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I know, I liked that very much but would love a more humiliation driven take on that. It was just part of her overall debasement and not the main theme in my opinion. But I totally get that it's done with this as far as you are concerned. Ponygirl fits her even more now that you mention it. Will wait in anticipation

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Hi Wonky, glad you liked the chapter. I already did the puppy dog thing in Chapter 22, but I do have a pony girl scene planned for later. Thanks for the good wishes.

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I loved loved loved the new chapter. My biggest fetishes is petplay, so I would love to see Mary trying to transform her into a feet loving little doggy. What is a better position to sniff and lick feet, to suck on beautiful toes than on all fours. This will be extremely humiliating for Lara, who in that time frame (1 week, 2 weeks, or even 1 month) will not be allowed to talk, being punished when she speaks like a human and not bark like a dog. Mary could even use sensory deprivation in form of a nice thick hood and earplugs to rob Lara of her senses and become entirely dependent on Mary to guide her along the mansion. Over time Lara will crave every order, every interaction to break the deafening silence the hood and plugs punish her with. She will become even more desperate to please, to do everything even if that means debasing her. She will do it all happily since it means someone is paying her attention, someone sees her worthy of their time. There will still of course be resistance from Lara, which will be either punished by paddle or whip, or worse, by ignoring her for long stretches of time. Lara will learn to avoid those punishments and simply accept everything Mary makes her do as law. This could lead the way for two outcomes. One is that this is a temporary thing for a week or a month, with Lara coming out of the experience even more broken or docile. The alternative could be a petplay themed “bad end” ending, not canon. In this reality Lara becomes Lassy, Sarahs and Marys pet doggy. She is no longer considered human, Sarah even registers her like one would a normal dog and pays taxes on her. She is property, in every fiber of her being and in the eyes of the law. Still a part of high society, just in a cruel perverted way as she lazes next to Sarahs feet on the ground, being groped, petted and made fun of by the other members of society. In my opinion this would be the ultimate fall from grace next to objectification, turning her into a statue or something in Sarahs office. Lara is not even considered human any longer and has hit total rock botto. Either way, every time you finish your updates I yearn for time to pass by quicker, just to read your next chapter. All the best to you and your family and I hope you have a great day!

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You’re definitely right and I think I’ve done an okay job so far. I’m pretty far into chapter 2 or what might be considered character 2 of a story and I think I’ve come up with an interesting way to do it. Basically, each character has their own somewhat different relationship to the main villain character and I’m telling the story of different ways they came to be taken over by the villain. Kinda built around similar themes. So for instance, character 1 has resisted many things about the villain all throughout the narrative. Their story is all about kinda finally giving in to everything. However, with character 2, it’s more of a twisted love story where they think the villain is in love with them only to realize once it’s too late that isn’t their dynamic at all. I’m also sorta outlining character 3 and this one is more about the character’s ego and how the villain metaphorically strokes it for their own purposes. Whereas character 4 it’s a mystery they’re trying to unravel. At least that’s how it’s kinda playing out story wise. We follow the characters at different stages and how this lead to their downfall.

My take is that brilliant non-linear stories you here talk about get their fame from being good despite not being linear. A possible comparison is the Westworld tv-show season 1 that had a big reveal when you realized what you had been watching. In season 2 they wanted to repeat the trick and made things just as non-linear and in the end it was barely watchable. I have avoided the later seasons like plague. My point is that for every successful non-linear storytelling there are many more trainwreck attempts. Doing non-linear storytelling that manage to capture the reader is seriously difficult.

So does the landlord start fucking her when she is 17-18? Also is it slow corruption or it happens instantly?

I have now posted chapter 9 named The Time of the Prophecy: The Cult of Three Flames This chapter feature Duwlon doing his favorite thing and Helian being occupied with rebuilding the sex cult of Three Flames. When Duwlon stumble into trouble there are of course plenty of sexual distractions. Story coded for the chapter FF, MF, MC, Inc, Rape Main heroes featuring in the chapter are Duwlon and Helian with additional appearances of some other characters that will matter to the intrigues.

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I've been looking for this fic for ages. If anyone has any idea of where to find it please share.

Naruko's landlord is a originally from Kumo, so he doesn’t care that she is a jinchuriki. While the rest of Konoha sees Naruko is the Kyuubi, the landlord sees her as a hot young woman that he can tale advantage of. The landlord convinces Naruko to pay him with her body instead of money, and Naruko agrees because she is not only struggling financially, but also because the villagers ignores her she likes that the landlord wants her. The landlord starts to enjoy fucking Naruko every night, and she also enjoys riding his big black cock. NSFW https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=13606321&tags=naruko https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=13234653&tags=naruko+bed+ https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=13234676&tags=naruko+bed+ https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=13234683&tags=naruko+bed+

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Glad to hear her is okay. I was sad when knowing that she deleted all her story that time, but respect her decision. I remembered those time, i waited everyweeks for Loser updates from DedicatedQuill. I missed Chase x Tyler, my most favourite couple, glad to know Loser. They will have special place in my memories and my life, too. Thank you :’)

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Double header! First, we have the concluding chapter of “The Business of Pleasure”: Chapter 8: A New Arrangement Second, we’ve got the next chapter of “Band Together”: Chapter 5: The Band, Part 1

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udaysra, Messaged