SirGeneralSir

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  1. genres dont actually feel that important, as to the writing of the story, but they can make the story feel really interesting in different ways, otherwise they can also be pointless information to the world that has no meaning.
  2. I can only speak for myself, that if the story, plot etc are not engaging enough, I will walk away from it and not think twice because I got board. You can have some of the most intense sex in the top 10 stories, but if I dont care about the characters, why its so important that they have the sex, its just another Tuesday to me, its nothing special. BUT if they were both long time in love, did everything to keep away from each other only to be constantly drawn back until they admit their feelings that leads to the sex, I will probably stay and read more. but thats just me.
  3. its all about the plot, why is A doing this, what does B have to do with it and how does C appear to be connected to it all? I could write a Trek fic, one set in the LOTR ish world or even one set in today with normal settings and problems. the different worlds just give me more things to play with, more technology to explain it, magic to create it and so on. I dont write full out sex stories, my Naruto story only has 3? chapters that have actual sex in it, and its currently 33 chapters long with a thick plot, detailed OC characters and staying as close to canon but still an AU of the world.
  4. i prefer a good story, its all about what i want to happen, how it should happen etc. I have a Naruto story still in the works, but I also have others that ive been working on in my mind of very different worlds
  5. http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600103481
  6. depends on my mood for the universe that I want to write in, the kind of things that I want to happen to the characters and how it happens.
  7. I need someone to beta my story “When a heart cracks” http://naruto.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600103481 its a Naruto harem story, more story than anything at the moment, i accept criticism and am open to ideas. PM if interested
  8. ive seen a ………… few, stories where all it was, was characters having sex, very little plot or general story, yet its 5 – 10? chapters long. stories like that personally put me off, I have always been that way with most things. Games, TV, Movies and books have to have a good story to keep me into it, just having some kind of content for no reason tends to be replaced by something else of better quality. more can be better, but it can also hurt the story too, i think im running into that with my story.
  9. I can read other peoples stories and get excited, some times even if the story is “bad” but the image they placed in my mind is all thats needed, sometimes i do get myself too in my own story, but thats never the “goal” until editing is done.
  10. personally i find that its not exactly about my taste, but does the character/s fit it? an example, lets use Batman. would BW/BM (Bruce Wayne / BatMan) be that sadistic dominating person in the bedroom, or would he be something else? of course you could argue what universe of Batman, but lets just go with standard Batman, considering his personality I would probably write him as a tender lover, even though that might not do it for me, its about the story and the character because if you break who the character is in your story out of character, without a reason, i find it detracts from the story. BUT again thats all in how you write it. BM might be the dominating kind if paired with X character, or the submissive kind to another one.
  11. what i would recommend, is pick the name of the character as a test, make sure it fits your world then do this, just to test it out. “James walked into the …… and looked around the dark room, his eyes adjusted and he could see …..” “Thor walked into the …….. and looked around the dark room, his eyes adjusted and he could see …….” “Tiny walked into the …… and looked around the dark room, his eyes adjusted and he could see …….” make it longer than what I did, but used this as a test to your character name, does the name you have in mind as you run the first parts of the story fit, does it have the feel that you want? does “James” sound like the name of your character for what they are going to do, in the world they live in. it might help you find the name that you want.
  12. very true, but a name can help make the character memorable, for better or worse.
  13. i use names of characters/heroes and then re arrange some letters to kind of sound like someone but not exactly. Thor – Thorn – Tholon etc Zeus – Zelus helps ti give a mental image in my mind of who im thinking of as reference.
  14. good points, that should help me out a lot. now i just have to figure out what and how to do it
  15. another thought, the body would also be weak too right? having never actually worked out, they would have the strength of an infant more or less, would they be able to get up out of bed and walk etc? or are they screwed? at the moment im using comatose people as an example for that