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Review Responses for "My Wish Is Your Command" [The Simpsons]

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4 hours ago, neo4812 said:

interesting premise. please continue. though if bart was smart he could find the genie in the same forest as a ten year old or would that not work?

Theoretically he could, but once you have wished for ultimate power, what else is there to wish for? There’s also the possibility that using up the wish at age 10 would undo the wish he made at age 23.

In any case, the next chapter will explain a bit why he hasn’t thought about doing that.

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From Lunarsilver on April 24, 2021

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I can see why Bart would want to go to school and as an idea maybe Bart could have Jessica Lovejoy naked and clean out Lisa and Marge of his cum then blow him before getting her turn of being fucked in front of everyone as they here her moan like a genuine slutty whore, it might be embarrassing but she secretly gets off on servicing Bart in any way he likes in front of everyone including her dad. Bart could say "Looks like Jessica was baptized in dirty water" then tells her not to lie in church because he knows she loves doing this in front of anyone that is willing to watch including her dad. Jessica replies while moaning "Yes I love having anyone watch me get fucked like the little slutty whore I am".

To much?

 

Pretty much all the major action in this story is already planned out, so I’m not really open to suggestions for scenes at this point. But rest assured, Jessica Lovejoy will be making an appearance.

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From DreamWorlds on June 15, 2021

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After finishing Flesh I looked for more stories that were like it but couldn't find anything until this. I'm so glad you decided to write another story like Flesh.

Yeah, this story is a bit derivative of Flesh – okay, a lot derivative of Flesh – but there’s just something fun about all-powerful shotas having their way with every female they can get their hands on.

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I feel bad for Homer though. He was just killed by his own son. 

Well, it was that or turn him into a giant jack-in-the-box, and that’s been done. :)

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Grant's feats are more impressive that Barts though because he didn't have ultimate power to do what he wants. He broke his family slowly.

Grant was more driven and creative than Bart. 

But we’ll get more into Bart’s psychological manipulations and their effects on his family and peers as we go.

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Another great story from one of the best authors on this site.

Thank you!

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From ANON - Toonspew on June 29, 2021

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Just wanted to say that I'm really enjoying this story, and the misogynistic slant you've put on the nigh-omnipotent Bart.

Thanks!

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I'm only sorry that the story is already past the point of canon ages, since 8-year old Lisa is the version we all love best.

Yeah, but since there’s so much rather hot Simpsons r34 art involving teenage Lisa (eg, some of the Vercomics series), I wanted to make use of her at that age, too.

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Would love to see Bart have some fun with some of the one-off female characters from the school (besides Sherri & Terri). Nikki McKenna, Jessica Lovejoy, Allison Taylor, Gina Vendetti, Mary Spuckler, ect.

You’ll get to see at least one of those characters in the very next chapter, so stay tooned – I mean, tuned.

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From JamesRyder on July 30, 2021

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I continue to love everything you do with this story.

Thanks! I continue to love writing it. Although we’re just about done; just one chapter and the epilogue left to go.

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I somehow missed two chapters that got posted and had to catch up. 

I’ve been posting these chapters at a pretty brisk pace (for most of my stories, it takes me at least a couple of weeks and sometimes as long as 3 or 4 months to write new chapters), so new chapters of “My Wish” aren’t hard to miss.

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From ANON - Toonspew on August 17, 2021

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Hey George, still enjoying this series and looking forward to more chapters.

Well, there’s just one left, plus the epilogue. But I hope you’ll enjoy them.

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Now that Bart has been breeding Springfield and we are seeing the first generation of his daughters reaching fuckable ages, it would be great to meet the offspring of some recognizable Simpsons characters. Bart promised he'd breed Jessica during her chapter, and of course Lisa and Maggie are tempting targets since he's threatened them with inbreeding so often. But we could also see the results of Bart having his way with Majula, Ruth Powers and her daughter, maybe Mindy from the Power Plant, who knows. I leave it up to your imagination!

These are fine ideas, but since I’m down to the last chapter and I’ve written most of it, I’m afraid I can’t use them. But I hope you’ll like that chapter anyway.

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From ANON - Unverlorkelistrel on August 22, 2021

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Nice twist ending!

I enjoyed the story as a whole, Bart the God-King, but having Lisa find the lamp was an amusing ending. Poetic.

 

Thanks! Typically, my happier stories have happy endings and my darker stories have dark endings, but I wanted to mix it up a bit this time.

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From ANON - on August 23, 2021

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A 10 as usual.

Thanks! Unless the scale is 0-100. :)

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I'm curious about what being "on the treadmill" means here though. I'm guessing it's not really supposed to be answered, but I'd still like to know…

Sorry, that wasn’t meant to be a mystery. Lisa was implying that if Bart doesn’t charge her Tesla fully, she will make him charge it by running on a treadmill to generate electricity.

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From ANON - King on August 24, 2021

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Im going to head cannon and say that Lisa wish brought her to a alternate universe where she was in charge and left a copy of her behind.

Well, now that The Simpsons is a Disney property and Loki has wrecked the Sacred Timeline, anything’s possible. :)

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From ANON - on August 26, 2021

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thought it was good overall but the ending ruins it, it's just incredibly lame in every imaginable way, I'd suggest either tossing the last chapter out and replace it with a better ending

Oh, well. You can’t please all of the people all of the time.

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