering, COMPLETE should be added. bth ath = be with crawcrawled = and crawled for out = force out risind fnd = rising and Sango and = Shego and Party at Rons wordord: Alide ide = Alongside justartyarty = just a party hep, Kp, = her top, wyou?you? = with you? theythey = and they im: im: = [line break]Kim: sherts rts = she starts To Tell The Truth Tags needed: Minor2, Fingering saith ith = said with h."h." = hot." ber aer = but her Friends Forever - stretchy summary: epic.t cot = epic. Hot Tags needed: AI ch 1: Theher her = The other open end tag: "past school year. >" - but there's tons of text after it. Still, missing anything? ch 2 has open end tag: Shego then blurts out, "What the hell happened ?"We >We ... So there's practically nothing here. wordord: ten, en, = the den, ch 3: "missed.o:p>" and "an>" missing text. & stretchy. wia ta = wiped a knowknow = you know hells hes = hell does sao ho = said to soo doo = soon, so about t. It. I = about it. I ficrimcrime = fight crime bygo. go. = by Shego. abull tll = bull all ch 4: open tag: "pan>pan>" so there's practically no data ch 5: "pan>" there's data though - stretchy on this one. thathat = all that besidu thu = beside you ch 6: "an>"an>"Ah."; "Thanks Eddie.">"; "Aro>Around"; "Ron." p>" & stretchy someood ood = someone good wan mak make = want to make nitynity = eternity eneeenee. = at Renee. ch 7: stretchy knowknow = you know Alknowknow = All I know bad.bad. = and bad. consuthe = consumed theny ony = the agony Un. Li. = ??? Oned thd = One good E hea hears = Eddro hears and apparently open at the end because it stops in the middle of a word. Lenses - need add tags: Minor2 Shegos Trap - ch 2 orphan; need add tags: Fingering, WD Another Average Day - Tags: remove Yuri; add oral, Minor2 Corrupting Kim - Tags add: Rapefic; Bond; Oral; FemDom Payback - wordord: RID 269758: chter ter = character RID 275171: doesm thm = doesn't seem Island Hopping - Yuri tag needs to be removed; add Fingering, oral Happy Birthday Ron Stoppable - RID 2035610669 made review board page 3 stretchy The Ahproditie Effect - stretchy(all) Let's Do It Again - space draw at the top of all 11 ch. Screams in the Dark - wordord: I'm warning you right now, major squick factor on this one, so if I missed something, that's why. Even my stomach can only handle so much. ch 1: bru bruises. = the bruises. c.” H.” = cheat." wellhersherself, = well as herself, ch 2: abo fao face = about to face criese bee = cries were ouldould = as could ch 5 orphan Bonnie ballerina - all of the tags internal need to be moved to summary: FemDom, Oral, Anal, Toys, and Food Fet The disclaimer needs to be modified to include all of the movies that author says he is borrowing ideas from (like Bring It On) Beautiful - small-window stretchy Kim joins the Titans - needs a B-mod tag. ch 1 AN bottom: whoring ch 2 orphan ch 3: small-window stretchy Kim Possible: Hellraiser - ch 1 has ":" three lines after byline and then "-::Eighteen years and Six months later::-", then ":" four lines ... is there any text in the database that isn't showing? ch 1, 2, 3, 4 small-window stretchy Tags: Take the word "None" out - this thing needs some damn tags! Inc, MC, Death, Minor1 ... is demon sex beast or xeno ? And is there some way to denote "possession" that I overlooked? Or would that fall under MC? (now I don't blame those reviewers for getting a little pissy-I'd be upset if I hadn't been expecting it myself!) Shego's Revenge - squishy! Sweet Captivity - tag needed: Bond, Slave; TransG needs to come off - it should be Herm Dr. Possible MILF - (see below); again, TransG needs to come out and Herm needs to be on the story Portrait - again, TransG needs to come out and Herm needs to be on the story Love is the best medicine - do hymns fall under public domain? "Farther Along" by J.R.Baxter and W.B.Stevens used but not cited. Going Beyond Bonding - small-window stretchy Muri Tempe Et Intervalia! - needs MCD tag. Restitution's A (Green) Bitch - needs a citation in ch 3 for Superman's appearance Cheerleaders Peak - squished line: "they pressed [line break]against the" squished paragraph: starts at "Brick began" ends at "in the room." squished line: "can we try [line break]this in moving up moving on - needs specific song citations This is what the author has: "Also if there is any music involved all Music is in fact owned by the respective musicians and or groups" --Needs "peg" tag Tokugawa Sunset - needs celebrity disclaimer (Bill and Hillary Clinton) Mind Rape - needs tags: Rapefic, GB Mothers knows best! - needs tag: peg Centurion's Revenge - tag needed: D/s, MC Just until I wake up... - needs a death tag Love ... I wasn't prepared for that. Rapefic, Death, Tort needed on this. (I-yi...) Lord of the Pompons - ch 2 has weirdness with the "" in the text. The Game - wordord: RID 95180 - pairlatelater = pairing later RID 106817 - caps lock typist - can you fix? RID 115581 - small window stretchy RID 145462 - rinow.now. = right now RID 195957 - wto kto = want to RID 231991 - he ghe = up the ch 1: t. Dr. = to Dr. hegohego = as Shego gaspthe = gasp as ch 2: askflasflashing = asked, flashing onlse, se, = only lose, lng tng = feeling unbutng hng = unbuttoning smd, ad, = smirked, ch bef = chance Rerkeerked = Ron jerked lut aut = let out tht hht = thought je har = jerked The following are part of the same story, and should be a chaptered fic: Sweet Captivity , Dr. Possible MILF moving up moving on , moving up moving on chapter 18 Mind Rape , Mothers knows best! Quote
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