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I just sifted through my saved files but found only incomplete drafts
of Jayrich's & Nurse Katie's submissions. Sadly it was the collapse of WWOEC that made me more careful about saving copies of everything I participated in or reviewed.Nurse Katie is still somewhat active on Palcomix and may be willing to share. As for Jayrich, unfortunately, he hasn't made an appearance in years.
I do have an old e-mail address for him that I can try if either of you would like.
EDIT: Oh, Jayrich has an account here too, but I can’t find it there. (According to my old notes the story he was working on was never finished. )
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“It's ironic that the Team Griffin girls were the underdogs until Meg literally got under dogs."
How did this not occur to me until now!!!???
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1 hour ago, GeorgeGlass said:22 hours ago, Guest Captain Texas said:
Aww... well maybe someday.
My only other comment is that even if Jeremy had seen the video I don't think he would break up with Candace. Rather, he'd be more concerned with who was responsible for his girlfriend getting raped by a dog and filming it. A trail that would lead him to his baby sister. A revelation like that could break a man.
I’m sure that’s true.
…especially if he had already been a little turned on by the video – then instantly horrified to realize that his baby sister's involvement made him insane with lust!
(One can dream…
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17 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said:
FYI, Googling “Uncle Ghasty” just gets me a bunch of hits about Uncle Ghastly from The Flintstones. So you may need to explain, fellas.
It’s “Ghastly’s Ghastly Comic” from way long ago: https://ghastly.keenspace.com/d/20010510.html and so on.
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20 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said:
makes her feel all gooey inside
Oh, I’m sure Candace will be feeling that a lot!
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That's fine, especially if that's what works for you at the moment. I think you're just honing your already incredible superpower. (You know what happens to my brain just from reading different stories around the same time.
) Best of luck with NaNoWriMo too.
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Well freakin' happy birthday, you whippersnapper!
Usually I try to let others have a say if I'm involved with a story, plus as you've seen from my other recent reviews, my concentration isn't working so well these days, but I do have good things to say about the crossover (even if I repeat myself a bit). I really thought it'd get more love too.
Bimbo – WHERE!
Dark seems like a very good way to go for Halloween, though sometimes you're a bit too good at it. (Which is actually perfect… I think. 
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Now get out there and have some fun! …within the pandemic safety restrictions for your area, of course. (Besides, with everyone in masks you can't really tell who the vampires/demons/aliens/exes/zombies are.)
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15 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said:
>>Along with the lovely action their sauciness in getting to it was fast & hot… and it's interesting how that thought occasionally pops up here and there (only to be dismissed once something better pops up).
Sorry, what thought do you mean?
Ah, I think my thought was edited by Mr. Cockup:
Lincoln, Jordan, and Stella all have had moments where they consciously can't believe how forward or pushy they're being in the moment (or even well in advance with Stella). A youngster usually only feels that in retrospect. (And an oldster doesn't feel that often enough.) But again, when the thought pops up usually something else does too.
I won't ask for a spoiler because it could be many things, so I'll just call them "options" for now.
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18 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said:
From Fairy-Slayer on August 29, 2020
> Oh, so Valerius was eventually wise enough to turn his personal Hell into Heaven, and using only the magic of his wisdom. It also obviates the need to wish him his freedom… not like anyone would fantasize about that anyway.It wasn’t his idea – making others’ wishes come true is his punishment. He’s just learned to like it.
Uhm… How exactly did you interpret my comment there as meaning something different? To me, it's just a more complimentary way of saying the same thing…no?
(Sometimes I seriously wonder if I've had a stroke and developed some subtle aphasia.)
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I'm very sorry, man. Best wishes to you and all the others.
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It makes perfect sense to me, akin to why we always have really good thoughts while in the middle of a shower or waiting in an elevator. Taking a break from thinking allows the "background processing" in the brain to chew on it before pushing it into the conscious level. (Some neuroscientists may be able to put it in better words.)
Though the pandemic and quarantine doesn't make as big an impact on my life, it's still tough not to have an hour or two away from my computer each day, whether I'm filling my brain with lemons & podcasts or just running between errands. No doubt another part of it is that we kind of feel like we have to be working all of the time "because there's no excuse not to." Maybe a nap or just trying to relax and stop thinking for half an hour each day (very hard at first) will fill that time. Glad you're still getting some physical activity though, harrowing as it may be.
Anyway, best of luck with it. If you stumble across something that works then be sure to share.
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On 3/20/2020 at 6:28 PM, GeorgeGlass said:Quote
P.S. Kudos to DoctorYnot's keen observations. However now I'm starting to think that my writing is like knowing how to drive okay despite never having learned the rules of the road properly. (Over-used ref. omitted.
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Hmmm, in what sense?
It feels like I can feel my way around writing a story, but I don't know the names or proper applications of different aspects of Storytelling philosophy. Sure, I've heard of "Hero's Journey," "Man vs. ___" and all that, but there are so many things about pacing, structure, point of view, etc. that I can't name and can only clumsily feel my way around. Sure, it seems to work to a point, but when it comes time to deconstruct something so that I can use it more effectively, I have no idea what I'm supposed to be doing.
Kind of like life in general I suppose.
No bigBoobs!
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re: The Dark Side of the Bright Side
QuoteFrom GeorgeGlass on February 24, 2020
*Note: SPOILERS below!
I had a lot of driving to do this past weekend, and I figured that if you were willing to listen to "Tribal Warfare" and "Conscious Sedation," then I could give "The Dark Side of the Bright Side" a shot during my trip.
First, you tell the entire story in Ruby's voice. This, as I noted regarding Spazzgirl Letters, is impressive, even if this isn't exactly the Ruby we know.
Second, despite the alternate-universe setting, I found most of the characters' behavior to be at least plausible from what we've seen in canon (with the major exception of Skull Boy). It seemed natural for Ruby to find joy in her work -- even sex-work -- and to form good relationships with her regular clients. And it figures that extreme-sports enthusiast Iris would like extreme sex, too. (I loved seeing her get triple-fucked and still be horny enough to masturbate afterward.) I was a little less sold on Misery's behavior, but I also got the impression that her background in this universe deviates more sharply from her canonical one than those of most of the other characters. And that healing veil of hers would explain how she's managed to survive so many deadly disasters in canon.
Third, I was impressed that you managed make sex with a skeleton sound hot instead of just awkward and uncomfortable. I particularly liked Skull Boy's detached finger stimulating Ruby anally during their tryst. And I was amused by the whole ED-like situation that arises when his bones go rubbery in chapter 3.
I also liked the last chapter because you took the opportunity to resolve a couple of big unanswered questions from the show: what Doom Kitty's key is for, and where Skull Boy came from. But you didn't answer what I consider the biggest question, which is why this version of Skull Boy is so different from the canon one. If he was made to be Ruby's protector, what made him turn violent and greedy? Did the spell that created him go wrong in this universe? Some explanation for his uncharacteristic behavior would have really put a bow on top of the ending. But I was still happy that he got what was coming to him -- a "fitting" end, you might say.
Okay, "fitting end" made me laugh harder than I have in a long time. So thanks for that.
Anyway, I am pleasantly surprised that you checked this one out even after knowing the darker themes. Besides, reading/listening to your stories is always a pleasure. I'm glad you enjoyed it too.
I'm glad that the characters mostly clicked with their behavior in the actual show. The big differences are because this story was requested by Tommy Simms, based on his "Working Girl Ruby" picture and the ficlet he made for it later (see below). With that to start from, I didn't try to come up with any reasons for Skull Boy's and Misery's changes. Someone quickly pointed out that an "Alternate Universe" tag was needed and that seemed like it should cinch it.
In the end, for Misery I just drew on what I know about Major Depressive Disorder and thought how the volatile household situation would affect her, which could easily drive her to what Tommy had suggested. As for Skullboy, I'd hoped that "A witch did it!" and then him going way overboard would be enough of an explanation. (I mean, Skull Boy taking things too far is pretty canon.) I just don't want to come up with something too contrived (in yet another story
). Still if a better reason ever comes to mind I'll definitely run it by you.Now I just feel sorry for
BonerHumerus since if he ever tried to move into Gloom Manor everyone but Ruby would veto that in a heartbeat. At least he should be happy knowing that there are ladies who would enjoy playing with his coccyx and sacrum as long as he lays off the vinegar. (In reality it takes several days for a bone to turn rubbery, but "cartoon physics" and all that.) Certainly he'd also be a lot nicer to Misery than Tino from The Weekenders was. (BTW the other boy with a funny shaped head was Arnold Shortman from Hey Arnold! while the other dudes were just random.)Thank you for giving this story a try, and for the kind comments on it.
Quote(starting ficlet by Tommy Simms, a.k.a. tstoons ca. January 2010)
"It isn't always easy being a working girl. Here's a pic of me and Skullboy. He's really nice and when he isn't, it's mostly my own fault. I mean, sometimes I'm really tired and don't bring in enough money. But he never hits me in the face, because he knows I can't have bruises and such. "Your pretty face will buy me a new cadillac," he always says."
"Some guys really like it when I dress up all pretty and like. Like I'm a princess or something. But last time this guy really wanted to rip the dress off my body with his teeth, and it was a really expensive one. Skullboy made him pay for it of course, and then he punched out his teeth. You know, the same teeth he used to strip me naked. Kinda funny, actually when you think about it. But the guy screamed and there was a lot of blood and I started crying, but Skullboy told me to shut up and he called me a stupid bitch and a dumb slut and such. That wasn't very nice of him, but the next night he was extra-nice to me because I had a really rich customer who gave me a big tip because he had such a good time with me."
"I really get along well with the other girls here. You know, I was a bit jealous of Iris at first because she makes more money, but Skullboy told me that's because she does all kinds of dirty things that I don't do. He says I'll always be his bottom bitch no matter what, and it doesn't matter that I don't make as much money as Iris. He says I'm his classy ho, I'm not just a street-level slut like Iris. I still don't get why I don't make more money than her then, but he says I shouldn't worry my pretty little head about it.
I just wish he would treat Iris a bit better. He beats her all the time, and that's so unfair because she's really a nice girl, and we talk a lot and have a lot of fun when we're not working. She's my best friend in the whole wide world.""And there's this other girl, Misery. I just don't get what makes her tick. I mean, there's a lot of other jobs for girls like us and if you don't like making love to strangers, you can always go do something different, I guess. But Misery always says, "You just don't understand. But that's ok, Ruby. You're sweet." And then she just smiles at me.
She's really beautiful, but I don't think she makes much money. I never saw Skullboy hitting her, though. It's the customers who treat her badly, because they know she won't complain ever to Skullboy about what they did to her. She just locks herself in her room and cries.
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Oh no, I wouldn't beat them or anything like that. (…unless they really were acting under orders, but their flippant attitude really seemed more like they just were going to do what they wanted.) Punishments need to be constructive… and creative. There are way too many people who love to say, “My parents used to beat the crap out of me all the time and I turned out okay!” followed by *glug*glug*glug* before bitching about being fired from every job they've ever had and how their exes and children have permanent restraining orders against them.
"Lothar of the Hill People" was a recurring sketch on Saturday Night Live back in '89-90, with Mike Meyers in the titular role. https://snl.fandom.com/wiki/Lothar_Of_The_Hill_People It looks NBC has managed to keep it off YouTube for now.
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3 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said:
So, inevitably, the perpetually horny Lincoln starts boning girls and teachers at school (while also continuing to get plenty of action at home).
- "A Harem-brained Scheme"
- "The WHITE Stuff"
- "Loud and Proud"
- "I'll Show That Fucking Tortoise!"
- "Little Daddy"
- "The Human Shish Kebab Skewer"
- "The Sperminator"
- "My Absolute Mostest Bestest School Year EVER!"
- "The Incredible Fucking Machine"
- "It's Lisa's Fault, I Swear!"
3 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said:I'd appreciate any title suggestions folks might have.
I hope you still feel that way after this.
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I'm glad you're feeling better, even going back to making the world safe for pedantic people like me.
Your newest project seems perfect for you, getting to work with multiple show styles in segments yet with the added joy of playing them off one-another. Great selections for pairings too. I'm especially happy to see Agent K and Riley in the mix, since they'll certainly give the others a run for their money, even if one would think Helen and Violet have the edge; yet I'm not going to count out any combo on that list.
1 hour ago, GeorgeGlass said:“Don’t worry, nobody here knows us, and none of this is canon.”
Perfect.
Hmm SWp1, you did a nice job reminding me of Zoë Aves aka "Black Cuervo" ... She actually had some nice complexity , plus it's easy to have fond memories of her because Garabatoz did an awesome drawing of her "stealing a churro" for me.
BTW, I don't know what possessed me last weekend, but I spent a loooong night cranking out the complete outline for my most-pressing story idea. Now just comes the hard part of actually writing it… or somehow tricking you into doing it instead.
Best of luck; take care.
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Sorry to hear that you're not feeling great, but I'm glad you have a warm purry thing to make you feel better. Those are always good.
On the other hand I'm glad you gave "The Happiest Girl in the World" and her precious kitty a chance. If you end up watching the later episode "Ubergloom" there's one joke that will probably raise your eyebrows in a good way.
Anyway I hope you feel better soon – preferably by morning so you can actually enjoy your weekend. Take care.
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You'd definitely rule at it. Besides, Isabella's naughty diary entries aren't going to write themselves. #Tri(State)Curious
…unless the boys create a device to read her mind and do that for her.
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re: Spazzgirl Letters
@GeorgeGlassQuoteGeorgeGlass on January 02, 2020
Issue 5:I've never watched KND, but I'm certainly familiar with Penny Gadget, one of cartoondom's great bondage queens. I like that you use that to such great effect. Also, Kuki putting her rainbow panties in Penny's pocket near the end was cute, sweet, and erotic at the same time.
Perhaps to get comfortable being tied up so much, Penny started thinking about more fun things she'd rather be doing, and before she knew it the two concepts had been conflated into a fun fetish. If only the MAD henchmen knew what they could have had… But now Penny will occasionally take out the panties and think about how rewarding her work can be (before gagging herself with them and schlicking herself silly).
QuoteIssue 6:
I was, of course, very glad to see a chapter involving a Phineas and Ferb character. And it was interesting that you actually set the events of the chapter during an episode of the show.
Having the girl crawl into Candace's Ducky Momo costume was clever. There's plenty of space in there, and plenty of privacy.The Creamsicle bit didn't quite work for me. Isn't Candace's top red, not orange?
I'm not very familiar with Trixie Tang, but your mentioning that she's considerably younger than Candace added to the hotness of this story. I also wonder whether you chose her because of her last name.
"My cherry is so busted!" *snicker*
The atomic gumball machine sounds like a perfect P&F project.
This is the first chapter in which the sexual encounter isn't just a one-time thing, which I liked. The idea of Candace regularly going to Trixie's house to "babysit" her (ie, have crazy lezzie sex with her the moment Mom and Dad step out the door) is ever so hot. It also makes me wonder whether Candace would ever invite Jeremy along.
That episode had a lot of great stuff and seemed like a perfect situation (and girl) to take advantage of. Hmm, perhaps my shoddy color vision makes me think Candace's top is more orange than red. Maybe her pen name should have included the word "busted" somehow, and I'll rationalize that inside the costume her top looked orange to Trixie. (“Yeah, that's the ticket!”)
Trixie Tang was chosen because she's tied for #1 on that list, though her name has always been a source of additional glee. Especially since Candace deserves some happiness, it seemed more fun if the two closet fantasy fans could stay in touch – while staying in the closet. Not sure if Candace would be comfortable sharing her secrets with Jeremy… but if she asked him to come help babysit "that sweet boy" and Trixie gave him the full reverse-trap treatment then it would probably all work out somehow.
QuoteIssue 7:
I've never watched Grojband, but my wife was into Kick Buttowski for a while, so I'm slightly familiar with Kendall. In any case, it seems like this chapter is all about the meeting of two young lesbiatches.I need to know: Is the Juicy Peach festival actually a thing on Grojband or Kick Buttowski, or did you make that up?
I like the bit about Trina's pussy grabbing Kendall's fingers so hard that Kendall could barely move them.
The jealous toady running away in tears seemed very apropos.
Did the part at the end about the parents not letting the kid have a band anymore actually happen?
Many Grojband episodes feature oddly-named events where the band wants to play, so I made up a nice descriptive name for this one. Seemed appropriate, just like Trina being so uptight that tight up there too. As for poor Mina, she should have realized that Trina gets off on matching an equal, as dominating subordinates is pretty much just habit.
IIRC Grojband being broken up never happened in the show but it seemed unavoidable here: The show's basic formula is that Trina's younger brother Corey (the band's leader) can't write good lyrics to save his life. So in most episodes he and his bandmates secretly work to make Trina so hyper emotional that she literally flies up into the air and madly scribbles into her diary (very henshin-like, hence the objects and whatnot); then she collapses to the ground, drained, and Corey quickly grabs her diary and blindly sings whatever she wrote.
So I doubt (most of) the adults would be pleased with a song about a teenager ravishing a ten-year-old girl.
QuoteAnd one more, general question: Are you planning any more issues?
I hadn't been planning to do any more of these: Again, it was only supposed to be a one-shot, but then I decided to run through Evil Fairy's top-six list for fun. Since these were pretty much for EF I decided to skip the spazzgirls she didn't care for, though I suppose now there are even more great spazzgirls who could be paired with the best cuties. (Let's see: Helga Pataki, Reggie Abbot, Leni Loud, Webby Vanderquack, Babs Bunny, Luna Girl, Pinkie Pie…)
So maybe? If I can't get a good start on any of the three stories in my notes then maybe that would be a good start.
Thanks again for reading and letting me know what you liked… as well as what didn't quite work. Both are greatly appreciated.
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Actually you did a great job with Paa's voice in Quiet, though I suppose you're talking about canon characters. Again, doing Ruby Gloom's voice for a long slog probably taught me how to get into a character's mindset, even if not perfect; but writing in Pinkie Pie's voice actually made it fun.
If you decide to try it, my only suggestion is that you don't start with Ferb Flynn… could be a little limiting.
Thanks again for the kind words, and I'm really looking forward to your adventures in parenting story.
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From GeorgeGlass on December 31, 2019
This whole concept -- loli lesbian encounters described in a “Penthouse Letters” format -- is a good one. Not only does it allow you to write a lot of self-contained stories in an anthology format, but it helps the reader to suspend disbelief, because with the Penthouse Letters, I always had to wonder whether they were real or made up. (Of course, maybe if I had read them in my adult years rather than as a preteen who found the mags under his older brother’s bed, the answer would be more obvious.) Also, telling these stories in the voices of the characters is a bold endeavor; writing dialogue in a fandom character's voice is one thing, but writing the entire story in that character's voice is at a higher level of difficuty.Woo-hoo! I finally get to dust off this old thread – and for an anthology that hasn't gotten any attention since 2015. It was supposed to be a one-shot after Mabel's had mentioned this periodical in "The Secrets of My Sis," but then I saw a certain other fairy's top-six list and decided each one of them should have a nice tryst too.
Yes, the unreliable narrator aspect helps to embellish a bit and let each writer focus more on the feeling of it all instead of those pesky fact things. I'm not sure how I managed to pull off the voice, as it was pretty taxing when writing just Ruby's voice in "The Bright Side of the Dark Side."
QuoteNow, on to the chapters I've read so far.
Issue 1:
--First off, I’m very happy that this series begins with two characters I’m familiar with.
--Mabel’s intro sentence is nice way of starting off with some humor and with a solid portrayal of the character.
--The bus “accident” didn’t seem necessary (although it was very in character for Grunkle Stan). Save for Lisa, the Simpsons seem like exactly the sort of rubes whom the Mystery Shack was built to attract.
--The girl-on-girl action was fun. I particularly liked how much attention Lisa gave to Mabel's chest.
--The bit about the Mystery Shack having secret doors around the place -- and Mabel making use of one of them -- was clever.I think the bus thing was mostly to establish Mabel's way of thinking, but maybe some "background color" as well. In retrospect I think she is a bit more perceptive than I gave her credit for, but it seems to work.
QuoteIssue 2:
--I've never watched The Weekenders, but I'm guessing that Lor is a rough-and-tumble sort of girl, which made for a good contrast with Dee Dee.
--There was something really sexy about Dee Dee saying "baby hole."
--"Ooooh, what does this button do?" Heh.Dee Dee is too innocent to ever say certain words, even when they're on the tip of her tongue.
QuoteIssue 3:
--I'm not familiar with either of the characters in this chapter. Rachel sounds really cute-sexy, though.
--I liked the Star Trek IV reference ("No, I'm from Iowa; I just work in outer space").
--I chuckled when the girl gives Rachel a play bite on her butt cheek and makes her yelp.Play bites are a thing with me… but I try not to overdo it. Same with Star Trek references.
QuoteIssue 4:
--I'm not familiar with either of the characters in this chapter. Nonetheless, I liked the contrast between primitive and advanced.
--It was cool that Betty's technological advantage and Fang's martial skills put them on a more or less even footing during their fight at the beginning.
--Even though it wasn't a big part of the action, I liked the finger-in-the-butthole bit because it distinguished this sex scene from the ones in the previous chapters.The first two seasons of !Atomic Betty! were fantastic… the third, eh. I think in Canada a lot of cartoons lose government subsidies after two seasons and that hurts them a lot. !Dave the Barbarian! is just a bunch of super fun nonsense akin to !Yin Yang YO! (for which I wrote My Absolute Mostest Favoritest Story EVER!)
QuoteLooking forward to reading more!
I hope you enjoy them. Number six has at least one character you're pretty familiar with. Thanks for the kind words @GeorgeGlass.
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On 12/26/2019 at 5:05 PM, GeorgeGlass said:
From JayDee on December 25, 2019
– and also that use of ‘elf magic’ at the end to fit him all inside the elf.
Heh, when Greta explained that "Elf magic" is what allowed her to do that – you know, the same way the elves in the shop could keep refilling Santa's sack – I imagined Rudy's cock popping out of some other elf girl's vagina; then maybe a third elf girl would tribb her so that Rudy had an elf-kabob thing going on.
Yeah, I'm weird.
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8 hours ago, GeorgeGlass said:
Ruby Gloom is a fly, right?
Nope. Ruby Gloom is the happiest girl in the world: an odd yet sweet little redhead who lives in a big house with her friends: a Goth Loli banshee, a loli cyclops, a two-headed boy(s), a skeleton, a raven, a bat, her pet kitty, and her favorite doll. She's quite a doll herself… especially according to one popular fan theory.
Maybe you're thinking of The Buzz on Maggie?
Review replies for "Dark Dreams, Forbidden Fantasies" (Phineas and Ferb)
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With his luck, Doof would constantly be called upon to fulfill the sexual fantasies of Vanessa or Roger.
…or both of them together!
And he'd be so sick of Candace and Suzy fighting over who gets Jeremy. On the bright side, I think Linda still has a thing for him, plus he's probably Phineas' real father. I mean, look at the hair! (Probably some mix-up at a masquerade party led to all sorts of Danville kids being related.)
Happy dreams.