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What if I maim both?
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Wait, you're maiming my elf???
O.O... *Makes fire proof tent and hides in it* Yes! But it serves a purpose!
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beware angry Pixies
Yup, that exactly.
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Just look at it this way Bronxie, he'll be easier to catch when he limps
lol that's horrible!
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Yorwrath is MY delicious psychopath. You gave him to me.
True... and I promise his maiming will serve a purpose! I mean... ... uuuuhhhh wait... That's it that's what I meant
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You guys are so entertaining lol. <3
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not unless she bites his nose off and eats it in front of him....hmmm, anyone else hungry?
Alright... I'll make it up to you by having him get a chunk taken out of him!
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I know! But I decided to push things back... I've been doing that a lot with this story :\ There will be Goblins DA! And little Pixie Amazons.
But this chapter you got Valentina punching Yorwrath in the face... that's kind of like goblins right? lol -
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Hmm...
That's no Job, it's a Gay Station!
Could be Worse
Summer Vacation?
Pocket Money
Pants Party for Pay
Plowing the Gay Way
Ticket to Pound Town
No Homo
You Want Me to Stick it Where?
Show Me Your Dick
Take your Dick to Work Day
I Suck at This
Oh god, just shoot me, these are so bad.
All of these are AMAZING!
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Of course you were laughing, CL! Though knowing it wasn't that gross kind of warms my heart.
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Clearly he's wearing toe socks!
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http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107932&chapter=9
Updated! Chapter 6! The plot thickens -
You'd be almost done if your NaNo was your elveseseses
lol, okay Gollum <3.
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That's awesome CL! *hides her word count* I'm glad you're almost done
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Ahahaha, you guys are hilarious. I'm glad that the Dragons are loyal to, please forgive me, Aneurysm (snerk) Would hate to be part of an evil organization, plus we get hot dancing guys this way. Woot! Wait wait wait...are all the slash writers from the SB Dragons? That is too funny if that is true.
Yup, You're all dragons
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lol, oh CL! Yowler, Aneurysm and blondie lol You almost got Islwyn right! That was entertaining. And now it all makes sense! You want Valentina to end up with Yorwrath!
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Oh, I did like how Islwyn treated Valentina. He was so damned reverent, as though he was being allowed to pet his future queen. I still have my reservations about that elf, however. He's Aneurin's, through and through, and I'm not entirely sure I trust him.
I don't trust him either! Even when I'm writing, he's one of the characters that is a bit of a wild card. Yorwrath will do brutal, horrible stuff, it's part of who he is. Islwyn... well I'm starting to think he's like the little guy in the martial arts films from the 70s. The one who doesn't do much and doesn't look like he'd do much and then BAM room full of 80 dead guys. I'm just hoping that moment isn't too traumatic for all of us >.>
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I'm still thinking about Yorwrath's story, and honestly, it explains why Aneurin puts up with his brother's shit, in addition to Yorwrath being one of his supporters, or course. But what acres me just a little is that Yorwrath is both a fanatic, as evidenced by his being a Redcap in the first place, and one of the few elves that can truly understand what Valentina means to Aneurin. How willing is Yorwrath to let his brother find the love that he wasn't allowed to have? However it works out, I'm still going to ache a little for Yorwrath, and all that was lost by the way he was hardened.
Aneurin is King, but he still needs the support of his people, and the Redcaps won't support him if Yorwrath turns against Aneurin, so in a way, Aneurin is no more "free" than Valentina. It's a perfect conundrum, and I'm so eager to see how it plays out.
This is it exactly BW. Aneurin being "King" is more of a burden than anything else. And there are a lot of elves who would rather see him dead than King. So he needs that threat of the Redcaps which is why...
Leaving with Valentina and Islwyn after the display at the claiming might cause some complications. Especially since he killed Pwyll on his way out
I feel bad for his brother, but if Valentina's elf (I'm sick and can't remember his name, forgive please) is "King" can't he stop the same thing from happening to her?
See BW's post haha, now with the serious face. Currently, Aneurin gets most of his authority from Yorwrath's Redcaps, and a little bit through Islwyn and the druids. Only the Dragon clan supports Aneurin completely, but most of them are far away, and they only have a handful in Aneurin's camp (and clearly they're willing to draw blood for their King). So if the Redcaps were to turn on Aneurin because he's taken a human for a "bride" (They don't know that he has yet, to answer your review, but they're suspicious) he'd be royally fucked
And Kokoa! Since the reply thing won't let me get under the quote for some reason I'm going to answer you here lol. Human's aren't the same thing to every elf! It's not like I put you in Yorwrath's harem lol, there's a reviewer who also commented on... how Islwyn "treated" Valentina lol. And I'm with both of you, that was... nice.
Just finished chapter five and it's just... wow!
I'm still excited over the fact that me and my "elf" made an appearance! I'm still not sure how I feel about being made a slave, especially reading on and finding out what that means exactly! A part of me doesn't care, as long as the sallow elf gets more time than the others!
I know that I've mentioned that you should just get all of the sex out of the way and then concentrate on the plot. Whether you want to believe it or not, this is actually a good mix of both. It couldn't be helped that the last chapter was basically more about the claiming than anything. The small orgy was a bit surprising but nothing that made me want to gag or not read it, contrary to belief *gives Dirty Angel the evil eye*!
Soo... am I the only one who took a bit of pleasure in how Islywn treated Valentina...? And I knew that there was more to Yorwrath and him than they both tried to lead on!
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Chapter 5 up I know... I updated again... I am clearly not loving my nano lol
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http://www.apa.org/topics/personality/disorders-causes.aspx
Sounds a bit like a personality disorder so I put this here for your reading pleasure. All you need is a reason and your characters can be as batshit as you want them to be -
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Nano Pen Name: ChrissyQuinn (I'm just as bad as CL)
Novel Title: Heart of the Forest
Word Count: (from Nov. 1st) 30, 229
Heart of the Forest--Original Fantasy
in Promote a Story!
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Chapter 9
http://original.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600107932&chapter=12