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My opinion – business women. But not those rich socialite types Lara is accustomed to. Common type business women that over time was treated rather unfairly by Lara and her old staff...like when Tori went shopping for Sarah...Winston and the others when they was out and about doing the estate’s business. Now, Lara has to atone for all their rudeness and overall attitudes. These women are rich enough to be members of a country club as well, just not rich enough to own one. Mary still controls what she has to do – Lara feels it’s beneath her to be servicing lower class women. Lead the Way!

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I may just consider it. If it were consistent across chapters I feel like it would be a choice. The fact that they corrected it in future chapter makes me think it wasn’t.

Sounds like a lot of fun. I’ve played in sandboxes like that in the past though not in this story specifically. No alternate realities or dimensional travel in this one. Just in the sense that the story isn’t told “correctly”.

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Hi everyone, looking for some opinions. I've decided not to use the maids for the foot fetish scene. Instead I'll be using them for a fantasy gangbang scene for Lara's Onlyfans. The scene will be staged in front of the greenscreen. Lara is in a tomb and is captured by a tribe of futa goblins. Maids dressed in green body paint, loincloths, masks and strap-ons. Airtight fun ensues. For the foot fetish scene, Lara is going to be attending a rich country club as a masseuse (specifically a foot masseuse, as this group of women have a fetish for that). They recognise her and want to know why she's working there. She has to explain that she's massively in debt and all her Onlyfans money is going to pay off her loans, and she had to get a second job to support her lifestyle. Mary will be giving her instructions in an earpiece. She makes Lara tell the women that she's willing to perform extra services for more money, like using her mouth and tongue to massage their feet, and offering to give them happy endings. The women think it's hilarious that Lara has been reduced to prostituting herself for a few hundred pounds and eagerly take her up on her offer, even going so far as to offer her more money if she'll stoop even lower (masturbating herself on their feet, letting them foot-fuck her pussy and ass etc). Question - Do you think it would be better with dominant business women or bitchy arrogant footballer's wives?

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Once the time turner gets written in, “linearity” is out the window Not that it was the first point of non-linearity, as I’ve also got some “alternate reality” creeping in too. Thus, quirks are starting to appear, like new yet old paintings showing up on the walls at Hogwarts.

If the author has a forum account as well as an archive account, you could PM them. Otherwise, unless they've put an email address or something in their profile, a review might be your only recourse. If it were me, I'd be glad for someone to point out a problem like that, even in a review. Remember, the author can always delete the review if they take offense -- or after they have fixed the problem you pointed out.

This is more of an issue for me on the reader side of things. There was a story I was curious about which I kinda wanted to read but the formatting of the first couple chapters is off. I looked at some of the later chapters and they seem to fix it later but I’m a little put off by the first several chapters. Would it be considered bad of me to point this out to the author? I feel it’s probably better to do one on one but I’m not sure how to go about doing that. Rather than get a moderator or admin involved in it directly. I could write a review but that feels too public and somewhat mean.

I guess I’ve gotten into your head? My bad.

Naruko admits that Sasuke is the most handsome and strongest shinobi among their age group, and according to Hinata he also has the biggest cock, so she decides to steal him with the help of her best friend Hinata before Ino and Sakura. One night while Sasuke is sleeping in his bedroom Naruko and Hinata sneak into his bed naked. Usually Sasuke ignores the girls that are chasing after him, but it is impassible to ignore Naruko and Hinata when one of them taking his whole massive cock in her throat while the other sucking his balls. Slutty Naruko RTN Hinata NSFW: https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3545397&tags=hyuuga_hinata+naruko+sasuke_uchiha+ https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2835476&tags=naruko++sasuke_uchiha+ https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2586205&tags=hyuuga_hinata_%28naruto%3A_road_to_ninja%29+sasuke_uchiha+

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45182. @WillowDarkling Also the 18th of this month was the 45th anniversary of the last major Mt. St. Helens eruption (USA state of Washington). I remember being driven to see the aftermath, but I was too young to really understand it.